Run: 2026-09-03-01M1KRRHN2QAXCDEB63V1CAEFF

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Duration:
17.1s
Cost:
$0.015870
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Romance genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The third deadbolt clicked back, and the kitchen knife stayed flat against my thigh. "You took three seconds longer than usual, Rory." Lucien Moreau stood framed against the dim hallway, his charcoal wool overcoat pristine, his platinum hair caught under the yellow light of the landing bulb. He leaned slightly on his ivory-handled cane. The scent of turmeric and roasted cumin from the curry house downstairs washed past him, but beneath it lingered the familiar, dry bite of ozone and expensive cedarwood. "I was hoping you were a bailiff," I said. "They leave when you don't answer." "A bailiff lacks my persistence." "And your complete disregard for personal boundaries." "A tedious virtue." He took a single step forward, crossing the threshold without an invitation. Ptolemy hissed from the top of an overflowing bookshelf, his striped tail puffed thick as a bottle brush before the tabby darted behind a stack of Latin treatises on demonology. "Eva is out," I said, barring the narrow corridor with my forearm. "She won't return until tomorrow." "I am aware. Eva does not interest me tonight." "Then you walked up four flights of stairs for nothing." "Did I?" His gaze caught mine. One iris burned bright amber, the other stretched into a pool of pure obsidian, completely swallowing the pupil. That demonic half always unsettled the air around him, raising the fine hairs on the back of my neck. "Three months, Lucien." My grip on the knife handle tightened behind my leg. "Not a note. Not a whisper through Silas. Just vanish into thin air, and now you stroll into Brick Lane like you own the lease." "Business in Marseilles required my undivided attention." "Must have been fascinating business to keep London's best fixer off the board entirely." "It was bloody, tedious, and entirely necessary." He glanced down at the subtle tension in my right shoulder. A faint, knowing smile touched his lips. "Are you going to stab me with that paring knife, or will you offer me a glass of water?" "Depends on how fast you talk." I backed into the main room, keeping my eyes fixed on him. Eva's flat barely accommodated one person, let alone a half-demon with broad shoulders and an aura that sucked the warmth out of the radiator. Every surface groaned under the weight of leather-bound grimoires, hand-drawn star charts, and drying bunches of sage hung from exposed water pipes. Lucien closed the door behind him with the tip of his cane, catching the latch with a sharp, precise click. He turned all three deadbolts with his left hand. The leather of his gloves was butter-soft, dyed the same deep grey as his tailored suit. "You cut your hair," he said. "It got in the way." "A pity. The length suited you." "I don't style my hair for your aesthetic pleasure." "Naturally not. You cut it because you spent two weeks looking over your shoulder after the docks, expecting my enemies to grab you by it." "I cut it because grease from the Golden Empress kitchen sticks to everything," I snapped, tossing the knife onto the laminate dining table with a loud clatter. "Sit down or get out." Lucien did neither. He leaned against the frame of the kitchenette, his posture relaxed, yet every line of his body spoke of tightly coiled tension. The amber eye tracked the small, crescent-shaped scar on my left wrist as I crossed my arms. "You look well, Aurora." "Don't call me that." "A name given by your father. A respectable barrister's daughter from Cardiff should take pride in her heritage." "That girl died in a courtroom hallway three years ago. You know that better than anyone." "Names hold power," he murmured, his voice dropping into that smooth, low register that always made my pulse skitter against my ribs. "Rory sounds like a stray. Aurora commands an audience." "I don't want an audience. I want an explanation." "You want an apology." "I want you to bleed for fifteen minutes straight so we can call it even." "A fair counter-offer." Lucien unbuttoned his overcoat with slow, deliberate fingers. As the heavy wool fell open, the sharp tang of copper instantly overwhelmed the scent of curry spices. Dark, viscous fluid soaked the left side of his crisp white dress shirt, clinging heavily to the tailored fabric underneath his waistcoat. The breath caught in my throat. "You're hit." "An astute observation." "Demon iron?" "Silver-plated obsidian. Crude, but remarkably effective against my father's side of the family." "Sit down before you ruin Eva's rug." "Eva bought this rug at a flea market in Whitechapel for twelve pounds. It would be an improvement." "Lucien." He surrendered with a subtle bow of his head and moved toward the worn velvet armchair by the window. Each movement was measured, hiding the agony behind years of aristocratic discipline, but I saw the slight tremor in his jaw as he lowered himself into the cushions. I dragged a wooden dining chair opposite him and fetched Eva's medical kit from under the sink. Antiseptic, clean gauze, needle, catgut thread. Routine supplies for anyone living on the fringes of the city's supernatural trade. I knelt between his parted knees. Up close, the heat radiating from his chest clashed against the cold aura of his demonic blood, a strange fever that made the skin prickle. "Shirt," I ordered. "So demanding." "Undo the buttons or I will use the knife." Lucien pulled off his gloves with his teeth, dropping them onto the floorboards, and began to work through the mother-of-pearl buttons. His fingers were stiff. I pushed his hands aside and took over, flicking each button through its loop with rough efficiency. The wound ran from his lower ribs toward his hip, an ugly, jagged tear weeping black-tinged scarlet. Smoke faintly curled from the edges where the silver burned away his demonic flesh, preventing the half-breed healing factor from closing the breach. "Who did this?" I asked, soaking a wad of gauze in saline. "Competitors from the Avaros syndicates." "Why come here?" "Your flat above Silas' tavern is watched." "So you lead them to Eva's instead?" "I took three separate trains and four decoy cars across the river. Nobody followed me." "You arrogance will get us both killed one day." "If I die, Aurora, I assure you it will not be from lack of preparation." I pressed the saline directly against the burned flesh. Lucien sucked in a sharp, hissing breath through clenched teeth, his right hand shooting out to grip my wrist. His fingers locked over my pulse point, right above the crescent scar. The skin of his palm felt like hot iron. Neither of us moved. His thumb rested against the thrumming vein in my wrist, measuring the rapid, betrayed rhythm of my heart. The amber eye flared like an ember in the dim flat. "You should have called," I said softly, refusing to look away. "You would not have answered." "You left me in that warehouse with three dead cultists and a burning ledger." "I left you with an exit route and two million pounds in untraceable bearer bonds." "I didn't want the money, Lucien." "I know." His voice dropped, rough at the edges, losing its polished veneer. His thumb stroked once over the scar on my wrist. "That is why I had to leave." The air between our faces grew thick, electric, heavy with months of rage, adrenaline, and the reckless, ruined attraction that had nearly broken us both in winter. His gaze dropped to my mouth. He leaned in an inch, his breath warm against my cheek. A loud, splintering crash shattered the glass of the bay window. The heavy curtains whipped inward as an iron harpoon slammed through the brickwork above our heads, trailing thick black chains that hissed with acidic ward-breaking runes. Outside on the fire escape, boots hit the metal grating with heavy, coordinated thuds.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags10
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"I said softly [softly]"
dialogueSentences60
tagDensity0.167
leniency0.333
rawRatio0.1
effectiveRatio0.033
84.79% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1315
totalAiIsmAdverbs4
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count1
1
adverb"completely"
count1
2
adverb"tightly"
count1
3
adverb"softly"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
1"completely"
2"tightly"
3"softly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
39.16% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1315
totalAiIsms16
found
0
word"pristine"
count1
1
word"familiar"
count1
2
word"unsettled"
count1
3
word"whisper"
count1
4
word"fascinating"
count1
5
word"tension"
count2
6
word"warmth"
count1
7
word"weight"
count1
8
word"pulse"
count2
9
word"velvet"
count1
10
word"measured"
count1
11
word"tinged"
count1
12
word"electric"
count1
13
word"shattered"
count1
highlights
0"pristine"
1"familiar"
2"unsettled"
3"whisper"
4"fascinating"
5"tension"
6"warmth"
7"weight"
8"pulse"
9"velvet"
10"measured"
11"tinged"
12"electric"
13"shattered"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences60
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences60
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences110
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen30
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1315
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions13
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions10
wordCount842
uniqueNames4
maxNameDensity0.71
worstName"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Moreau1
Latin1
Lucien6
Eva2
persons
0"Moreau"
1"Latin"
2"Lucien"
3"Eva"
places(empty)
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences53
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"felt like hot iron"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1315
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences110
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs73
mean18.01
std15.72
cv0.873
sampleLengths
014
18
260
315
45
57
63
742
817
99
1010
112
1241
1338
147
1514
167
1718
1819
196
2058
2145
226
235
246
259
2625
2732
2842
294
304
3118
3216
3331
349
354
3615
373
3848
398
403
412
4213
437
4418
451
4647
4736
4831
493
99.42% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences60
matches
0"was measured"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs129
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences110
ratio0
matches(empty)
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount853
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"small, crescent-shaped scar"
adverbCount22
adverbRatio0.02579132473622509
lyAdverbCount11
lyAdverbRatio0.012895662368112544
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences110
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences110
mean11.95
std7.32
cv0.613
sampleLengths
014
18
225
37
428
59
66
75
87
93
1012
1130
1212
135
149
1510
162
174
1818
1919
2013
2125
227
2314
247
2511
267
2719
286
2912
3024
3122
3220
339
3416
356
365
376
389
3925
4027
415
423
4322
4417
454
464
4718
4816
4922
70.61% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats4
diversityRatio0.44545454545454544
totalSentences110
uniqueOpeners49
58.48% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences57
matches
0"Dark, viscous fluid soaked the"
ratio0.018
44.56% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount25
totalSentences57
matches
0"He leaned slightly on his"
1"He took a single step"
2"I said, barring the narrow"
3"His gaze caught mine."
4"My grip on the knife"
5"He glanced down at the"
6"I backed into the main"
7"He turned all three deadbolts"
8"I snapped, tossing the knife"
9"He leaned against the frame"
10"he murmured, his voice dropping"
11"He surrendered with a subtle"
12"I dragged a wooden dining"
13"I knelt between his parted"
14"His fingers were stiff."
15"I pushed his hands aside"
16"I asked, soaking a wad"
17"I pressed the saline directly"
18"His fingers locked over my"
19"His thumb rested against the"
ratio0.439
30.18% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount49
totalSentences57
matches
0"The third deadbolt clicked back,"
1"Lucien Moreau stood framed against"
2"He leaned slightly on his"
3"The scent of turmeric and"
4"He took a single step"
5"Ptolemy hissed from the top"
6"I said, barring the narrow"
7"His gaze caught mine."
8"That demonic half always unsettled"
9"My grip on the knife"
10"He glanced down at the"
11"A faint, knowing smile touched"
12"I backed into the main"
13"Eva's flat barely accommodated one"
14"Every surface groaned under the"
15"Lucien closed the door behind"
16"He turned all three deadbolts"
17"The leather of his gloves"
18"I snapped, tossing the knife"
19"Lucien did neither."
ratio0.86
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences57
matches(empty)
ratio0
63.49% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences36
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"Eva's flat barely accommodated one person, let alone a half-demon with broad shoulders and an aura that sucked the warmth out of the radiator."
1"Up close, the heat radiating from his chest clashed against the cold aura of his demonic blood, a strange fever that made the skin prickle."
2"The air between our faces grew thick, electric, heavy with months of rage, adrenaline, and the reckless, ruined attraction that had nearly broken us both in win…"
3"The heavy curtains whipped inward as an iron harpoon slammed through the brickwork above our heads, trailing thick black chains that hissed with acidic ward-bre…"
75.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags10
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"I said softly, refusing to look away"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags8
fancyCount3
fancyTags
0"I snapped (snap)"
1"he murmured (murmur)"
2"I ordered (order)"
dialogueSentences60
tagDensity0.133
leniency0.267
rawRatio0.375
effectiveRatio0.1
85.3228%