Run: 2026-09-03-01M1KRXHG4CAXVFZ5GEXTV10SF

Run Details

Duration:
27.0s
Cost:
$0.011678
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The third deadbolt clicked open with a heavy brass snap. Rory pulled the door back two inches, the security chain catching taut against the frame. The scent of damp wool and bergamot cut through the lingering smell of turmeric and fried cumin rising from the restaurant downstairs. Lucien Moreau stood on the narrow landing, the dim hallway bulb reflecting in the polished curve of his ivory-handled cane. Rainwater dripped from the brim of his charcoal collar onto the worn floorboards. "Your locks need oil." Rory stared through the gap at the mismatched irises—one gold as raw honey, the other an abyss of solid black. "You lost the right to comment on my hardware four months ago." "Unhook the chain, Rory." "Give me a reason that doesn't involve me slamming this oak into your nose." Lucien shifted his weight, the tip of his cane clicking against the threshold. "Two men in wet trench coats are sitting in an idling saloon by the corner of Bethnal Green Road. They checked Eva’s name against the buzzer panel three minutes ago." Rory’s hand dropped from the chain. She slid the brass slider across the track, opened the door wide enough for him to slip past, and slammed it shut. Her fingers worked all three deadbolts in rapid succession before she turned to face him. Ptolemy scampered out from beneath the kitchen table, tail puffed into a bottle brush, before recognizing the scent and winding his striped flank against Lucien’s immaculate trouser leg. "Traitor," Rory muttered at the cat. "Ptolemy possesses an appreciation for consistency." Lucien stripped off his damp charcoal overcoat with crisp, deliberate motions, draping it over the back of an armchair buried under Eva’s Latin concordances. "A trait in short supply across East London." "Consistency? You vanished out of a burning warehouse in Rotherhithe, left me with three cracked ribs and twenty pounds of stolen ledger sheets, and went completely dark." Rory leaned back against the bolted door, crossing her arms. Her left thumb traced the crescent scar on her wrist, a nervous tick she caught and killed instantly. "Do not stand in this flat and lecture me on consistency." "I took the hounds off your scent." "You ran." "I drew four squads of Avaros enforcers to the Belgian border." Lucien set his cane against the side table, right between a stack of unbound grimoire pages and an empty mug. He turned, the amber eye catching the amber glow of the desk lamp. "If I stayed, they would have torn your throat out to find where the books went." "I could have helped you." "You were bleeding through your jumper, Carter." "I survived Evan. I survived Cardiff. I could have handled a few stray demons with bad suits." Lucien took two steps across the cramped room. The flat was small enough that his presence swallowed the air between the bookshelf and the kitchenette sink. He smelled of rain, old parchment, and the subtle, sulfurous heat that lived beneath his skin. "You survived Evan because you ran three hundred miles away." His voice dropped an octave, smooth as polished glass, carrying the crisp, clipped cadence of Marseille under an English veneer. "You would not have survived what followed me out of the cellar." "So you made the decision for me." Rory refused to step back. Her spine hit the wood of the door, grounding her. She tilted her chin up to meet his gaze. "Just like every other arrogant bastard with a superiority complex. Disappear into thin air. Cut the line. Leave me wondering if I needed to scrape your remains off the Thames embankment." "Did you look for me?" "I checked the obituaries. Under the comedy section." A faint, maddening twitch pulled at the corner of Lucien's mouth. "Liar." "Try me, Moreau." "You checked Silas’s cellar twice a week. You asked the couriers at the Golden Empress if anyone had seen a tall Frenchman with a limp." He closed the remaining distance, stopping inches away. The heat radiating off his chest felt like an open furnace door on a frostbit night. "Yu-Fei told me." Rory’s jaw tightened until her teeth ached. "Yu-Fei talks too much." "She looks out for you. A sentiment I share, despite your ferocious desire to throw yourself into traffic." "I don't need your protection." "Clearly." Lucien lifted a hand, gloved in soft calfskin, and hovered his knuckles near the curve of her jawline without making contact. "Which is why you are hiding in an attic full of forbidden translation drafts, jumping at every footstep on the stairs." "I'm not hiding. I'm house-sitting." "With three deadbolts and a kitchen knife taped to the underside of the coffee table." Rory glared at him. "You checked the table?" "I checked the whole room while you were fumbling with the locks." "Get out." "No." "Lucien." "You want me gone, Carter? Unlock the door." He stepped into her space, his chest grazing the coarse wool of her sweater. He placed one hand flat against the door frame beside her head, trapping her between his arm and the wall. "Turn the brass. Tell me you want me out in the rain, and I will walk." The silence in the flat stretched thin. Outside, the steady rumble of an engine rolled down Brick Lane, splashing through deep gutter puddles before fading toward Shoreditch. Inside, Ptolemy jumped onto the radiator, purring like a rusty engine. Rory looked at the black eye, void of pupil or white, and then into the amber one, where flecks of copper flared like sparks in a hearth. Her breath hitched. The anger sat heavy in her stomach, but under the anger lived the sharp, electric pull that had terrified her from the night they met in Silas's back room. "You don't get to do this," she whispered, her voice losing its edge, scraping raw on the truth. "You don't get to vanish for a third of a year and walk back into my life like you just stepped out for cigarettes." "It was not cigarettes." Lucien pulled off his glove with his teeth, dropping the leather to the floorboards. His bare fingers reached out, his skin hot enough to sting, and brushed the hair back from her temple. His thumb caught the small crescent scar on her left wrist, pressing gently against the raised white tissue. "I spent four months cleaning the board so I could return to this room without bringing an army behind me," he murmured. "Every hour away was an insult to my sanity." "You should have called." "And given them a trace on your location?" "I didn't care about the risk." "I did." His palm cupped the side of her neck, fingers sliding into the dark hair at the base of her skull. His demon pulse thrummed against her skin—two beats to her one, rapid and unrelenting. Rory gripped the lapel of his suit jacket, intending to push him away. Her fingers clenched into the fine charcoal wool instead, pulling him half an inch closer. "I hate you," she said against his mouth. "I know." Lucien leaned down, closing the gap until his lips brushed hers, warm and deliberate. "Show me."
created_at"2026-09-03T13:56:54.901Z" 9/3/2026, 1:56:54 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags13
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"Rory leaned back [back]"
dialogueSentences53
tagDensity0.245
leniency0.491
rawRatio0.077
effectiveRatio0.038
91.64% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1196
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"completely"
count1
1
adverb"gently"
count1
highlights
0"completely"
1"gently"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
66.56% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1196
totalAiIsms8
found
0
word"weight"
count1
1
word"traced"
count1
2
word"complex"
count1
3
word"desire"
count1
4
word"silence"
count1
5
word"stomach"
count1
6
word"electric"
count1
7
word"pulse"
count1
highlights
0"weight"
1"traced"
2"complex"
3"desire"
4"silence"
5"stomach"
6"electric"
7"pulse"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences49
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences49
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences89
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen37
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1194
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions11
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
78.98% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions31
wordCount704
uniqueNames12
maxNameDensity1.42
worstName"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Moreau1
Lucien10
Eva1
Latin1
Rory10
Marseille1
English1
Brick1
Lane1
Shoreditch1
Ptolemy2
Silas1
persons
0"Moreau"
1"Lucien"
2"Eva"
3"Rory"
4"Ptolemy"
5"Silas"
places
0"Marseille"
1"Brick"
2"Lane"
3"Shoreditch"
globalScore0.79
windowScore0.833
91.86% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences43
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"felt like an open furnace door on a fro"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1194
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences89
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs58
mean20.59
std19.55
cv0.95
sampleLengths
010
115
255
34
420
512
64
714
813
930
1043
1128
126
1338
1466
157
162
1760
185
197
2017
2142
2242
2362
245
258
2611
271
283
2952
307
314
3218
335
3443
355
3615
374
384
3912
402
411
421
4358
4438
4559
4642
474
4851
4931
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences49
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs109
matches(empty)
78.65% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount2
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences2
totalSentences89
ratio0.022
matches
0"Rory stared through the gap at the mismatched irises—one gold as raw honey, the other an abyss of solid black."
1"His demon pulse thrummed against her skin—two beats to her one, rapid and unrelenting."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount707
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount17
adverbRatio0.024045261669024046
lyAdverbCount2
lyAdverbRatio0.002828854314002829
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences89
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences89
mean13.42
std8.71
cv0.649
sampleLengths
010
115
222
320
413
54
620
712
84
914
1013
1130
126
1322
1415
1528
166
1730
188
1937
2018
2111
227
232
2431
2513
2616
275
287
2917
308
3118
3216
3330
3412
3512
3610
379
3831
395
408
4111
421
433
4433
4516
463
477
484
4918
64.42% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats6
diversityRatio0.42696629213483145
totalSentences89
uniqueOpeners38
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences48
matches(empty)
ratio0
61.67% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount19
totalSentences48
matches
0"She slid the brass slider"
1"Her fingers worked all three"
2"Her left thumb traced the"
3"He turned, the amber eye"
4"He smelled of rain, old"
5"His voice dropped an octave,"
6"Her spine hit the wood"
7"She tilted her chin up"
8"He closed the remaining distance,"
9"He stepped into her space,"
10"He placed one hand flat"
11"Her breath hitched."
12"she whispered, her voice losing"
13"His bare fingers reached out,"
14"His thumb caught the small"
15"His palm cupped the side"
16"His demon pulse thrummed against"
17"Her fingers clenched into the"
18"she said against his mouth"
ratio0.396
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount46
totalSentences48
matches
0"The third deadbolt clicked open"
1"Rory pulled the door back"
2"The scent of damp wool"
3"Lucien Moreau stood on the"
4"Rainwater dripped from the brim"
5"Rory stared through the gap"
6"Lucien shifted his weight, the"
7"Rory’s hand dropped from the"
8"She slid the brass slider"
9"Her fingers worked all three"
10"Ptolemy scampered out from beneath"
11"Rory muttered at the cat"
12"Lucien stripped off his damp"
13"Rory leaned back against the"
14"Her left thumb traced the"
15"Lucien set his cane against"
16"He turned, the amber eye"
17"Lucien took two steps across"
18"The flat was small enough"
19"He smelled of rain, old"
ratio0.958
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences48
matches(empty)
ratio0
93.60% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences29
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"He smelled of rain, old parchment, and the subtle, sulfurous heat that lived beneath his skin."
1"The anger sat heavy in her stomach, but under the anger lived the sharp, electric pull that had terrified her from the night they met in Silas's back room."
48.08% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags13
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"He stepped, his chest grazing the coarse wool of her sweater"
1"she whispered, her voice losing its edge, scraping raw on the truth"
74.53% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags5
fancyCount4
fancyTags
0"Rory muttered (mutter)"
1"Rory refused (refuse)"
2"she whispered (whisper)"
3"he murmured (murmur)"
dialogueSentences53
tagDensity0.094
leniency0.189
rawRatio0.8
effectiveRatio0.151
81.6657%