Run: 2026-09-03-01M1KRNG1GXXXA9EH48T79NBK2

Run Details

Duration:
22.1s
Cost:
$0.012332
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rain washed the Soho pavement in greasy streaks of yellow and charcoal, catching the emerald hum of the neon sign hanging above the door. Inside The Raven’s Nest, the smell of damp wool mingled with old floor polish and stale ale. Silas Blackwood limped along the duckboards behind the counter. His left knee caught with a dull click on every third stride, an old habit of friction he ignored while drying a heavy tumbler with a linen cloth. The silver signet ring on his right hand clinked against the crystal. Rory sat on the end stool, her delivery jacket draped over the brass rail beneath the counter. Her knuckles bore the fresh red sting of cold rain, earned from hauling cartons of Golden Empress duck across Charing Cross Road. She rubbed her thumb over the small crescent scar on her left wrist, staring into a half-pint of dark bitter that sat untouched between her elbows. The street door swung inward with a rattle of brass hardware. A gust of wet air cut through the radiator heat, smelling of petrol and exhaust. A man stepped onto the mat, shaking a black umbrella until droplets peppered the baseboards. He wore a tailored charcoal overcoat cut close through the shoulders, Italian leather brogues gleaming without a speck of mud, and a leather folio tucked beneath his arm. He raised his head, blinking against the amber gloom of the pub, scanning the yellowed nautical maps pinned to the mahogany paneling. His gaze snagged on the corner stool. The umbrella slipped two inches toward the floorboards. "Aurora?" Rory did not flinch, but her spine locked against the leather backrest. That voice belonged to drafty lecture halls in Cathays Park, to rain drumming on leaded library windows while tea went cold in paper cups. Julian Powell stood in the entryway. The soft-edged boy who used to spill ink across his torts notes had vanished beneath sharp jawlines, a salon fade, and the hard, sculpted polish of a junior barrister with billable hours to burn. "Julian." He moved toward the bar, his stride purposeful, though his eyes darted over her oversized jumper, the straight-cut black hair brushing her collarbones, the raw skin of her knuckles. He stopped two stools away, leaving an empty gap between them like a buffer zone. "Someone said you were in Bristol. Then someone else swore you’d gone to Edinburgh." "People talk to fill the silence." "Your father stopped answering calls about it two years ago." Rory picked up her glass, took a measured sip, and set it down in the exact ring of moisture it had left on the dark wood. "Brendan always knew when a brief was dead." Julian pulled out the stool beside her, thought better of it, and took the one two feet away. He laid his leather folio on the sticky varnish, then caught himself and lifted it back to his lap. Silas appeared at the draught taps, towering and unhurried. He set a fresh coaster down in front of Julian with a heavy, deliberate tap of his fingers. "Whisky," Julian murmured without looking up at the older man. "Whatever’s dry." Silas didn't nod. He reached for a bottle on the top shelf, poured two fingers into a lowball glass, and left the bottle on the back counter before retreating down the bar toward the till, his limp dragging slightly against the slats. Julian picked up his glass, turned it once, and watched the amber liquor catch the light from the back bar. "You look different," he offered. "You look like a brochure for the Cardiff Bar mess." A faint, bitter smile tugged at the corner of his mouth, the first crack in his tailored veneer. "I took the pupillage at Crown Chambers. Tenancy came through in October." "I know. I read the legal notices in the back of the papers sometimes." "You could have had the same seat. You had the highest marks in our year before—" "Julian." The single word fell like an iron bar between them. Julian tightened his grip on his glass until his knuckles turned pale. "We looked for you," he pressed, his voice dropping an octave, losing its crisp courtroom resonance. "Eva wouldn't say a word. Closed ranks like an iron door. And Evan—" "Don't say his name in here." Julian looked up, startled by the flat chill in her bright blue eyes. He searched her face for the girl who used to draft mock trial arguments on greasy napkins at three in the morning, the girl who could dismantle an opponent’s statutory interpretation with a grin. That girl was nowhere in the room. In her place sat someone pared down to bone and wire, stripped of excess weight, watching the room’s exits with the casual vigilance of an alley cat. "He wrecked everything, didn't he?" Julian’s voice cracked slightly, the polished London veneer giving way to the gravelly lilt of South Wales. "He took you out of the world and smashed the pieces." "I left," Rory stated. "The smashing happened before that." "You vanished. One day your flat in Roath was empty, the lease broken, your books left on the curb in cardboard boxes. I went by. The landlord had thrown your jurisprudence notes into the recycling bin behind the butcher shop. I fished them out. I kept them in my desk for six months thinking you'd ring." Rory’s thumb traced the edge of the coaster beneath her pint. "You should have left them for the bin men." "Why didn't you call me?" The silence between them stretched, filled only by the hum of the beer cooler and the distant rumble of the Northern line vibrating up through the floorboards. Silas stood twenty feet away, slowly wiping down an espresso machine, his hazel eyes drifting past them toward the rainy street. "What would you have done, Julian?" Rory turned her head, fixing him with a stare so steady it made him pull his shoulders back. "Drafted an injunction? Quoted the Law of Property Act at him? You lived in a world where problems had indexes and appendices. My life didn't have an index." Julian stared down into his whisky. "I loved you." The admission was old, stale bread, dried out by years of neglected shelf life. It carried no heat, only the dull ache of a debt long past the statute of limitations. "You loved the version of me that was going to make partner by thirty," Rory answered quietly. "She didn't survive the winter." "And this? This is what you do now?" He gestured vaguely at her rain-soaked jacket, at the dim room lined with fading maps of lost frontiers and black-and-white portraits of dead men. "Hiding in Soho? Living like a ghost?" "I don't hide." "You're invisible, Rory." "Visibility is expensive." Julian took a long swallow of his whisky, grimacing as the heat hit his throat. He reached into his overcoat pocket, withdrew a silver card case, and extracted a heavy, cream-colored business card. The embossed black lettering caught the dim light: *Julian Powell, Barrister-at-Law, 4 King's Bench Walk, Temple.* He slid it across the mahogany counter. It stopped an inch from her scarred wrist. "I’m in London permanently now," he noted, his tone flattening, retreating behind the safety of professional courtesy. "The chambers took space off Fleet Street. If you ever... if you need anything. A reference. An old transcript. Anything." Rory looked at the card. The edges were sharp, the paper stock dense and pure. It smelled of expensive stationery and clean, dry offices where nobody ever bled on the carpet. She didn't touch it. "I have a shift to finish," she remarked. Julian watched her, waiting for a softening that did not come. He drained his glass, set it down with a sharp clink, and stood. He buttoned his charcoal overcoat, adjusting the lapels with two quick tugs. "You were the smartest person I ever met, Aurora." "Intelligence doesn't keep you warm, Julian." He lingered for a second, his umbrella tucked beneath his arm, his fingers hovering over the strap of his leather folio. The bell above the door gave a thin chime as another patron squeezed past him, bringing a fresh draft of wet city grit into the entryway. Julian turned toward the street without another word, pushed through the heavy timber door, and vanished into the Soho downpour. Rory sat motionless. Silas walked down the duckboards, his limp dragging, and stopped in front of her. He picked up Julian’s empty tumbler, his silver signet ring flashing in the amber light. His hazel eyes dropped to the pristine business card resting on the damp wood. He picked up the linen cloth and slowly wiped the counter around the card, leaving the white rectangle sitting alone on a clean island of mahogany.
created_at"2026-09-03T13:52:21.561Z" 9/3/2026, 1:52:21 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
46.15% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags10
adverbTagCount3
adverbTags
0"Julian’s voice cracked slightly [slightly]"
1"Rory answered quietly [quietly]"
2"He gestured vaguely [vaguely]"
dialogueSentences39
tagDensity0.256
leniency0.513
rawRatio0.3
effectiveRatio0.154
86.36% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1466
totalAiIsmAdverbs4
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count2
1
adverb"slowly"
count2
highlights
0"slightly"
1"slowly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
55.66% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1466
totalAiIsms13
found
0
word"crystal"
count1
1
word"gleaming"
count1
2
word"gloom"
count1
3
word"scanning"
count1
4
word"silence"
count2
5
word"measured"
count1
6
word"resonance"
count1
7
word"chill"
count1
8
word"weight"
count1
9
word"lilt"
count1
10
word"traced"
count1
11
word"pristine"
count1
highlights
0"crystal"
1"gleaming"
2"gloom"
3"scanning"
4"silence"
5"measured"
6"resonance"
7"chill"
8"weight"
9"lilt"
10"traced"
11"pristine"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences72
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences72
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences101
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen56
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans1
markdownWords8
totalWords1466
ratio0.005
matches
0"Julian Powell, Barrister-at-Law, 4 King's Bench Walk, Temple."
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions10
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
66.67% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions51
wordCount1125
uniqueNames24
maxNameDensity1.24
worstName"Julian"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Julian"
discoveredNames
Soho2
Raven1
Nest1
Blackwood1
Golden1
Empress1
Charing1
Cross1
Road1
Italian1
Cathays1
Park1
Powell2
Julian14
Silas5
London1
South1
Wales1
Rory9
Northern1
Barrister-at-Law1
King1
Bench1
Walk1
persons
0"Blackwood"
1"Powell"
2"Julian"
3"Silas"
4"Rory"
5"King"
6"Bench"
places
0"Soho"
1"Raven"
2"Charing"
3"Cross"
4"Road"
5"Cathays"
6"Park"
7"London"
8"South"
9"Wales"
globalScore0.878
windowScore0.667
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences64
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.682
wordCount1466
matches
0"not flinch, but her spine locked against the leather backrest"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences101
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs63
mean23.27
std18.96
cv0.815
sampleLengths
041
149
265
326
465
57
68
71
836
940
101
1144
1214
136
1410
1526
168
1737
1827
1912
2042
2120
225
2310
2418
2512
2614
2716
281
2922
3029
316
3281
3333
349
3556
3611
379
385
3948
4052
416
423
4331
4422
4539
463
473
483
4949
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences72
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs173
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences101
ratio0
matches(empty)
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1134
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"heavy, cream-colored business"
adverbCount22
adverbRatio0.019400352733686066
lyAdverbCount9
lyAdverbRatio0.007936507936507936
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences101
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences101
mean14.51
std9.41
cv0.648
sampleLengths
024
117
29
328
412
517
622
726
811
915
1015
1128
1222
137
148
151
1612
1724
186
1934
201
2129
2215
2314
246
2510
2626
278
2818
2919
309
3118
3210
332
343
3539
3620
375
3810
3918
4012
4114
4216
431
4410
4512
4616
4713
486
4913
47.52% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats7
diversityRatio0.32673267326732675
totalSentences101
uniqueOpeners33
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences69
matches(empty)
ratio0
63.48% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount27
totalSentences69
matches
0"His left knee caught with"
1"Her knuckles bore the fresh"
2"She rubbed her thumb over"
3"He wore a tailored charcoal"
4"He raised his head, blinking"
5"His gaze snagged on the"
6"He moved toward the bar,"
7"He stopped two stools away,"
8"He laid his leather folio"
9"He set a fresh coaster"
10"He reached for a bottle"
11"he pressed, his voice dropping"
12"He searched her face for"
13"It carried no heat, only"
14"He gestured vaguely at her"
15"He reached into his overcoat"
16"He slid it across the"
17"It stopped an inch from"
18"he noted, his tone flattening,"
19"It smelled of expensive stationery"
ratio0.391
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount66
totalSentences69
matches
0"Silas Blackwood limped along the"
1"His left knee caught with"
2"The silver signet ring on"
3"Rory sat on the end"
4"Her knuckles bore the fresh"
5"She rubbed her thumb over"
6"The street door swung inward"
7"A gust of wet air"
8"A man stepped onto the"
9"He wore a tailored charcoal"
10"He raised his head, blinking"
11"His gaze snagged on the"
12"The umbrella slipped two inches"
13"Rory did not flinch, but"
14"That voice belonged to drafty"
15"Julian Powell stood in the"
16"The soft-edged boy who used"
17"He moved toward the bar,"
18"He stopped two stools away,"
19"Rory picked up her glass,"
ratio0.957
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences69
matches(empty)
ratio0
99.13% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences49
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"He raised his head, blinking against the amber gloom of the pub, scanning the yellowed nautical maps pinned to the mahogany paneling."
1"The soft-edged boy who used to spill ink across his torts notes had vanished beneath sharp jawlines, a salon fade, and the hard, sculpted polish of a junior bar…"
2"He searched her face for the girl who used to draft mock trial arguments on greasy napkins at three in the morning, the girl who could dismantle an opponent’s s…"
25.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags10
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"he pressed, his voice dropping an octave, losing its crisp courtroom resonance"
1"he noted, his tone flattening, retreating behind the safety of professional courtesy"
47.44% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags5
fancyCount4
fancyTags
0"Julian murmured (murmur)"
1"he pressed (press)"
2"Rory stated (state)"
3"he noted (note)"
dialogueSentences39
tagDensity0.128
leniency0.256
rawRatio0.8
effectiveRatio0.205
77.7135%