| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 16 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "Rory said carefully [carefully]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 24 | | tagDensity | 0.667 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.063 | | effectiveRatio | 0.063 | |
| 92.53% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1338 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 2 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 58.89% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1338 | | totalAiIsms | 11 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "throb" | | 1 | "pulsed" | | 2 | "pulse" | | 3 | "whisper" | | 4 | "throbbed" | | 5 | "flickered" | | 6 | "stomach" | | 7 | "shimmered" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "stomach dropped/sank" | | count | 1 |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 112 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 112 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 122 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 38 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 1 | | markdownWords | 13 | | totalWords | 1338 | | ratio | 0.01 | | matches | | 0 | "Past the deer, past the oak that remembers. Don't step on the stones." |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 14 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 33.33% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 71 | | wordCount | 1165 | | uniqueNames | 23 | | maxNameDensity | 2.15 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 4 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Isolde | 9 | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | London | 1 | | Nyx | 11 | | Rory | 25 | | Heartstone | 2 | | Pendant | 2 | | December | 1 | | Veil | 5 | | Barrier | 1 | | Fae-forged | 1 | | England | 1 | | Hel | 1 | | Belphegor | 1 | | Aldric | 1 | | Cardiff | 1 | | Brendan | 1 | | Carter | 1 | | Jennifer | 1 | | Ellis | 1 | | Pre-Law | 1 | | Evan | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Isolde" | | 1 | "Nyx" | | 2 | "Rory" | | 3 | "Veil" | | 4 | "Belphegor" | | 5 | "Brendan" | | 6 | "Carter" | | 7 | "Jennifer" | | 8 | "Ellis" | | 9 | "Evan" |
| | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "London" | | 3 | "Pendant" | | 4 | "England" | | 5 | "Cardiff" |
| | globalScore | 0.427 | | windowScore | 0.333 | |
| 18.42% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 76 | | glossingSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "as if recognizing the place" | | 1 | "as if listening" | | 2 | "felt like a mouth opening" | | 3 | "felt like a held breath" |
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| 0.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 3 | | per1kWords | 2.242 | | wordCount | 1338 | | matches | | 0 | "not her own reflection but movement, slow" | | 1 | "not as warning but as fact" | | 2 | "Not sound exactly, but a pressure" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 122 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 44 | | mean | 30.41 | | std | 22.12 | | cv | 0.728 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 56 | | 1 | 69 | | 2 | 11 | | 3 | 56 | | 4 | 53 | | 5 | 14 | | 6 | 57 | | 7 | 5 | | 8 | 65 | | 9 | 7 | | 10 | 54 | | 11 | 51 | | 12 | 29 | | 13 | 5 | | 14 | 5 | | 15 | 59 | | 16 | 67 | | 17 | 21 | | 18 | 6 | | 19 | 6 | | 20 | 47 | | 21 | 6 | | 22 | 40 | | 23 | 27 | | 24 | 28 | | 25 | 5 | | 26 | 37 | | 27 | 13 | | 28 | 10 | | 29 | 60 | | 30 | 1 | | 31 | 34 | | 32 | 8 | | 33 | 67 | | 34 | 30 | | 35 | 23 | | 36 | 6 | | 37 | 31 | | 38 | 43 | | 39 | 18 | | 40 | 34 | | 41 | 58 | | 42 | 3 | | 43 | 13 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 112 | | matches | | |
| 96.37% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 3 | | totalVerbs | 193 | | matches | | 0 | "was standing" | | 1 | "were leaning" | | 2 | "was coming" |
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| 100.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 0 | | semicolonCount | 1 | | flaggedSentences | 1 | | totalSentences | 122 | | ratio | 0.008 | | matches | | 0 | "The blade could cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 334 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 6 | | adverbRatio | 0.017964071856287425 | | lyAdverbCount | 2 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.005988023952095809 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 122 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 122 | | mean | 10.97 | | std | 8.56 | | cv | 0.781 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 33 | | 1 | 18 | | 2 | 5 | | 3 | 19 | | 4 | 29 | | 5 | 9 | | 6 | 12 | | 7 | 11 | | 8 | 18 | | 9 | 26 | | 10 | 12 | | 11 | 12 | | 12 | 33 | | 13 | 4 | | 14 | 4 | | 15 | 11 | | 16 | 3 | | 17 | 3 | | 18 | 8 | | 19 | 7 | | 20 | 2 | | 21 | 8 | | 22 | 14 | | 23 | 15 | | 24 | 5 | | 25 | 9 | | 26 | 19 | | 27 | 31 | | 28 | 6 | | 29 | 7 | | 30 | 3 | | 31 | 5 | | 32 | 23 | | 33 | 6 | | 34 | 11 | | 35 | 6 | | 36 | 17 | | 37 | 16 | | 38 | 11 | | 39 | 7 | | 40 | 13 | | 41 | 16 | | 42 | 5 | | 43 | 3 | | 44 | 2 | | 45 | 13 | | 46 | 5 | | 47 | 18 | | 48 | 23 | | 49 | 4 |
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| 52.19% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 8 | | diversityRatio | 0.3524590163934426 | | totalSentences | 122 | | uniqueOpeners | 43 | |
| 66.67% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 100 | | matches | | 0 | "Instead the space between the" | | 1 | "Then she did." |
| | ratio | 0.02 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 20 | | totalSentences | 100 | | matches | | 0 | "They were older than the" | | 1 | "They were taller than Rory" | | 2 | "It didn't pulse now." | | 3 | "They stepped first." | | 4 | "She knew it immediately because" | | 5 | "It was late afternoon, but" | | 6 | "Her shoulder-length black hair stayed" | | 7 | "She was standing on them." | | 8 | "She didn't look up when" | | 9 | "She could not lie, though" | | 10 | "She tucked her hand into" | | 11 | "It hummed now, just barely," | | 12 | "Their form flickered between solid" | | 13 | "It was supposed to be" | | 14 | "Her stomach dropped." | | 15 | "It was a threshold." | | 16 | "She looked at the blade" | | 17 | "She had not asked for" | | 18 | "She thought of Cardiff, of" | | 19 | "She thought of the flat" |
| | ratio | 0.2 | |
| 45.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 83 | | totalSentences | 100 | | matches | | 0 | "Rory had never been good" | | 1 | "Richmond Park was empty at" | | 2 | "The ancient oak standing stones" | | 3 | "They were older than the" | | 4 | "Rory crouched to check the" | | 5 | "a voice said, and the" | | 6 | "Nyx unfolded out of the" | | 7 | "They were taller than Rory" | | 8 | "The faint violet glow of" | | 9 | "Rory said, because cool-headed was" | | 10 | "The silver chain of the" | | 11 | "It didn't pulse now." | | 12 | "That was a relief." | | 13 | "Nyx's voice came like a" | | 14 | "They stepped first." | | 15 | "Rory expected a gate, a" | | 16 | "The world didn't tear so" | | 17 | "The sound of distant park" | | 18 | "The air grew sweet, heavy" | | 19 | "The clearing was a pocket." |
| | ratio | 0.83 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 100 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 63.49% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 45 | | technicalSentenceCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "Wildflowers carpeted the ground in impossible profusion, blues and pinks and white that should have been dead by now, heads nodding as if in a breeze that didn'…" | | 1 | "The ancient oaks marked a boundary, but inside the boundary the ground was soft, springy with moss that gave under her delivery shoes." | | 2 | "Beyond the distortion she glimpsed a sky the color of warm amber, and vineyards stretching to a horizon that curved wrong." | | 3 | "For a heartbeat Rory saw a figure on the other side, tall and robed, watching the grove with interest that felt like a mouth opening." | | 4 | "The alien beauty of a place that should not exist, a clearing where time bent and flowers never died, where a half-Fae seer left no footprints and a shade could…" |
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| 93.75% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 16 | | uselessAdditionCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "Isolde said, and her voice was soft as paper" |
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| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 13 | | fancyCount | 1 | | fancyTags | | | dialogueSentences | 24 | | tagDensity | 0.542 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.077 | | effectiveRatio | 0.077 | |