Run: 2026-09-03-01M1KRVT9GKPRZ03BC6C9W3MWB

Run Details

Duration:
26.0s
Cost:
$0.010363
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support"> <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor> <hair>short curly dark brown</hair> <height>5'10"</height> <age>29</age> <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone> <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar> <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion> <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace> <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description> <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre. A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rain hammered the Camden tarmac, turning the gutters into churning black ribbons. Neon signs from tattoo parlors and shuttered stalls bled sickly magenta across the slick asphalt. Harlow Quinn surged through the downpour, her long coat snapping against her knees. She kept her brown eyes locked on the dark green jacket thirty paces ahead. Water pooled in the collars of her shirt, cold and persistent, but the heat in her lungs burned clean through the chill. Eighteen years of pacing precinct corridors and sprinting down dead ends gave her stride a measured, relentless rhythm. Her boots struck the pavement with rhythmic precision, chewing up the distance between them. The runner took a sharp left into an alleyway choked with rusted iron dumpsters and rotting cardboard. Tomás Herrera did not possess the stride of a seasoned runner, but desperation lent him speed. He hugged a scuffed leather medical kit to his ribs, his sneakers sliding on wet cobblestones. A sliver of copper-toned skin flashed at his wrist as his sleeve pulled back, revealing the jagged line of a scar carved deep into his forearm. "Metropolitan Police!" Quinn's voice sliced through the drone of falling water. She rounded the brick corner, planting one gloved hand on the damp masonry to whip herself around the turn. "Drop the kit, Herrera. You slip on this grease, you break an ankle." Tomás glanced over his shoulder. Water plastered dark curls across his forehead. He gripped the silver chain around his throat, fingers catching the outline of a Saint Christopher medallion before he lunged toward an iron fire escape. He leaped, kicked off the metal ladder, and vaulted clean over a collapsed timber barricade that blocked an alcove beneath a disused railway bridge. Quinn did not break stride. She vaulted the timber, wood splintering under the heel of her boot, and landed hard on the slick flagstones beyond. The alley ended at a pair of corrugated iron doors set into the arched brick base of the Northern line viaduct. Spray-painted eviction notices and rusted chains had kept the entrance sealed for decades, yet the padlock now hung split, severed by a clean, deliberate shearing force that left the steel edges glowing faintly blue in the dark. Tomás ripped one panel open. A blast of dry, metallic air rushed up from the black gap, smelling of ozone, burnt tallow, and pulverized bone. "Step back, Quinn!" Tomás jammed his shoulder against the iron, trying to wedge it shut behind him. He breathed in ragged gasps, his olive skin gleaming with sweat and rainwater. "You don't want to go down there. You cross this line, your badge isn't going to buy you a single second." Quinn drove her shoulder straight into the corrugated metal before it could latch. The impact rattled through her collarbone, but the door gave way with a shriek of tortured hinges. She stepped into the gloom, her right hand resting flat against the holster under her left arm. "You skipped bail on three licensing violations and a stolen pharmaceutical manifest. That makes this my business." Quinn adjusted her stance, blocking the exit. Her sharp jaw was set, water dripping from her cropped salt-and-pepper hair down the hollows of her cheeks. "Hand over the satchel. Walk out into the cruiser, and we talk about the clinic in Soho." Tomás backed down the concrete stairs, step by deliberate step. He shook his head, clutching the leather case tighter against his chest. "You think this is about expired morphine and stolen sutures? Morris thought the same thing." The name hit Quinn like a blow to the sternum. Her hand froze against the grip of her sidearm. The damp chill of the stairwell suddenly felt identical to the basement in Whitechapel three years prior, where she had found her partner slumped against a brick pillar with clean, bloodless incisions carved into his temples. The coroner had ruled it sudden cardiac arrest; Quinn had spent thirty-six months collecting the anomalies the department chose to shred. "What did you say?" "Morris followed a courier down into the dark without knowing the rules." Tomás reached into his pocket, his knuckles grazing something small and pale. "He looked for patterns in things that don't obey statutes. Turn around, Detective. Go back to your desk. File the arrest report as a lost trace." "You don't get to invoke his name to run away from a theft charge." Quinn took two deliberate steps down the descent. The shadows swallowed the neon glow of Camden behind her. "Who gave you those vials in Soho?" Tomás did not answer. He produced a polished sliver of human rib bone, carved with three jagged notches along its crest. He tossed it into a recessed brass bowl bolted to the wall at the landing. The air popped. The stale stench of underground rot evaporated instantly, replaced by the pungent perfume of dried sage, sulfur, and distilled silver. Below them, a spiral staircase plunged into an enormous subterranean cavern where the abandoned Tube tracks had been torn up and replaced by rows of makeshift wooden pavilions, silk canopies, and flickering iron braziers. Figures moved through the vapor beneath the vaulted brick arches. Some wore heavy oilskin dusters; others moved beneath shrouds of spun glass and heavy velvet. Stalls displayed jars of phosphorescent bile, iron cages containing twitching shadows, and stacks of bound parchment tied with dried sinew. A murmur of bartering in dead dialects rose from the depths, humming like a hive behind Quinn's teeth. Tomás stepped off the bottom landing, melting into the crowd beneath a canopy of faded crimson banners. Quinn stopped on the stone threshold. Her thumb brushed the worn leather band of her watch. Behind her lay the surface: clean procedure, radio backup, rain-slick streets, and a precinct house full of paperwork that would never explain why her partner had died with frost inside his lungs. Ahead lay the Veil Market, an open wound beneath the city where every law she had sworn to uphold ceased to exist. She unsnapped the retention strap on her holster, pulled her coat tight against the subterranean draft, and started down the stairs.
created_at"2026-09-03T13:56:00.875Z" 9/3/2026, 1:56:00 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags0
95.11% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1022
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"suddenly"
count1
highlights
0"suddenly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
51.08% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1022
totalAiIsms10
found
0
word"churning"
count1
1
word"chill"
count2
2
word"measured"
count1
3
word"rhythmic"
count1
4
word"gleaming"
count1
5
word"gloom"
count1
6
word"silk"
count1
7
word"velvet"
count1
8
word"depths"
count1
highlights
0"churning"
1"chill"
2"measured"
3"rhythmic"
4"gleaming"
5"gloom"
6"silk"
7"velvet"
8"depths"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences55
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences55
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences67
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen38
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1022
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions1
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
83.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions28
wordCount871
uniqueNames11
maxNameDensity1.15
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Camden2
Quinn10
Herrera1
Saint1
Christopher1
Northern1
Whitechapel1
Tube1
Veil1
Market1
Tomás8
persons
0"Quinn"
1"Herrera"
2"Saint"
3"Christopher"
4"Tube"
5"Tomás"
places
0"Whitechapel"
globalScore0.926
windowScore0.833
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences50
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1022
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences67
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs35
mean29.2
std21
cv0.719
sampleLengths
027
181
217
358
42
528
613
761
825
958
1025
113
1227
1321
1447
1517
1625
1717
1822
1915
2076
214
2212
2312
2426
2514
2618
277
2836
2957
3063
3117
3216
3354
3421
98.88% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences55
matches
0"been torn"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs142
matches(empty)
57.57% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount2
flaggedSentences2
totalSentences67
ratio0.03
matches
0"The coroner had ruled it sudden cardiac arrest; Quinn had spent thirty-six months collecting the anomalies the department chose to shred."
1"Some wore heavy oilskin dusters; others moved beneath shrouds of spun glass and heavy velvet."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount877
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount7
adverbRatio0.00798175598631699
lyAdverbCount4
lyAdverbRatio0.004561003420752566
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences67
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences67
mean15.25
std7.71
cv0.505
sampleLengths
012
115
213
314
422
518
614
717
816
916
1026
112
129
1319
1413
155
167
1725
1824
195
2020
2121
2237
235
2420
253
2614
2713
2821
2913
3017
3117
3217
337
3418
3517
3610
3712
3815
3910
409
4136
4221
434
4412
4512
4626
4714
488
4910
61.19% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats4
diversityRatio0.40298507462686567
totalSentences67
uniqueOpeners27
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences55
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount16
totalSentences55
matches
0"She kept her brown eyes"
1"Her boots struck the pavement"
2"He hugged a scuffed leather"
3"She rounded the brick corner,"
4"He gripped the silver chain"
5"He leaped, kicked off the"
6"She vaulted the timber, wood"
7"He breathed in ragged gasps,"
8"She stepped into the gloom,"
9"Her sharp jaw was set,"
10"He shook his head, clutching"
11"Her hand froze against the"
12"He produced a polished sliver"
13"He tossed it into a"
14"Her thumb brushed the worn"
15"She unsnapped the retention strap"
ratio0.291
14.55% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount49
totalSentences55
matches
0"Neon signs from tattoo parlors"
1"Harlow Quinn surged through the"
2"She kept her brown eyes"
3"Water pooled in the collars"
4"Her boots struck the pavement"
5"The runner took a sharp"
6"Tomás Herrera did not possess"
7"He hugged a scuffed leather"
8"A sliver of copper-toned skin"
9"Quinn's voice sliced through the"
10"She rounded the brick corner,"
11"Tomás glanced over his shoulder."
12"Water plastered dark curls across"
13"He gripped the silver chain"
14"He leaped, kicked off the"
15"Quinn did not break stride."
16"She vaulted the timber, wood"
17"The alley ended at a"
18"Tomás ripped one panel open."
19"A blast of dry, metallic"
ratio0.891
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences55
matches(empty)
ratio0
94.16% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences44
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"He leaped, kicked off the metal ladder, and vaulted clean over a collapsed timber barricade that blocked an alcove beneath a disused railway bridge."
1"Spray-painted eviction notices and rusted chains had kept the entrance sealed for decades, yet the padlock now hung split, severed by a clean, deliberate sheari…"
2"Behind her lay the surface: clean procedure, radio backup, rain-slick streets, and a precinct house full of paperwork that would never explain why her partner h…"
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags0
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
85.1955%