Run: 2026-09-03-01M1KRXD3EBY791HE2QCPWDXQ3

Run Details

Duration:
41.2s
Cost:
$0.002898
Provider:
Phala

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Night had thinned Richmond Park to a black smear between streetlamps. Aurora Carter cut through the service road behind the Golden Empress with a thermal bag still clipped to her hip from the last run. She lived above Silas’ bar, and the flat smelled of fryer oil and rain. The pendant rode against her sternum under her jumper, a thumbnail of deep crimson on a silver chain. She had taken the tube out at 22:47. The text from the unknown number arrived at 22:12. *The stones are listening. Come alone. Midnight.* She had not answered. She had walked. The standing oaks rose at the edge of the Pet Cemetery path where the map ended. The boundary was not a line on the ground, it was a change in the air. The wind dropped. The wildflowers did not bend. They stood upright in the dark, white and purple and impossible in November. Aurora stopped. The pendant warmed. She lifted the chain over her head and held the stone in her palm. It pulsed once, a faint inner glow catching on her bright blue eyes. The scar on her left wrist caught the light, a small crescent from a childhood accident in Cardiff. She tucked her hand back into her sleeve. “Okay.” The trees were not trees at the edge of the clearing. They were standing stones wrapped in bark, their crowns lost in cloud. Between them the ground was soft with moss that should have been dead. A faint ring of stones marked the clearing, and in the centre a shallow hollow held water that did not ripple. She had been here once before, with Eva, years ago drunk and laughing. She had not remembered the hollow. The Heartstone pulsed again. She stepped inside the ring. Sound changed immediately. Her boots made no sound on the moss. The distant hum of the A3 became a low thrum under her ribs. The air smelled of wet earth and something sweet, like honey left too long in a jar. “Hello?” The word felt wrong in the clearing. It bounced back without an echo. She kept her phone off. She had left it in the delivery bag. The bag clinked against her hip. She set it down beside a stone and pulled her coat tighter. The flowers did not move when she brushed past them. She brushed them again. They stayed. Something shifted at the edge of vision. A dark shape between two oaks. She turned. The shape was a stand of trunks. She turned back. The hollow was still empty. Her breath fogged. It should not have fogged. The air was warm. The pendant warmed against her skin again. She knelt by the hollow. The water was clear. It showed the sky above, and stars that were not the stars she knew. One of them moved. She stood. “Show yourself.” No answer came. The thrumming increased. A twig snapped behind her. She spun. Nothing. The moss where she had stood showed a print from her boot, and another print beside it. Smaller. Bare. She stared at the print. The moss filled in slowly. She pulled the pendant out again. The crimson stone glowed, a dull light against her palm. The glow painted the underside of her chin. The wind returned at the boundary, loud and sudden, rattling leaves that should have been still. The clearing stayed silent. A low sound rose from the hollow. Not water. A breathing sound, in and out, slow. Aurora crouched again. The water showed her face, straight shoulder-length black hair plastered to her forehead, eyes wide. Behind her reflection, the surface rippled though nothing touched it. “Who are you?” The breathing stopped. She stood and took three steps back. Her boot met the bag. The bag tipped. A carton of noodles rolled out and hit a stone with a clatter that was too loud. Silence slammed down. The flowers turned. All of them, at once, turned their heads toward her. She did not have the word for the motion. They did not have heads. She laughed, a short sharp sound she did not mean to make. “Fine. You want me here. Why?” The pendant flared. Heat kissed her palm. The silver chain bit into her skin. From the ring of standing stones, a figure stepped. Not walked. Stepped into being between one blink and the next. It was tall, wrapped in bark and leaf, its face a smooth oval of pale wood. Its eyes were knots. Aurora did not run. She was cool-headed, intelligent, known for quick out-of-the-box thinking. She knew running would be a signal. The figure did not speak. It tilted its head. She lifted the pendant. “You gave me this.” The figure made a sound like a branch cracking under snow. She took a step forward. The moss gave under her weight and held. “You want it back.” The figure raised one arm. The air thickened. The thrumming became a pulse she felt in her teeth. A second shape moved at the edge of the clearing. Then a third. They were not in the standing stones. They were between them. The flowers leaned in. Aurora’s coat felt too heavy. She pulled the bag toward her with her free hand. The noodles spilled across the moss. She left them. “Eva?” The name hung in the warm air. The wooden figure lowered its arm. The pulse steadied. She felt the time slip. An hour inside could be minutes or days outside. She had not checked her watch. She did not want to know. The pendant grew hot enough to sting. She closed her fist around it. “Then take it.” The figure stepped closer. The moss parted for it without a mark. Its breath smelled of damp rot and wildflowers. Aurora did not step back. She held her ground at five foot six, coat open, bag at her feet, scar on her left wrist catching the stone’s glow. The hollow breathed again. A hand of bark and root reached for the pendant. She opened her palm.
created_at"2026-09-03T13:56:40.693Z" 9/3/2026, 1:56:40 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags1
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences9
tagDensity0.111
leniency0.222
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
95.04% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1008
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count1
highlights
0"slowly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
65.28% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1008
totalAiIsms7
found
0
word"pulsed"
count2
1
word"echo"
count1
2
word"silence"
count1
3
word"weight"
count1
4
word"pulse"
count2
highlights
0"pulsed"
1"echo"
2"silence"
3"weight"
4"pulse"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences136
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences136
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences145
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen24
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans1
markdownWords7
totalWords1008
ratio0.007
matches
0"The stones are listening. Come alone. Midnight."
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions0
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions17
wordCount972
uniqueNames12
maxNameDensity0.62
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity1
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Richmond1
Park1
Carter1
Golden1
Empress1
Pet1
Cemetery1
November1
Cardiff1
Eva1
Heartstone1
Aurora6
persons
0"Carter"
1"Eva"
2"Aurora"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
2"November"
3"Cardiff"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences70
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1008
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences145
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs63
mean16
std14.96
cv0.935
sampleLengths
067
117
27
37
453
52
63
753
81
957
1019
114
125
1341
141
1513
1631
1716
1830
1912
207
2127
222
232
246
2527
2610
2724
2820
2916
3028
313
323
3332
343
3527
3612
376
3814
3940
4020
419
424
434
4411
4513
464
4718
4824
494
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences136
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs168
matches
0"were standing"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences145
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount48
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount1
adverbRatio0.020833333333333332
lyAdverbCount0
lyAdverbRatio0
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences145
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences145
mean6.95
std4.76
cv0.684
sampleLengths
011
124
214
318
48
59
64
72
81
94
103
1116
1216
133
145
1513
162
173
1814
1913
2018
218
221
2311
2412
2513
2621
2713
286
294
305
313
328
3313
3417
351
367
376
385
398
406
4112
4210
434
442
457
466
472
487
493
36.21% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats20
diversityRatio0.2413793103448276
totalSentences145
uniqueOpeners35
26.88% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences124
matches
0"Then a third."
ratio0.008
65.16% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount48
totalSentences124
matches
0"She lived above"
1"She had taken the tube"
2"She had not answered."
3"She had walked."
4"They stood upright in the"
5"She lifted the chain over"
6"It pulsed once, a faint"
7"She tucked her hand back"
8"They were standing stones wrapped"
9"She had been here once"
10"She had not remembered the"
11"She stepped inside the ring."
12"Her boots made no sound"
13"It bounced back without an"
14"She kept her phone off."
15"She had left it in"
16"She set it down beside"
17"She brushed them again."
18"She turned back."
19"Her breath fogged."
ratio0.387
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount116
totalSentences124
matches
0"Night had thinned Richmond Park"
1"Aurora Carter cut through the"
2"She lived above"
3"The pendant rode against her"
4"She had taken the tube"
5"The text from the unknown"
6"*The stones are listening."
7"She had not answered."
8"She had walked."
9"The standing oaks rose at"
10"The boundary was not a"
11"The wind dropped."
12"The wildflowers did not bend."
13"They stood upright in the"
14"The pendant warmed."
15"She lifted the chain over"
16"It pulsed once, a faint"
17"The scar on her left"
18"She tucked her hand back"
19"The trees were not trees"
ratio0.935
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences124
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences35
technicalSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags1
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
86.2856%