Run: 2026-09-03-01M1KRWESG7ACF9J25YDDZ558Y

Run Details

Duration:
28.5s
Cost:
$0.003917
Provider:
DeepInfra

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Detective Harlow Quinn descended the iron ladder into the abandoned Tube station beneath Camden with the worn leather watch on her left wrist catching the sweep of her torch. The air held the damp of old brick and the faint chemical bite of ozone. Salt-and-pepper hair cropped close to her scalp stayed flat against the cold. Her sharp jaw set under the low beam. She stopped at the threshold where a bone token lay in the dust, white and small as a child's tooth. "You’re late." Eva Kowalski stood by the arched entrance, round glasses fogged at the edges, curly red hair half pulled back. She held a worn leather satchel full of books against her chest. Freckles stood out against her pale skin in the torchlight. She tucked hair behind her left ear. "Metrolink shut this line down in 1938," Harlow said. "You shouldn’t be down here." "I’m already here," Eva said. "You called me." Harlow didn’t answer. She moved past the token into the main platform. Uniforms kept a line with tape that sagged in the damp. The body lay on the concrete between the rails, sprawled as if it had fallen from height. A man in his thirties, coat torn, face bruised. No obvious wound. Crime scene techs knelt around him with gloved hands. One lifted a palm. "Prints are clean," the tech said. "No struggle. No defensive marks." Harlow crouched. The man’s shoes were polished, laces tied. His pockets held a wallet, a phone, a folded receipt from a Camden coffee shop dated that morning. The phone screen was dark. No blood. No trace of impact on the skull. The neck showed a faint ring of discoloration, pale and even. "That doesn’t fit a fall," Harlow said. "Rift event," Eva said from behind her. "Look at the floor." Harlow looked. The concrete around the body was darkened in a perfect circle, about two meters across. The darkening wasn’t wet. It was dry, and the aggregate of the concrete showed a fine pattern of hairline cracks radiating outward like a spider. In the center, a thin residue shimmered when the torch moved over it. It caught light and threw it back in a way concrete shouldn’t. She stood. "CSU logged a slip," Harlow said. "They said he missed the platform edge." "No edge," Eva said. "The edge is three meters back. The platform is intact." Harlow walked to the edge. The lip was solid, no chips, no scuff. She swept her torch along the wall. Scorch marks in a vertical line, blackened bricks, as if something had been dragged down. The marks stopped halfway. "Evidence doesn’t add up," Harlow said. "It adds up if you know what you’re looking at." Harlow turned on her. Eva opened the satchel and took out a small brass compass. The casing had a patina of verdigris. The face was etched with protective sigils. The needle trembled, then locked and pointed straight down at the body. "Veil Compass," Eva said. "Points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal. It’s been pointing here since we came down the ladder." "That’s a novelty," Harlow said. "I’ve seen those in tourist shops." "This one was crafted by a Shade artisan. It was sold at the Market." "The Market moves every full moon," Harlow said. "It isn’t here now." "The Market was here last night," Eva said. "It moves, but it leaves residue. Bone token at the threshold. Entry requirement. You saw it." Harlow looked at the token again. She picked it up with a gloved hand. It was warm. "Body temperature," she said. "Post-mortem heat retention is different," Eva said. "That’s not decay. That’s recent use." Harlow set the token down. She walked the circle, counting paces. Two meters exactly. She knelt again and examined the residue. It smelled faintly of iron and old paper. "CSU said no blood," Harlow said. "Because it isn’t blood," Eva said. "It’s alchemical ash. They use it to seal a rift after it closes. It marks where something passed through." Harlow stood and looked at the man’s neck. The ring of discoloration matched the diameter of a hand. No bruise, no indentation. "Strangulation would leave marks," she said. "Not if the thing that held him didn’t have hands." Harlow’s mouth tightened. She walked to the far end of the platform where a service door stood ajar. Cold air slipped out. On the metal frame, faint chalk marks, half erased. She traced them with a fingertip through a glove. A sigil she didn’t recognise. "You’ve been here before," she said. "Two years, off and on," Eva said. "I research the restricted archives at the British Museum. I track these sites. You lost Morris three years ago. Under unexplained circumstances. You told me the file was closed." Harlow didn’t move. "I didn’t tell you anything." "You told your psychiatrist. He told my supervisor. He told me." Silence filled the station, broken by drips from the ceiling. Harlow looked back at the body. The man’s coat had a small tear at the left shoulder. Inside the tear, a thread of black silk, fine as spiderweb. She pulled out her phone and photographed it. "Where did he come from?" Harlow asked. Eva tucked hair behind her left ear. "From the other side. The rift opened, he stepped through, the Market closed. The Veil Market sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information. It also sells passage. People who owe debts, people who chase bargains. Sometimes they don’t come back right." "The evidence doesn’t add up," Harlow said again, quieter. "Because you’re looking for a human cause. A fall, a fight, a push. There was none." Harlow crouched by the body’s feet. The soles of his shoes were clean. No grit from the platform. No scuff from a tumble down the ladder. She lifted one shoe and looked underneath. A faint chalk mark, same as on the door. She stood. "Who was he?" Eva checked a notebook in her satchel. "Name on the wallet is Daniel Kade. Twenty-nine. Works at a shipping firm. He was reported missing by his sister three days ago. Last seen near Camden Lock. He had a bone token in his flat. Police found it during a welfare check and logged it as a novelty." Harlow’s watch ticked against her wrist. "You think he traded for something and paid with his life." "I think he stepped into a rift and the rift spat him out." Harlow walked the perimeter of the dark circle, stopping every half meter to shine her torch at the concrete. The cracks radiated outward and ended at the tape line. No one had stepped inside since the body was found. She stopped at the north point. There, pressed into the dust, a single boot print, small, with a distinct tread pattern. It faced outward. No second print leading in. "One set of prints out," Harlow said. Eva nodded. "Rift closes on its own. It doesn’t leave a path back." Harlow looked up at the tunnel mouth where the Market would have been. The air still shivered. "You’re saying this is a crime scene with no crime." "I’m saying it’s a crime scene with a crime you can’t prosecute in a court." Harlow stared at the body, at the compass needle still pointing down, at the residue that shimmered under her torch. Her military precision kept her hands steady as she lifted the man’s jacket collar. Inside, stitched into the lining, a small tag of vellum with a sigil written in ink that had faded to brown. She pulled out her phone and photographed it. "Get me the file on Morris," she said. Eva blinked. "I can’t—" "Get it," Harlow said. "You have access to restricted archives. Find the name Shade artisan. Find every Veil Market location in the last five years. Cross-reference with unsolved falls in the Underground." Eva opened her satchel. "You suspect the clique." "I suspect a pattern," Harlow said. "The evidence doesn’t add up. It won’t until I see what I missed." She stepped into the circle and knelt, torch low, until the light caught the residue at an angle. The shimmer resolved into a fine lattice, like frost, but warm to the touch through the glove. The needle of the compass twitched.
created_at"2026-09-03T13:56:09.655Z" 9/3/2026, 1:56:09 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags25
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"Harlow said again [again]"
dialogueSentences57
tagDensity0.439
leniency0.877
rawRatio0.04
effectiveRatio0.035
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1380
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
67.39% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1380
totalAiIsms9
found
0
word"perfect"
count1
1
word"shimmered"
count2
2
word"etched"
count1
3
word"trembled"
count1
4
word"traced"
count1
5
word"silence"
count1
6
word"silk"
count1
7
word"resolved"
count1
highlights
0"perfect"
1"shimmered"
2"etched"
3"trembled"
4"traced"
5"silence"
6"silk"
7"resolved"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences118
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount2
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences118
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences150
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen50
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1380
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions36
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
0.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions50
wordCount877
uniqueNames7
maxNameDensity3.31
worstName"Harlow"
maxWindowNameDensity6
worstWindowName"Harlow"
discoveredNames
Harlow29
Quinn1
Tube1
Camden2
Kowalski1
Eva15
Market1
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Kowalski"
3"Eva"
4"Market"
places
0"Camden"
globalScore0
windowScore0
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences65
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1380
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences150
matches
0"dated that morning"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs74
mean18.65
std16.51
cv0.885
sampleLengths
064
120
22
348
414
58
652
713
811
952
107
1111
1267
132
1413
1514
1639
176
1810
1941
2022
2111
2214
2312
2424
2517
264
2713
2829
296
3025
3122
326
3310
3445
356
3636
373
385
3911
4010
4136
427
437
4442
459
4616
4742
482
493
93.37% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount4
totalSentences118
matches
0"was darkened"
1"been dragged"
2"was etched"
3"was found"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs162
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences150
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount879
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount13
adverbRatio0.01478953356086462
lyAdverbCount3
lyAdverbRatio0.0034129692832764505
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences150
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences150
mean9.2
std6.88
cv0.748
sampleLengths
029
115
212
38
420
52
619
712
810
97
109
115
125
133
143
159
1611
1717
189
193
209
214
226
235
242
257
2618
275
282
297
3011
317
327
334
342
3515
364
3721
3813
3912
402
416
427
434
4410
455
468
477
4815
494
47.11% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats6
diversityRatio0.30666666666666664
totalSentences150
uniqueOpeners46
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences89
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount23
totalSentences89
matches
0"Her sharp jaw set under"
1"She stopped at the threshold"
2"She held a worn leather"
3"She tucked hair behind her"
4"She moved past the token"
5"His pockets held a wallet,"
6"It was dry, and the"
7"It caught light and threw"
8"She swept her torch along"
9"She picked it up with"
10"It was warm."
11"She walked the circle, counting"
12"She knelt again and examined"
13"It smelled faintly of iron"
14"She walked to the far"
15"She traced them with a"
16"She pulled out her phone"
17"She lifted one shoe and"
18"She stopped at the north"
19"It faced outward."
ratio0.258
44.27% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount74
totalSentences89
matches
0"Detective Harlow Quinn descended the"
1"The air held the damp"
2"Salt-and-pepper hair cropped close to"
3"Her sharp jaw set under"
4"She stopped at the threshold"
5"Eva Kowalski stood by the"
6"She held a worn leather"
7"Freckles stood out against her"
8"She tucked hair behind her"
9"Harlow didn’t answer."
10"She moved past the token"
11"Uniforms kept a line with"
12"The body lay on the"
13"A man in his thirties,"
14"Crime scene techs knelt around"
15"the tech said"
16"The man’s shoes were polished,"
17"His pockets held a wallet,"
18"The phone screen was dark."
19"The neck showed a faint"
ratio0.831
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences89
matches(empty)
ratio0
99.57% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences33
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"Uniforms kept a line with tape that sagged in the damp."
1"Inside, stitched into the lining, a small tag of vellum with a sigil written in ink that had faded to brown."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags25
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"Harlow said again, quieter"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags25
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences57
tagDensity0.439
leniency0.877
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
85.0569%