Run: 2026-09-03-01M1KRNF0QFNCQ3AF1GDVJSH3X

Run Details

Duration:
19.1s
Cost:
$0.013779
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rain washed the soot-slicked glass of the front window, refracting the buzzing green neon sign into ribbons of jade across the floorboards. Behind the bar, Silas Blackwood ran a dry linen cloth over the rim of a tumbler. The silver signet ring on his right hand clicked against the crystal, rhythmic and steady. His left leg dragged with a faint scrape against the duckboards as he shifted his weight. Rory sat on the stool at the corner post, her fingers tracing the crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist. Grease from the Golden Empress kitchen still clung to the collar of her canvas jacket, sharp with star anise and fried sesame. She watched the amber pool of whiskey in her glass catch the light of an old map of the Baltic pinned behind the bottles. The street door swung inward. Brass hinges creaked against the draft, dragging in cold Soho air and the reek of wet bitumen. A man stood on the mat, shaking out a black umbrella. Water beaded across the shoulders of a tailored charcoal overcoat. He had the clean-shaven jaw of someone who spent his mornings in front of steam-free mirrors, his damp chestnut hair parted with mechanical precision. He glanced at the faded photographs lining the walls, wrinkled his nose, and took two steps toward the bar before his gaze snagged on Rory's profile. His hands froze on the umbrella’s curved handle. "Rory?" Rory did not jump. She let her gaze linger on the Baltic coast for one second more before turning her head. The bright blue in her eyes cut through the amber murk of the room. "Julian." He stared, his mouth half-open, eyes darting from her straight, shoulder-length black hair down to the scuffed boots hooked on the brass footrail. "It really is you." He stepped forward, his leather soles squeaking against the varnished pine. "God. How long has it been? Four years?" "Five." Rory leaned back, her palms flat against the zinc counter. "Since the Michaelmas term in Cardiff." Julian pulled out the stool beside her, hesitating for a fraction of a second before lowering his coat onto the leather cushion. He looked at Silas, who set the dry tumbler down with a firm thud. "Whiskey," Julian told the older man. "Whatever is decent." Silas reached for a square-shouldered bottle on the middle shelf, his hazel eyes drifting over Julian’s crisp collar before settling back on Rory. He poured two fingers, left the bottle on the back counter, and limped toward the far end of the bar where an inventory ledger lay open under a shaded lamp. Julian picked up his glass, turned it in his palm, and studied the oil sheen on the liquor. "Your father told everyone you took a position in Bristol. Then he stopped talking about it altogether." "Brendan always preferred a tidy lie to an untidy truth." "He looked ten years older the last time I saw him at the Law Society dinner." Julian took a sip, grimacing as the peat caught his throat. "You didn't leave a forwarding address. Not with the faculty. Not with Carys. Not with me." "I left what I needed to leave." "You threw away a first-class degree." Julian set the glass down with too much force, the liquid sloshing against the rim. "You were two terms away from finishing. You had the pupillage at Park Square lined up. Master of the Rolls prize." "Paper prizes." Rory turned her glass in a slow circle, watching the ice scrape against the bottom. "You took the pupillage, I assume." "Junior tenant now. Commercial litigation." He straightened his spine, pulling the lapels of his coat flush against his chest. "Eighteen-hour days. Briefs stacked to the ceiling. But it builds something. It leads somewhere." "Congratulations." The word fell between them like a lead sinker dropped into deep water. Julian flinched, the skin around his eyes tightening. "You used to tear through tort outlines until three in the morning. You had that notebook filled with cross-examination strategies for cases that hadn't even gone to trial yet. We sat on the steps outside the library in the snow, freezing our hands off, arguing about duty of care." He leaned closer, his voice dropping to a harsh whisper that barely carried past the beer taps. "Who is this, Rory? What is this?" Rory met his stare without blinking. "This is what happened after." "Because of Evan?" The name hung in the air, sour and sharp. Down the counter, Silas turned a page in his ledger. The dry paper rustled. Rory did not pull her hand away from the counter, but the tendons in her wrist stood out taut beneath the pale skin, framing the white crescent scar. "Don't speak about things you watched through a window, Julian." "I offered to help." The defense came too fast, rehearsed over years of quiet shame. "I came to the flat in Cathays. I saw the broken crockery in the hallway. I told you to go to the police. I offered you my spare room." "You offered me a lecture on evidence." Rory’s voice remained level, stripped of heat. "You told me to document the bruises so we would have leverage for an injunction. You looked at a fire and tried to draft a contract with the smoke." Julian looked away, his eyes scanning the yellowed Admiralty charts on the wall behind the taps. The flush in his cheeks deepened to a dull, bruised crimson. "I was twenty-one. I only knew how to use the tools I had." "I know." "You vanished three days later." He traced a wet ring on the zinc counter with his index finger. "I went back to the flat. The landlord was hauling your books out to the skip. Boxes of statutes. Your mother’s Welsh poetry anthologies. All of it dumped in the rain." "Things burn or they drown," Rory said, lifting her glass to take a slow drink. "You learn not to carry what you can't run with." Julian turned back to face her, his gaze wandering over the thin fabric of her jacket, the faint yellow stain of curry oil near the hem, the absolute stillness in her posture. "You were brilliant, Rory. The sharpest mind in our year. You could have run circles around every silk in the Temple." "I run takeout containers across Soho on a moped." Julian winced as if struck. "Is that supposed to punish him? Or your father? Because Brendan doesn't see this. Evan isn't here to watch you waste yourself." Rory set her glass down. The ice settled with a faint clink. "You think this is penance." A faint, dry curve touched the corner of her mouth. "You think I sit here wishing I were wearing horsehair and arguing about shipping manifests in Court Four." "Aren't you?" "I sleep through the night, Julian." She leaned in, her voice dropping into a register that made him pull back by an inch. "Nobody checks my receipts. Nobody stands in the doorway deciding whether I'm allowed to leave the room. I don't answer to a senior partner, and I don't answer to a Carter." "It's a small life." "It's mine." Silas closed the ledger with a solid snap that echoed through the quiet bar. He picked up a fresh bar towel, limped down the duckboards, and stopped across from Julian. "Last orders in ten minutes, sir," Silas said, his hazel eyes flat, devoid of hospitality. "Will you be needing another?" Julian looked at the half-empty tumbler in his hand, then at the older man's massive frame and the quiet menace in the tilt of his shoulders. "No," Julian said. "No, I'm fine." He reached inside his coat, pulled out a crisp ten-pound note, and laid it on the counter. Silas picked it up, smoothed it flat with his thumb, and did not offer change. Julian stood. The stool creaked as the weight lifted from it. He picked up his umbrella, resting the ferrule against the floor. "I'm getting married in June," he said to the space between them. "Carys." Rory looked at him, her blue eyes clear and impossible to read. "She always had more patience than I did. Tell her I hope she keeps it." Julian lingered for a heartbeat, his hand tightening around the umbrella handle until his knuckles shone white under the dim lights. The unspoken words—the years of missed turns, the cowardice of a twenty-one-year-old who watched an atrocity and reached for a textbook—hung between them, heavy and inert. "Goodbye, Rory." "Goodbye, Julian." He turned and walked toward the entrance. The green neon washed over him as he pushed the door open, cutting through the draft before the latch clicked shut behind him. Silas took Julian’s unfinished glass, poured the remaining whiskey down the brass drain, and rinsed the crystal under the tap. "Old friend?" Silas asked, keeping his back turned. Rory picked up her glass and swallowed the last drop of amber liquor. "Someone who knew a girl who died five years ago." She set the empty tumbler on the zinc and stared out into the rain.
created_at"2026-09-03T13:52:20.513Z" 9/3/2026, 1:52:20 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags18
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"Rory leaned back [back]"
1"The defense came too [too]"
dialogueSentences56
tagDensity0.321
leniency0.643
rawRatio0.111
effectiveRatio0.071
96.71% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1519
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"really"
count1
highlights
0"really"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
57.21% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1519
totalAiIsms13
found
0
word"crystal"
count2
1
word"rhythmic"
count1
2
word"weight"
count2
3
word"tracing"
count1
4
word"mechanical"
count1
5
word"whisper"
count1
6
word"scanning"
count1
7
word"traced"
count1
8
word"silk"
count1
9
word"echoed"
count1
10
word"unspoken"
count1
highlights
0"crystal"
1"rhythmic"
2"weight"
3"tracing"
4"mechanical"
5"whisper"
6"scanning"
7"traced"
8"silk"
9"echoed"
10"unspoken"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"hung in the air"
count1
highlights
0"hung in the air"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences70
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences70
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences108
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen67
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1517
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions13
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
50.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions45
wordCount990
uniqueNames9
maxNameDensity1.62
worstName"Julian"
maxWindowNameDensity3.5
worstWindowName"Julian"
discoveredNames
Silas9
Blackwood1
Golden1
Empress1
Baltic2
Soho1
Rory13
Julian16
Admiralty1
persons
0"Silas"
1"Blackwood"
2"Rory"
3"Julian"
4"Admiralty"
places
0"Golden"
1"Baltic"
2"Soho"
globalScore0.692
windowScore0.5
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences62
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1517
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences108
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs67
mean22.64
std18.24
cv0.805
sampleLengths
069
165
222
371
48
51
635
71
823
923
1017
1136
129
1353
1418
1517
1610
1743
187
1942
2023
2133
221
2321
2473
256
265
273
2823
2928
3010
3144
3243
3327
3413
352
3649
3725
3832
3921
409
415
4222
4312
4433
452
4654
474
482
4930
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences70
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs158
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount2
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences1
totalSentences108
ratio0.009
matches
0"The unspoken words—the years of missed turns, the cowardice of a twenty-one-year-old who watched an atrocity and reached for a textbook—hung between them, heavy and inert."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1004
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount17
adverbRatio0.01693227091633466
lyAdverbCount1
lyAdverbRatio0.00099601593625498
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences108
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences108
mean14.05
std9.54
cv0.679
sampleLengths
022
116
215
316
419
522
624
75
817
911
1010
1124
1226
138
141
154
1617
1714
181
1923
2015
218
2211
236
2422
2514
266
273
2823
2930
3018
3117
3210
3327
3416
357
3621
3721
3817
396
4019
4114
421
4313
448
4566
467
476
485
493
57.10% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats10
diversityRatio0.39814814814814814
totalSentences108
uniqueOpeners43
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences68
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount20
totalSentences68
matches
0"His left leg dragged with"
1"She watched the amber pool"
2"He had the clean-shaven jaw"
3"He glanced at the faded"
4"His hands froze on the"
5"She let her gaze linger"
6"He stared, his mouth half-open,"
7"He stepped forward, his leather"
8"He looked at Silas, who"
9"He poured two fingers, left"
10"He straightened his spine, pulling"
11"He leaned closer, his voice"
12"He traced a wet ring"
13"She leaned in, her voice"
14"He picked up a fresh"
15"He reached inside his coat,"
16"He picked up his umbrella,"
17"he said to the space"
18"He turned and walked toward"
19"She set the empty tumbler"
ratio0.294
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount65
totalSentences68
matches
0"The silver signet ring on"
1"His left leg dragged with"
2"Rory sat on the stool"
3"Grease from the Golden Empress"
4"She watched the amber pool"
5"The street door swung inward."
6"Brass hinges creaked against the"
7"A man stood on the"
8"Water beaded across the shoulders"
9"He had the clean-shaven jaw"
10"He glanced at the faded"
11"His hands froze on the"
12"Rory did not jump."
13"She let her gaze linger"
14"The bright blue in her"
15"He stared, his mouth half-open,"
16"He stepped forward, his leather"
17"Rory leaned back, her palms"
18"Julian pulled out the stool"
19"He looked at Silas, who"
ratio0.956
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences68
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences39
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"He had the clean-shaven jaw of someone who spent his mornings in front of steam-free mirrors, his damp chestnut hair parted with mechanical precision."
1"The unspoken words—the years of missed turns, the cowardice of a twenty-one-year-old who watched an atrocity and reached for a textbook—hung between them, heavy…"
41.67% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags18
uselessAdditionCount3
matches
0"He stepped, his leather soles squeaking against the varnished pine"
1"Rory leaned back, her palms flat against the zinc counter"
2"Julian set, the liquid sloshing against the rim"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags6
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences56
tagDensity0.107
leniency0.214
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
83.4227%