| 0.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 4 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "he said quietly [quietly]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 10 | | tagDensity | 0.4 | | leniency | 0.8 | | rawRatio | 0.25 | | effectiveRatio | 0.2 | |
| 92.68% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1366 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 2 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 30.45% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1366 | | totalAiIsms | 19 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | | | 18 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "fractured" | | 1 | "flickered" | | 2 | "shattered" | | 3 | "marble" | | 4 | "efficient" | | 5 | "apprehension" | | 6 | "intricate" | | 7 | "tension" | | 8 | "mechanical" | | 9 | "reverberated" | | 10 | "gloom" | | 11 | "standard" | | 12 | "constructed" | | 13 | "familiar" | | 14 | "chaotic" | | 15 | "velvet" | | 16 | "wavering" | | 17 | "crystal" | | 18 | "scanning" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 67 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 1 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 67 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 73 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 44 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1356 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 7 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 37 | | wordCount | 1256 | | uniqueNames | 19 | | maxNameDensity | 0.88 | | worstName | "Quinn" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1.5 | | worstWindowName | "Quinn" | | discoveredNames | | Camden | 3 | | Harlow | 1 | | Quinn | 11 | | November | 1 | | Metropolitan | 1 | | Police | 1 | | Tomás | 6 | | Herrera | 1 | | Seville | 1 | | Morris | 2 | | Victorian | 1 | | Spanish | 1 | | Blitz | 1 | | Saint | 1 | | Christopher | 1 | | Edwardian | 1 | | Tube | 1 | | Veil | 1 | | Market | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Harlow" | | 1 | "Quinn" | | 2 | "Police" | | 3 | "Tomás" | | 4 | "Herrera" | | 5 | "Morris" | | 6 | "Saint" | | 7 | "Christopher" |
| | places | | 0 | "Metropolitan" | | 1 | "Seville" | | 2 | "Spanish" | | 3 | "Market" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 61 | | glossingSentenceCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1356 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 73 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 29 | | mean | 46.76 | | std | 27.88 | | cv | 0.596 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 104 | | 1 | 17 | | 2 | 50 | | 3 | 101 | | 4 | 49 | | 5 | 25 | | 6 | 87 | | 7 | 23 | | 8 | 26 | | 9 | 98 | | 10 | 12 | | 11 | 48 | | 12 | 66 | | 13 | 14 | | 14 | 32 | | 15 | 16 | | 16 | 62 | | 17 | 26 | | 18 | 12 | | 19 | 62 | | 20 | 67 | | 21 | 35 | | 22 | 71 | | 23 | 17 | | 24 | 67 | | 25 | 69 | | 26 | 31 | | 27 | 47 | | 28 | 22 |
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| 73.84% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 6 | | totalSentences | 67 | | matches | | 0 | "been stripped" | | 1 | "was soaked" | | 2 | "was swallowed" | | 3 | "was constructed" | | 4 | "been scrubbed" | | 5 | "been gutted" |
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| 94.18% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 3 | | totalVerbs | 189 | | matches | | 0 | "was carrying" | | 1 | "was standing" | | 2 | "was weaving" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 10 | | semicolonCount | 4 | | flaggedSentences | 10 | | totalSentences | 73 | | ratio | 0.137 | | matches | | 0 | "Instead, she adjusted the cadence of her breath—in for three counts, out for three—and locked her gaze on the olive jacket and the frantic bobbing of curly dark hair." | | 1 | "He was the medic for a clique she had been circling for six months—the same shadowy ring that brushed right against the cold, dead-end case files of three years ago." | | 2 | "Tomás had stumbled near a rusted skip; she heard the wet smack of his palm against brick, heard him swear in Spanish—a sharp, breathless curse—before he righted himself and shoved through a pair of chain-link gates hanging crooked on their hinges." | | 3 | "When he turned to face her, rain dripping from his curls into his warm brown eyes, there was no hostility in his expression—only a tense, desperate apprehension." | | 4 | "Her left wrist lifted slightly; the worn leather strap of her watch was soaked, the second hand ticking steadily past midnight." | | 5 | "The iron door didn't swing open; it dissolved inward like wet ash, revealing a vaulted staircase that plummeted straight down into the earth, lit by a sickly, phosphorus-green luminescence." | | 6 | "Her radio was dead on her shoulder—the static had turned into a flat, high-pitched whine the moment the door vanished." | | 7 | "They wouldn't smell the sudden, unnatural draft pouring up from the staircase—a dry, suffocating air that carried notes of bitter almond, parched leather, dried herbs, and ozone." | | 8 | "But the soot had been scrubbed back in deliberate, curving runes, and the air hummed with voices—a muffled, chaotic murmur that swelled as she descended." | | 9 | "Quinn saw men in tailored tweed inspecting rows of crystal vials filled with swirling, iridescent liquids; women with cloaks pulled low over features that looked subtly wrong in the lamplight—angles too sharp, skin too sheer." |
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| 94.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1280 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "sickly, phosphorus-green luminescence." |
| | adverbCount | 28 | | adverbRatio | 0.021875 | | lyAdverbCount | 15 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.01171875 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 73 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 73 | | mean | 18.58 | | std | 8.99 | | cv | 0.484 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 25 | | 1 | 24 | | 2 | 22 | | 3 | 33 | | 4 | 17 | | 5 | 7 | | 6 | 14 | | 7 | 29 | | 8 | 20 | | 9 | 12 | | 10 | 39 | | 11 | 30 | | 12 | 38 | | 13 | 6 | | 14 | 5 | | 15 | 25 | | 16 | 22 | | 17 | 14 | | 18 | 10 | | 19 | 41 | | 20 | 23 | | 21 | 8 | | 22 | 15 | | 23 | 3 | | 24 | 4 | | 25 | 23 | | 26 | 21 | | 27 | 27 | | 28 | 23 | | 29 | 6 | | 30 | 6 | | 31 | 27 | | 32 | 21 | | 33 | 10 | | 34 | 5 | | 35 | 16 | | 36 | 17 | | 37 | 18 | | 38 | 14 | | 39 | 15 | | 40 | 17 | | 41 | 16 | | 42 | 11 | | 43 | 22 | | 44 | 29 | | 45 | 8 | | 46 | 18 | | 47 | 12 | | 48 | 10 | | 49 | 20 |
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| 65.75% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 7 | | diversityRatio | 0.4520547945205479 | | totalSentences | 73 | | uniqueOpeners | 33 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 67 | | matches | | 0 | "Instead, she adjusted the cadence" | | 1 | "Instead, his right hand slipped" | | 2 | "Instead, a dull, resonant hum" |
| | ratio | 0.045 | |
| 94.63% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 21 | | totalSentences | 67 | | matches | | 0 | "She kept her head down" | | 1 | "He was quick, lighter on" | | 2 | "He was the medic for" | | 3 | "she barked, her voice cutting" | | 4 | "He didn't run further." | | 5 | "He was standing before a" | | 6 | "He held his left arm" | | 7 | "he said, breathing hard" | | 8 | "Her left wrist lifted slightly;" | | 9 | "he said quietly" | | 10 | "He didn't drop the bag." | | 11 | "He turned quickly, slotting the" | | 12 | "He stepped over the threshold" | | 13 | "Her radio was dead on" | | 14 | "She was alone in a" | | 15 | "They wouldn't smell the sudden," | | 16 | "They would call her unhinged," | | 17 | "She took a breath, held" | | 18 | "She drew her sidearm, keeping" | | 19 | "She was out of her" |
| | ratio | 0.313 | |
| 71.94% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 52 | | totalSentences | 67 | | matches | | 0 | "The rain came down in" | | 1 | "She kept her head down" | | 2 | "Water ran in steady rivulets" | | 3 | "Quinn didn't shout for him" | | 4 | "Shouting wasted oxygen and gave" | | 5 | "He was quick, lighter on" | | 6 | "A field trauma kit, by" | | 7 | "Quinn knew his file down" | | 8 | "He was the medic for" | | 9 | "The memory flickered behind her" | | 10 | "An insult to the dead." | | 11 | "Tomás veered hard to the" | | 12 | "Quinn rounded the corner a" | | 13 | "The alley was dark, lit" | | 14 | "Trash bags, torn open by" | | 15 | "Tomás had stumbled near a" | | 16 | "Quinn cleared the gate with" | | 17 | "she barked, her voice cutting" | | 18 | "He didn't run further." | | 19 | "He was standing before a" |
| | ratio | 0.776 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 67 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 21.56% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 53 | | technicalSentenceCount | 9 | | matches | | 0 | "Eighteen years in the Metropolitan Police had beaten the habit of complaining out of her, replaced instead by the rigid, relentless cadence of a woman who treat…" | | 1 | "He was the medic for a clique she had been circling for six months—the same shadowy ring that brushed right against the cold, dead-end case files of three years…" | | 2 | "The iron door didn't swing open; it dissolved inward like wet ash, revealing a vaulted staircase that plummeted straight down into the earth, lit by a sickly, p…" | | 3 | "She was alone in a Camden alley at midnight, without backup, staring into a hole in the city that shouldn't exist according to every ordnance map she had studie…" | | 4 | "They wouldn't smell the sudden, unnatural draft pouring up from the staircase—a dry, suffocating air that carried notes of bitter almond, parched leather, dried…" | | 5 | "The staircase was constructed of rough-hewn stone that transitioned into the familiar white and green tiles of an Edwardian Tube station, long abandoned and bla…" | | 6 | "But the soot had been scrubbed back in deliberate, curving runes, and the air hummed with voices—a muffled, chaotic murmur that swelled as she descended." | | 7 | "Quinn saw men in tailored tweed inspecting rows of crystal vials filled with swirling, iridescent liquids; women with cloaks pulled low over features that looke…" | | 8 | "The scents were overwhelming: scorched copper, damp earth, rare incense, and the raw, iron tang of freshly butchered meat that smelled nothing like beef or pork…" |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 4 | | uselessAdditionCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "Quinn kept, her stance wide, her center of gravity low" |
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| 50.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 3 | | fancyCount | 1 | | fancyTags | | | dialogueSentences | 10 | | tagDensity | 0.3 | | leniency | 0.6 | | rawRatio | 0.333 | | effectiveRatio | 0.2 | |