Run: 2026-09-03-01M1KRQRYZFF8X3H19XD6GR1ST

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Duration:
18.8s
Cost:
$0.003020
Provider:
DeepInfra

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support"> <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor> <hair>short curly dark brown</hair> <height>5'10"</height> <age>29</age> <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone> <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar> <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion> <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace> <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description> <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre. A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
Rain hammered Soho in sheets, turning the pavement into a black mirror. Detective Harlow Quinn kept her coat collar up and her left wrist steady, the worn leather watch catching a brief flare of streetlight as she checked the time. 01:47. Too late for anyone honest to be running. The green neon of The Raven's Nest bled through the rain, washing the wet brick in sickly light. Inside, the maps on the walls and the black-and-white photographs had been familiar for years, but tonight the bar had been a dead end. Two men out the back door, one with a Saint Christopher medallion catching the neon as he turned. She'd gotten a clean look at the medallion, the short curly dark brown hair, the olive skin slick with rain. Tomás Herrera. He shouldn't have been there. The former paramedic with the scar running along his left forearm, the one who'd lost his NHS license for unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients, was not a name she expected to find in her notes on the clique. And yet there he was, slipping out the service alley with a satchel slung across his chest, moving like a man who knew he was being watched. Quinn had been three steps behind when he saw her. He didn't stop to argue. He bolted. She gave him ten metres before she called out. "Tomás Herrera! Metropolitan Police, stop!" He didn't. He cut left onto Wardour Street, shoes finding traction where hers slipped. The rain was a curtain, and he was good at disappearing in it. She kept her distance, military precision telling her not to lose him in the crowd that thinned to nothing after midnight. The chase took them past shuttered restaurants and a kebab shop where a single bulb buzzed. Herrera ducked through an alley between a laundrette and a closed music store, and Quinn followed, jaw set, breath burning cold in her throat. He knew the city. That was the first thing that unsettled her. He wasn't running blind; he was running toward something. The alley spat them out near Chinatown, then on to Oxford Street where the rain was heavier under the overhangs. A bus hissed past, spraying her legs. She saw the flash of the medallion again as he vaulted a low wall into a park, landed hard, and kept going. Her shoes were soaked through. Her watch ticked. She'd lost her partner, DS Morris, three years ago on a case that went sideways in a warehouse off the Thames. Officially a mugging gone wrong. Unofficially, the bruising on his body hadn't matched any human hand, and the file had been closed before she could ask the right questions. Since then she'd been watching the clique with a hawk's eye, convinced the strange deaths, the missing persons, the off-the-books medical care, were all connected. Herrera was a thread. He led her north, away from Soho and toward Camden. The streets changed. More graffiti, more shuttered markets. He crossed Regent's Canal at a narrow footbridge, the water below black and churning. Quinn stayed on his tail, close enough to see the satchel bouncing against his hip. At Camden High Street he slowed, checking over his shoulder. For a heartbeat their eyes met in the reflection of a shop window. Brown eyes, warm even in panic. He didn't recognize her, or pretended not to. Then a side street, a service road, and he was gone down a stairwell that shouldn't have been there. The stairwell was old brick, slick with condensation, descending into darkness beneath an abandoned Tube station. A sign, rusted and half-fallen: CHALK FARM. No lights. Only the sound of dripping water and the echo of Herrera's footsteps ahead. Quinn hesitated at the top of the stairs. This was not a place. This was beneath a place. The air coming up was cold and damp and smelled of iron and old stone. She had no backup, no warrant, and no idea what waited below. Her training said retreat, call it in, secure the perimeter. Her instinct, sharpened by eighteen years of decorated service and the ghost of Morris, said the truth was always down. She heard Herrera's voice, low and urgent, speaking Spanish. Then English. "No, you can't bring it here. Not tonight." A second voice answered, distorted by the stairwell. "It already moved. The bone token is here." Bone token. The words hooked into something she'd read in a seized notebook three months ago, a list of terms she had dismissed as occult nonsense. Veil Market. Bone token. Moves every full moon. Abandoned Tube station beneath Camden. He was going into the market. Quinn drew her phone, thumb hovering over the call button. The screen lit her face in pale blue. No signal down here. She could go back to the surface, get CID, get tactical, do this properly. She could also lose him forever. The satchel. Herrera wasn't carrying stolen goods. He was carrying a patient, or something like one. The way he moved, cradling it against his chest now, the way he kept looking back. She thought of Morris, of the report that said he'd been attacked by a man with no face, of the way the crime scene photos had been redacted. She thought of the clique, and the off-the-books medical care, and the feeling that she was always one step behind a door that kept closing. Quinn slipped her phone back into her pocket and took the first step down. The stairs were narrow and steep. The rain above faded to a distant thrum. As she descended, the darkness thickened until she could see only the faint outline of Herrera ahead, the medallion at his throat glinting whenever a stray sliver of light filtered down from above. Halfway down, a door of reinforced steel stood ajar, propped open with a brick. Beyond it, a cavernous space lit by hanging bulbs strung on wires, illuminating stalls of black iron and glass. Figures moved between them, indistinct in cloaks and hoods. The air was thick with incense and the metallic tang of something burnt. This was not a criminal underworld she knew. This was different. The people here didn't flinch when she entered. They watched. Herrera stopped at a stall where a woman with pale skin examined a vial of dark liquid. He set the satchel down carefully, then reached into his coat and pulled out a small, smooth object. A bone. A token. He pressed it into the woman's hand. She nodded. Quinn's hand went to her holster. Her weapon felt suddenly heavy and useless. These were not street dealers. These were something else, and she was trespassing in a place that had rules she didn't understand. Herrera turned, and finally saw her. He didn't run. He stepped in front of the satchel, shielding it with his body, the scar on his left forearm pale in the low light. "Detective Quinn," he said, voice calm despite the hammering rain she could still hear above. "You shouldn't be here." She stood at the top of the stairwell, half in light, half in shadow, water running down her face and neck. The worn leather watch on her left wrist ticked on. The market breathed around them, alive and watching. She could go back up. She could come down. Her jaw tightened. "Where is he?" Herrera's eyes flicked to the satchel. "Who?" "The man you were with at the Nest. The one you were meeting." He shook his head. "I don't know what you think you saw." She took one step down. Then another. The floor was cold stone under her boots. "You brought a patient here," she said. "You lost your license for treating people the NHS wouldn't touch. You think I don't know what the clique is?" "I think," he said, "you don't want to know." The figures in the market had gone still. The bulbs hissed. Quinn's choice narrowed to the single point where the stairwell met the market floor. Up was safety, procedure, a report that would be buried. Down was the truth, and whatever had taken Morris. She drew her warrant card, the plastic slick with rain. "Bone token," she said. "Entry requirement. You have one. I don't." Herrera looked past her, up the dark stairs, then back at the satchel. The medallion swung against his chest. "You're not ready for what they sell here," he said softly. "Then show me." For a long moment neither moved. The rain drummed above Camden, and below, the Veil Market waited, its doors open just enough to let her in.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
75.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags5
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"he said softly [softly]"
dialogueSentences16
tagDensity0.313
leniency0.625
rawRatio0.2
effectiveRatio0.125
89.53% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1432
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"carefully"
count1
1
adverb"suddenly"
count1
2
adverb"softly"
count1
highlights
0"carefully"
1"suddenly"
2"softly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
75.56% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1432
totalAiIsms7
found
0
word"familiar"
count1
1
word"unsettled"
count1
2
word"churning"
count1
3
word"echo"
count1
4
word"footsteps"
count1
5
word"glinting"
count1
6
word"flicked"
count1
highlights
0"familiar"
1"unsettled"
2"churning"
3"echo"
4"footsteps"
5"glinting"
6"flicked"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"air was thick with"
count1
highlights
0"The air was thick with"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences128
matches
0"n in panic"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount3
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences128
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences139
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen38
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1432
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions9
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions53
wordCount1328
uniqueNames23
maxNameDensity0.83
worstName"Herrera"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Herrera"
discoveredNames
Soho2
Harlow1
Quinn9
Raven1
Nest1
Saint1
Christopher1
Herrera11
Wardour1
Street3
Chinatown1
Oxford1
Morris4
Thames1
Camden4
Regent1
Canal1
High1
Tube2
Spanish1
English1
Market2
Veil2
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Raven"
3"Nest"
4"Saint"
5"Christopher"
6"Herrera"
7"Morris"
8"Regent"
9"Market"
places
0"Soho"
1"Wardour"
2"Street"
3"Chinatown"
4"Oxford"
5"Thames"
6"Camden"
7"High"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences85
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"something like one"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1432
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences139
matches
0"feeling that she"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs49
mean29.22
std22.87
cv0.783
sampleLengths
049
182
270
310
47
514
688
721
857
979
1047
1156
1238
1375
1419
1516
162
1737
186
1942
2032
2153
2214
2347
2455
2521
2639
279
2835
296
3026
3119
3239
339
346
357
3613
3712
3815
3927
409
4111
4233
4310
4411
4519
4611
473
4826
97.04% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount3
totalSentences128
matches
0"been closed"
1"was gone"
2"been attacked"
3"been redacted"
0.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount7
totalVerbs225
matches
0"was being"
1"was running"
2"wasn't running"
3"was going"
4"wasn't carrying"
5"was carrying"
6"was trespassing"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences1
totalSentences139
ratio0.007
matches
0"He wasn't running blind; he was running toward something."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1335
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount32
adverbRatio0.02397003745318352
lyAdverbCount11
lyAdverbRatio0.008239700374531835
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences139
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences139
mean10.3
std7.47
cv0.725
sampleLengths
012
128
21
38
418
524
618
720
82
95
1038
1127
1210
135
142
159
165
172
1812
1913
2021
2116
2224
234
248
259
2620
277
2822
295
303
3121
325
3324
3425
354
3610
373
385
3914
4015
4110
4213
436
448
4519
4616
477
482
4913
41.55% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats16
diversityRatio0.3188405797101449
totalSentences138
uniqueOpeners44
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount6
totalSentences110
matches
0"Too late for anyone honest"
1"Officially a mugging gone wrong."
2"Unofficially, the bruising on his"
3"More graffiti, more shuttered markets."
4"Then a side street, a"
5"Only the sound of dripping"
ratio0.055
78.18% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount39
totalSentences110
matches
0"She'd gotten a clean look"
1"He shouldn't have been there."
2"He didn't stop to argue."
3"She gave him ten metres"
4"He cut left onto Wardour"
5"She kept her distance, military"
6"He knew the city."
7"He wasn't running blind; he"
8"She saw the flash of"
9"Her shoes were soaked through."
10"Her watch ticked."
11"She'd lost her partner, DS"
12"He led her north, away"
13"He crossed Regent's Canal at"
14"He didn't recognize her, or"
15"She had no backup, no"
16"Her training said retreat, call"
17"Her instinct, sharpened by eighteen"
18"She heard Herrera's voice, low"
19"He was going into the"
ratio0.355
50.91% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount90
totalSentences110
matches
0"Detective Harlow Quinn kept her"
1"The green neon of The"
2"She'd gotten a clean look"
3"He shouldn't have been there."
4"The former paramedic with the"
5"Quinn had been three steps"
6"He didn't stop to argue."
7"She gave him ten metres"
8"He cut left onto Wardour"
9"The rain was a curtain,"
10"She kept her distance, military"
11"The chase took them past"
12"Herrera ducked through an alley"
13"He knew the city."
14"That was the first thing"
15"He wasn't running blind; he"
16"The alley spat them out"
17"A bus hissed past, spraying"
18"She saw the flash of"
19"Her shoes were soaked through."
ratio0.818
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences110
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences53
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"She kept her distance, military precision telling her not to lose him in the crowd that thinned to nothing after midnight."
1"She'd lost her partner, DS Morris, three years ago on a case that went sideways in a warehouse off the Thames."
2"She thought of the clique, and the off-the-books medical care, and the feeling that she was always one step behind a door that kept closing."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags5
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags5
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences16
tagDensity0.313
leniency0.625
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
86.9253%