Run: 2026-09-03-01M1KRK70ECFR1G27CMK35DEPG

Run Details

Duration:
14.7s
Cost:
$0.010786
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support"> <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor> <hair>short curly dark brown</hair> <height>5'10"</height> <age>29</age> <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone> <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar> <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion> <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace> <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description> <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre. A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Sheets of rain slammed into Camden High Street, turning the asphalt into black glass. Rainwater churned along the curbs, frothing over blocked storm drains and swallowing the yellow glare of passing headlights. Detective Harlow Quinn matched her stride to the rhythm of the storm. Her trench coat hung heavy with moisture, but her pace remained steady, precise, each boot strike deliberate against the slick pavement. Water dripped from the brim of her collar onto the worn leather watch strap on her left wrist. Midnight had passed ten minutes ago. Thirty yards ahead, Tomás Herrera cut through a puddle, sending a spray of dirty water against a brick wall. He clutched a reinforced aluminum medical case to his chest. His olive skin shone beneath the amber streetlamps, dark curls plastered to his forehead. "Met Police! Halt and drop the case!" Tomás glanced over his shoulder. The silver Saint Christopher medallion around his neck swung out, catching the light as he veered sharply into an alleyway between an off-licence and a shuttered butcher shop. Quinn surged forward. Her boots gripped the greasy cobblestones, muscles coiling in her legs. She cleared the alley corner with her right hand resting flat against the grip of her service weapon beneath her coat. The alley narrowed to a claustrophobic throat of damp brick and fire escapes. Tomás knocked over a stack of wooden crates to slow her down. Splintered pine clattered against the stone. Quinn vaulted the debris without breaking cadence, landing in a low crouch before springing forward again. "You don't want to run, Herrera. The rain's washing out every excuse you have left." "You're out of your depth, Detective!" Tomás's voice echoed off the wet brickwork, carrying the sharp cadence of his native Seville. "Go back to the precinct. File your paperwork." "Drop the kit. We talk about the unlicensed pharmaceuticals, and we talk about where you were three nights ago." "Those people were bleeding to death!" He rounded another corner, his sneakers skidding across a patch of wet moss before finding traction. "Your ambulances were twenty minutes out!" Quinn pushed harder, her lungs drawing in the cold, rain-heavy air. "You aren't registered with the NHS anymore. That makes it contraband, and that makes you mine." Tomás didn't answer. He plunged through a gap in a chain-link fence, the rusted wire tearing at the shoulder of his jacket. Quinn reached the opening a second later, turning sideways to slip through the jagged metal without snagging her coat. Beyond the fence lay the sunken yard of a decommissioned Tube station, an architectural scar swallowed by weeds and modern London development. Iron girders loomed overhead like the ribs of a beached leviathan, dripping black grease and rain into the dark basin below. Tomás was already halfway down a flight of cracked concrete stairs leading toward the subterranean boarding halls. Quinn reached the top of the stairs and drew her flashlight. The beam sliced through the curtain of rain, illuminating the chipped green tiles of the entrance and the faded, decades-old Underground roundel above the archway. A draft drifted up from the opening—warm, thick, and carrying the dry, metallic scent of ozone mixed with sandalwood and burnt tallow. It wasn't the smell of rotting Victorian brickwork. Her thumb flicked the switch on her radio harness. Static hissed in her ear, dense and unbroken. "Central, this is Quinn. Foot pursuit in progress, Camden disused line. Suspect heading below ground. Requesting backup." The radio spit a harsh burst of white noise, followed by an unnatural, low vibration that vibrated through the casing itself. Quinn tapped the unit twice, but the channel remained completely dead. She clicked off the radio, her jaw tightening. She adjusted the strap of her watch, the leather biting into her wrist, and started down the steps. The stairwell swallowed the noise of the surface storm. The drumming of the rain faded into a dull, rhythmic thrum against the street above, replaced by a low, humming resonance that throbbed through the soles of her boots. The walls here bore no graffiti; instead, faint grooves scored the Victorian tile, forming intricate, geometric patterns that caught her flashlight beam with an oily sheen. At the base of the staircase, the corridor opened into an old pedestrian concourse. Tomás stood fifty feet ahead, near a heavy iron gate that blocked access to the lower platforms. Two figures in heavy, oilcloth cloaks flanked the barrier. They stood unnaturally still, their features hidden beneath deep hoods. "Herrera! Step away from the gate!" Quinn raised her weapon, keeping the sight aligned with the center of his chest. "Hands where I can see them." Tomás turned slowly. The aluminum case rested against his hip. He lifted his left hand, turning the forearm slightly, the long, pale scar from a knife fight catching the dim light. In his right hand, pinched between thumb and forefinger, rested a carved piece of white bone no larger than a coin. "You should turn around, Detective." Tomás spoke quietly now, without the strain of the chase. "You step past this threshold, your badge doesn't mean a damn thing." "Step away from the gate, or you go down." "Look around you. Does this look like standard Met jurisdiction?" Quinn's gaze flicked to the cloaked sentries. Neither had flinched at the drawn sidearm. One of them extended a gray, hairless hand, palm up. Tomás dropped the bone token into the open palm. The gate let out a deep, iron groan and swung inward on hinges that made no sound. Beyond the threshold, the old platform stretched into an impossible distance. Lanterns burned with emerald and violet flames, illuminating rows of draped stalls that lined the tracks. The air was thick with the murmur of a hundred low conversations, the clinking of glassware, and the sharp, chemical reek of alchemical distillations. Figures moved among the stalls—some in modern coats, others draped in silks, hides, or fabrics that seemed to shift under the torchlight. Glass display cases gleamed with vials of luminescent fluid, dried botanical roots, and metal instruments that belonged to no medical catalogue Quinn had ever seen. It was impossible. The station had been sealed off since the Blitz. Quinn lowered her weapon by an inch, her fingers tightening around the checkered polymer grip. Her mind raced through the files locked in the cold-case cabinet back at the station—the photographs of Morris’s body, the unexplained marks etched into his sternum, the reports stamped classified by people who didn't exist on the official roster. The same ozone tang that filled this subterranean chamber had clung to Morris's overcoat the night they found him in the docks. Tomás stepped backward through the open gate, his eyes fixed on Quinn. "Last chance, Quinn. Walk back up the stairs. Tell your superiors you lost me in the rain." Quinn took three measured paces forward, stopping at the threshold. The iron gate stood between her and the sprawling, shadowed expanse of the market. She looked at the dead radio at her shoulder, then at Tomás, whose dark eyes watched her with a mixture of caution and pity. Quinn holstered her sidearm with a sharp, mechanical click, pulled her coat tight around her shoulders, and crossed the threshold into the market.
created_at"2026-09-03T13:51:06.78Z" 9/3/2026, 1:51:06 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
75.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags4
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"Tomás spoke quietly [quietly]"
dialogueSentences16
tagDensity0.25
leniency0.5
rawRatio0.25
effectiveRatio0.125
83.44% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1208
totalAiIsmAdverbs4
found
0
adverb"sharply"
count1
1
adverb"completely"
count1
2
adverb"slowly"
count1
3
adverb"slightly"
count1
highlights
0"sharply"
1"completely"
2"slowly"
3"slightly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
33.77% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1208
totalAiIsms16
found
0
word"churned"
count1
1
word"echoed"
count1
2
word"loomed"
count1
3
word"flicked"
count2
4
word"vibrated"
count1
5
word"rhythmic"
count1
6
word"resonance"
count1
7
word"throbbed"
count1
8
word"intricate"
count1
9
word"aligned"
count1
10
word"standard"
count1
11
word"raced"
count1
12
word"etched"
count1
13
word"measured"
count1
14
word"mechanical"
count1
highlights
0"churned"
1"echoed"
2"loomed"
3"flicked"
4"vibrated"
5"rhythmic"
6"resonance"
7"throbbed"
8"intricate"
9"aligned"
10"standard"
11"raced"
12"etched"
13"measured"
14"mechanical"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"air was thick with"
count1
highlights
0"The air was thick with"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences70
matches(empty)
81.63% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount2
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences70
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences82
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen41
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1205
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions3
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
82.69% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions42
wordCount1040
uniqueNames16
maxNameDensity1.35
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Camden1
High1
Street1
Harlow1
Quinn14
Tomás12
Herrera1
Saint1
Christopher1
Seville1
Tube1
London1
Underground1
Victorian2
Blitz1
Morris2
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Tomás"
3"Herrera"
4"Saint"
5"Christopher"
6"Morris"
places
0"Camden"
1"High"
2"Street"
3"Seville"
4"London"
globalScore0.827
windowScore0.833
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences65
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"fabrics that seemed to shift under the torchlight"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1205
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences82
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs37
mean32.57
std19.52
cv0.599
sampleLengths
032
157
243
37
433
535
647
715
829
919
1028
1127
1241
1343
1417
1566
1617
1717
1832
1926
2064
2114
2236
2326
2452
2527
269
2710
2850
2911
3087
3112
3276
3312
3417
3548
3623
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences70
matches
0"been sealed"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs160
matches(empty)
3.48% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount3
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences4
totalSentences82
ratio0.049
matches
0"A draft drifted up from the opening—warm, thick, and carrying the dry, metallic scent of ozone mixed with sandalwood and burnt tallow."
1"The walls here bore no graffiti; instead, faint grooves scored the Victorian tile, forming intricate, geometric patterns that caught her flashlight beam with an oily sheen."
2"Figures moved among the stalls—some in modern coats, others draped in silks, hides, or fabrics that seemed to shift under the torchlight."
3"Her mind raced through the files locked in the cold-case cabinet back at the station—the photographs of Morris’s body, the unexplained marks etched into his sternum, the reports stamped classified by people who didn't exist on the official roster."
88.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1048
adjectiveStacks2
stackExamples
0"cold, rain-heavy air."
1"faded, decades-old Underground"
adverbCount17
adverbRatio0.016221374045801526
lyAdverbCount7
lyAdverbRatio0.006679389312977099
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences82
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences82
mean14.7
std7.01
cv0.477
sampleLengths
014
118
212
321
418
56
619
710
814
97
105
1128
123
1311
1421
1513
1612
176
1816
1915
2021
218
2219
2322
246
2511
2616
273
2819
2919
3022
3121
3217
3311
3425
3522
368
379
388
3917
4021
4111
428
4318
449
4529
4626
4714
4817
499
75.20% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats5
diversityRatio0.4878048780487805
totalSentences82
uniqueOpeners40
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences70
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount16
totalSentences70
matches
0"Her trench coat hung heavy"
1"He clutched a reinforced aluminum"
2"His olive skin shone beneath"
3"Her boots gripped the greasy"
4"She cleared the alley corner"
5"He rounded another corner, his"
6"He plunged through a gap"
7"It wasn't the smell of"
8"Her thumb flicked the switch"
9"She clicked off the radio,"
10"She adjusted the strap of"
11"They stood unnaturally still, their"
12"He lifted his left hand,"
13"It was impossible."
14"Her mind raced through the"
15"She looked at the dead"
ratio0.229
17.14% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount62
totalSentences70
matches
0"Sheets of rain slammed into"
1"Rainwater churned along the curbs,"
2"Detective Harlow Quinn matched her"
3"Her trench coat hung heavy"
4"Water dripped from the brim"
5"Midnight had passed ten minutes"
6"He clutched a reinforced aluminum"
7"His olive skin shone beneath"
8"Tomás glanced over his shoulder."
9"The silver Saint Christopher medallion"
10"Quinn surged forward."
11"Her boots gripped the greasy"
12"She cleared the alley corner"
13"The alley narrowed to a"
14"Tomás knocked over a stack"
15"Quinn vaulted the debris without"
16"Tomás's voice echoed off the"
17"He rounded another corner, his"
18"Quinn pushed harder, her lungs"
19"Tomás didn't answer."
ratio0.886
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences70
matches(empty)
ratio0
23.81% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences48
technicalSentenceCount8
matches
0"The radio spit a harsh burst of white noise, followed by an unnatural, low vibration that vibrated through the casing itself."
1"The drumming of the rain faded into a dull, rhythmic thrum against the street above, replaced by a low, humming resonance that throbbed through the soles of her…"
2"The walls here bore no graffiti; instead, faint grooves scored the Victorian tile, forming intricate, geometric patterns that caught her flashlight beam with an…"
3"Tomás stood fifty feet ahead, near a heavy iron gate that blocked access to the lower platforms."
4"Lanterns burned with emerald and violet flames, illuminating rows of draped stalls that lined the tracks."
5"Glass display cases gleamed with vials of luminescent fluid, dried botanical roots, and metal instruments that belonged to no medical catalogue Quinn had ever s…"
6"Her mind raced through the files locked in the cold-case cabinet back at the station—the photographs of Morris’s body, the unexplained marks etched into his ste…"
7"The same ozone tang that filled this subterranean chamber had clung to Morris's overcoat the night they found him in the docks."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags4
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
87.50% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags1
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"Tomás spoke quietly (speak)"
dialogueSentences16
tagDensity0.063
leniency0.125
rawRatio1
effectiveRatio0.125
78.3894%