| 57.14% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 11 | | adverbTagCount | 2 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "She exhaled slowly [slowly]" | | 1 | "Nyx hissed back [back]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 28 | | tagDensity | 0.393 | | leniency | 0.786 | | rawRatio | 0.182 | | effectiveRatio | 0.143 | |
| 91.92% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1237 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 2 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 47.45% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1237 | | totalAiIsms | 13 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "chill" | | 1 | "shimmered" | | 2 | "pulsed" | | 3 | "rhythmic" | | 4 | "pulse" | | 5 | "tracing" | | 6 | "crystalline" | | 7 | "simmering" | | 8 | "churning" | | 9 | "scanning" | | 10 | "stomach" | | 11 | "weight" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 62 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 62 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 78 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 33 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1237 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 5 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 89.82% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 37 | | wordCount | 997 | | uniqueNames | 13 | | maxNameDensity | 1.2 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | Veil | 1 | | Carter | 1 | | Heartstone | 1 | | Pendant | 1 | | Fae-forged | 1 | | Aurora | 12 | | Isolde | 6 | | Shade | 2 | | Fae | 3 | | Cardiff | 1 | | London | 2 | | Himalayan | 1 | | Nyx | 5 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Carter" | | 1 | "Pendant" | | 2 | "Aurora" | | 3 | "Isolde" | | 4 | "Shade" | | 5 | "Nyx" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 0.898 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 65.25% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 59 | | glossingSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "pulps that seemed to breathe beneath the skin" | | 1 | "as if listening to voices carried in the steam vents" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1237 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 78 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 32 | | mean | 38.66 | | std | 22.17 | | cv | 0.574 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 15 | | 1 | 50 | | 2 | 28 | | 3 | 8 | | 4 | 30 | | 5 | 50 | | 6 | 71 | | 7 | 6 | | 8 | 34 | | 9 | 34 | | 10 | 30 | | 11 | 36 | | 12 | 88 | | 13 | 38 | | 14 | 41 | | 15 | 77 | | 16 | 18 | | 17 | 46 | | 18 | 4 | | 19 | 41 | | 20 | 15 | | 21 | 34 | | 22 | 77 | | 23 | 13 | | 24 | 35 | | 25 | 19 | | 26 | 42 | | 27 | 75 | | 28 | 38 | | 29 | 23 | | 30 | 73 | | 31 | 48 |
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| 99.60% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 62 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 162 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 0 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 0 | | totalSentences | 78 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 94.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1007 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "paper-thin, crystalline sugar." |
| | adverbCount | 17 | | adverbRatio | 0.016881827209533268 | | lyAdverbCount | 4 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.003972194637537239 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 78 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 78 | | mean | 15.86 | | std | 7.06 | | cv | 0.445 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 15 | | 1 | 13 | | 2 | 21 | | 3 | 16 | | 4 | 16 | | 5 | 12 | | 6 | 8 | | 7 | 18 | | 8 | 12 | | 9 | 14 | | 10 | 18 | | 11 | 11 | | 12 | 7 | | 13 | 15 | | 14 | 12 | | 15 | 26 | | 16 | 18 | | 17 | 6 | | 18 | 25 | | 19 | 9 | | 20 | 19 | | 21 | 15 | | 22 | 26 | | 23 | 4 | | 24 | 16 | | 25 | 20 | | 26 | 10 | | 27 | 5 | | 28 | 13 | | 29 | 20 | | 30 | 26 | | 31 | 14 | | 32 | 15 | | 33 | 21 | | 34 | 2 | | 35 | 30 | | 36 | 11 | | 37 | 10 | | 38 | 13 | | 39 | 13 | | 40 | 21 | | 41 | 20 | | 42 | 14 | | 43 | 4 | | 44 | 18 | | 45 | 28 | | 46 | 4 | | 47 | 27 | | 48 | 14 | | 49 | 9 |
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| 71.79% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 9 | | diversityRatio | 0.5 | | totalSentences | 78 | | uniqueOpeners | 39 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 62 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 12 | | totalSentences | 62 | | matches | | 0 | "It pulsed in rhythmic, heavy" | | 1 | "Her bare feet skimmed the" | | 2 | "She reached beneath her jacket," | | 3 | "Her bright blue eyes swept" | | 4 | "She crouched, touching the earth." | | 5 | "It hit Aurora like a" | | 6 | "Her stomach seized with an" | | 7 | "Her mouth flooded with saliva." | | 8 | "Her eyes darted instinctively to" | | 9 | "Her hand moved toward the" | | 10 | "She exhaled slowly through her" | | 11 | "They followed the half-Fae along" |
| | ratio | 0.194 | |
| 64.84% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 49 | | totalSentences | 62 | | matches | | 0 | "The rip in the Veil" | | 1 | "London’s damp chill vanished instantly," | | 2 | "Aurora Carter caught her balance" | | 3 | "The sky overhead stretched vast" | | 4 | "It pulsed in rhythmic, heavy" | | 5 | "Isolde drifted past the petrified" | | 6 | "Her bare feet skimmed the" | | 7 | "Aurora let go of the" | | 8 | "She reached beneath her jacket," | | 9 | "The moonsilver metal bit cold" | | 10 | "Her bright blue eyes swept" | | 11 | "The air hung heavy with" | | 12 | "Nyx poured forward from the" | | 13 | "Violet points of light flared" | | 14 | "Isolde murmured, her pale lavender" | | 15 | "Aurora stepped down a stone" | | 16 | "Isolde replied, tilting her head" | | 17 | "A low vibration rattled through" | | 18 | "She crouched, touching the earth." | | 19 | "The ground was warm, throbbing" |
| | ratio | 0.79 | |
| 100.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 62 | | matches | | 0 | "Even from this height, she" | | 1 | "To their left, the trees" |
| | ratio | 0.032 | |
| 59.80% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 43 | | technicalSentenceCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "Aurora Carter caught her balance against a pillar of calcified root, her boots crunching into dirt that shimmered like crushed garnet." | | 1 | "From their branches hung clusters of fruit the size of human skulls, translucent skins taut around swirling, golden pulps that seemed to breathe beneath the ski…" | | 2 | "Nyx drifted ahead, their form shifting between a towering biped and a flat shadow that rippled across the stone path." | | 3 | "The orchard was alive, watching, waiting for them to stumble, to yield to the ache in their throats, to take one bite of the heavy, dripping harvest that presse…" | | 4 | "Beyond it stood an archway of interlocking blackened ribs, framing the dark road that plunged deeper into the heart of the realm." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 11 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 78.57% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 6 | | fancyCount | 2 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Isolde murmured (murmur)" | | 1 | "Nyx hissed back (hiss)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 28 | | tagDensity | 0.214 | | leniency | 0.429 | | rawRatio | 0.333 | | effectiveRatio | 0.143 | |