| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 13 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "Eva said quietly [quietly]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 29 | | tagDensity | 0.448 | | leniency | 0.897 | | rawRatio | 0.077 | | effectiveRatio | 0.069 | |
| 86.24% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1454 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 4 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "intensely" | | 1 | "precisely" | | 2 | "slightly" | | 3 | "inexorably" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 55.30% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1454 | | totalAiIsms | 13 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "silk" | | 1 | "chill" | | 2 | "crystalline" | | 3 | "disrupted" | | 4 | "fractured" | | 5 | "crystal" | | 6 | "etched" | | 7 | "magnetic" | | 8 | "trembled" | | 9 | "pulse" | | 10 | "mechanical" | | 11 | "vibrated" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 69 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 60.04% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 1 | | hedgeCount | 3 | | narrationSentences | 69 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 85 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 53 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1450 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 11 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 66.67% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 42 | | wordCount | 1203 | | uniqueNames | 17 | | maxNameDensity | 1.5 | | worstName | "Harlow" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3 | | worstWindowName | "Harlow" | | discoveredNames | | Camden | 1 | | Tube | 1 | | Quinn | 1 | | Edwardian | 1 | | Blitz | 1 | | Kowalski | 1 | | British | 1 | | Museum | 1 | | Harlow | 18 | | Celsius | 1 | | Victorian | 1 | | Eva | 9 | | Bermondsey | 1 | | Detective | 1 | | Sergeant | 1 | | Morris | 1 | | Northern | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Quinn" | | 1 | "Kowalski" | | 2 | "Museum" | | 3 | "Harlow" | | 4 | "Eva" | | 5 | "Sergeant" | | 6 | "Morris" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 0.752 | | windowScore | 0.667 | |
| 25.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 60 | | glossingSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "looked like antiquity smuggling, but her" | | 1 | "sigils that seemed to shift slightly as the lantern light raked across them" | | 2 | "as if expecting the shadows to listen" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.69 | | wordCount | 1450 | | matches | | 0 | "not with cardinal points, but with sharp, interlocking geometric sigils" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 85 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 35 | | mean | 41.43 | | std | 28.6 | | cv | 0.69 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 95 | | 1 | 31 | | 2 | 102 | | 3 | 33 | | 4 | 71 | | 5 | 38 | | 6 | 6 | | 7 | 71 | | 8 | 25 | | 9 | 50 | | 10 | 29 | | 11 | 10 | | 12 | 78 | | 13 | 27 | | 14 | 11 | | 15 | 29 | | 16 | 73 | | 17 | 50 | | 18 | 4 | | 19 | 50 | | 20 | 91 | | 21 | 20 | | 22 | 17 | | 23 | 44 | | 24 | 61 | | 25 | 20 | | 26 | 43 | | 27 | 12 | | 28 | 28 | | 29 | 1 | | 30 | 49 | | 31 | 3 | | 32 | 17 | | 33 | 82 | | 34 | 79 |
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| 64.58% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 8 | | totalSentences | 69 | | matches | | 0 | "was drawn" | | 1 | "were curled" | | 2 | "been drawn" | | 3 | "was coated" | | 4 | "was disturbed" | | 5 | "been sheared" | | 6 | "was etched" | | 7 | "been sealed" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 185 | | matches | | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 3 | | semicolonCount | 3 | | flaggedSentences | 6 | | totalSentences | 85 | | ratio | 0.071 | | matches | | 0 | "His clothes were peculiar—a tailored wool frock coat lined with an unusually heavy, coarse gray silk, worn over modern denim." | | 1 | "The blood hadn't settled under gravity; it seemed to have been drawn out or stopped entirely before it could pool." | | 2 | "The frost didn't melt against the latex; it broke away in brittle, dry flakes like crushed sugar." | | 3 | "A memory, unbidden and cold, scraped the back of her mind—a rain-slicked alley in Bermondsey three years ago, the smell of burnt copper, and Detective Sergeant Morris lying dead on an asphalt slab without a single mark on his skin, his service weapon melted in its leather holster." | | 4 | "The needle was not magnetic iron; it was a thin sliver of black, iridescent stone." | | 5 | "As Harlow held it flat in her palm, the needle trembled, spun three frantic revolutions, and settled dead toward the solid brick bulkhead at the terminus of the abandoned siding—a wall that had been sealed with eight courses of engineering brick in 1941." |
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| 82.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1216 | | adjectiveStacks | 3 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "sharp, blue-white triangles" | | 1 | "heavy, coarse gray silk," | | 2 | "worn over modern denim." |
| | adverbCount | 30 | | adverbRatio | 0.024671052631578948 | | lyAdverbCount | 20 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.01644736842105263 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 85 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 85 | | mean | 17.06 | | std | 10.48 | | cv | 0.615 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 22 | | 1 | 21 | | 2 | 27 | | 3 | 25 | | 4 | 31 | | 5 | 23 | | 6 | 27 | | 7 | 52 | | 8 | 10 | | 9 | 23 | | 10 | 10 | | 11 | 15 | | 12 | 27 | | 13 | 15 | | 14 | 4 | | 15 | 24 | | 16 | 14 | | 17 | 6 | | 18 | 15 | | 19 | 20 | | 20 | 13 | | 21 | 23 | | 22 | 8 | | 23 | 14 | | 24 | 3 | | 25 | 21 | | 26 | 29 | | 27 | 4 | | 28 | 25 | | 29 | 3 | | 30 | 4 | | 31 | 3 | | 32 | 17 | | 33 | 17 | | 34 | 24 | | 35 | 20 | | 36 | 10 | | 37 | 17 | | 38 | 11 | | 39 | 4 | | 40 | 20 | | 41 | 5 | | 42 | 6 | | 43 | 15 | | 44 | 25 | | 45 | 27 | | 46 | 14 | | 47 | 9 | | 48 | 27 | | 49 | 4 |
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| 64.71% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 5 | | diversityRatio | 0.4235294117647059 | | totalSentences | 85 | | uniqueOpeners | 36 | |
| 50.51% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 66 | | matches | | 0 | "Instead, the dust was disturbed" |
| | ratio | 0.015 | |
| 86.67% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 22 | | totalSentences | 66 | | matches | | 0 | "She paused at the threshold" | | 1 | "Her left wrist twitched instinctively," | | 2 | "Her round glasses caught the" | | 3 | "She was only twenty-six, a" | | 4 | "Her voice was level, clipped" | | 5 | "She approached the tape perimeter," | | 6 | "His clothes were peculiar—a tailored" | | 7 | "His hands were curled inward" | | 8 | "She pulled a pair of" | | 9 | "She leaned closer, her dark" | | 10 | "It wasn't chemical burns." | | 11 | "It was frost." | | 12 | "She pushed her glasses up" | | 13 | "It was barely the size" | | 14 | "Her fingers closed around a" | | 15 | "She drew it out into" | | 16 | "It was a pocket compass," | | 17 | "It did not point north." | | 18 | "Her hand went to her" | | 19 | "She could hear the distant" |
| | ratio | 0.333 | |
| 35.76% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 56 | | totalSentences | 66 | | matches | | 0 | "The emergency stairwell of the" | | 1 | "Harlow Quinn took the last" | | 2 | "She paused at the threshold" | | 3 | "Her left wrist twitched instinctively," | | 4 | "Eva Kowalski stood near the" | | 5 | "Her round glasses caught the" | | 6 | "She was only twenty-six, a" | | 7 | "Eva said, her voice small" | | 8 | "Her voice was level, clipped" | | 9 | "She approached the tape perimeter," | | 10 | "Eva said, stepping aside to" | | 11 | "Harlow looked down at the" | | 12 | "The victim was an adult" | | 13 | "His clothes were peculiar—a tailored" | | 14 | "His hands were curled inward" | | 15 | "Harlow repeated, crouching beside the" | | 16 | "She pulled a pair of" | | 17 | "Eva pointed out, crouching beside" | | 18 | "Harlow didn't answer immediately." | | 19 | "She leaned closer, her dark" |
| | ratio | 0.848 | |
| 75.76% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 66 | | matches | | 0 | "Even in the damp chill" |
| | ratio | 0.015 | |
| 0.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 45 | | technicalSentenceCount | 9 | | matches | | 0 | "Harlow Quinn took the last four iron treads without breaking her stride, her boots ringing dull against the rusted diamond plate." | | 1 | "She paused at the threshold of the lower concourse, adjusting the collar of her wool coat against a draft that smelled faintly of ozone and wet lime." | | 2 | "Thirty yards ahead, beneath the cracked cream-and-oxblood tiles of an Edwardian platform that had seen no commuters since the Blitz, two halogen work lamps cast…" | | 3 | "Her voice was level, clipped with the military precision that had governed her entire career." | | 4 | "It was barely the size of a five-pence coin, carved from dense animal bone, bearing a notched edge that had been sheared clean through by immense pressure." | | 5 | "It was a pocket compass, roughly three inches across, fashioned from heavy brass that had darkened with age and a thick, mottled patina of verdigris." | | 6 | "The glass face was intact, though beneath the crystal, the brass dial was etched not with cardinal points, but with sharp, interlocking geometric sigils that se…" | | 7 | "As Harlow held it flat in her palm, the needle trembled, spun three frantic revolutions, and settled dead toward the solid brick bulkhead at the terminus of the…" | | 8 | "She could hear the distant rumble of the active Northern line four hundred feet to the west, a low, mechanical pulse that vibrated through her boot soles." |
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| 48.08% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 13 | | uselessAdditionCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "Eva said, her voice small against the vaulted ceiling" | | 1 | "Eva said, though the lie tasted thin even in the cold air" |
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| 46.55% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 12 | | fancyCount | 3 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Harlow repeated (repeat)" | | 1 | "Eva whispered (whisper)" | | 2 | "Harlow murmured (murmur)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 29 | | tagDensity | 0.414 | | leniency | 0.828 | | rawRatio | 0.25 | | effectiveRatio | 0.207 | |