Run: 2026-09-03-01M1KRHFEX73NJD04T9SCSSWX3

Run Details

Duration:
15.2s
Cost:
$0.012077
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The air turned to cold syrup before the world snapped open. Aurora stumbled over the threshold, her boots skidding across a floor of pale, polished slate that rang like struck iron. The pressure in her ears popped. A breath of thick, perfumed heat rushed into her lungs, tasting of crushed star anise, burnt sugar, and wild ferment. Above them stretched an unbroken expanse of warm amber. No sun anchored the sky, yet a rich, honeyed brilliance poured down from every angle, bathing the vast terraced landscape in gold and long, leaning shadows. Colossal trees, their trunks spiraled like ancient ram horns, vaulted hundreds of feet into the air. Dense canopies of broad, indigo leaves sheltered cascading orchards where fruit the size of carriage wheels hung from silver-barked boughs. "The air tastes of vintage and bone." Nyx poured forward from the boundary rift, their silhouette bleeding off the jagged standing stone behind them. The shade rose to full height, six feet of living, shifting dark against the golden light. Twin points of faint violet burned within the mass of their head. Nyx extended a ribbon of shadow toward a low-hanging cluster of crimson figs; the moment the vapor touched the skin of the fruit, the skin split, weeping a thick, violet nectar that hissed as it hit the slate. "Do not drink what falls freely." Isolde stepped into the grove without a rustle of her silver-threaded skirts. The Half-Fae’s waist-length silver hair drifted on a wind that Rory could not feel. Beneath her bare feet, the scarlet moss did not compress, remaining pristine as if she walked atop a mirror. Her pale lavender eyes swept the amber vault. "A gift accepted here is an oath carved into bone." Rory tucked a strand of shoulder-length black hair behind her ear and checked the weight at her belt. The moonsilver Fae blade rested in its scabbard, radiating a dry, soothing frost that cut straight through the stifling heat. Beneath her collar, the thumb-sized crimson gem of the Heartstone pendant pulsed against her collarbone—a slow, rhythmic throb that matched the cadence of a heavy heartbeat. "Which way leads through?" Rory traced the crescent scar on her left wrist, her bright blue eyes tracking the path ahead. The slate road carved a sharp line through the overgrown terraces, descending toward a network of sunken gardens and towering colonnades half-swallowed by flowering vines. Far below, aqueducts of pale green stone carried streams of dark, effervescent liquid between open-air pavilions. Isolde tilted her head, listening to a melody carried on the warm draft. "Down where the soil is sweetest, the roots drink deepest. Follow the silver water, but step only where the stone remembers sorrow." "Straightforward as always." Rory led the way down the steps. Each riser was carved from translucent alabaster, veined with gold that shimmered beneath her soles. To her left, a hedge of thorned roses bore blossoms the size of dinner plates, their petals shimmering between velvet black and furnace orange. When she passed, the nearest bloom turned on its stem, petals unfurling to reveal a ring of needle-thin teeth shivering around a pool of golden sap. She took half a step back, hand closing tight around the hilt of the Fae dagger. The cold of the moonsilver bit into her palm, grounding her. Nyx drifted alongside her, their edges fraying into wisps of ink that coiled around the aggressive stems. The plant recoiled, its petals snapping shut with an audible click. "The flora has an appetite. Three hundred years between realms, and the gardens of excess remain untamed." "You recognize this place?" "I recognize the stink of insatiable hunger. It clings to the stone." They reached the first wide terrace. Here, the canopy broke, allowing the amber sky to flood an expansive plaza centered around a dry fountain of carved serpents. Crushed hulls of exotic grains and dried pods littered the pavers, snapping under Rory’s boots like eggshells. The air vibrated with a low, resonant drone, not unlike millions of bees, though the vast orchards appeared devoid of insects. Rory approached the basin. Inside lay a scatter of crystalline orbs, each capturing the amber light and throwing tiny, fractured rainbows against the serpent carvings. She leaned closer, keeping her balance centered. Within the nearest crystal, tiny figures moved in endless, silent pantomime—a grand feast around a banquet table that stretched into infinity, the diners raising goblets that never emptied. "Soul-glass." Isolde stopped at the edge of the fountain, her gaze distant, fixed on the tiny moving shapes. "A memory of a table that never clears. They bought their seats with names they no longer possess." Rory pulled her gaze away from the hypnotic swirl inside the sphere. "Then we keep moving. Where is the rift point?" Isolde turned her face toward the lower terraces, where the pale green aqueducts converged on an enormous arched pavilion of black basalt. The structure rose from the center of a sunken lake whose dark waters churned without wind, sending up plumes of spiced vapor that drifted across the amber sky. "The gate sleeps beneath the feast hall of the prince. The lock opens only to iron, ice, and unsworn blood." Nyx flowed down the banister of the next staircase, their violet eyes narrowing. "The Wardens do not patrol these paths. The barrier is thin here, torn open by centuries of gluttonous desire. Look at the horizon." Rory looked where the shade indicated. At the edge of the golden sky, the amber light warped and flickered, like heat shimmering off summer asphalt. A faint, oily distortion ran in a jagged seam from the tops of the horn-shaped trees down into the dark water of the sunken lake. It was the Veil, stretched to its absolute breaking point, shivering under the strain of two worlds grinding together. The Heartstone against her chest grew noticeably hotter, radiating a steady, feverish warmth that seeped through the fabric of her coat. The red gem cast a faint crimson glow across the pale slate at her feet. "It knows we’re close." She descended the next flight of steps, picking her path carefully over roots that pulsed with dark, syrupy sap. The silence of the grove was oppressive now, broken only by the crunch of foreign gravel beneath her heels and the low, eternal humming of the earth. Ahead, the black basalt archway loomed, its shadow spilling across the churning lake like spilled wine.
created_at"2026-09-03T13:50:09.893Z" 9/3/2026, 1:50:09 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags0
95.34% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1072
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"carefully"
count1
highlights
0"carefully"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1072
totalAiIsms23
found
0
word"cascading"
count1
1
word"pristine"
count1
2
word"weight"
count1
3
word"pulsed"
count2
4
word"rhythmic"
count1
5
word"throb"
count1
6
word"traced"
count1
7
word"shimmered"
count1
8
word"velvet"
count1
9
word"vibrated"
count1
10
word"crystalline"
count1
11
word"fractured"
count1
12
word"crystal"
count1
13
word"structure"
count1
14
word"churned"
count1
15
word"desire"
count1
16
word"flickered"
count1
17
word"warmth"
count1
18
word"silence"
count1
19
word"oppressive"
count1
20
word"loomed"
count1
21
word"churning"
count1
highlights
0"cascading"
1"pristine"
2"weight"
3"pulsed"
4"rhythmic"
5"throb"
6"traced"
7"shimmered"
8"velvet"
9"vibrated"
10"crystalline"
11"fractured"
12"crystal"
13"structure"
14"churned"
15"desire"
16"flickered"
17"warmth"
18"silence"
19"oppressive"
20"loomed"
21"churning"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences53
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences53
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences68
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen39
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1070
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions1
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions23
wordCount910
uniqueNames7
maxNameDensity0.88
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Half-Fae1
Rory8
Fae3
Heartstone2
Veil1
Nyx4
Isolde4
persons
0"Half-Fae"
1"Rory"
2"Fae"
3"Veil"
4"Nyx"
5"Isolde"
places(empty)
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences52
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"appeared devoid of insects"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1070
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences68
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs35
mean30.57
std25.02
cv0.818
sampleLengths
011
146
271
37
483
56
653
710
864
94
1058
1113
1222
133
1472
1527
1628
1717
184
1912
2065
2160
221
2317
2418
2512
269
2750
2820
2913
3023
3169
3236
334
3462
98.64% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences53
matches
0"was carved"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs126
matches(empty)
16.81% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount2
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences3
totalSentences68
ratio0.044
matches
0"Nyx extended a ribbon of shadow toward a low-hanging cluster of crimson figs; the moment the vapor touched the skin of the fruit, the skin split, weeping a thick, violet nectar that hissed as it hit the slate."
1"Beneath her collar, the thumb-sized crimson gem of the Heartstone pendant pulsed against her collarbone—a slow, rhythmic throb that matched the cadence of a heavy heartbeat."
2"Within the nearest crystal, tiny figures moved in endless, silent pantomime—a grand feast around a banquet table that stretched into infinity, the diners raising goblets that never emptied."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount923
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount17
adverbRatio0.018418201516793065
lyAdverbCount4
lyAdverbRatio0.004333694474539545
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences68
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences68
mean15.74
std7.42
cv0.471
sampleLengths
011
120
26
320
49
526
616
720
87
917
1016
1112
1238
136
1412
1514
1619
178
1810
1918
2020
2126
224
2317
2425
2516
2613
2722
283
297
3015
3124
3226
3316
3411
3517
3611
3717
384
3912
406
4121
4217
4321
444
4521
467
4728
481
4917
78.92% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats3
diversityRatio0.5
totalSentences68
uniqueOpeners34
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences53
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount6
totalSentences53
matches
0"Her pale lavender eyes swept"
1"She took half a step"
2"They reached the first wide"
3"She leaned closer, keeping her"
4"It was the Veil, stretched"
5"She descended the next flight"
ratio0.113
100.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount38
totalSentences53
matches
0"The air turned to cold"
1"Aurora stumbled over the threshold,"
2"The pressure in her ears"
3"A breath of thick, perfumed"
4"Nyx poured forward from the"
5"The shade rose to full"
6"Nyx extended a ribbon of"
7"Isolde stepped into the grove"
8"The Half-Fae’s waist-length silver hair"
9"Her pale lavender eyes swept"
10"Rory tucked a strand of"
11"The moonsilver Fae blade rested"
12"Rory traced the crescent scar"
13"The slate road carved a"
14"Isolde tilted her head, listening"
15"Rory led the way down"
16"Each riser was carved from"
17"She took half a step"
18"The cold of the moonsilver"
19"Nyx drifted alongside her, their"
ratio0.717
94.34% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences53
matches
0"To her left, a hedge"
ratio0.019
0.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences45
technicalSentenceCount9
matches
0"Aurora stumbled over the threshold, her boots skidding across a floor of pale, polished slate that rang like struck iron."
1"Nyx extended a ribbon of shadow toward a low-hanging cluster of crimson figs; the moment the vapor touched the skin of the fruit, the skin split, weeping a thic…"
2"Beneath her bare feet, the scarlet moss did not compress, remaining pristine as if she walked atop a mirror."
3"Beneath her collar, the thumb-sized crimson gem of the Heartstone pendant pulsed against her collarbone—a slow, rhythmic throb that matched the cadence of a hea…"
4"Each riser was carved from translucent alabaster, veined with gold that shimmered beneath her soles."
5"Nyx drifted alongside her, their edges fraying into wisps of ink that coiled around the aggressive stems."
6"Within the nearest crystal, tiny figures moved in endless, silent pantomime—a grand feast around a banquet table that stretched into infinity, the diners raisin…"
7"The structure rose from the center of a sunken lake whose dark waters churned without wind, sending up plumes of spiced vapor that drifted across the amber sky."
8"The Heartstone against her chest grew noticeably hotter, radiating a steady, feverish warmth that seeped through the fabric of her coat."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags0
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
86.1349%