Run: 2026-09-03-01M1KRQJSTFV9QGHZ5Y6BGWG1P

Run Details

Duration:
14.2s
Cost:
$0.010422
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The third deadbolt slid back with a dull snap of brass against iron. Aurora pulled the door inward, a dishtowel slung over one shoulder, ready to tell the delivery driver downstairs to stop stacking empty oil drums against the rear fire exit. Rain drummed hard against the hallway skylight. Lucien Moreau stood on the landing, water running off the brim of his collar and sheeting down the charcoal wool of his overcoat. "You changed the top lock." His voice carried that low, gravel-edged French cadence that scraped straight against the base of her skull. One amber eye caught the dim yellow bulb above the landing; the other remained pitch black, drinking in the gloom. Aurora gripped the doorframe, her knuckles whitening until the crescent scar on her left wrist pulled taut. "Three weeks ago. Right after I decided against finding your stray operatives bleeding onto my kitchen runner." "An abundance of caution." He stepped forward without an invitation, the steel tip of his ivory-handled cane striking the linoleum in a crisp, measured beat. "Admirable, Carter. Truly." "Out, Lucien." She planted a hand against his chest to shove him back onto the threshold. The tailored wool felt sodden, freezing beneath her palm, but the heat radiating from his chest beneath the cloth burned like an open hearth. That half-Avaros blood ran hot enough to scorch through midwinter chill. Lucien did not yield an inch. Instead, he caught her wrist between leather-gloved fingers. His grip remained feather-light, completely unyielding, thumb resting directly over the erratic jump of her pulse point. "The street below crawls with men who know your face from the docks," he murmured, his gaze dropping to her mouth before snapping back to her bright blue eyes. "Stand in the hall and argue if you prefer an audience." Aurora wrenched her wrist free, took two steps back into the clutter of the flat, and left the door hanging wide. "Wipe your boots." Lucien pulled the heavy door shut behind him. The three locks engaged under his hands in swift, rhythmic succession, each metallic thud sealing the cramped room off from the world below. Steam rose from his shoulders, mingling with the heavy scent of turmeric and roasted cumin filtering up through the floorboards from the curry house beneath the flat. Ptolemy crept out from beneath an armchair buried under towers of cracked codices. The tabby sniffed the polished brass ferrule of Lucien’s cane, sneezed once, and retreated behind an ottoman. "Eva’s taste in interior decoration remains aggressively chaotic." Lucien slid out of his wet overcoat, folded it lining-side out over the back of a wooden dining chair, and turned to take in the room. His platinum blond hair, slicked back against the rain, exposed the sharp angles of his jaw and the high curve of cheekbones that looked chipped out of marble. "And your taste in hideouts remains hopelessly loud." "Eva has actual work to do. Some people translate fourteenth-century warding texts instead of lurking in Mayfair basements trading favors for black market silver." Aurora crossed her arms, leaning against the tiny laminate kitchen counter. "Why are you here?" "London is small." "Not that small. Not small enough that you stumble into a walk-up on Brick Lane past midnight by accident." She tilted her chin up, defying the hollow ache in her ribs that had opened the second he crossed the threshold. "You walked away from the warehouse in Bermondsey. You took your little black ledger, got into your car, and didn't look back once. That was forty-six days ago." "Forty-seven." The correction dropped between them, heavy and sharp as lead. Aurora stiffened. "I don't keep a calendar for men who cut and run when things get messy." "I did not run." Lucien leaned his weight onto his cane, his black eye absorbing the light while the amber one flared with sudden, dangerous warmth. "I removed the primary target from your perimeter. Had I stayed ten minutes longer that night, the Council’s hounds would have tracked the blood straight to your doorstep. You were clean. I intended to keep you that way." "I was never clean, Lucien! You dragged me neck-deep into your feud with the syndicate, used my flat as a safehouse, let me stitch three inches of ripped flesh along your ribs, and then vanished before the sun came up." Her voice stayed low, fierce, vibrating with the Wales lilt she usually managed to iron out. "You left twenty thousand pounds in an unmarked envelope on my bedside table like I was a hired courier." "That money was for a ticket out of the country." "I don't run from my life! I ran from Wales. I ran from Evan. I don't run from you, and I certainly don't take severance pay from a man I—" She clamped her mouth shut. The silence that rushed into the void was thick enough to choke on. Downstairs, a metal pot clanged against a stove. Out on the lane, an engine idled, tires hissing against wet asphalt. Lucien crossed the tiny span of rug between them. He did not use the cane for support now; he carried it like an extension of his arm, silent and lethal. The faint, metallic tang of ozone and old parchment that always followed him filled her lungs, pushing out the smell of curry and damp plaster. "From a man you what, Rory?" He stood less than a foot away. The heat off him felt suffocating in the narrow hallway between the sink and the bookstacks. His amber eye held her locked in place, bright and predatory, stripped of the suave, mocking detachment he sold to the rest of London. "Don't do that," she whispered, her fingers digging into the denim of her jeans. "Don't come into this room and play the ghost who cares. You made your choice. You chose your ledgers. You chose your safety." "Safety?" A dry, bitter laugh tore from his throat. He set the cane against the counter with a sharp rap and leaned in until his breath grazed the skin of her temple. "You think there is safety in Marseille? In the dark where every half-breed broker wants my head on an iron spike? I came back because every time I closed my eyes, I saw you holding that butcher knife in Bermondsey, daring five armed demons to take one more step toward me." Aurora swallowed, her throat parched. "You should have called." "And say what? That I wanted to drag you further into the gutter with me?" He reached out, his bare hand hesitating in the air before the curve of his fingers brushed the side of her neck. His skin was blistering hot against her collarbone. "I tried to leave you alone, Carter. I gave it seven weeks. It was the longest, most pathetic failure of my life." Her heart hammered a frantic, broken rhythm against her ribs. Every instinct honed by bad men and narrow escapes told her to step sideways, to keep the counter between them, to lock the deadbolts and never look back. Instead, Aurora reached up and gripped the front of his slate-gray vest, pulling him down until their lips were a breath apart. "You're an idiot, Moreau." "Undoubtedly." His mouth came down on hers with an intensity that burned through the lingering chill of the storm.
created_at"2026-09-03T13:53:29.925Z" 9/3/2026, 1:53:29 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags10
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences33
tagDensity0.303
leniency0.606
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
91.82% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1222
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"truly"
count1
1
adverb"completely"
count1
highlights
0"truly"
1"completely"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
46.81% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1222
totalAiIsms13
found
0
word"gloom"
count1
1
word"measured"
count1
2
word"chill"
count2
3
word"pulse"
count1
4
word"rhythmic"
count1
5
word"chaotic"
count1
6
word"marble"
count1
7
word"weight"
count1
8
word"warmth"
count1
9
word"lilt"
count1
10
word"silence"
count1
11
word"intensity"
count1
highlights
0"gloom"
1"measured"
2"chill"
3"pulse"
4"rhythmic"
5"chaotic"
6"marble"
7"weight"
8"warmth"
9"lilt"
10"silence"
11"intensity"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences49
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences49
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"managed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences72
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen57
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1222
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions6
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions18
wordCount783
uniqueNames6
maxNameDensity0.89
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Moreau1
French1
Aurora7
Lucien7
Wales1
London1
persons
0"Moreau"
1"Aurora"
2"Lucien"
places
0"Wales"
1"London"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences46
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1222
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences72
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs42
mean29.1
std23.25
cv0.799
sampleLengths
042
130
25
337
417
517
628
72
849
931
1040
1121
123
1358
1430
1570
1639
173
1868
191
2010
212
2215
2364
2475
2510
2630
2718
2820
2955
306
3147
3237
3383
345
354
3667
3738
3822
394
401
4118
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences49
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs119
matches
0"was blistering"
63.49% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount2
flaggedSentences2
totalSentences72
ratio0.028
matches
0"One amber eye caught the dim yellow bulb above the landing; the other remained pitch black, drinking in the gloom."
1"He did not use the cane for support now; he carried it like an extension of his arm, silent and lethal."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount790
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"low, gravel-edged French"
adverbCount20
adverbRatio0.02531645569620253
lyAdverbCount3
lyAdverbRatio0.0037974683544303796
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences72
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences72
mean16.97
std11.73
cv0.691
sampleLengths
013
129
27
323
45
517
620
717
817
925
103
112
1214
1324
1411
156
168
1717
1829
1911
2021
213
228
2323
2427
2513
2617
2734
2828
298
3035
314
323
3340
3428
351
3610
372
3815
3926
4038
4156
4219
4310
4430
455
4613
478
4812
499
70.83% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats4
diversityRatio0.4583333333333333
totalSentences72
uniqueOpeners33
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences48
matches
0"Instead, he caught her wrist"
1"Instead, Aurora reached up and"
ratio0.042
70.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount18
totalSentences48
matches
0"His voice carried that low,"
1"He stepped forward without an"
2"She planted a hand against"
3"His grip remained feather-light, completely"
4"he murmured, his gaze dropping"
5"His platinum blond hair, slicked"
6"She tilted her chin up,"
7"Her voice stayed low, fierce,"
8"She clamped her mouth shut."
9"He did not use the"
10"He stood less than a"
11"His amber eye held her"
12"she whispered, her fingers digging"
13"He set the cane against"
14"He reached out, his bare"
15"His skin was blistering hot"
16"Her heart hammered a frantic,"
17"His mouth came down on"
ratio0.375
1.67% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount44
totalSentences48
matches
0"The third deadbolt slid back"
1"Aurora pulled the door inward,"
2"Rain drummed hard against the"
3"Lucien Moreau stood on the"
4"His voice carried that low,"
5"Aurora gripped the doorframe, her"
6"He stepped forward without an"
7"She planted a hand against"
8"The tailored wool felt sodden,"
9"That half-Avaros blood ran hot"
10"Lucien did not yield an"
11"His grip remained feather-light, completely"
12"he murmured, his gaze dropping"
13"Aurora wrenched her wrist free,"
14"Lucien pulled the heavy door"
15"The three locks engaged under"
16"Steam rose from his shoulders,"
17"Ptolemy crept out from beneath"
18"The tabby sniffed the polished"
19"Lucien slid out of his"
ratio0.917
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences48
matches(empty)
ratio0
91.84% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences28
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"His voice carried that low, gravel-edged French cadence that scraped straight against the base of her skull."
1"Steam rose from his shoulders, mingling with the heavy scent of turmeric and roasted cumin filtering up through the floorboards from the curry house beneath the…"
75.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags10
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"she whispered, her fingers digging into the denim of her jeans"
89.39% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags2
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"he murmured (murmur)"
1"she whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences33
tagDensity0.061
leniency0.121
rawRatio1
effectiveRatio0.121
86.4949%