Run: 2026-09-03-01M1KREXEG4Y2FQSX9DGFSAVBD

Run Details

Duration:
15.0s
Cost:
$0.011324
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The iron rungs of the maintenance shaft bit through Harlow Quinn’s leather gloves. Forty feet below the Camden street level, the air lost its petrol stink and took on the mineral bite of subterranean damp, sharp with an unnatural prickle of static. Harlow dropped the final two feet onto the cracked platform of the disused Tube station. The beam of her tactical torch cut through the gloom, carving white circles across Victorian subway tile and rusted track beds. Dust lay two inches deep over the concourse, grey and undisturbed—except for the single set of heavy boots that preceded her, and the white police halogen lamps buzzing fifty yards down the northern tunnel. She checked her left wrist. The glass of her worn leather watch was cold against her skin. Midnight. Eva Kowalski crouched near a bricked-up alcove beneath a faded enamel sign for a train line discontinued eighty years ago. Her curly red hair spilled around the collar of her wool coat, illuminated by a portable LED stand. A worn leather satchel rested against her boots, bulging with reference folios. "Transit police thought it was cable thieves," Eva said, tucking a stray curl behind her left ear. Her round glasses caught the halogen glare, hiding her green eyes behind twin discs of white light. "Two bodies. Discovered by an engineering crew checking the structural integrity of the Northern line expansion." Harlow approached with measured strides. Her sharp jaw tightened as the beam found the first corpse. A man in a charcoal suit lay sprawled across the rails. No decomposition, yet his skin possessed the translucent grey sheen of paraffin wax. Five yards further along the tracks lay the second, dressed in the heavy waxed canvas of a dock worker. Harlow crouched by the rail, careful not to plant her boots on the sleeper timbers. "Cable theft doesn't leave men in three-thousand-pound Savile Row tailoring," Harlow said. Eva adjusted the focus on a digital macro-lens. "The power surge explains the trauma. Look at the perimeter of the alcove. The masonry is scorched black in a clean ten-foot radius. Arc flash from an unmapped high-voltage junction box. It cooked their nervous systems instantly." "Look at the blast pattern." Harlow aimed her torch at the brick archway. The soot coated the red brick in a sharp, mathematically precise circle, but the mortar between the bricks remained stark white. "Electrical arcs don't discriminate between lime mortar and clay brick. Fire consumes fuel indiscriminately. This soot didn't radiate outward from a central explosion. It pulled inward." Eva frowned, lowering the camera. She pushed her glasses up the bridge of her freckled nose. "The air current down here creates strange thermal eddies, Harlow. The ventilation shafts from the surface generate negative pressure zones." "Air currents don't bend iron," Harlow said, pointing her beam downward. The steel rails beneath the charcoal-suited body had not melted or warped under heat; they were curled upward like wood shavings, peeling toward the ceiling as if drawn by a magnet suspended in empty space. The edges of the curled metal were crystalline, rimmed in delicate needles of white frost. Harlow touched the rail with the back of her gloved finger. The cold pierced the leather instantly, sharp as a needle. "Ten degrees below freezing right at the epicenter," Harlow said. "While the rest of the tunnel sits at twelve Celsius." Eva opened her satchel, rummaging through bound notebooks. "A chemical refrigerant leak? The old cold-storage vaults from the canal warehouses sit forty feet directly above us. An ammonia pipe could have ruptured through the ceiling." "Look at the dust around their feet, Eva." Harlow stood, sweeping the torchlight across the floor of the alcove. "Transit team came in from the south shaft. We came from the south shaft. The victim in the suit has no footprints leading to this spot. Neither does the second man. The dust behind them is three inches deep and smooth as fresh snowfall." Eva rose slowly, her fingers tightening around the strap of her satchel. "They couldn't drop from the ceiling. There are no grates overhead. Only solid brick." Harlow knelt beside the man in the suit. With gloved fingers, she turned his lapel. No wallet. No phone. The inside breast pocket bulged with a heavy, palm-sized weight. She slid two fingers inside and drew out an object wrapped in oiled silk. The silk fell away to reveal a small brass casing, thick with a crust of sea-green verdigris. Sigils—sharp, geometric incisions unlike any classical alphabet—ringed the circumference of the metal face. Behind the beveled glass, a needle crafted from blackened bone spun wildly, refusing to settle on magnetic north. Instead, it trembled toward the solid brick wall at the back of the alcove. Eva took a step back, her breath catching in her throat. "Where did you find that?" "His pocket." Harlow turned the brass instrument over. The reverse bore a single stamped mark: two intersecting crescent moons bound by an anchor. "What is it?" Eva’s hand drifted back to her hair, pinning the red curls behind her ear with rapid, mechanical tension. "It looks like an alchemical navigational tool. Sixteenth-century occultists made reproductions of them. Curiosities for collectors. Nothing functional." "It's not an antique," Harlow said, holding the instrument level. The bone needle jerked hard to the right as she shifted her stance, tracking an invisible point within the sealed masonry. "The brass is modern naval alloy. The machining on these hinges has tolerances within micrometers. Someone milled this recently." Harlow shifted her focus to the victim's left hand. His fingers were locked in a rigid claw, knuckles white under the taut, bloodless skin. "Prise his fingers open," Harlow instructed. Eva hesitated, then knelt beside her. Using a plastic evidence spatula, she wedged the rigid joints apart. A small disc clattered onto the rusted rail. Harlow picked it up. Not metal or plastic, but a polished slice of dense mammalian bone, carved into an octagon. A narrow slit had been drilled through its center, stained with a dark, oily resin that smelled of cloves and wet slate. "A counter," Eva said, her voice dropping an octave. "Like a gaming token." "Not a gaming token. A pass." Harlow stood, her tall frame casting a long shadow across the frosted rails. She stared at the bricked-up alcove, then back down at the compass in her palm. The bone needle pointed dead center into the solid mortar wall, vibrating with a high-pitched hum that set her teeth on edge. "The soot on the bricks. The frost on the curled steel. The lack of tracks in the dust." Eva stared at the bone disc in Harlow's hand. "What are you thinking?" "They didn't break in from the street to steal copper," Harlow said, stepping directly in front of the brick wall. The compass needle remained locked on the stone, trembling with furious energy. "They came through from the other side. And whatever closed the door behind them tore the heat out of their bodies."
created_at"2026-09-03T13:48:45.915Z" 9/3/2026, 1:48:45 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags11
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences28
tagDensity0.393
leniency0.786
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
95.72% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1169
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count1
highlights
0"slowly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
48.67% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1169
totalAiIsms12
found
0
word"gloom"
count1
1
word"measured"
count1
2
word"stark"
count1
3
word"crystalline"
count1
4
word"weight"
count1
5
word"silk"
count2
6
word"magnetic"
count1
7
word"trembled"
count1
8
word"mechanical"
count1
9
word"tension"
count1
10
word"long shadow"
count1
highlights
0"gloom"
1"measured"
2"stark"
3"crystalline"
4"weight"
5"silk"
6"magnetic"
7"trembled"
8"mechanical"
9"tension"
10"long shadow"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences66
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences66
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences83
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen44
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1166
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions8
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
32.57% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions35
wordCount809
uniqueNames7
maxNameDensity2.35
worstName"Harlow"
maxWindowNameDensity4
worstWindowName"Harlow"
discoveredNames
Harlow19
Quinn1
Camden1
Tube1
Victorian1
Kowalski1
Eva11
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Kowalski"
3"Eva"
places
0"Camden"
1"Victorian"
globalScore0.326
windowScore0.333
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences56
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.858
wordCount1166
matches
0"Not metal or plastic, but a polished slice of dense mammalian bone, carved into an oct"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences83
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs44
mean26.5
std19.48
cv0.735
sampleLengths
042
170
218
350
450
516
643
715
812
98
1037
1113
1221
1326
1416
1520
1611
1771
1820
198
2027
218
2211
2344
2412
2514
2643
2762
2811
295
3026
3118
3218
3350
3424
356
3617
378
3842
3913
4074
419
424
4353
89.31% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount3
totalSentences66
matches
0"were curled"
1"were locked"
2"been drilled"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs126
matches(empty)
39.59% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount3
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences3
totalSentences83
ratio0.036
matches
0"Dust lay two inches deep over the concourse, grey and undisturbed—except for the single set of heavy boots that preceded her, and the white police halogen lamps buzzing fifty yards down the northern tunnel."
1"The steel rails beneath the charcoal-suited body had not melted or warped under heat; they were curled upward like wood shavings, peeling toward the ceiling as if drawn by a magnet suspended in empty space."
2"Sigils—sharp, geometric incisions unlike any classical alphabet—ringed the circumference of the metal face."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount818
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"heavy, palm-sized weight."
adverbCount20
adverbRatio0.02444987775061125
lyAdverbCount7
lyAdverbRatio0.008557457212713936
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences83
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences83
mean14.05
std7.98
cv0.568
sampleLengths
013
129
215
321
434
55
612
71
820
918
1012
1117
1217
1316
145
1511
1611
1713
1819
1915
2012
218
2237
2313
2421
2526
265
2711
2820
2911
3035
3115
3211
3310
3410
3510
368
3727
388
3911
4044
4112
4214
438
447
452
462
4710
4814
4917
57.03% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats6
diversityRatio0.3855421686746988
totalSentences83
uniqueOpeners32
55.56% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences60
matches
0"Instead, it trembled toward the"
ratio0.017
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount8
totalSentences60
matches
0"She checked her left wrist."
1"Her curly red hair spilled"
2"Her round glasses caught the"
3"Her sharp jaw tightened as"
4"She pushed her glasses up"
5"She slid two fingers inside"
6"His fingers were locked in"
7"She stared at the bricked-up"
ratio0.133
26.67% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount52
totalSentences60
matches
0"The iron rungs of the"
1"Harlow dropped the final two"
2"The beam of her tactical"
3"Dust lay two inches deep"
4"She checked her left wrist."
5"The glass of her worn"
6"Eva Kowalski crouched near a"
7"Her curly red hair spilled"
8"A worn leather satchel rested"
9"Eva said, tucking a stray"
10"Her round glasses caught the"
11"Harlow approached with measured strides."
12"Her sharp jaw tightened as"
13"A man in a charcoal"
14"Harlow crouched by the rail,"
15"Eva adjusted the focus on"
16"Harlow aimed her torch at"
17"The soot coated the red"
18"Eva frowned, lowering the camera."
19"She pushed her glasses up"
ratio0.867
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences60
matches(empty)
ratio0
89.29% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences40
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"Dust lay two inches deep over the concourse, grey and undisturbed—except for the single set of heavy boots that preceded her, and the white police halogen lamps…"
1"The steel rails beneath the charcoal-suited body had not melted or warped under heat; they were curled upward like wood shavings, peeling toward the ceiling as …"
2"The bone needle pointed dead center into the solid mortar wall, vibrating with a high-pitched hum that set her teeth on edge."
79.55% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags11
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"Eva said, her voice dropping an octave"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags7
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences28
tagDensity0.25
leniency0.5
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
83.5984%