| 33.33% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 12 | | adverbTagCount | 2 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "Rory asked softly [softly]" | | 1 | "she said quietly [quietly]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 21 | | tagDensity | 0.571 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.167 | | effectiveRatio | 0.167 | |
| 77.08% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1309 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 6 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "truly" | | 1 | "completely" | | 2 | "softly" | | 3 | "gently" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 4.51% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1309 | | totalAiIsms | 25 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | | | 18 | | | 19 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "silk" | | 1 | "chill" | | 2 | "warmth" | | 3 | "pulsed" | | 4 | "weight" | | 5 | "shattered" | | 6 | "glistening" | | 7 | "fractured" | | 8 | "shimmered" | | 9 | "stark" | | 10 | "reminder" | | 11 | "resonance" | | 12 | "stomach" | | 13 | "rhythmic" | | 14 | "vibrated" | | 15 | "crystal" | | 16 | "velvet" | | 17 | "gleaming" | | 18 | "marble" | | 19 | "pristine" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 64 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 98.21% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 2 | | narrationSentences | 64 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 73 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 39 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1303 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 11 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 90.48% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 36 | | wordCount | 1092 | | uniqueNames | 14 | | maxNameDensity | 1.19 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Richmond | 1 | | London | 1 | | Shade | 1 | | Heartstone | 2 | | Isolde | 5 | | Varga | 1 | | Half-Fae | 1 | | Fae-forged | 1 | | Dymas | 1 | | Hel | 1 | | Rory | 13 | | Earth | 1 | | Fae | 3 | | Nyx | 4 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Shade" | | 1 | "Isolde" | | 2 | "Varga" | | 3 | "Rory" | | 4 | "Earth" | | 5 | "Nyx" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 0.905 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 65.25% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 59 | | glossingSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "felt like tearing through a membrane of" | | 1 | "seemed completely unbothered by the weight of the atmosphere" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1303 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 73 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 87.45% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 28 | | mean | 46.54 | | std | 21.22 | | cv | 0.456 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 54 | | 1 | 31 | | 2 | 38 | | 3 | 75 | | 4 | 23 | | 5 | 48 | | 6 | 49 | | 7 | 57 | | 8 | 60 | | 9 | 33 | | 10 | 98 | | 11 | 51 | | 12 | 67 | | 13 | 22 | | 14 | 65 | | 15 | 8 | | 16 | 62 | | 17 | 58 | | 18 | 43 | | 19 | 14 | | 20 | 27 | | 21 | 83 | | 22 | 32 | | 23 | 62 | | 24 | 17 | | 25 | 54 | | 26 | 44 | | 27 | 28 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 64 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 83.72% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 3 | | totalVerbs | 172 | | matches | | 0 | "was throbbing" | | 1 | "was already cataloging" | | 2 | "weren't weeping" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 6 | | semicolonCount | 2 | | flaggedSentences | 7 | | totalSentences | 73 | | ratio | 0.096 | | matches | | 0 | "The air did not merely change; it broke." | | 1 | "She caught her balance, fingers instinctively flying to the thumb of her left hand to trace the crescent-shaped scar on her wrist—an old anchor for when the world slipped its gears." | | 2 | "Her heart hammered against her ribs, but her mind—sharpened by months of impossible survival—was already cataloging the terrain." | | 3 | "But these were no ordinary fields; gravity seemed to bend around them." | | 4 | "Where they pointed, the space between two broken pillars shimmered with a faint, oily iridescence—the tear through which they had stepped." | | 5 | "The moment she crossed beneath the keystone, a sound reached her ears—a low, rhythmic thrumming that vibrated through the soles of her boots." | | 6 | "The scent was dizzying—fresh bread straight from an oven, spiced honey, and rich, dark chocolate, so vivid Rory felt her mouth water despite her terror." |
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| 88.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1111 | | adjectiveStacks | 2 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "jagged, violet-tinted mountains." | | 1 | "slender, leaf-shaped guard" |
| | adverbCount | 35 | | adverbRatio | 0.0315031503150315 | | lyAdverbCount | 18 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.016201620162016202 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 73 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 73 | | mean | 17.85 | | std | 8.64 | | cv | 0.484 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 8 | | 1 | 23 | | 2 | 23 | | 3 | 31 | | 4 | 9 | | 5 | 18 | | 6 | 11 | | 7 | 32 | | 8 | 18 | | 9 | 25 | | 10 | 9 | | 11 | 14 | | 12 | 8 | | 13 | 22 | | 14 | 18 | | 15 | 15 | | 16 | 7 | | 17 | 24 | | 18 | 3 | | 19 | 10 | | 20 | 12 | | 21 | 35 | | 22 | 22 | | 23 | 10 | | 24 | 28 | | 25 | 15 | | 26 | 18 | | 27 | 14 | | 28 | 15 | | 29 | 12 | | 30 | 23 | | 31 | 34 | | 32 | 16 | | 33 | 21 | | 34 | 14 | | 35 | 20 | | 36 | 20 | | 37 | 4 | | 38 | 23 | | 39 | 22 | | 40 | 21 | | 41 | 8 | | 42 | 36 | | 43 | 8 | | 44 | 23 | | 45 | 39 | | 46 | 33 | | 47 | 10 | | 48 | 3 | | 49 | 12 |
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| 87.67% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 1 | | diversityRatio | 0.5342465753424658 | | totalSentences | 73 | | uniqueOpeners | 39 | |
| 52.08% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 64 | | matches | | 0 | "Everywhere, massive vines thick as" |
| | ratio | 0.016 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 16 | | totalSentences | 64 | | matches | | 0 | "She caught her balance, fingers" | | 1 | "It was barely louder than" | | 2 | "She pressed a palm to" | | 3 | "Her waist-length silver hair drifted" | | 4 | "She tilted her chin toward" | | 5 | "Her heart hammered against her" | | 6 | "They stood on a high" | | 7 | "She stepped toward the stairs" | | 8 | "It was like the purr" | | 9 | "They weren't weeping." | | 10 | "Their stone eyes were wide," | | 11 | "They reached the base of" | | 12 | "Their bark was smooth, like" | | 13 | "Her stomach gave a sharp," | | 14 | "She tightened her grip on" | | 15 | "she said quietly" |
| | ratio | 0.25 | |
| 100.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 44 | | totalSentences | 64 | | matches | | 0 | "The air did not merely" | | 1 | "Rory stumbled on the other" | | 2 | "She caught her balance, fingers" | | 3 | "The damp, diesel-stained chill of" | | 4 | "Rory tilted her head back," | | 5 | "a voice rustled beside her" | | 6 | "It was barely louder than" | | 7 | "Nyx shifted into solidity at" | | 8 | "Rory murmured, her voice sounding" | | 9 | "She pressed a palm to" | | 10 | "The Half-Fae seer seemed completely" | | 11 | "Her waist-length silver hair drifted" | | 12 | "Isolde said, her pale lavender" | | 13 | "She tilted her chin toward" | | 14 | "Rory muttered, though she didn't" | | 15 | "Her heart hammered against her" | | 16 | "They stood on a high" | | 17 | "Waterfalls of clear, glistening wine" | | 18 | "Nyx whispered, their shadowy hand" | | 19 | "Rory reached down to her" |
| | ratio | 0.688 | |
| 78.13% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 64 | | matches | | 0 | "Even through the leather scabbard," |
| | ratio | 0.016 | |
| 0.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 44 | | technicalSentenceCount | 9 | | matches | | 0 | "In its place hung a thick, velvety warmth that smelled of caramelized pears, crushed cloves, and sun-baked earth." | | 1 | "Above them, the sky was a vast dome of liquid amber, glowing with an internal, suffocating radiance as if the sun had melted and smeared across the clouds witho…" | | 2 | "Colossal terraces cascaded down from where they stood, carved from veined, soot-dark stone that drank the honeyed light." | | 3 | "Beneath her woolen jumper, the Heartstone pendant was throbbing violently against her skin, throwing off heat like an ember pulled fresh from a hearth." | | 4 | "Her waist-length silver hair drifted over her shoulders as if submerged in water, defying gravity, and beneath the hem of her pale robes, her bare feet skimmed …" | | 5 | "They stood on a high promenade that jutted out over an impossibly vast basin." | | 6 | "The moment she crossed beneath the keystone, a sound reached her ears—a low, rhythmic thrumming that vibrated through the soles of her boots." | | 7 | "Their bark was smooth, like polished dark walnut, and the leaves were paper-thin sheets of beaten copper that clinked softly in the warm breeze." | | 8 | "Hanging from the branches were heavy, gourd-like fruits that dripped a sweet, amber sap into stone basins embedded along the path." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 12 | | uselessAdditionCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "Rory murmured, her voice sounding oddly muted against the heavy stillness" | | 1 | "Nyx whispered, their shadowy hand drifting near the air behind them" | | 2 | "Isolde replied, her voice chiming with an unsettling, musical resonance" | | 3 | "Nyx murmured, their incorporeal hem trailing over the steps like smoke" | | 4 | "Nyx warned, their voice hardening into a low hiss" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 11 | | fancyCount | 5 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Rory murmured (murmur)" | | 1 | "Rory muttered (mutter)" | | 2 | "Nyx whispered (whisper)" | | 3 | "Nyx murmured (murmur)" | | 4 | "Nyx warned (warn)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 21 | | tagDensity | 0.524 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.455 | | effectiveRatio | 0.455 | |