Run: 2026-09-03-01M1KRKQHZ4V31752DHQBKH0NH

Run Details

Duration:
18.5s
Cost:
$0.012181
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The third deadbolt gave way with a sharp iron click. Aurora Carter pulled the heavy timber inward, the smell of toasted cumin and turmeric from the curry house downstairs drifting up through the narrow stairwell. Lucien Moreau stood on the landing. Rain gleamed on the shoulders of his charcoal wool coat, beads of water catching the yellow glare of the bare hallway bulb. His platinum hair remained brushed straight back from his forehead, untouched by the East London squall outside. He rested both gloved hands on the curved head of his ivory cane, leaning his weight forward with the deliberate poise of a man stepping into a room he already owned. "You took three locks to answer." Aurora gripped the edge of the door, knuckles whitening against the grain. Her bright blue eyes flicked over the tailored cut of his lapels, down to the leather of his oxfords, then back up to his face. One eye shone pale amber in the dim light; the other remained bottomless, pitch-black demon ink drowning the iris. "Eva likes her privacy. So do I." "Yet here I am." "Turn around, Lucien." He tapped the ferrule of his cane against the warped floorboards. "The landing smells of burnt coriander and wet damp. Let me across the threshold before the neighbours assume I am here to collect on a debt." "Aren't you?" "That depends entirely on what you consider owed." Aurora stepped back, not out of deference, but to keep clear of his reach. The space inside the flat was suffocatingly small. Stacks of leather-bound folios, unrolled parchment maps, and cracked reference books crowded every horizontal surface. Ptolemy, Eva’s battered grey tabby, lifted his head from a nest of tax records on the radiator, slitted his green eyes at the intruder, and tucked his chin back down. Lucien crossed the threshold with measured steps, the faint scent of cedarwood, cold rain, and brimstone trailing in his wake. He glanced at the waist-high piles of academic clutter, his mouth twisting in dry amusement. "Charming. Has Eva discovered a cure for her hoarding yet, or has she simply expanded into historical cartography?" "She's in Oxford until Friday." Aurora shut the door. She shoved home all three deadbolts, the heavy snaps loud in the quiet room. When she turned, Lucien had already peeled off his leather gloves, tucking them neatly into a coat pocket. "I know where Eva is, Rory." "Then you know she isn't here to mediate." "I did not come to speak with Eva." He rested the cane against the edge of a mahogany sideboard and turned to face her fully. The amber eye caught the amber glow of the desk lamp, throwing sharp, high-boned shadows across his cheeks. He stood five inches taller than her, broad-shouldered enough to make the cramped parlour shrink until there was no neutral ground left. Aurora crossed her arms over her chest, fingers curling over the crescent scar on her left wrist. "Three months." "Eighty-four days." "You counted?" "I keep meticulous ledgers. You know this." "You disappeared after the docks in Wapping. Left the cellar in ruins, left two dead blood-traders for the Metropolitan Police to puzzle over, and went back to Mayfair like none of it happened." Lucien unbuttoned his overcoat, revealing the immaculate waistcoat beneath. He showed no haste, moving with the maddening economy of motion that used to drive her wild in the quiet hours before dawn. "I eliminated the individuals who tracked you from Cardiff. That was the bargain." "The bargain was that we handled it together." "You were bleeding through your shirt." Aurora took a step toward him, the distance between them shrinking to arm's length. "It was a graze. I can take a hit, Lucien. I'm not a porcelain vase you store in an antique cabinet between jobs." "You were five minutes from losing consciousness on a warehouse floor." The French cadence in his voice thickened, the cool broker's veneer cracking just enough to let the raw iron beneath show through. "I carried you to Silas's back room. I stayed until the surgeon closed the tear in your side. Then I settled the ledger with the men who put the blade there." "And then you vanished." "Because if I stayed, you would have looked at me the way you are looking at me right now." Aurora held his mismatched gaze, refusing to give ground. "How am I looking at you?" "Like I am a demon who took something that did not belong to him." "You took my choice." "I saved your life." "Those aren't the same thing." Silence fell over the room, thick with the ticking of a grandfather clock tucked behind a wall of encyclopaedias. Rain lashed the small windowpane overlooking Brick Lane. Down below, the rumble of a delivery truck rattled the loose glass in its frame. Lucien reached out, his bare hand hesitating an inch from her shoulder. The heat coming off his skin was unnatural, a steady, furnace-warm radiation that belonged to the realm of Avaros rather than the sodden streets of London. Aurora did not flinch, but her breath hitched in her throat. "Don't." His fingers dropped, but he did not step back. "You left your flat above Silas's place. You stopped answering the courier notes. You even changed your shift at the restaurant." "Yu-Fei gave me morning runs. Harder for Mayfair fixers to intercept." "Not hard enough." "Why are you here, Lucien?" He stared down at her, the dark eye drinking in every line of her face, the straight black hair falling across her collarbones, the defensive square of her shoulders. The arrogance drained out of his posture, leaving behind an exhaustion he only ever let her see. "A contract surfaced in the lower wards this morning." Aurora’s eyes narrowed. "Evan?" "No. Your ex-lover lacks the resources or the imagination to hire from the Seventh Circle. This is different. Someone bought the registry on every unregistered psychic and hedge-mage living within the M25. Your name is on the second page." "Under what alias?" "Malphora." A cold spike hit her chest. "Nobody knows that name except you, me, and Eva." "Precisely." Lucien reached into his inner pocket and produced a folded piece of thick vellum, sealed with dark wax that bore no house crest. He held it between two fingers, offering it to her across the narrow space between their chests. Aurora did not take it immediately. Her gaze tracked the line of his jaw, the faint shadow of stubble breaking through the pale perfection of his skin—a rare lapse in his grooming that spoke volumes more than the document in his hand. "You could have sent a courier with this." "The courier would not have ensured you packed a bag." "I am not running." "I am not asking you to run." Lucien closed the remaining distance, his chest brushing the fabric of her worn wool jumper. He set the paper on the corner of the crowded table behind her, his hand lingering on the dark wood near her hip. The heat from his body wrapped around her, cutting through the chill that had settled in the flat. "I am asking you to come back to the house on Curzon Street." "So you can lock me in another drawing room while you burn down half of Whitechapel?" "So I do not have to spend eighty-four more days wondering if someone put a bullet through your door before I could reach it." Her pulse hammered against the side of her neck, right where his eyes drifted. The air between them tasted of ozone, sharp and electric. "You don't get to care, Moreau. You made your terms clear when you walked out of Silas's basement." "I lied." The word dropped between them, blunt and unvarnished. Aurora searched his amber eye, then the pitch-black void of the other. The half-demon broker, the man who traded in blood-tithes and royal secrets across four languages without blinking, looked entirely stripped of his leverage. "Say that again." Lucien leaned down until his mouth hovered an inch from the curve of her jaw, his breath warming her cold skin. "I lied to you. I lied to Silas. I told myself it was strategy." His hand lifted, the back of his fingers grazing the soft skin beneath her ear, tracing down to the crescent mark on her wrist where her pulse leaped wildly under his touch. "It was cowardice."
created_at"2026-09-03T13:51:23.719Z" 9/3/2026, 1:51:23 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags0
96.43% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1402
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"precisely"
count1
highlights
0"precisely"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
64.34% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1402
totalAiIsms10
found
0
word"weight"
count1
1
word"flicked"
count1
2
word"measured"
count1
3
word"porcelain"
count1
4
word"silence"
count1
5
word"chill"
count1
6
word"pulse"
count2
7
word"electric"
count1
8
word"tracing"
count1
highlights
0"weight"
1"flicked"
2"measured"
3"porcelain"
4"silence"
5"chill"
6"pulse"
7"electric"
8"tracing"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
highlights
0"eyes narrowed"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences53
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences53
filterMatches
0"see"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences107
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen40
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1401
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions9
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
87.50% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions29
wordCount880
uniqueNames11
maxNameDensity1.25
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Carter1
Moreau1
East1
London2
Eva1
Lucien8
French1
Brick1
Lane1
Avaros1
Aurora11
persons
0"Carter"
1"Moreau"
2"Eva"
3"Lucien"
4"Aurora"
places
0"East"
1"London"
2"Brick"
3"Lane"
globalScore0.875
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences51
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
57.24% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches2
per1kWords1.428
wordCount1401
matches
0"not out of deference, but to keep clear of his reach"
1"not flinch, but her breath hitched in her throat"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences107
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs83
mean16.88
std16.64
cv0.986
sampleLengths
010
125
276
36
456
57
64
73
811
926
102
118
1267
1335
1418
155
1636
176
188
198
2057
2117
222
232
242
257
2633
2732
2813
298
306
3114
3223
3311
3422
3531
364
3719
389
396
4014
414
424
435
4442
4538
4611
471
489
4921
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences53
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs126
matches(empty)
89.45% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount1
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences2
totalSentences107
ratio0.019
matches
0"One eye shone pale amber in the dim light; the other remained bottomless, pitch-black demon ink drowning the iris."
1"Her gaze tracked the line of his jaw, the faint shadow of stubble breaking through the pale perfection of his skin—a rare lapse in his grooming that spoke volumes more than the document in his hand."
82.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount890
adjectiveStacks3
stackExamples
0"bottomless, pitch-black demon"
1"sharp, high-boned shadows"
2"steady, furnace-warm radiation"
adverbCount19
adverbRatio0.021348314606741574
lyAdverbCount7
lyAdverbRatio0.007865168539325843
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences107
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences107
mean13.09
std8.86
cv0.677
sampleLengths
010
125
26
322
417
531
66
712
825
919
107
114
123
1311
1426
152
168
1714
188
1915
2030
2120
2215
2318
245
254
2614
2718
286
298
308
3117
3218
3322
3417
352
362
372
387
3933
409
4123
4213
438
446
4514
4623
4711
4822
4931
66.67% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats2
diversityRatio0.411214953271028
totalSentences107
uniqueOpeners44
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences53
matches(empty)
ratio0
99.25% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount16
totalSentences53
matches
0"His platinum hair remained brushed"
1"He rested both gloved hands"
2"Her bright blue eyes flicked"
3"He tapped the ferrule of"
4"He glanced at the waist-high"
5"She shoved home all three"
6"He rested the cane against"
7"He stood five inches taller"
8"He showed no haste, moving"
9"His fingers dropped, but he"
10"He stared down at her,"
11"He held it between two"
12"Her gaze tracked the line"
13"He set the paper on"
14"Her pulse hammered against the"
15"His hand lifted, the back"
ratio0.302
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount50
totalSentences53
matches
0"The third deadbolt gave way"
1"Aurora Carter pulled the heavy"
2"Lucien Moreau stood on the"
3"Rain gleamed on the shoulders"
4"His platinum hair remained brushed"
5"He rested both gloved hands"
6"Aurora gripped the edge of"
7"Her bright blue eyes flicked"
8"He tapped the ferrule of"
9"Aurora stepped back, not out"
10"The space inside the flat"
11"Stacks of leather-bound folios, unrolled"
12"Ptolemy, Eva’s battered grey tabby,"
13"Lucien crossed the threshold with"
14"He glanced at the waist-high"
15"Aurora shut the door."
16"She shoved home all three"
17"He rested the cane against"
18"The amber eye caught the"
19"He stood five inches taller"
ratio0.943
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences53
matches(empty)
ratio0
74.83% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences42
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"He showed no haste, moving with the maddening economy of motion that used to drive her wild in the quiet hours before dawn."
1"The heat coming off his skin was unnatural, a steady, furnace-warm radiation that belonged to the realm of Avaros rather than the sodden streets of London."
2"The half-demon broker, the man who traded in blood-tithes and royal secrets across four languages without blinking, looked entirely stripped of his leverage."
3"His hand lifted, the back of his fingers grazing the soft skin beneath her ear, tracing down to the crescent mark on her wrist where her pulse leaped wildly und…"
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags0
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
83.9237%