Run: 2026-09-03-01M1KRHFNS4BCSNNQ2D7C5FCPN

Run Details

Duration:
16.7s
Cost:
$0.012563
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The third deadbolt clicked back with a heavy metallic clunk that echoed in the narrow stairwell. Rory pulled the door inward, bracing her shoulder against the frame, ready to tell whoever was knocking that Eva wasn’t taking commissions on a Tuesday night. The words dissolved on her tongue. Rain dripped from the brim of an umbrella onto the worn floorboards. Lucien Moreau stood on the landing, the harsh yellow bulb overhead picking out the platinum sheen of his slicked-back hair. His tailored charcoal overcoat was damp along the shoulders, dark fabric hugging his frame with sharp, deliberate precision. In his right hand, the silver ferrule of his ivory-handled cane rested against the floor. "You changed the locks." His voice carried that low, smoke-cured French cadence that made the hairs on the back of her neck stand on end. One eye, the colour of aged whiskey, fixed on her face. The other, an expanse of pure, bottomless black, tracked the pulse jumping in the hollow of her throat. "Eva did. Three months ago." Rory kept her hand flat against the timber of the door, blocking the gap. "You shouldn’t be here, Lucien." "And yet the rain outside is ruinous to Italian wool, and you have not shut the door in my face." "Give me three seconds." Lucien didn't flinch. Instead, his gaze dropped to the frayed cuff of her oversized jumper, where the pale, crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist peeked out. The line of his jaw tightened, the only crack in a mask he had spent decades perfecting. "Five minutes, Rory. That is all I ask." "You don't ask for things. You buy them or you take them." "Tonight, I am asking." The heavy scent of roasted cumin and crushed coriander drifted up through the floorboards from the curry house below, mixing with the sharp tang of ozone and wet wool radiating from him. Down the hall, a floorboard creaked. Footsteps shuffled behind a neighbor's thin plywood door. Rory swore under her breath, stepped back, and jerked the door open wider. "Get in. Before someone spots you." Lucien crossed the threshold with smooth, quiet grace, the rubber tip of his cane barely making a sound against the linoleum. He closed the door behind him and slid all three brass bolts home without looking, his fingers remembering the rhythm of the hardware with effortless precision. The flat was tiny, drowning under towers of grimoires, loose parchment, and half-drained mugs of tea. On the lumpy velvet armchair by the radiator, a fat tabby cat stirred, blinked two green eyes at the intruder, and let out a low, rumbling purr. "Ptolemy," Lucien murmured, extending a gloved knuckle. The cat immediately pushed its flat head into the leather. "At least someone in this borough maintains their manners." "He likes anyone who smells like expensive meat." Rory crossed her arms, leaning back against Eva’s kitchen counter. The laminate dug into her lower back. "Talk. Then leave." Lucien rested his cane against the side of an overflowing bookshelf, unbuttoned his overcoat, and slipped it off. Underneath, his charcoal three-piece suit was pristine, the linen shirt at his throat glaringly white in the dingy room. He laid the damp coat over the back of a wooden dining chair, moving with a deliberate slowness that set Rory's teeth on edge. He was measuring the room. He was measuring her. "You look tired," he remarked, turning to face her. "I work twelve-hour shifts on a scooter delivering dumplings through London traffic. Forgive me for not glowing." "You left without your settlement." "I left because staying meant drowning in your world." "You were never drowning." Lucien took two slow paces forward, closing the distance between the clutter of the dining table and the narrow kitchen corridor. "You were swimming circles around every syndicate boss from Mayfair to Whitechapel." "And look what it cost." The air between them grew thin. Rory held her ground, refusing to shrink back against the cupboards, though every nerve in her body fired with the instinct to bolt. He stopped two feet away. Close enough that she could see the faint, smoldering gold flecks circling the pupil of his amber eye. Close enough to catch the scent of cedarwood, clove tobacco, and the dry, mineral heat that belonged entirely to the demonic blood running through his veins. "It cost you nothing that I could not replace," he said quietly. "You couldn't replace my sanity, Luc." Her Welsh lilt sharpened, rough around the edges, stripping away the polished London cadence she used for the customers. "You couldn't replace the three nights I spent sitting in that safe house in Bermondsey listening to your rivals kick the reinforced steel door while you were off playing chess with devils." "I was securing your freedom." "I didn't want you to secure it! I wanted you to be there!" The shout tore out of her, raw and ugly, rattling the empty tea mugs on the draining board. Lucien didn't blink. The black expanse of his left eye seemed to drink in the dim lamplight, absorbing the fury she threw at him without yielding an inch. But the fingers of his left hand curled into a tight, rigid fist at his side. "If I had stayed in that room with you," he murmured, his voice dropping into a register that vibrated through the floorboards, "they would have brought down the entire foundation. They would have burned the block to ash to draw me out. I drew the fire away." "And you never came back to check the wreckage." "I am here now." "Six weeks too late." "I was in Marseilles. Bleeding into a basin for three of them." Rory’s breath hitched. She scanned him instantly, her analytical mind cutting through the anger to take inventory. The impeccable posture. The slight stiffness in his right shoulder. The way he favored his left leg just enough to disguise it behind the swagger of his cane. "Who did it?" "It does not matter." "Lucien." "A minor disagreement regarding the transport of certain Avarosian relics." A ghost of his usual arrogant smirk flickered across his mouth, but it failed to reach his eyes. "The relics remained where they belonged. The men who objected no longer possess opinions." Rory uncrossed her arms, her hands dropping to her sides. She hated how quickly the rage could curdle into something achingly tender, hated how the mere sight of a shadow beneath his cheekbone could hollow out her ribs. She took half a step forward before she could stop herself. "You're an idiot." "An assessment shared by many of my associates." "You could have sent a message. A courier. A cipher. Anything." "And compromise your location?" Lucien shook his head, the blond strands shifting across his forehead. "You came here to disappear from Evan. Then you ran from me. If I reached out through the channels, my enemies would have traced the line straight to this doorstep." "So why come tonight?" Lucien reached into his inside jacket pocket. Rory tensed out of sheer reflex, but his movement was slow, theatrical in its transparency. He drew out a small, heavy velvet pouch tied with silver cord and set it quietly on the laminate counter between them. "Your mother's signet ring. The one Evan pawned in Cardiff to pay off his debts." Rory stared at the dark blue velvet. The room seemed to tilt beneath her sneakers. Her breath trapped behind her ribs, sharp and agonizing. "How?" "I had business in Wales," Lucien said, his tone entirely flat, entirely fraudulent. "A detour was convenient." "Cardiff isn't a detour from Marseilles, you liar." "Geography has never been my strong suit." Rory reached out with trembling fingers, picking up the pouch. The weight of the old gold inside was unmistakable. She tugged the cord loose, tipping the small, crest-engraved band into her palm. Her mother's ring. The only thing she had wept over when she packed her life into a single duffel bag and fled across the border. Tears pricked the corners of her eyes, hot and humiliating. She blinked them back fiercely, closing her fist around the metal until the edges bit deep into her skin. "Why do this, Luc? What do you want from me?" "I want nothing." "Nobody gives gifts like this for nothing." Lucien stepped closer. This time, there was no hesitation, no calculation. He closed the remaining distance until the crisp wool of his vest brushed the worn cotton of her jumper. He lifted his hand, his leather-clad fingers hovering a millimeter above her cheek before resting gently against her jawline. The demon-heat radiating through the black leather was almost scalding against her chilled skin. "I wanted to see you," he whispered, the French accent thicker now, frayed at the edges. "I wanted to know that you were breathing. That you were whole." Rory looked up into those impossible, mismatched eyes—one molten gold, the other an abyss—and felt the terrifying, familiar pull dragging her back toward the edge. Her hand came up, her fingers wrapping around his wrist, her thumbnail pressing against the cuff of his shirt where his pulse hammered wildly against the linen. "I'm not coming back to the underground, Lucien." "I did not ask you to." "I'm not going to be the girl waiting in a safe house while you gamble with your life." "I know." His thumb brushed the crest of her cheekbone, light as a falling feather, utterly at odds with the violent world he commanded. "I know, Rory." Outside, the East London rain turned into a deluge, hammering relentlessly against the glass of the small kitchen window. Inside, neither of them moved. Rory stared at the sharp curve of his mouth, remembering the taste of smoke and cold wine, while the heat of his palm anchored her to the floorboards. "You're soaking wet," she murmured, her voice barely louder than the rain. "A temporary inconvenience." "Your coat is going to ruin Eva's chair." "I will buy her a new chair." Rory let out a sound that was half a laugh and half a sob, her fingers tightening on his wrist. "You're infuriating." "And you," Lucien replied, his dark eye catching the dim light as his fingers slid slowly from her jaw to the nape of her neck, "are entirely impossible to forget."
created_at"2026-09-03T13:50:10.118Z" 9/3/2026, 1:50:10 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags15
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"he said quietly [quietly]"
dialogueSentences63
tagDensity0.238
leniency0.476
rawRatio0.067
effectiveRatio0.032
88.38% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1721
totalAiIsmAdverbs4
found
0
adverb"quickly"
count1
1
adverb"gently"
count1
2
adverb"utterly"
count1
3
adverb"slowly"
count1
highlights
0"quickly"
1"gently"
2"utterly"
3"slowly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
50.61% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1721
totalAiIsms17
found
0
word"echoed"
count1
1
word"pulse"
count2
2
word"footsteps"
count1
3
word"effortless"
count1
4
word"velvet"
count3
5
word"pristine"
count1
6
word"lilt"
count1
7
word"vibrated"
count1
8
word"scanned"
count1
9
word"flickered"
count1
10
word"traced"
count1
11
word"weight"
count1
12
word"chilled"
count1
13
word"familiar"
count1
highlights
0"echoed"
1"pulse"
2"footsteps"
3"effortless"
4"velvet"
5"pristine"
6"lilt"
7"vibrated"
8"scanned"
9"flickered"
10"traced"
11"weight"
12"chilled"
13"familiar"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences84
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences84
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences132
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen47
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1719
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions14
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
83.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions36
wordCount1211
uniqueNames9
maxNameDensity1.16
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Eva2
Tuesday1
Moreau1
French2
Lucien12
Rory14
Welsh1
London2
East1
persons
0"Eva"
1"Moreau"
2"Lucien"
3"Rory"
places
0"London"
1"East"
globalScore0.922
windowScore0.833
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences73
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1719
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences132
matches
0"knocking that Eva"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs76
mean22.62
std19.77
cv0.874
sampleLengths
016
126
26
365
44
550
624
720
84
943
108
1112
124
1346
1413
156
1647
1743
1826
1928
2070
219
2217
235
249
2537
265
2778
2812
2957
305
3113
3218
3344
3447
359
364
374
3812
3945
403
414
421
4342
4449
453
468
4711
4845
494
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences84
matches(empty)
9.52% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount5
totalVerbs175
matches
0"was knocking"
1"wasn’t taking"
2"was measuring"
3"was measuring"
4"was almost scalding"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount2
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences1
totalSentences132
ratio0.008
matches
0"Rory looked up into those impossible, mismatched eyes—one molten gold, the other an abyss—and felt the terrifying, familiar pull dragging her back toward the edge."
88.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1222
adjectiveStacks2
stackExamples
0"low, smoke-cured French"
1"pale, crescent-shaped scar"
adverbCount35
adverbRatio0.028641571194762683
lyAdverbCount21
lyAdverbRatio0.01718494271685761
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences132
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences132
mean13.02
std8.56
cv0.657
sampleLengths
016
126
26
312
420
518
615
74
821
911
1018
1119
125
1320
144
153
1623
1717
188
1912
204
2132
226
238
2413
256
2621
2726
2816
2927
307
3110
329
3318
347
353
3618
3719
3824
395
404
419
4217
435
449
4525
4612
475
486
4923
45.45% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats15
diversityRatio0.3409090909090909
totalSentences132
uniqueOpeners45
39.68% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences84
matches
0"Instead, his gaze dropped to"
ratio0.012
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount25
totalSentences84
matches
0"His tailored charcoal overcoat was"
1"His voice carried that low,"
2"He closed the door behind"
3"He laid the damp coat"
4"He was measuring the room."
5"He was measuring her."
6"he remarked, turning to face"
7"He stopped two feet away."
8"he said quietly"
9"Her Welsh lilt sharpened, rough"
10"he murmured, his voice dropping"
11"She scanned him instantly, her"
12"She hated how quickly the"
13"She took half a step"
14"He drew out a small,"
15"Her breath trapped behind her"
16"She tugged the cord loose,"
17"Her mother's ring."
18"She blinked them back fiercely,"
19"He closed the remaining distance"
ratio0.298
25.48% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount73
totalSentences84
matches
0"The third deadbolt clicked back"
1"Rory pulled the door inward,"
2"The words dissolved on her"
3"Rain dripped from the brim"
4"Lucien Moreau stood on the"
5"His tailored charcoal overcoat was"
6"His voice carried that low,"
7"The other, an expanse of"
8"Rory kept her hand flat"
9"Lucien didn't flinch."
10"The line of his jaw"
11"The heavy scent of roasted"
12"Footsteps shuffled behind a neighbor's"
13"Rory swore under her breath,"
14"Lucien crossed the threshold with"
15"He closed the door behind"
16"The flat was tiny, drowning"
17"Lucien murmured, extending a gloved"
18"The cat immediately pushed its"
19"Rory crossed her arms, leaning"
ratio0.869
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences84
matches(empty)
ratio0
82.07% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences47
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"The third deadbolt clicked back with a heavy metallic clunk that echoed in the narrow stairwell."
1"His voice carried that low, smoke-cured French cadence that made the hairs on the back of her neck stand on end."
2"He closed the door behind him and slid all three brass bolts home without looking, his fingers remembering the rhythm of the hardware with effortless precision."
3"Close enough to catch the scent of cedarwood, clove tobacco, and the dry, mineral heat that belonged entirely to the demonic blood running through his veins."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags15
uselessAdditionCount5
matches
0"he remarked, turning to face her"
1"Lucien shook, the blond strands shifting across his forehead"
2"Lucien said, his tone entirely flat, entirely fraudulent"
3"he whispered, the French accent thicker now, frayed at the edges"
4"she murmured, her voice barely louder than the rain"
70.63% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags8
fancyCount5
fancyTags
0"Lucien murmured (murmur)"
1"Lucien took (take)"
2"he murmured (murmur)"
3"he whispered (whisper)"
4"she murmured (murmur)"
dialogueSentences63
tagDensity0.127
leniency0.254
rawRatio0.625
effectiveRatio0.159
79.4387%