Run: 2026-09-03-01M1KRYHP4MH0S15MP7SN6R9DM

Run Details

Duration:
15.4s
Cost:
$0.011901
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The rip in the Veil closed behind them with the wet snap of breaking marrow. London’s damp chill vanished instantly, devoured by a wave of thick, fevered heat. Aurora Carter caught her balance against a pillar of calcified root, her boots crunching into dirt that shimmered like crushed garnet. The sky overhead stretched vast and unbroken, a dome of bruised amber that cast no shadows. Against her sternum, beneath three layers of cotton and wool, the Heartstone Pendant surged with heat. It pulsed in rhythmic, heavy throbs, matching the hammer of her pulse. "Keep moving. The threshold does not welcome loiterers." Isolde drifted past the petrified barrows, her waist-length silver hair trailing on the still air like spun cobwebs. Her bare feet skimmed the crimson earth, leaving the scarlet dust undisturbed. Aurora let go of the root and rolled her shoulders, shaking off the vertigo. She reached beneath her jacket, her fingers finding the hilt of the Fae-forged blade sheathed at her hip. The moonsilver metal bit cold through the leather wrap, grounding her. Her bright blue eyes swept the landscape. Sprawling groves tumbled down terraced hillsides, choked with vegetation so vibrant it bordered on grotesque. Massive trees arched over their heads, their bark resembling dark, polished leather. From their branches hung clusters of fruit the size of human skulls, translucent skins taut around swirling, golden pulps that seemed to breathe beneath the skin. The air hung heavy with the scent of roasted figs, burnt sugar, and old wine turning to vinegar. "The air is grease and iron." Nyx poured forward from the shadow of a basalt boulder, their tall silhouette bleeding into the landscape before snapping back into a sharp, six-foot-two outline. Violet points of light flared where their eyes belonged. "Dymas," Isolde murmured, her pale lavender gaze drifting toward a distant horizon where golden spires pierced the amber canopy. "Where hunger wears a crown and the harvest never rots, only ripens until it screams." "It smells like a bakery caught in an engine fire." Aurora stepped down a stone terrace, her left hand tracing the crescent-shaped scar on her wrist. "Where are the roads?" "You walk upon them," Isolde replied, tilting her head toward the garnet soil beneath their boots. "The soil drinks what travelers shed. Give it no blood, Aurora, and give it no tears. It remembers every vintage." A low vibration rattled through the soles of Aurora's boots. She crouched, touching the earth. The ground was warm, throbbing in sync with the stone against her chest. Ten yards away, a thick vine curled out of a fissure, snaking around the stump of a felled pear tree. As they watched, a bud swelled along the vine, split open with a wet tearing sound, and blossomed into a flower made of paper-thin, crystalline sugar. A thick, dark syrup dripped from its stamen, hissing as it struck the stones. "Everything here grows too fast." Aurora drew the slender leaf-blade an inch from its scabbard. The silver steel gave off a sharp, pale gleam in the amber glare, pushing the cloying heat back a few inches. "It's suffocating." "The Prince of this garden does not practice restraint." Nyx glided toward the edge of an orchard row, their smoky form thinning as they passed between two massive, twisted trunks. "The roots dig into the lower circles. Look below the canopy." Aurora joined the Shade at the precipice of the terrace. Beneath them, the land fell away into a valley carved like an amphitheater. Hundreds of terraced vineyards descended toward a lake of dark, simmering violet broth. Long tables of white stone stretched across the lower banks, overgrown with wild, braided grapevines bearing berries as large as fists. Even from this height, she heard the low, rhythmic churning of machinery or millstones grinding somewhere beneath the basin floor. "Who tends all this?" Aurora asked, scanning the empty avenues between the swollen vines. "There are no workers." "Souls bound by appetite," Isolde said, pausing beside a stone sundial whose bronze gnomon was warped by heat. "Those who traded their final breaths for one more taste of the world. They cook in the palaces across the ridge, competing for scrapings from the Belphegor’s plate." "And if they lose?" "They become fertilizer for the autumn crop." Isolde’s fingers brushed the sundial, though she made no move to disturb the thick layer of pollen coating its face. "A fair exchange, by Dymasian measure. The mouth always collects what the belly owes." Aurora frowned, her jaw setting into a hard line. "We aren't here to become compost." "Then do not touch the fruit." Nyx’s voice was a rustle of dry leaves over slate. "Even the scent carries a hook. You are mortal, Aurora. Your blood remembers hunger better than our kind." A sudden gust of wind swept up from the valley floor, carrying with it the unmistakable aroma of fresh bread, spiced mutton, and caramelized honey. It hit Aurora like a physical blow. Her stomach seized with an immediate, hollow ache so sharp it made her teeth grind. Her mouth flooded with saliva. Her eyes darted instinctively to a low-hanging branch three feet to her left, where a cluster of dark, plum-like spheres glistened with clear, fragrant resin. Her hand moved toward the branch before her conscious mind could stop it. The cold edge of the moonsilver dagger pressed against her thumb. The bite of the cold metal snapped the spell. Aurora jerked her hand back, curling her fingers into a tight fist against her thigh. "Clever trick." She exhaled slowly through her nose, clearing the perfume from her lungs. "The air itself is bait." "The air is the appetizer," Isolde said, stepping lightly across a fissure in the rock where violet vapor rose in lazy spirals. "The banquet lies further along the ridge. Follow the scent of burnt salt. That is where the boundary thins again." They followed the half-Fae along a narrow path of petrified bone that cut through the center of the orchard. To their left, the trees grew denser, their boughs knitting together overhead to block out the amber sky, leaving them in a bronze twilight. Strange insects with bodies of polished bronze and wings like spun sugar hovered over the thick petals of nightshade-colored blossoms, their drone ringing at a pitch that set Aurora's molars on edge. Nyx drifted ahead, their form shifting between a towering biped and a flat shadow that rippled across the stone path. Every few paces, the Shade paused, head cocked as if listening to voices carried in the steam vents. "The gate wardens have not noticed our passage," Nyx hissed back to them. "The rift sealed clean. But the earth knows our weight." Aurora kept her right hand locked around the grip of the Fae blade, her thumb resting on the crossguard. Every instinct honed in the alleys of Cardiff and the backstreets of London screamed at her that the stillness was artificial. The orchard was alive, watching, waiting for them to stumble, to yield to the ache in their throats, to take one bite of the heavy, dripping harvest that pressed in on all sides. Up ahead, through a gap in the tangled canopy, the bone path opened onto a wide, circular courtyard flanked by statues carved from pink Himalayan salt. Beyond it stood an archway of interlocking blackened ribs, framing the dark road that plunged deeper into the heart of the realm.
created_at"2026-09-03T13:57:18.155Z" 9/3/2026, 1:57:18 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
57.14% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags11
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"She exhaled slowly [slowly]"
1"Nyx hissed back [back]"
dialogueSentences28
tagDensity0.393
leniency0.786
rawRatio0.182
effectiveRatio0.143
91.92% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1237
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count1
1
adverb"lightly"
count1
highlights
0"slowly"
1"lightly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
47.45% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1237
totalAiIsms13
found
0
word"chill"
count1
1
word"shimmered"
count1
2
word"pulsed"
count1
3
word"rhythmic"
count2
4
word"pulse"
count1
5
word"tracing"
count1
6
word"crystalline"
count1
7
word"simmering"
count1
8
word"churning"
count1
9
word"scanning"
count1
10
word"stomach"
count1
11
word"weight"
count1
highlights
0"chill"
1"shimmered"
2"pulsed"
3"rhythmic"
4"pulse"
5"tracing"
6"crystalline"
7"simmering"
8"churning"
9"scanning"
10"stomach"
11"weight"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences62
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences62
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences78
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen33
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1237
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions5
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
89.82% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions37
wordCount997
uniqueNames13
maxNameDensity1.2
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Veil1
Carter1
Heartstone1
Pendant1
Fae-forged1
Aurora12
Isolde6
Shade2
Fae3
Cardiff1
London2
Himalayan1
Nyx5
persons
0"Carter"
1"Pendant"
2"Aurora"
3"Isolde"
4"Shade"
5"Nyx"
places
0"Cardiff"
1"London"
globalScore0.898
windowScore1
65.25% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences59
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"pulps that seemed to breathe beneath the skin"
1"as if listening to voices carried in the steam vents"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1237
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences78
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs32
mean38.66
std22.17
cv0.574
sampleLengths
015
150
228
38
430
550
671
76
834
934
1030
1136
1288
1338
1441
1577
1618
1746
184
1941
2015
2134
2277
2313
2435
2519
2642
2775
2838
2923
3073
3148
99.60% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences62
matches
0"was warped"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs162
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences78
ratio0
matches(empty)
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1007
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"paper-thin, crystalline sugar."
adverbCount17
adverbRatio0.016881827209533268
lyAdverbCount4
lyAdverbRatio0.003972194637537239
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences78
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences78
mean15.86
std7.06
cv0.445
sampleLengths
015
113
221
316
416
512
68
718
812
914
1018
1111
127
1315
1412
1526
1618
176
1825
199
2019
2115
2226
234
2416
2520
2610
275
2813
2920
3026
3114
3215
3321
342
3530
3611
3710
3813
3913
4021
4120
4214
434
4418
4528
464
4727
4814
499
71.79% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats9
diversityRatio0.5
totalSentences78
uniqueOpeners39
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences62
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount12
totalSentences62
matches
0"It pulsed in rhythmic, heavy"
1"Her bare feet skimmed the"
2"She reached beneath her jacket,"
3"Her bright blue eyes swept"
4"She crouched, touching the earth."
5"It hit Aurora like a"
6"Her stomach seized with an"
7"Her mouth flooded with saliva."
8"Her eyes darted instinctively to"
9"Her hand moved toward the"
10"She exhaled slowly through her"
11"They followed the half-Fae along"
ratio0.194
64.84% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount49
totalSentences62
matches
0"The rip in the Veil"
1"London’s damp chill vanished instantly,"
2"Aurora Carter caught her balance"
3"The sky overhead stretched vast"
4"It pulsed in rhythmic, heavy"
5"Isolde drifted past the petrified"
6"Her bare feet skimmed the"
7"Aurora let go of the"
8"She reached beneath her jacket,"
9"The moonsilver metal bit cold"
10"Her bright blue eyes swept"
11"The air hung heavy with"
12"Nyx poured forward from the"
13"Violet points of light flared"
14"Isolde murmured, her pale lavender"
15"Aurora stepped down a stone"
16"Isolde replied, tilting her head"
17"A low vibration rattled through"
18"She crouched, touching the earth."
19"The ground was warm, throbbing"
ratio0.79
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount2
totalSentences62
matches
0"Even from this height, she"
1"To their left, the trees"
ratio0.032
59.80% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences43
technicalSentenceCount5
matches
0"Aurora Carter caught her balance against a pillar of calcified root, her boots crunching into dirt that shimmered like crushed garnet."
1"From their branches hung clusters of fruit the size of human skulls, translucent skins taut around swirling, golden pulps that seemed to breathe beneath the ski…"
2"Nyx drifted ahead, their form shifting between a towering biped and a flat shadow that rippled across the stone path."
3"The orchard was alive, watching, waiting for them to stumble, to yield to the ache in their throats, to take one bite of the heavy, dripping harvest that presse…"
4"Beyond it stood an archway of interlocking blackened ribs, framing the dark road that plunged deeper into the heart of the realm."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags11
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
78.57% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags6
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"Isolde murmured (murmur)"
1"Nyx hissed back (hiss)"
dialogueSentences28
tagDensity0.214
leniency0.429
rawRatio0.333
effectiveRatio0.143
87.3399%