Run: 2026-09-03-01M1KRT5AFSNM7D1BZ163AAR2B

Run Details

Duration:
16.7s
Cost:
$0.002783
Provider:
DeepInfra

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Detective Harlow Quinn descended the last flight of concrete steps and the air changed. Cold gave way to damp. The tunnel smelled of rust and wet stone and something sweet underneath, like burnt sugar. Her torch cut a cone through the dark. The abandoned Tube station beneath Camden had no trains, no lights, only the Market strung up with black cloth and hanging lanterns that gave no heat. Uniforms held the perimeter at the top of the stairs. One of them stepped aside when she showed the bone token. She tucked the watch on her left wrist against her skin. The leather was worn smooth from eighteen years of service. Her jaw tightened as she passed under a low archway where a sign in chalk read VEIL MARKET. The body lay on a table of reclaimed wood. A man in his thirties, throat open, blood pooled dark on the boards. A second pool had dried around his left hand. No struggle marks on the table. No weapon. Quinn crouched. The skin around the wound was pale, not bruised. The edges of the cut were clean as if pressed, not sliced. “Time of death?” “Approximately three hours,” the pathologist said from behind her. “No defensive wounds. No signs of robbery. Wallet intact.” Quinn lifted the wallet with tweezers. Inside: a student ID, a Tube pass, a folded note in shaky handwriting. She read it without comment. Eva Kowalski stood by the lanterns, satchel open at her feet, books spilling out. Curly red hair caught the light. Round glasses slipped down her nose. She tucked hair behind her left ear and did not look at the body. “You’re not wearing gloves,” Quinn said. Eva’s fingers hovered over a brass compass on the table. Small. Verdigris on the casing. Sigils etched into the face. “It’s mine,” Eva said. “I was here for a source on the Shade artisans. The man bought it off a vendor ten minutes before you arrived.” Quinn did not touch the compass. The needle spun lazily, then settled pointing at the body. “That’s not how it works,” Quinn said. Eva finally looked up. Freckles stood out against her pale face. “It points to rifts, Harlow. Not bodies.” “Rifts don’t bleed.” “Do they?” Eva stepped closer. She kept her hands in her pockets. “The evidence doesn’t add up for a stabbing.” Quinn surveyed the room. Vendors crouched behind stalls, faces turned away. A boy with a bone mask sold vials. No one spoke. The Market moved every full moon. Tonight was full moon. “Walk me through it,” Quinn said. “The wound is too clean. No tissue tearing. No spray pattern consistent with a blade. The blood on the left hand is on the back, not the palm. He didn’t hold a weapon.” Quinn pressed two fingers to the edge of the table. The wood was warm. “You’re warm,” Eva said. “I’m cold. The wood is warm.” Quinn ran a palm over the surface. “No heat source nearby.” She lifted the lantern nearest the body. The flame steadied. The shadow on the wall behind the table stretched long, then snapped short. “Move,” Eva said. Quinn moved the lantern six inches to the left. The shadow stayed. Eva pulled a notebook from her satchel. She flipped to a page with a sketch of a sigil identical to the one etched on the compass face. “Protective sigils,” she said. “Shade artisans carve them to keep the compass from pointing at the user. The needle points away from the rift’s origin. Or toward it, depending on the binding. This one is reversed.” Quinn opened the victim’s jacket. No pockets bulged. No token on him. A bone token lay on the floor three feet from his feet, half under the table leg. “Entry requirement,” Quinn said. “Bone token,” Eva said. “He had one. He got in.” “He’s not a regular.” Quinn checked the student ID. Name, course in Comparative Mythology. She checked the note again. The handwriting slanted. *I saw the door. I didn’t buy anything.* “The door,” Quinn said. Eva pointed to the far wall where the black cloth hung. Behind it, a thin seam of light pulsed faintly, blue-white, like a bruise under skin. “Rift,” Eva said. “It opened an hour ago. It’s been cycling. Open, close, open. The Market’s vendors can see it. They don’t like it.” Quinn stood. She looked at the blood. At the warm wood. At the compass needle still aimed at the chest. “If a rift opened here, why is the blood still wet?” Eva tucked hair behind her left ear again. “Because it isn’t a rift.” Quinn stared at her. “It’s a seal,” Eva said. “A Shade binding. You can pull a person through, but you have to pay. The wound is a mark. The blood feeds it. The warmth is the wood absorbing the energy.” “The pathologist said three hours.” “The pathologist is measuring a corpse. This one is still cooling from the inside out.” Eva knelt and brushed the table with her fingertips. A faint residue clung to her skin, pale as ash. “No lividity. No rigor. The body is... suspended.” Quinn pulled out her phone. She photographed the wound from three angles. She photographed the compass. She photographed the seam of light. “Who did this?” Eva looked at the vendors. The boy with the bone mask stared at the floor. “The clique,” she said. “You told me you were watching them. They trade in information. They also trade in access. The Market sells portals. The clique sells the names of people who can be pulled through without them knowing.” Quinn’s watch caught the lantern light. She did not answer. She circled the table once, slow, military precision in each step. She noted the absence of footprints in the dust near the body. She noted the single set of drag marks leading from the seam of light to the table, not from the entrance. “Someone brought him here,” Quinn said. “Placed him on the table. The compass was on the table before he arrived.” “The compass was his,” Eva said. Quinn picked up the compass with a cloth. The needle spun, then locked on the seam of light behind the cloth. “Now it points there.” Eva closed her satchel. The sound was loud. “You can’t take that in,” she said. “I can take evidence.” “It’s not evidence. It’s a key.” Quinn held the compass in her palm. Verdigris flaked off onto her glove. “Then who’s the key for?” Eva did not answer. She looked at the body, then at the seam of light that pulsed once, twice, in time with nothing Quinn could hear. The lanterns flickered.
created_at"2026-09-03T13:54:54.431Z" 9/3/2026, 1:54:54 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags21
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences44
tagDensity0.477
leniency0.955
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
95.50% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1112
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"lazily"
count1
highlights
0"lazily"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
73.02% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1112
totalAiIsms6
found
0
word"etched"
count2
1
word"pulsed"
count2
2
word"warmth"
count1
3
word"flickered"
count1
highlights
0"etched"
1"pulsed"
2"warmth"
3"flickered"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences108
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences108
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences131
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen35
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans1
markdownWords8
totalWords1112
ratio0.007
matches
0"I saw the door. I didn’t buy anything."
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions20
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
0.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions51
wordCount758
uniqueNames10
maxNameDensity3.03
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity5
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Harlow1
Quinn23
Tube2
Camden1
Market2
Kowalski1
Eva18
Name1
Comparative1
Mythology1
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Camden"
3"Market"
4"Kowalski"
5"Eva"
places
0"Comparative"
globalScore0
windowScore0
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences56
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1112
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences131
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs64
mean17.38
std12.93
cv0.744
sampleLengths
014
154
221
339
49
530
623
73
818
924
1040
116
1220
1326
1416
157
1611
177
183
1920
2032
216
2233
2314
244
2517
2623
273
2812
2927
3036
3129
324
3310
3422
358
364
3726
3824
3920
4011
418
425
434
4436
455
4642
4722
483
4915
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences108
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs128
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences131
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount759
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount19
adverbRatio0.025032938076416336
lyAdverbCount5
lyAdverbRatio0.006587615283267457
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences131
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences131
mean8.49
std6.52
cv0.768
sampleLengths
014
15
215
38
426
510
611
711
810
918
109
1113
129
136
142
152
169
1712
183
199
209
216
2213
235
2414
256
266
2714
286
2910
301
314
325
334
3422
356
3610
377
384
397
407
413
425
437
448
454
467
478
483
496
47.07% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats15
diversityRatio0.3511450381679389
totalSentences131
uniqueOpeners46
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences88
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount20
totalSentences88
matches
0"Her torch cut a cone"
1"She tucked the watch on"
2"Her jaw tightened as she"
3"She read it without comment."
4"She tucked hair behind her"
5"She kept her hands in"
6"She lifted the lantern nearest"
7"She flipped to a page"
8"She checked the note again."
9"*I saw the door."
10"I didn’t buy anything.*"
11"She looked at the blood."
12"She photographed the wound from"
13"She photographed the compass."
14"She photographed the seam of"
15"She did not answer."
16"She circled the table once,"
17"She noted the absence of"
18"She noted the single set"
19"She looked at the body,"
ratio0.227
33.86% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount75
totalSentences88
matches
0"Detective Harlow Quinn descended the"
1"The tunnel smelled of rust"
2"Her torch cut a cone"
3"The abandoned Tube station beneath"
4"Uniforms held the perimeter at"
5"She tucked the watch on"
6"The leather was worn smooth"
7"Her jaw tightened as she"
8"The body lay on a"
9"A man in his thirties,"
10"A second pool had dried"
11"The skin around the wound"
12"The edges of the cut"
13"the pathologist said from behind"
14"Quinn lifted the wallet with"
15"She read it without comment."
16"Eva Kowalski stood by the"
17"She tucked hair behind her"
18"Eva’s fingers hovered over a"
19"Verdigris on the casing."
ratio0.852
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences88
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences28
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"The abandoned Tube station beneath Camden had no trains, no lights, only the Market strung up with black cloth and hanging lanterns that gave no heat."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags21
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags17
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences44
tagDensity0.386
leniency0.773
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
84.9821%