Run: 2026-09-03-01M1KRV4V7AAJBP9N8H7BKBK38

Run Details

Duration:
12.7s
Cost:
$0.009395
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The rain over Soho turned the green neon outside into a bleeding smear against the wet pavement. Inside The Raven’s Nest, the smell of damp wool mingled with stale bourbon and lemon rind. Silas wiped down the zinc counter with methodical circles, his silver signet ring clicking against the metal with every third stroke. Behind him, the framed topographical maps of the Balkans curled slightly at their edges from decades of trapped tobacco smoke and river humidity. Aurora sat on the end stool, rotating an empty highball glass between her palms. Her black hair, sheared blunt at her shoulders, fell across her cheekbones. The brass bell over the door chimed, cutting through the low hum of the refrigerator coils. Cold air rushed across the floorboards. A man stood on the welcome mat, folding a long black umbrella with the precise, practiced snaps of someone who caught the five-fifteen train out of Cardiff Central every weekday. He wore a camel-hair overcoat that looked expensive and entirely unprepared for Greek Street. When he looked up, his gaze swept past the taxidermy crow mounted near the coat racks and locked directly onto her. "Rory?" Aurora’s hands went still on the glass. The crescent scar on her left wrist pressed white against the zinc. "Julian." He stood there for five seconds, the umbrella dripping puddles onto the dark pine boards before he walked over. His leather brogues clicked with an entirely different rhythm than Silas' dragging heel. He stopped two stools away, hovering as if the barstools carried a fine layer of soot. "I had a conference in Holborn. Chancery Lane stuff. A junior clerk mentioned this place had decent rye." He unbuttoned his coat, revealing a crisp spread collar and a burgundy silk tie. "I didn't think... God, how long has it been? Four years?" "Five." "Five." He ran a manicured hand through damp, carefully parted brown hair. "You vanished off the face of the earth. Brendan thought you were in Bristol for six months. Your mother still puts on that brave face at the parish council, telling everyone you took a sabbatical." Silas didn't look up from his glassware, though his rag slowed slightly. "Brendan always had an active imagination when it came to depositions." Aurora signaled the tap with two fingers. "Give him a double of whatever isn't well." Silas set down a heavy tumbler of dark amber liquid in front of Julian without a word, his hazel eyes lingering on the neat knot of the man's tie before he limped toward the far end of the counter. Julian looked down at the amber pool, then back at Aurora. His eyes tracked the faint ink visible beneath the rolled cuff of her flannel, the silver hoops in her cartilage, the way her posture had settled low and coiled instead of the rigid, chin-up poise her father had drilled into her across dinner tables in Cyncoed. "You look different." "I cut my hair." "It's not just the hair, Rory. You look like somebody else entirely." He picked up the glass, turned it in the low amber light, and set it down without drinking. "We spent three years in the library basement outlining torts until three in the morning. You had your career mapped out to the silk gown. You were supposed to take the pupillage in Temple." "I was supposed to do a lot of things." "Evan said you left in the middle of a Tuesday. Packed two duffel bags, left the keys on the laminate, and didn't even take your deposit back." Aurora took a slow breath through her nose. The chill from the open door had vanished, replaced by the heavy warmth of the Nest's central heating. "Evan talk to you often?" "He's a partner at Davies & Croft now. We play squash on Thursdays." Julian leaned his elbows on the zinc, leaning closer. His cologne was sandalwood and lavender, the exact scent of the moot court chambers at Cardiff. "He was devastated, Rory. He looked for you for months. He thought someone had hurt you." She traced the rim of her glass with her index finger. "Someone did." Julian stopped. The background drone of a delivery van reversing down the alley filled the silence between them. He cleared his throat, shifted his weight on the wooden stool, and reached into his coat pocket for a silver cigarette case before remembering London indoor smoking bans had been law for nearly two decades. He tucked it back inside with a sheepish flick of his wrist. "He's under a lot of pressure. His father's firm—" "I don't care about his firm, Julian. I don't care about the squash ladder or who made junior partner before thirty." "You used to." His voice dropped, losing the courtroom cadence and softening into something jagged and bewildered. "You cared more than any of us. You cried for three days when you got an eighty-one on Constitutional instead of an eighty-eight. You used to color-code your binders with those stupid pastel tabs." "I was twenty." "You were alive." He looked at her hands, taking in the faint grease beneath one thumbnail from her afternoon shift on the scooter, the faded denim jacket, the way her shoulders refused to yield an inch toward him. "Look at this place. Look at what you're doing. What is this, rebellion? At twenty-five?" "It's six o'clock on a Wednesday, Julian. Drink your rye." "Come back with me." The words spilled out before he could filter them, sharp and sudden. "I've got the car parked at the hotel. My firm is hiring research assistants. Real work. I could speak to your dad. We could smooth this over. He’s old, Rory. He’s got that tremor in his left hand now. He won't say it, but he barely takes court appointments anymore." Aurora didn't blink. The bright blue of her eyes remained steady, reflecting the muted green neon of the window behind him. "Give Brendan my regards when you see him." "That's it?" Julian’s hand gripped the edge of the bar, knuckles whitening. "Five years of nothing, and you dismiss your entire family like an overdue parking ticket? You were the smartest person in our year. You had everything handed to you on a silver platter, and you threw it into the gutter to sit in a dive bar in Soho." Silas set a bottle of Scotch down on the back shelf with a sharp, hollow thud that echoed off the high rafters. The Spymaster didn't turn around, but his broad, tweed-clad shoulders set square against the mirror. Julian glanced toward Silas, startled by the noise, then lowered his head. He finally took a deep swallow of the whiskey. The bite of it made his eyes water. He stared at the scratched surface of the zinc, where dozens of forgotten patrons had carved initials into the softer alloy over the decades. "You really don't miss any of it," he said. The anger had drained out, leaving only the thin, dry gravel of fatigue. "The dinners at the Bay? The walks through Bute Park when the magnolias were out?" "I remember the magnolias," Aurora said softly. Her voice was flat, devoid of nostalgia. "I remember the smell of the damp earth after the frost melted. And I remember throwing up in the shrubs outside the law library because Evan told me if I failed the mock trial, he'd find someone who didn't embarrass him." Julian opened his mouth, closed it, and stared at his drink. "He didn't tell you that part during squash, did he?" "No," Julian whispered. "No." Aurora stood up from her stool. She reached into her pocket, tossed a crumpled ten-pound note onto the counter near Julian's glass, and pulled her leather jacket tighter around her frame. "It doesn't make for good club talk." Julian didn't look up as she moved past him toward the narrow wooden stairs tucked behind the back coat rack. He only turned his glass in circles on the condensation ring, listening to the solid, unhurried strike of her boots against the floorboards. "Rory," he called out, his voice barely rising above the low rumble of the street outside. She paused at the bottom step, one hand resting on the dark oak banister. "What do I tell them?" Aurora looked back over her shoulder, her face shadowed by the dim yellow sconce on the landing. "Tell them you couldn't find me."
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags15
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"Aurora said softly [softly]"
dialogueSentences43
tagDensity0.349
leniency0.698
rawRatio0.067
effectiveRatio0.047
82.17% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1402
totalAiIsmAdverbs5
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count2
1
adverb"carefully"
count1
2
adverb"really"
count1
3
adverb"softly"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
1"carefully"
2"really"
3"softly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
67.90% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1402
totalAiIsms9
found
0
word"methodical"
count1
1
word"silk"
count2
2
word"chill"
count1
3
word"warmth"
count1
4
word"traced"
count1
5
word"silence"
count1
6
word"weight"
count1
7
word"echoed"
count1
highlights
0"methodical"
1"silk"
2"chill"
3"warmth"
4"traced"
5"silence"
6"weight"
7"echoed"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences58
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences58
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences87
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen50
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1402
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions13
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
66.67% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions38
wordCount879
uniqueNames15
maxNameDensity1.14
worstName"Julian"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Julian"
discoveredNames
Soho1
Raven1
Nest2
Balkans1
Cardiff2
Central1
Greek1
Street1
Silas5
Julian10
Aurora9
Cyncoed1
London1
Scotch1
Spymaster1
persons
0"Nest"
1"Balkans"
2"Silas"
3"Julian"
4"Aurora"
5"Spymaster"
places
0"Soho"
1"Raven"
2"Cardiff"
3"Greek"
4"Street"
5"Cyncoed"
6"London"
globalScore0.931
windowScore0.667
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences53
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1402
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences87
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs50
mean28.04
std22.49
cv0.802
sampleLengths
077
126
216
371
41
519
61
748
843
91
1047
1112
1226
1339
1457
153
164
1764
189
1927
2026
215
2254
2311
242
2565
269
2721
2851
293
3053
3110
3266
3321
348
3560
3637
3753
3837
3955
4011
4110
423
4339
4443
4516
4614
475
4817
496
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences58
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs128
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences87
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount685
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount19
adverbRatio0.027737226277372264
lyAdverbCount7
lyAdverbRatio0.010218978102189781
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences87
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences87
mean16.11
std11.14
cv0.691
sampleLengths
017
116
221
323
414
512
616
76
830
914
1021
111
127
1312
141
1519
1613
1716
1832
1911
201
2112
2235
2312
2418
258
2639
2711
2846
293
304
3130
3234
339
3427
358
3618
375
3822
3916
4016
4111
422
432
4416
4535
4612
479
4821
4917
47.51% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats7
diversityRatio0.3333333333333333
totalSentences87
uniqueOpeners29
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences55
matches(empty)
ratio0
60.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount22
totalSentences55
matches
0"Her black hair, sheared blunt"
1"He wore a camel-hair overcoat"
2"He stood there for five"
3"His leather brogues clicked with"
4"He stopped two stools away,"
5"He unbuttoned his coat, revealing"
6"He ran a manicured hand"
7"His eyes tracked the faint"
8"He picked up the glass,"
9"His cologne was sandalwood and"
10"She traced the rim of"
11"He cleared his throat, shifted"
12"He tucked it back inside"
13"His voice dropped, losing the"
14"He looked at her hands,"
15"He finally took a deep"
16"He stared at the scratched"
17"Her voice was flat, devoid"
18"She reached into her pocket,"
19"He only turned his glass"
ratio0.4
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount51
totalSentences55
matches
0"The rain over Soho turned"
1"Silas wiped down the zinc"
2"Aurora sat on the end"
3"Her black hair, sheared blunt"
4"The brass bell over the"
5"A man stood on the"
6"He wore a camel-hair overcoat"
7"Aurora’s hands went still on"
8"The crescent scar on her"
9"He stood there for five"
10"His leather brogues clicked with"
11"He stopped two stools away,"
12"He unbuttoned his coat, revealing"
13"He ran a manicured hand"
14"Silas didn't look up from"
15"Aurora signaled the tap with"
16"Silas set down a heavy"
17"Julian looked down at the"
18"His eyes tracked the faint"
19"He picked up the glass,"
ratio0.927
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences55
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences35
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"A man stood on the welcome mat, folding a long black umbrella with the precise, practiced snaps of someone who caught the five-fifteen train out of Cardiff Cent…"
1"He wore a camel-hair overcoat that looked expensive and entirely unprepared for Greek Street."
91.67% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags15
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"Julian’s hand gripped, knuckles whitening"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags4
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"Julian whispered (whisper)"
1"he called out (call out)"
dialogueSentences43
tagDensity0.093
leniency0.186
rawRatio0.5
effectiveRatio0.093
83.8638%