Run: 2026-09-03-01M1KS08J7X41X07HV25X4EQCP

Run Details

Duration:
19.3s
Cost:
$0.012891
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Damp subway air carried the stench of stagnant drainage, ozone, and old grease. Harlow Quinn ducked beneath the striped tape strung across the gated entrance of the abandoned Camden branch line, her boots crunching over decades of accumulated grit. Forensics had rigged two halogen stands on the platform edge, slicing the gloom with harsh white glare. Harlow checked her worn leather watch. Two in the morning. She rolled her shoulders back, settling into the posture drilled into her over eighteen years on the force, and stepped toward the track bed where the body lay. Detective Constable Vance stood by the battery pack, blowing steam off a paper cup of station coffee. "Transit team found him during a line survey," Vance gestured with his cup toward the rails. "Standard squatter dispute. Junkies fight over these dry alcoves all winter. Looks like someone swung a lead pipe into his chest, took his wallet, and bolted up the ventilation shaft." Harlow dropped into a crouch beside the corpse. The dead man wore a tailored charcoal wool overcoat, scuffed at the hem but clearly expensive. Beneath the coat, a silk collar showed no signs of frayed threads. "Look at the fabric, Vance." Vance stepped closer, his boots kicking gravel into the pit. "Stolen gear. Half the street kids in Camden wear designer coats they lifted from boutique dumpsters." Harlow pulled on a pair of nitrile gloves. "Stolen coats don't come custom-tailored to a man with a curvature in his right shoulder." She ran two fingers over the man’s lapel, then pushed back the heavy wool. The victim's ribs had caved inward, flattening the sternum beneath an unbroken silk waistcoat. Not a single drop of blood stained the shirtfront, yet the ceramic subway tiles three feet behind his skull were pulverized into fine white powder. The fracture lines in the masonry didn't spread randomly. They radiated outward in eight precise, symmetrical spokes, like spokes on a cartwheel. "Where is the blunt weapon that shatters bone beneath silk without snagging a single thread?" Vance shifted his weight, the soles of his shoes squeaking against the wet concrete. "A padded sandbag. Dock brawlers use them to avoid leaving skin lacerations. Force transfers through the cloth and pulverizes the chest cavity." "A sandbag produces blunt distribution across a broad surface area," Harlow traced the spoke pattern in the tiles behind the man's head with a gloved fingertip. "This impact focused into a point no wider than a coin, then drove his body backward with enough kinetic force to blast through century-old glazed brick. A sandbag ruptures internal organs; it doesn't leave frost on ceramic." Vance frowned, leaning down. "That isn't frost. It's mold from the moisture down here." Harlow touched the white rim of the shattered tile, then rubbed her gloved thumb and forefinger together. A crisp crackle sounded between her digits. The white substance vanished into clear moisture, dropping the ambient temperature around her hand by several degrees. Her jaw tightened. Her pulse ticked against her collar. The sensation brought an immediate, sharp recall: an alley off Blackfriars three years back, the smell of copper and unseasonable ice, and DS Morris staring into the dark with vacant eyes. She stood up, scanning the perimeter of the halogen light. "Who else was in the tunnel when the transit workers arrived?" Vance reached into his notebook pocket. "Just a girl caught snooping around the junction alcove fifty yards north. Said she was an architecture student charting Victorian brickwork. Uniforms have her cuffed up on the stairs." Harlow stepped over the third rail, following the line of pulverized ballast. The gravel between the sleepers had been scorched black in a three-foot arc, turning the granite chips into brittle glass beads. Half-buried in the soot lay an object no larger than a pocket watch. She knelt, using a steel pen from her breast pocket to lever the item out of the blackened gravel. It was a small brass casing, coated in a thick green patina of verdigris. Complex geometric figures were etched into the rim, framing a crystal cover. Inside, a silver needle spun erratic circles, refusing to settle on magnetic north. Every three seconds, the needle jerked toward the blank brick wall sealing off the eastern service tunnel, vibrating with enough force to click against the casing wall. Harlow bagged the device. "Bring the student down here." Vance hesitated, looking between the bagged brass instrument and the corpse on the tracks. "Quinn, that's just some steam-fair trinket dropped by the vagrants. We need the coroner to bag the victim before the morning trains start vibrating the tunnel roof." "Get her down here, Vance. Now." Footsteps scraped on the metal staircase leading from the street hatch. A uniform constable guided a young woman down into the light. She wore an oversized wool cardigan and round glasses perched on a freckled nose. Her curly red hair spilled out from under a knit cap, and her hands remained cuffed behind her back, though she held her chin high. A heavy, worn leather satchel hung awkwardly from her left shoulder, clinking with the weight of bound paper. Harlow approached the bottom of the stairs. "Remove the restraints." The constable blinked. "Detective, she was inside a restricted perimeter without—" "I said take them off." The locks clicked open. The girl rubbed her wrists, immediately using her fingers to tuck a loose curl of red hair behind her left ear. "Thank you," the girl adjusted her round glasses with an unsteady hand. "Your junior officers possess an alarming lack of curiosity regarding ancient tunnel right-of-ways." Harlow fixed her brown eyes on the girl. "Eva Kowalski. Research assistant at the British Museum. Special collections." Eva froze, her hand pausing mid-tuck near her ear. "You know my supervisor?" "I know your badge scan logged you out of the Great Russell Street archive at midnight," Harlow held up the evidence bag containing the brass compass. "And I know an architecture student doesn't carry three pounds of sixteenth-century grimoire translations into a decommissioned Tube shaft." Eva’s green eyes locked onto the green-crusted brass compass inside the plastic sleeve. The color drained from her cheeks. "Where did you pick that up?" Harlow pointed her pen toward the corpse beneath the halogen lamps. "Beside the man whose chest was caved in by something that didn't tear his clothes." Eva took two involuntary steps toward the tracks before Vance stepped between them, his arm barred across his chest. "Keep your distance from the crime scene, miss." Eva ignored Vance entirely, peering past his shoulder at the pulverized octagonal pattern on the wall tiles. "The impact didn't come from a blunt instrument swung by a man," Eva spoke in a tight, rapid clip. "The displacement is radial. It came from an alchemical discharge—an ignition barrier triggered at point-blank range." Vance let out a dry, dismissive snort. "Alchemical? Right. We've got a comedian from Oxford. Detective, let's get her back to the station." Harlow did not look at Vance. She stepped to the corpse, pulled a pair of steel tweezers from her kit, and pried open the dead man’s clenched left hand. Pressed flat against the dead palm was a sliver of polished animal bone, triangular, scored with three deep notches along the hypotenuse. Harlow held the bone fragment up into the halogen beam. "Explain this, Vance. Which Camden street gang trades in carved ox bone?" Vance stared at the white token, his jaw working silently for a moment before he shook his head. "It's trash. Flotsam from the canal drain above." "It's a market pass," Eva murmured, her eyes wide behind her round spectacles as she leaned toward the light. "The entrance was supposed to be sealed until the full moon. If someone forced the gate early, the discharge would have collapsed the junction." Harlow watched the compass needle through the clear evidence bag. It had stopped spinning. The tip pointed directly at the solid brick bulkhead fifty yards down the dark line, trembling with a continuous, low-frequency hum that vibrated the plastic against Harlow's palm. "Vance," Harlow slipped the evidence into her trench coat pocket. "Clear the platform. Tell the forensic unit to hold their perimeter at the street gate." "Quinn, standard procedure dictates—" "Clear the tunnel," Harlow stepped off the edge of the platform onto the damp tracks, her eyes fixed on the dark wall ahead. "I know what happened to Morris."
created_at"2026-09-03T13:58:14.353Z" 9/3/2026, 1:58:14 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags8
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences39
tagDensity0.205
leniency0.41
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1401
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
35.76% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1401
totalAiIsms18
found
0
word"gloom"
count1
1
word"standard"
count2
2
word"silk"
count3
3
word"weight"
count2
4
word"traced"
count1
5
word"shattered"
count1
6
word"pulse"
count1
7
word"scanning"
count1
8
word"complex"
count1
9
word"etched"
count1
10
word"crystal"
count1
11
word"magnetic"
count1
12
word"footsteps"
count1
13
word"vibrated"
count1
highlights
0"gloom"
1"standard"
2"silk"
3"weight"
4"traced"
5"shattered"
6"pulse"
7"scanning"
8"complex"
9"etched"
10"crystal"
11"magnetic"
12"footsteps"
13"vibrated"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences70
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount2
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences70
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences101
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen38
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1400
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions4
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
52.60% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions41
wordCount924
uniqueNames8
maxNameDensity1.95
worstName"Harlow"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Harlow"
discoveredNames
Quinn1
Camden1
Constable1
Vance12
Harlow18
Blackfriars1
Morris1
Eva6
persons
0"Quinn"
1"Constable"
2"Vance"
3"Harlow"
4"Morris"
5"Eva"
places(empty)
globalScore0.526
windowScore0.667
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences63
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1400
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences101
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs65
mean21.54
std18.23
cv0.846
sampleLengths
056
138
217
346
436
55
610
716
88
915
1075
1115
1214
1322
1463
154
1610
1741
1840
1910
2011
216
2229
2346
2419
2566
264
275
2814
2927
306
3179
327
333
343
358
365
3725
3825
398
4010
419
424
4345
4419
456
4611
4715
4819
498
90.23% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount3
totalSentences70
matches
0"were pulverized"
1"been scorched"
2"were etched"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs144
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences1
totalSentences101
ratio0.01
matches
0"\"This impact focused into a point no wider than a coin, then drove his body backward with enough kinetic force to blast through century-old glazed brick. A sandbag ruptures internal organs; it doesn't leave frost on ceramic.\""
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount929
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount12
adverbRatio0.012917115177610334
lyAdverbCount8
lyAdverbRatio0.008611410118406888
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences101
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences101
mean13.86
std7.59
cv0.548
sampleLengths
013
126
217
36
44
528
617
716
830
98
1016
1112
125
1310
1416
158
1615
1714
1814
1925
209
2113
2215
2314
2422
2526
2637
274
2810
2917
307
3117
323
336
3431
3510
3611
376
3829
3912
4021
4113
4219
4314
4412
4513
4627
474
485
4914
66.67% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats6
diversityRatio0.43564356435643564
totalSentences101
uniqueOpeners44
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences70
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount12
totalSentences70
matches
0"She rolled her shoulders back,"
1"She ran two fingers over"
2"They radiated outward in eight"
3"Her jaw tightened."
4"Her pulse ticked against her"
5"She stood up, scanning the"
6"She knelt, using a steel"
7"It was a small brass"
8"She wore an oversized wool"
9"Her curly red hair spilled"
10"She stepped to the corpse,"
11"It had stopped spinning."
ratio0.171
10.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount63
totalSentences70
matches
0"Harlow Quinn ducked beneath the"
1"Forensics had rigged two halogen"
2"Harlow checked her worn leather"
3"She rolled her shoulders back,"
4"Detective Constable Vance stood by"
5"Vance gestured with his cup"
6"Harlow dropped into a crouch"
7"The dead man wore a"
8"Vance stepped closer, his boots"
9"Harlow pulled on a pair"
10"She ran two fingers over"
11"The victim's ribs had caved"
12"The fracture lines in the"
13"They radiated outward in eight"
14"Vance shifted his weight, the"
15"Harlow traced the spoke pattern"
16"Vance frowned, leaning down."
17"Harlow touched the white rim"
18"A crisp crackle sounded between"
19"The white substance vanished into"
ratio0.9
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences70
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences43
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"The tip pointed directly at the solid brick bulkhead fifty yards down the dark line, trembling with a continuous, low-frequency hum that vibrated the plastic ag…"
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags8
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
98.72% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags2
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"Eva spoke (speak)"
1"Eva murmured (murmur)"
dialogueSentences39
tagDensity0.051
leniency0.103
rawRatio1
effectiveRatio0.103
85.1323%