Run: 2026-09-03-01M1KRZ2PFSXNHAB0FKX9DZKA4

Run Details

Duration:
1m
Cost:
$0.003915
Provider:
Phala

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The deadbolts were already a habit. Rory had learned to put them on in a particular order — top, middle, bottom — because Eva insisted it was unlucky to do it any other way, and because the third click had started to feel like a kind of prayer. The flat above the curry house on Brick Lane was narrow and warm with the smell of cumin from downstairs, every surface crowded with books, scrolls, and research notes stacked in leaning towers. Ptolemy was asleep on the only clear patch of the couch, a tabby with one ear tipped, purring against a pile of printouts about ward sigils. She heard the knock first. Three sharp raps, then a pause, then two more. Not a delivery. Not the landlord. Her hand was already on the top bolt before she checked the peephole. She didn’t need to. The man standing in the hallway wore a charcoal suit that looked tailored for someone who never sat down. Slicked-back platinum blond hair caught the orange light from the streetlamp. One eye amber, one black. He leaned lightly on an ivory-handled cane. Lucien Moreau. Rory’s fingers froze on the middle deadbolt. The flat was cramped, the door thin, and the hallway smelled of rain and fried onions. She could see the faint sheen of his shoes on the scuffed linoleum. “Rory,” he said, quietly, as if testing the name in the air. His accent was still Marseille-soft even when he spoke English. “I know you’re in there.” She unlocked the top bolt. Then the middle. She left the bottom for later. When she opened the door she kept it on the chain, the way Eva had taught her. “You can’t be here.” He smiled without warmth. “I can stand on your doorstep. That is not the same as being here.” Ptolemy chose that moment to wake, stretch, and stalk to the door with a displeased flick of his tail. Rory’s blue eyes flicked over him, cataloguing. The suit was new, or at least pressed. No coat, though the night was damp. The cane rested against his thigh. She knew what was inside it. “Do you need something?” she asked. “I need you,” he said. Then, because he was Lucien, he corrected himself. “I need information. You have it.” She didn’t move to unhook the chain. “Eva’s not here.” “I know. I called Silas. He said you weren’t above his bar tonight.” She felt the familiar prick of irritation behind her ribs. Of course he’d called Silas. Silas owed him favors. Everyone in the supernatural underworld owed him favors. “Why are you looking for me?” He shifted his weight. The cane tapped once against the floor. “The ward you put on the Golden Empress last month. It’s failing. Yu-Fei hasn’t said anything yet because he doesn’t want panic, but the bleed-through is getting worse.” Rory’s jaw tightened. “I didn’t put a ward on the Golden Empress.” “You drew the preliminary sigils for me.” That was true. Six months ago, before everything. She’d been working part-time deliveries for Yu-Fei Cheung, running noodles and chow mein through the rain in a too-big uniform, and she’d been grateful for the extra cash. Lucien had come to her with a problem — a nest, he’d said, under the basement kitchen. He’d wanted something subtle, something that wouldn’t scare the human staff. She’d done the research at Eva’s kitchen table, surrounded by scrolls, and sketched a containment lattice that was clever enough to be elegant. He’d paid her in information and a kiss she hadn’t asked for and hadn’t stopped. And then she’d found out what he’d used it for. She’d told him to get out of her life. He’d said she didn’t understand the stakes. She’d said she didn’t want to. The scar on her left wrist, the small crescent from a childhood accident in Cardiff, caught the light as she flexed her fingers against the doorframe. “You used it to trap them,” she said flatly. “Not contain.” “I used it to keep them from killing anyone,” he said. “There’s a difference.” “There’s a difference to you.” He looked tired in a way she hadn’t seen before. The amber eye was darker tonight. “The sigils are unraveling because you didn’t anchor them properly. You were angry when you finished.” “I was angry because you lied to me.” The hallway was too small for this conversation. She could hear the curry house downstairs, the clatter of plates. Ptolemy brushed against her ankle, demanding attention. “Unlock the door, Rory,” Lucien said softly. “Please.” She didn’t. She never did with him. “If you want the wards fixed, hire someone else.” “I can’t.” His voice dropped. “No one else will touch it. They know you did the work. They know you’re the only one who understands the pattern you built into it.” She thought about the notes scattered across the table in the living room. About the way Eva had started leaving her tea in the same chipped mug. About the flat above Silas’ bar, where she kept her own things, where she’d gone back to after she left Evan, where she tried to keep her life small and manageable. She thought about how Lucien had been the first person in London who hadn’t looked at her like she was fragile after she left him. He’d been cool and precise and dangerous and kind in a way that made her stupid. “You left,” she said. “I left because you were going to get killed,” he said. “I told you to walk away from the Avaros debt collection. You didn’t listen. You went to that warehouse in Wapping and you—” “I got out,” she said. “Because you warned me.” “Because I pulled you out.” They stared at each other through the crack in the door. The attraction was still there, an ache she didn’t want to name. The hurt was there too, sharper. “Why now?” she asked. He hesitated. “The bleed is getting worse. Yu-Fei’s staff are seeing things. One of the line cooks fainted last week. If it breaks, it won’t just be the restaurant. It will be the whole street.” “And you’re telling me because…?” “Because I need you to fix it.” His fingers tightened around the ivory handle of his cane. “And because I’m tired of standing on doorsteps.” Rory looked past him down the hall. No one was watching. She unhooked the chain and, with a steady hand, turned the bottom deadbolt. The door swung open a few inches more. “Five minutes,” she said. “You can tell me what’s changed. Then you can leave.” He stepped inside without waiting for an invitation, ducking his head under the doorframe. The flat smelled of old paper and cat and the faint citrus of her shampoo. He looked immediately at the towers of books, at the scrolls weighted down with mugs. “You’re living with Eva,” he said. “I’m staying while I sort things out.” He glanced at the couch, at Ptolemy who had decided Lucien was an intruder and was now regarding him with flat green eyes. “She’s good for you.” “She worries too much,” Rory said, stepping back to let him in fully but not inviting him to sit. “It’s why I keep my own place above Silas.” “I know.” She closed the door and shot all three deadbolts again. The click was familiar, final. Lucien didn’t sit. He remained standing in the middle of the cramped room, hands in his pockets, suit immaculate despite the rain. “Tell me,” she said. He told her. About the tremors in the cellar, about the sigil lines blurring, about the debt collector he’d promised to keep out of the restaurant and the fact that his own father’s people were getting restless. He spoke in French once when he was frustrated, then caught himself and switched back to English. Rory listened, cool-headed as always, cataloguing inconsistencies, seeing the pattern he wasn’t saying out loud. When he finished, she was already at the table, pulling a notebook from under a stack of journals. “You didn’t anchor it to the building’s ley line,” she said, not looking up. “You asked me to anchor it to the kitchen’s copper pipes. That was a mistake.” “It was the only anchor you gave me.” “I gave you a design. You implemented it.” She uncapped a pen. “It’s going to need a counter-glyph, placed at the east wall behind the wok station. And you’ll need salt from the old market, not the supermarket kind. And you’ll need to be there when I do it, because if something comes through, you’re the only one who can close it.” He was quiet for a long moment. “I can’t ask you to—” “You’re not asking,” she said. “You’re telling me the restaurant is going to burn because you didn’t do the job right. So I’m fixing it.” The anger in her voice was precise, controlled. The hurt underneath it was not. Lucien stepped closer. He stopped a careful foot away, as if respecting an invisible line. “Rory—” “Don’t.” She finally looked up. Her eyes were bright blue, tired. “If you’re here because you want to apologize, you can save it. If you’re here because you need me, then let’s get to work.” He studied her face the way he studied everything — with an information broker’s patience. “Both,” he said finally. “I’m tired of needing you from a distance.” Ptolemy jumped down from the couch and walked between them, tail high. Rory’s fingers brushed the crescent scar on her wrist, a reflexive gesture she’d had since childhood. She didn’t step back. “Then you should have come sooner,” she said. He smiled, small and real this time. “I’m here now.” She pushed the notebook toward him. “You’ll have to write this down. My handwriting’s terrible.” He took the pen from her hand. Their fingers brushed. Neither of them moved away. Outside, Brick Lane hummed. Inside, the books leaned and the cat watched and two people who had parted on complicated terms stood in a doorway that was finally, after all this time, open.
created_at"2026-09-03T13:57:35.575Z" 9/3/2026, 1:57:35 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
68.85% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags21
adverbTagCount4
adverbTags
0"she said flatly [flatly]"
1"Lucien said softly [softly]"
2"His fingers tightened around [around]"
3"he said finally [finally]"
dialogueSentences61
tagDensity0.344
leniency0.689
rawRatio0.19
effectiveRatio0.131
94.05% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1681
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"lightly"
count1
1
adverb"softly"
count1
highlights
0"lightly"
1"softly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
82.15% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1681
totalAiIsms6
found
0
word"warmth"
count1
1
word"flicked"
count1
2
word"familiar"
count2
3
word"weight"
count1
4
word"unraveling"
count1
highlights
0"warmth"
1"flicked"
2"familiar"
3"weight"
4"unraveling"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences123
matches
0"was frustrated"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences123
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"started to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences162
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen51
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1685
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions37
unquotedAttributions1
matches
0"Then, because he was Lucien, he corrected himself."
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions40
wordCount1148
uniqueNames15
maxNameDensity0.7
worstName"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Eva4
Brick2
Lane2
Moreau1
Marseille-soft1
English2
Lucien8
Silas2
Yu-Fei1
Cheung1
Cardiff1
London1
Rory8
Ptolemy5
French1
persons
0"Eva"
1"Moreau"
2"Lucien"
3"Silas"
4"Yu-Fei"
5"Cheung"
6"Rory"
7"Ptolemy"
places
0"Brick"
1"Lane"
2"English"
3"Cardiff"
4"London"
5"French"
globalScore1
windowScore1
84.21% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences76
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"as if testing the name in the air"
1"as if respecting an invisible line"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1685
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences162
matches
0"chose that moment"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs75
mean22.47
std19.58
cv0.872
sampleLengths
06
1101
233
34
442
52
636
727
814
921
1018
1119
1234
136
1419
1510
1613
1727
186
1939
2012
217
22102
2310
2422
2526
2611
2714
285
2932
308
3126
328
3316
3431
3583
3616
374
3834
399
405
4129
424
4335
445
4525
4632
4714
4844
496
99.56% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences123
matches
0"was cramped"
1"was frustrated"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount3
totalVerbs213
matches
0"was watching"
1"were getting"
2"wasn’t saying"
89.95% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount4
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences3
totalSentences162
ratio0.019
matches
0"Rory had learned to put them on in a particular order — top, middle, bottom — because Eva insisted it was unlucky to do it any other way, and because the third click had started to feel like a kind of prayer."
1"Lucien had come to her with a problem — a nest, he’d said, under the basement kitchen."
2"He studied her face the way he studied everything — with an information broker’s patience."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount896
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount32
adverbRatio0.03571428571428571
lyAdverbCount7
lyAdverbRatio0.0078125
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences162
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences162
mean10.4
std8.23
cv0.791
sampleLengths
06
142
233
326
45
59
63
73
813
94
1019
1111
125
137
142
157
1616
1713
1812
1910
205
215
223
236
2417
254
264
2714
2819
297
308
317
326
336
346
355
368
376
387
393
4013
4110
425
434
448
456
464
477
4828
493
41.36% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats14
diversityRatio0.25925925925925924
totalSentences162
uniqueOpeners42
92.59% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences108
matches
0"Then the middle."
1"Then, because he was Lucien,"
2"Of course he’d called Silas."
ratio0.028
27.41% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount52
totalSentences108
matches
0"She heard the knock first."
1"Her hand was already on"
2"She didn’t need to."
3"He leaned lightly on an"
4"She could see the faint"
5"he said, quietly, as if"
6"His accent was still Marseille-soft"
7"She unlocked the top bolt."
8"She left the bottom for"
9"He smiled without warmth."
10"She knew what was inside"
11"She didn’t move to unhook"
12"She felt the familiar prick"
13"He shifted his weight."
14"She’d been working part-time deliveries"
15"He’d wanted something subtle, something"
16"She’d done the research at"
17"He’d paid her in information"
18"She’d told him to get"
19"He’d said she didn’t understand"
ratio0.481
47.96% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount89
totalSentences108
matches
0"The deadbolts were already a"
1"Rory had learned to put"
2"The flat above the curry"
3"Ptolemy was asleep on the"
4"She heard the knock first."
5"Her hand was already on"
6"She didn’t need to."
7"The man standing in the"
8"He leaned lightly on an"
9"Rory’s fingers froze on the"
10"The flat was cramped, the"
11"She could see the faint"
12"he said, quietly, as if"
13"His accent was still Marseille-soft"
14"She unlocked the top bolt."
15"She left the bottom for"
16"He smiled without warmth."
17"Ptolemy chose that moment to"
18"Rory’s blue eyes flicked over"
19"The suit was new, or"
ratio0.824
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences108
matches(empty)
ratio0
59.80% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences43
technicalSentenceCount5
matches
0"He’d wanted something subtle, something that wouldn’t scare the human staff."
1"She’d done the research at Eva’s kitchen table, surrounded by scrolls, and sketched a containment lattice that was clever enough to be elegant."
2"He’d been cool and precise and dangerous and kind in a way that made her stupid."
3"He stopped a careful foot away, as if respecting an invisible line."
4"Inside, the books leaned and the cat watched and two people who had parted on complicated terms stood in a doorway that was finally, after all this time, open."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags21
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"she said, not looking up"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags18
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences61
tagDensity0.295
leniency0.59
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
86.2631%