Run: 2026-09-03-01M1KRGVQEFFDV2W10CKM9SCRB

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Duration:
24.7s
Cost:
$0.004130
Provider:
DeepInfra

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The bell above the curry house downstairs had been jingling all afternoon, a thin, constant chime that worked its way up through the floorboards of Eva's flat. Aurora had been reading at the kitchen table, one ankle hooked over the other knee, a stack of delivery receipts from Golden Empress fanned out beside a chipped mug that smelled of cold tea. Ptolemy was asleep on a pile of scrolls, his tabby tail flicking every time a lorry rumbled past on Brick Lane. She heard the knock before she registered it as unusual. Three short raps, precise, then a pause. Not Eva. Eva knocked like she was angry at the door for existing. This was measured. Aurora set the mug down. The flat was cramped and warm, every surface crowded with books and research notes, the air thick with turmeric from below and old paper from above. She lived above Silas' bar, but she'd been crashing on Eva's couch for three nights while her own place got fumigated, and she hadn't told anyone where she was. She checked the peephole out of habit. The hall was dim, lit by a single flickering bulb. A man stood there in a tailored charcoal suit that looked too expensive for Brick Lane at half past six. Slicked-back platinum blond hair, a cane with an ivory handle resting against his shoe. One eye amber, one black. Lucien. Her stomach did something stupid and tight. She hadn't seen him since the warehouse on the South Bank, since she'd walked away from him with blood on her left wrist and a lie on her tongue. Since he'd called her Malphora and told her she was a fool for thinking she could stay clean. She hadn't unbolted the door yet. Three deadbolts. She slid the first one. He lifted a hand as if he knew she was watching. "Rory." She unbolted the second. Ptolemy opened one green eye. The third bolt gave. She opened the door a crack, the chain still on. The smell of him came first — cedar and cold steel, and something darker underneath. "You have three locks," he said in English, soft, amused. "I remember." "You shouldn't be here." Her voice came out steadier than she felt. Bright blue eyes held his heterochromatic stare. She was five-six in socks, hair still damp from the shower, a delivery vest slung over a grey t-shirt. He was five-eleven in polished shoes. "I knocked." He shifted his weight, the cane tapping once against the concrete. "Eva's not here." "She's out." That was true. Eva was at a dig in Walthamstow until late. "Good." He didn't step back. "I need five minutes." She didn't move to let him in. The scar on her left wrist, a small crescent from a childhood accident, caught the hallway light when she flexed her fingers around the doorframe. She hated that he would know to look for it. "Lucien, you don't just—" She stopped herself. Cool-headed, intelligent, quick out-of-the-box thinking. That was what the description said she was. It wasn't working. "I know," he said. "I also know you're not answering your phone. Yu-Fei told me you stopped taking shifts. Silas said you moved out." She pressed her shoulder against the door. "You talk to everyone." "I talk to people who talk to me." He inclined his head, the platinum hair catching the bulb. "You left without a word, Aurora. After everything." After everything. After he'd pulled her out of a bad deal with the Avaros couriers and told her she'd be dead without him. After she'd kissed him in the rain behind the Empress, then pushed him away because she didn't know how to want something that could kill her. After he said she was like a ghost and she told him ghosts didn't bleed. The chain rattled when her hand trembled. "Let me in before someone sees me," he said quietly. "Please." She wanted to say no. She wanted to slam the door and lock it again and go back to her receipts and her tea and the safe, boring life she'd built delivering dumplings across London. Instead she felt the familiar, infuriating pull of him — the fixer who always knew where the bodies were buried, the half-demon with the ivory cane that hid a blade, the man who spoke four languages and still couldn't say what he meant in any of them. She unhooked the chain. He stepped inside like he belonged there, ducking slightly under the low doorway. The flat exhaled around him. Books were everywhere, scrolls weighted down with mugs, notes in Eva's cramped hand taped to the fridge. Ptolemy hissed and vanished under the sofa. Lucien's gaze swept the room once, then settled on her. "You look tired." "You look like you got out of bed wearing that suit." "Old habit." He set the cane against the wall by the door, the ivory handle gleaming. He didn't touch her. He didn't try. That was worse, somehow. The restraint made it clear he was choosing it. Aurora closed the door and re-bolted the first lock. She didn't bother with the others. "Why are you here, Lucien?" She kept her voice low. Downstairs the curry house speakers started playing a Bollywood track. "There is a man asking questions about you." He walked to the kitchen table, careful not to disturb the stacks of paper. "He's not from the restaurant. He was at the flat above Silas'. He asked the landlord when you left. He asked Silas if you'd been in." Her throat went dry. Evan? No. Evan would never ask politely. "Who?" "I don't know yet. But he knew about the scar." Lucien's amber eye flicked to her wrist. "He described it. Crescent, left wrist. Said you got it as a child. That detail isn't public." Aurora's fingers curled into a fist. The air went thin. "That's my ex's story. He told everyone—" "Evan's dead, Rory." The words landed flat. "Six months. Heart attack in a holding cell in Cardiff." She stared at him. The delivery receipts blurred. "What?" "He didn't make it out after you left." Lucien's voice was careful, clinical, the way he talked when he was giving someone bad news he couldn't soften. "I told you to stay away from him. You didn't listen then either." She leaned against the table, the wood creaking under her. "You knew." "I know a lot of things." He reached into his suit jacket and set a folded envelope on top of a stack of Eva's notes. "This was left at my office. No return address. Inside was a photograph of you on your bike, delivering for Golden Empress, and a note. It said 'She knows.'" Aurora picked it up. Her own face, helmet pushed back, bright blue eyes squinting in the sun. She hadn't known anyone was watching. "Who?" she whispered. "I don't know. But whoever it is knows you, knows your patterns, knows you crash here when you're scared." He finally looked at her directly, both mismatched eyes locked. "And I think they want you to be scared." The old, stupid attraction flared and she hated it. He was still impossibly handsome in a way that made her want to be smarter than she was. The tailored charcoal, the slicked hair, the cane he always carried like a threat. She wanted to hit him and kiss him in the same breath. "You could have called," she said. "You don't answer." "I don't answer people who show up with secrets." "I showed up with you." The words slipped out before he could stop them. He stared at the envelope. "You left. You said my world would rot you. You said you were done." "I said a lot of things." "All true." He exhaled, a short, tired sound. "Mostly." Ptolemy reappeared on the windowsill and watched them both with disdain. Aurora pushed off the table, circling to the other side. She was close enough now to see the faint scar at the corner of his mouth, the way his black eye was slightly larger than the amber one. "Why do you care?" "Because I owe you." He said it simply. "Because you got me out of a mess in Marseille when you were sixteen and pretending to be your father's barrister clerk. Because you are the only person I've ever met who looks at me and sees Lucien Moreau, not the demon's son." She laughed, a short, surprised sound. "That's a lot of baggage for five minutes." "I have three minutes left." He glanced at his watch. "The man who left the photo will be back tonight. He'll check the flat above Silas'. If you're not there, he'll assume you're here. Eva's security is good — three deadbolts — but she leaves a window open for the cat." Aurora's mouth went dry. She hadn't even thought about the window. "I can get you out," Lucien said. "Tonight. Safe house. No questions." "With you?" She folded her arms. "That sounds like a trap." "It's a choice." He stepped closer, the space between them shrinking to the width of the table. "Stay and hope whoever's watching doesn't know about the window. Or go with me and stop pretending you can handle this alone." Her pulse hammered in her throat. The hurt was still there, raw and familiar — the way he'd disappeared for weeks after she'd kissed him, the way he'd said she was too human for his life. The attraction was still there too, hot and inconvenient. She thought about Evan. About running. About the way Lucien had shown up unannounced and knocked with the same precision he used to cut a deal. "Fine," she said finally. "But I drive." He smiled, just a little. "You can drive the getaway car, Malphora. I just want you alive to argue with." She snorted despite herself. "You're an arrogant bastard." "And you're still wearing your delivery vest in my presence. Consider it progress." She picked up the envelope and tucked it into the pocket of her vest. The crescent scar on her wrist throbbed faintly, as if remembering old pain. "Five minutes is up," she said, walking to the door. She undid the first deadbolt. "You're leaving." "I'm staying until you are." He picked up his cane. The thin blade inside it caught the light for half a second before it disappeared again. "You can be cool-headed later. Right now, pack a bag." Aurora looked at the books, the scrolls, the cat, the life she'd borrowed from Eva. She thought about the photograph, the man asking questions, the way Lucien's mismatched eyes never let her hide. She opened the door wider.
created_at"2026-09-03T13:49:49.685Z" 9/3/2026, 1:49:49 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags28
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"he said quietly [quietly]"
1"she said finally [finally]"
dialogueSentences67
tagDensity0.418
leniency0.836
rawRatio0.071
effectiveRatio0.06
94.37% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1775
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count2
highlights
0"slightly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
71.83% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1775
totalAiIsms10
found
0
word"measured"
count1
1
word"stomach"
count1
2
word"weight"
count1
3
word"trembled"
count1
4
word"familiar"
count2
5
word"gleaming"
count1
6
word"flicked"
count1
7
word"pulse"
count1
8
word"throbbed"
count1
highlights
0"measured"
1"stomach"
2"weight"
3"trembled"
4"familiar"
5"gleaming"
6"flicked"
7"pulse"
8"throbbed"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences128
matches
0"was angry"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences128
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences166
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen47
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1780
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions28
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions47
wordCount1238
uniqueNames20
maxNameDensity0.65
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Eva"
discoveredNames
Eva7
Golden1
Empress2
Brick2
Lane2
South1
Bank1
Malphora1
English1
Bright1
Walthamstow1
Cool-headed1
Avaros1
London1
Downstairs1
Bollywood1
Aurora8
Ptolemy4
Evan3
Lucien7
persons
0"Eva"
1"Empress"
2"Downstairs"
3"Aurora"
4"Ptolemy"
5"Evan"
6"Lucien"
places
0"Golden"
1"Brick"
2"Lane"
3"English"
4"Walthamstow"
5"London"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences77
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"as if remembering old pain"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1780
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences166
matches
0"hated that he"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs70
mean25.43
std19.16
cv0.753
sampleLengths
082
133
260
356
41
554
613
712
89
914
1027
1144
1216
1314
149
1542
1623
1724
1811
1926
2064
217
2211
2382
244
2542
2613
2711
2836
2915
3020
3148
3212
3334
3417
3517
369
3740
3812
3954
4023
413
4238
4353
446
453
469
4733
486
499
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences128
matches
0"were buried"
53.80% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount5
totalVerbs228
matches
0"was watching"
1"wasn't working"
2"was choosing"
3"was giving"
4"was watching"
91.22% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount3
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences3
totalSentences166
ratio0.018
matches
0"The smell of him came first — cedar and cold steel, and something darker underneath."
1"Instead she felt the familiar, infuriating pull of him — the fixer who always knew where the bodies were buried, the half-demon with the ivory cane that hid a blade, the man who spoke four languages and still couldn't say what he meant in any of them."
2"The hurt was still there, raw and familiar — the way he'd disappeared for weeks after she'd kissed him, the way he'd said she was too human for his life."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount697
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount23
adverbRatio0.03299856527977044
lyAdverbCount8
lyAdverbRatio0.011477761836441894
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences166
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences166
mean10.72
std8.79
cv0.82
sampleLengths
027
134
221
310
47
52
611
73
85
926
1029
117
1210
1320
1414
155
161
177
1829
1918
206
212
225
2311
241
254
265
274
2810
2915
3010
312
3212
337
3419
356
3613
373
385
399
405
414
427
4325
4410
457
465
478
483
494
41.57% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats14
diversityRatio0.2891566265060241
totalSentences166
uniqueOpeners48
56.98% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences117
matches
0"Bright blue eyes held his"
1"Instead she felt the familiar,"
ratio0.017
8.03% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount62
totalSentences117
matches
0"She heard the knock before"
1"She lived above"
2"She checked the peephole out"
3"Her stomach did something stupid"
4"She hadn't seen him since"
5"She hadn't unbolted the door"
6"She slid the first one."
7"He lifted a hand as"
8"She unbolted the second."
9"She opened the door a"
10"he said in English, soft,"
11"Her voice came out steadier"
12"She was five-six in socks,"
13"He was five-eleven in polished"
14"He shifted his weight, the"
15"He didn't step back"
16"She didn't move to let"
17"She hated that he would"
18"She stopped herself"
19"It wasn't working."
ratio0.53
7.01% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount106
totalSentences117
matches
0"The bell above the curry"
1"Aurora had been reading at"
2"Ptolemy was asleep on a"
3"She heard the knock before"
4"Eva knocked like she was"
5"This was measured."
6"Aurora set the mug down."
7"The flat was cramped and"
8"She lived above"
9"She checked the peephole out"
10"The hall was dim, lit"
11"A man stood there in"
12"Her stomach did something stupid"
13"She hadn't seen him since"
14"She hadn't unbolted the door"
15"She slid the first one."
16"He lifted a hand as"
17"She unbolted the second."
18"Ptolemy opened one green eye."
19"The third bolt gave."
ratio0.906
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences117
matches(empty)
ratio0
73.17% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences41
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"The bell above the curry house downstairs had been jingling all afternoon, a thin, constant chime that worked its way up through the floorboards of Eva's flat."
1"Aurora had been reading at the kitchen table, one ankle hooked over the other knee, a stack of delivery receipts from Golden Empress fanned out beside a chipped…"
2"Instead she felt the familiar, infuriating pull of him — the fixer who always knew where the bodies were buried, the half-demon with the ivory cane that hid a b…"
3"He was still impossibly handsome in a way that made her want to be smarter than she was."
71.43% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags28
uselessAdditionCount3
matches
0"He shifted, the cane tapping once against the concrete"
1"He inclined, the platinum hair catching the bulb"
2"He set, the ivory handle gleaming"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags9
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"she whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences67
tagDensity0.134
leniency0.269
rawRatio0.111
effectiveRatio0.03
82.3136%