| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 9 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 21 | | tagDensity | 0.429 | | leniency | 0.857 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 92.92% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1413 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 2 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 57.54% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1413 | | totalAiIsms | 12 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "pulse" | | 1 | "warmth" | | 2 | "throbbed" | | 3 | "pulsed" | | 4 | "echoed" | | 5 | "shimmered" | | 6 | "unspoken" | | 7 | "could feel" | | 8 | "otherworldly" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 2 | | narrationSentences | 112 | | matches | | 0 | "was nervous" | | 1 | "felt a prickle" |
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| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 2 | | narrationSentences | 112 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 124 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 43 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 1 | | markdownWords | 5 | | totalWords | 1415 | | ratio | 0.004 | | matches | | 0 | "she's waiting. don't be late." |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 14 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 83.33% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 55 | | wordCount | 1260 | | uniqueNames | 23 | | maxNameDensity | 0.95 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2.5 | | worstWindowName | "Isolde" | | discoveredNames | | Golden | 1 | | Empress | 1 | | Richmond | 2 | | December | 1 | | Pembroke | 1 | | Lodge | 1 | | Hill | 1 | | Nyx | 8 | | Heartstone | 2 | | Rory | 12 | | Isolde | 10 | | Thames | 1 | | Veil | 4 | | Wardens | 1 | | Hel | 1 | | Earth | 1 | | Fae | 1 | | Severn | 1 | | Cardiff | 1 | | Hell | 1 | | Prince | 1 | | Belphegor | 1 | | Aldric | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "December" | | 1 | "Nyx" | | 2 | "Rory" | | 3 | "Isolde" | | 4 | "Veil" | | 5 | "Wardens" | | 6 | "Prince" | | 7 | "Belphegor" | | 8 | "Aldric" |
| | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Pembroke" | | 2 | "Lodge" | | 3 | "Hill" | | 4 | "Thames" | | 5 | "Hel" | | 6 | "Cardiff" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 0.833 | |
| 25.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 80 | | glossingSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "carvings that seemed to shift when she looked away" | | 1 | "sounded like wind through a keyhole" | | 2 | "as if considering whether to stay solid" | | 3 | "felt like a warning" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.707 | | wordCount | 1415 | | matches | | 0 | "not lie shone through the words, but the way she said it made it a riddle" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 124 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 40 | | mean | 35.38 | | std | 26.57 | | cv | 0.751 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 94 | | 1 | 10 | | 2 | 75 | | 3 | 37 | | 4 | 5 | | 5 | 67 | | 6 | 24 | | 7 | 22 | | 8 | 45 | | 9 | 75 | | 10 | 2 | | 11 | 58 | | 12 | 24 | | 13 | 9 | | 14 | 57 | | 15 | 15 | | 16 | 17 | | 17 | 24 | | 18 | 30 | | 19 | 18 | | 20 | 10 | | 21 | 81 | | 22 | 7 | | 23 | 93 | | 24 | 6 | | 25 | 56 | | 26 | 52 | | 27 | 20 | | 28 | 24 | | 29 | 19 | | 30 | 81 | | 31 | 43 | | 32 | 29 | | 33 | 37 | | 34 | 9 | | 35 | 27 | | 36 | 11 | | 37 | 70 | | 38 | 13 | | 39 | 19 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 112 | | matches | | |
| 71.79% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 4 | | totalVerbs | 208 | | matches | | 0 | "was waiting" | | 1 | "were sitting" | | 2 | "was breathing" | | 3 | "was like looking" |
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| 100.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 2 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 1 | | totalSentences | 124 | | ratio | 0.008 | | matches | | 0 | "Wildflowers bloomed in impossible profusion along the ground — foxgloves and bluebells and something white and star-shaped she couldn't name — their petals opening as she watched." |
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| 94.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1266 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "slender leaf-shaped dagger" |
| | adverbCount | 35 | | adverbRatio | 0.02764612954186414 | | lyAdverbCount | 8 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.00631911532385466 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 124 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 124 | | mean | 11.41 | | std | 8.21 | | cv | 0.72 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 41 | | 1 | 23 | | 2 | 10 | | 3 | 20 | | 4 | 10 | | 5 | 23 | | 6 | 9 | | 7 | 25 | | 8 | 5 | | 9 | 5 | | 10 | 8 | | 11 | 6 | | 12 | 12 | | 13 | 19 | | 14 | 5 | | 15 | 16 | | 16 | 27 | | 17 | 14 | | 18 | 10 | | 19 | 19 | | 20 | 5 | | 21 | 16 | | 22 | 6 | | 23 | 15 | | 24 | 20 | | 25 | 5 | | 26 | 5 | | 27 | 6 | | 28 | 4 | | 29 | 10 | | 30 | 5 | | 31 | 14 | | 32 | 27 | | 33 | 9 | | 34 | 2 | | 35 | 14 | | 36 | 4 | | 37 | 25 | | 38 | 8 | | 39 | 7 | | 40 | 22 | | 41 | 2 | | 42 | 9 | | 43 | 5 | | 44 | 5 | | 45 | 12 | | 46 | 7 | | 47 | 21 | | 48 | 2 | | 49 | 5 |
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| 36.29% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 17 | | diversityRatio | 0.29838709677419356 | | totalSentences | 124 | | uniqueOpeners | 37 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 102 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 98.43% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 31 | | totalSentences | 102 | | matches | | 0 | "She found the stones because" | | 1 | "It grew warmer, smelling suddenly" | | 2 | "Their violet eyes glowed faintly," | | 3 | "It hadn't done anything since." | | 4 | "They were a boundary." | | 5 | "She became aware, with a" | | 6 | "She'd stepped in at dusk," | | 7 | "Her phone, still in her" | | 8 | "It had been 17:03 when" | | 9 | "She got something less contained." | | 10 | "She was five foot five," | | 11 | "She was ageless, ethereal, and" | | 12 | "Her voice was soft, amused." | | 13 | "It was warm now, pulsing" | | 14 | "She hadn't expected to be" | | 15 | "She thought of her mother" | | 16 | "She thought of her father's" | | 17 | "She'd fled Cardiff with nothing" | | 18 | "She was used to finding" | | 19 | "she said, because it was" |
| | ratio | 0.304 | |
| 18.82% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 90 | | totalSentences | 102 | | matches | | 0 | "Rory had been running deliveries" | | 1 | "The sky over Richmond was" | | 2 | "Eva had sent a text" | | 3 | "She found the stones because" | | 4 | "A ring of ancient oaks," | | 5 | "Moss grew in their bark" | | 6 | "The snow that fell around" | | 7 | "The air changed ten paces" | | 8 | "It grew warmer, smelling suddenly" | | 9 | "The hum of traffic from" | | 10 | "a voice said" | | 11 | "Nyx was already there, half" | | 12 | "Their violet eyes glowed faintly," | | 13 | "Rory's fingers found the crescent" | | 14 | "Nyx inclined their head toward" | | 15 | "The Heartstone pendant at Rory's" | | 16 | "It hadn't done anything since." | | 17 | "The stones were not a" | | 18 | "They were a boundary." | | 19 | "Sound folded in on itself." |
| | ratio | 0.882 | |
| 98.04% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 102 | | matches | | 0 | "Now it throbbed once, slow." | | 1 | "Now, in this light, the" |
| | ratio | 0.02 | |
| 84.55% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 49 | | technicalSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "In solid form they were tall, six foot two at least, a humanoid silhouette made of living shadow that caught the last light and didn't reflect it." | | 1 | "She'd stepped in at dusk, but inside the clearing the light was steady, gold and green, as if caught at late afternoon and held there." | | 2 | "Silver hair reached Isolde's waist, catching the strange light and holding it." | | 3 | "Nyx shifted closer, their shadow spilling onto the flowers without darkening them." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 9 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 54.76% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 7 | | fancyCount | 2 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Nyx murmured (murmur)" | | 1 | "Isolde's compulsion to not lie shone through the words (lie shine)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 21 | | tagDensity | 0.333 | | leniency | 0.667 | | rawRatio | 0.286 | | effectiveRatio | 0.19 | |