Run: 2026-09-03-01M1KRRQ85A89DK34Z40W6WA9X

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You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Romance genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The third deadbolt caught. Aurora's wrist twisted and the crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist tugged against the cuff of her jumper. She didn't finish pulling it. The door opened. Lucien Moreau stood in the narrow hallway with a small rectangular black leather satchel in one hand and the ivory-handled cane resting against his thigh. Rain beaded on the tailored charcoal suit. His heterochromatic eyes, one amber one black, flicked to the three deadbolts, to the books and scrolls and research notes that covered every surface of Eva's cramped one-bedroom flat above the curry house on Brick Lane, and finally to her. Ptolemy yowled from the top of the pile of journals on the sofa and flattened himself against the wall. "You're trespassing," Aurora said. "Technically invited," Lucien said. "By the cat." The flat smelled of old paper and cardamom from downstairs. A tabby cat named Ptolemy stared at him like a small, judgemental god. Aurora kept her hand on the latch. She was five foot six in socks, straight shoulder-length black hair pulled back, bright blue eyes steady. Cool-headed was an understatement. She'd learned it as a survival skill after Evan. "You didn't call," she said. "I called twice. You didn't pick up." "My phone's been off for three days." "Interesting." He lifted the satchel. "You run a delivery route for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress by day and disappear into this archive by night. Hard to miss." She stepped back, letting him in but not inviting him. The door closed with a soft thud. He didn't move toward the books. "Lucien." "Rory." He said her nickname like he still had a right to it. He didn't. "You left the bar." She gestured to the hallway with her chin. "Two weeks ago, mid-conversation, mid-job, you left." "I left the bar before it got messy." "It got messier after you left." He shifted the cane. The thin blade inside it caught no light. He never let it catch light. "You're working Eva's case," he said. "I'm working my own case." "Same thing." He walked past her, careful not to knock the stacks of notes balanced on the kitchen counter. "She's not here." "Eva's at a dig in Wales." "Good. That leaves us with less witnesses." Aurora shut the door properly and engaged the first deadbolt. The second clicked. She left the third open. "Why are you here?" He set the satchel on the only clear patch of floor, a small square of laminate by the radiator. He didn't sit. "You owe me." "I don't owe you anything." "Your friend owes me. You owe me for covering that." "Lucien, you don't collect debts like that. You collect favours." "Same coin." Silence settled. Ptolemy crept down and sniffed Lucien's polished shoes. Aurora crossed her arms. She knew the shape of his face, the slicked-back platinum blond hair, the way he stood as if the room might insult him. She'd spent a year pretending she didn't notice how he watched her when she came into Silas' bar after a shift, how he always ordered water and paid for her tea. "You shouldn't have come here," she said. "You shouldn't be here." She picked up a thin stack of printed pages from the arm of the sofa. The top sheet showed a symbol drawn in red ink. Reverse Greek. A mistake. "Eva thinks someone's been using her research." "Your friend collects things she shouldn't." "She collects things that could get her killed." "She collects things that get a lot of people killed." He tapped the cane once against the floor. "This is about the ledger." Aurora's mouth tightened. "You told me not to touch it." "I told you not to touch it without me." "You're a fixer. I'm a delivery girl who reads." "You're the girl who can spot a forged provenance in three seconds." He smiled, thin. "Don't sell yourself short." The radiator hissed. Somewhere downstairs the curry house kitchen clattered. "Fine," she said. "Let's see what you brought." He unzipped the satchel. Inside lay a small rectangular green French silver whittling knife. He set it down. "That's not-" "It isn't the ledger. It's a key." "Aurora stared at the knife. "To what?" "The flat below you. Silas' bar. The cellar he pretends doesn't exist." Her stomach turned cold. She had lived above that bar for eight months and never once heard the stairs to the basement creak. "You knew." "I suspected. The Frenchman who knows everything knows a few things." "That's your line." "It's a good line." She wanted to hit him. She wanted to kiss him. Both impulses felt unhelpful. She chose the third option. "Why now?" "Because someone opened the door last night." "Who?" "That's why I'm here." He leaned forward, elbows on his knees, the perfect posture of a man who never actually relaxed. "A woman. Late twenties. Black hair. Bright blue eyes." Aurora's jaw locked. "Rory." "Don't." "You know who I'm talking about." "I know you like to play games." "I'm not playing." His voice dropped. "She left prints. She left a name in the dust. Malphora." The room tilted. Her own alias. The name she'd used on a dark forum three years ago, the one she'd told almost no one. Lucien had never said it out loud before. "How-" "Your scar," he said quietly. "Small crescent-shaped scar on your left wrist from a childhood accident. You have it on file. You also have it on a receipt from an occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. Amateur hour." She didn't move. "You told me you were done with that life," he said. "I am done." "Then why are you digging through Eva's notes on the Avaros bloodline?" She set the pages down. Slowly. "Because Eva asked me to." "She didn't ask you to put your name on a ledger that lists every half-breed in London." The cane tapped again. Tick-tock. "You're angry," she said. "I'm concerned." "You're always concerned when you want something." He stood. The charcoal suit moved like water. "I want you alive." The words landed flat. She blinked. "That's not a line." "It's not a line." He stepped closer. The flat was too small for both of them. Ptolemy bolted. "You left Cardiff because Evan hurt you. You left me because I was using you. Fair." "I didn't leave you. You left." "I left before you could see what I was becoming." She laughed, short and sharp. "You're a half-demon fixer who carries a concealed blade in his cane. You're always becoming." He didn't flinch. "And you're a bright blue-eyed pre-law dropout who delivers noodles and breaks into dead women's flats." His voice softened. "You're brilliant. You're reckless. You're going to get yourself killed." "So help me." "I am helping you." "By showing up unannounced?" "By not showing up at all would be the alternative." He picked up the silver knife. "This opens the cellar. The woman who was there last night didn't have it. She had something else. A sigil burned into her palm." Aurora's breath caught. "You can smell it on her?" "I can see it in the photos." He pulled a small old rectangular black plastic phone from his pocket and thumbed it. The screen lit. A grainy image of a hand pressed against damp brick. A mark, fresh and angry. She reached for it. He didn't let go. "Don't touch it," he said. "Why?" "Because if you do, she'll know you're interested." "She already knows I'm interested." He looked at her. Really looked. The amber eye caught the kitchen light. "Give me the notes." She hesitated. Then she handed him the stack. He flipped through quickly, efficiently, the way he did everything. "You missed this." He pointed to a margin scribble in Eva's handwriting. A name. Brendan Carter. Her father. The blood drained from her face. "Your father wasn't a barrister," Lucien said. "He was a courier. For Avaros." The third deadbolt clicked shut behind her. She hadn't heard her own hands. The door to the flat slammed open. Cold air rushed in, smelling of rain and iron. A woman stood in the doorway, black hair damp, bright blue eyes, small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist. Aurora's own eyes widened in the mirror of her own face. Lucien moved. The ivory-handled cane came up.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags27
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"he said quietly [quietly]"
dialogueSentences99
tagDensity0.273
leniency0.545
rawRatio0.037
effectiveRatio0.02
89.18% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1386
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count1
1
adverb"really"
count1
2
adverb"quickly"
count1
highlights
0"slowly"
1"really"
2"quickly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
85.57% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1386
totalAiIsms4
found
0
word"flicked"
count1
1
word"silence"
count1
2
word"stomach"
count1
3
word"perfect"
count1
highlights
0"flicked"
1"silence"
2"stomach"
3"perfect"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
highlights
0"eyes widened"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences108
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences108
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences176
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen41
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1386
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions21
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
50.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions38
wordCount858
uniqueNames15
maxNameDensity1.05
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity3.5
worstWindowName"You"
discoveredNames
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Eva2
Brick1
Lane1
Lucien6
Ptolemy4
Evan1
Aurora9
Greek1
French1
Frenchman1
Late1
You7
Camden1
Carter1
persons
0"Moreau"
1"Eva"
2"Lucien"
3"Ptolemy"
4"Evan"
5"Aurora"
6"You"
7"Carter"
places
0"Brick"
1"Lane"
2"Camden"
globalScore0.976
windowScore0.5
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences53
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1386
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences176
matches
0"notes that covered"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
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mean11.36
std11.61
cv1.022
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272
319
44
57
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737
85
97
107
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1223
131
141
1514
1619
178
186
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206
215
2222
236
247
2518
264
2722
283
295
3010
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322
3310
3458
357
364
3729
387
396
408
4123
423
437
449
459
4619
4710
488
4918
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences108
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs158
matches
0"was using"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences176
ratio0
matches(empty)
82.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount778
adjectiveStacks3
stackExamples
0"small rectangular black leather"
1"small old rectangular black plastic phone"
2"small crescent-shaped scar"
adverbCount25
adverbRatio0.032133676092544985
lyAdverbCount9
lyAdverbRatio0.011568123393316195
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences176
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences176
mean7.88
std7
cv0.889
sampleLengths
04
118
25
33
425
57
640
719
84
94
103
1110
1213
137
1417
154
169
175
187
197
205
2122
2210
237
246
251
261
2712
282
2912
307
318
326
334
348
356
366
375
3819
393
406
417
4210
433
445
454
4619
473
483
495
43.18% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats12
diversityRatio0.29545454545454547
totalSentences176
uniqueOpeners52
39.68% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences84
matches
0"Somewhere downstairs the curry house"
ratio0.012
0.95% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount46
totalSentences84
matches
0"She didn't finish pulling it."
1"His heterochromatic eyes, one amber"
2"She was five foot six"
3"She'd learned it as a"
4"He lifted the satchel"
5"She stepped back, letting him"
6"He didn't move toward the"
7"He said her nickname like"
8"She gestured to the hallway"
9"He shifted the cane."
10"He never let it catch"
11"He walked past her, careful"
12"She left the third open."
13"He set the satchel on"
14"He didn't sit."
15"She knew the shape of"
16"She'd spent a year pretending"
17"She picked up a thin"
18"He tapped the cane once"
19"He smiled, thin"
ratio0.548
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount79
totalSentences84
matches
0"The third deadbolt caught."
1"Aurora's wrist twisted and the"
2"She didn't finish pulling it."
3"The door opened."
4"Lucien Moreau stood in the"
5"Rain beaded on the tailored"
6"His heterochromatic eyes, one amber"
7"Ptolemy yowled from the top"
8"The flat smelled of old"
9"A tabby cat named Ptolemy"
10"Aurora kept her hand on"
11"She was five foot six"
12"She'd learned it as a"
13"He lifted the satchel"
14"She stepped back, letting him"
15"The door closed with a"
16"He didn't move toward the"
17"He said her nickname like"
18"She gestured to the hallway"
19"He shifted the cane."
ratio0.94
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences84
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences25
technicalSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags27
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"He smiled, thin"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags12
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"He pulled (pull)"
dialogueSentences99
tagDensity0.121
leniency0.242
rawRatio0.083
effectiveRatio0.02
83.0188%