Run: 2026-09-03-01M1KS0K030XKRX0SAT010WVFJ

Run Details

Duration:
24.0s
Cost:
$0.003928
Provider:
DeepInfra

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The stairwell stank of wet concrete and old oil. Harlow Quinn kept her hand low on the grip of her torch and let the beam cut ahead of her down the service steps behind Camden Town. The worn leather watch on her left wrist caught the light once and then lost it again. She counted twelve steps, then a metal door, then the smell changed. She pushed the door with her shoulder and stepped into the abandoned Tube platform. The Veil Market had taken the bones of the station and dressed them. Stalls of hammered tin and black cloth lined the disused tracks. Venders moved between tables with bone tokens swinging on cords at their throats. The air thrummed low, a vibration that sat behind her teeth. A full moon schedule, the briefings said. The Market moved every full moon. It had moved here. A constable in a hi-vis held the cordon at the mouth of the old ticket hall. He snapped a salute she did not return. “You’re late, Detective.” She did not look up from the body. The body lay on the platform edge where the yellow line used to be. A man in his thirties, coat too heavy for the damp, face down in a shallow pool of water that had seeped through the cracked tiles. No blood on the platform. No blood on his clothes. The water around him was clear. Quinn crouched, kept her knees straight, and scanned. The brass case of a Veil Compass lay three inches from his right hand. Verdigris patina on the casing. Protective sigils etched on the face. The needle pointed up, useless, toward the ceiling. She lifted her gloved fingers and touched the back of his neck. Cool. Rigor had set. “Time of death approximately four hours,” she said. “Five,” the constable said. She straightened. “Four.” Eva Kowalski stood a few metres back by a stall of books tied with string. Curly red hair pulled half back, round glasses slipping down her nose. She tucked hair behind her left ear and did not step forward. The worn leather satchel full of books sagged against her hip. “You called me down here,” Eva said. “I called the Met. You followed.” Eva lifted the satchel and shifted it. “You sent a text to my private number at 02:14. You said you found something you couldn’t explain.” Quinn studied the platform. Footprints. Too many. A line of small, precise prints in the damp leading from the stairs to the body and back again. No drag marks. No struggle. “Who found him?” “Market runner,” the constable said. “Says he was just lying there when the shift changed.” Quinn walked the line of prints. She stopped at a stall where a glass jar of teeth sat on a cloth. The vendor watched her with flat eyes. “Did you see anyone?” The vendor said nothing. Eva moved in, quiet. “He didn’t die here.” Quinn looked at her. “Water,” Eva said. “Look at the water.” The pool around the body was shallow, clear. The tiles around it were dry. A thin film of condensation rose off the surface and caught the torchlight. “There’s no spatter,” Quinn said. “No spatter. No blood. No defensive wounds.” Quinn pulled on latex and turned the body. The man’s face was pale, unmarked. His throat showed a faint ring of bruising, purple at the edges, already fading. No cut. No puncture. His coat was buttoned. Pockets empty except for a bone token on a cord, white and smooth. “You think he was taken?” the constable said. “I think he was placed,” Quinn said. Eva crouched on the opposite side of the body, careful not to touch. She lifted her glasses and cleaned them on her sleeve. “The Veil Compass points to rifts. It doesn’t point up unless it’s confused. Or unless the rift is above us.” Quinn followed the needle with her eyes. Up toward the ceiling. The ceiling was a lattice of old pipes and blackened girders. “The Market doesn’t allow compasses on the floor,” Quinn said. “They’re sold, not used here. The stall owners confiscate them.” “He was carrying one,” Eva said. “He was holding it.” Quinn knelt again and studied the man’s hands. Fingers relaxed. No grip marks on the brass. The compass lay palm side up, as if set down. She stood and paced the three metres to the edge of the platform. The drop to the tracks was low. The rails were wet. No footprints on the rails. “Where’s the access?” The constable pointed down the tunnel. “Only this stairwell. The Market seals the other entrances when it sets up.” Quinn stared at the sealed archway at the far end of the platform. Plastic sheeting, cable ties, a sign in chalk. Eva walked to the body and tapped the water with a fingertip. The surface broke and reformed. “The water is cold. The platform is cold. But his skin isn’t cold enough for four hours in this air.” Quinn pulled her torch lower. The beam caught the edge of the pool and showed a faint distortion, like heat shimmer over cold stone. She leaned in. The water did not reflect the torch. She stood abruptly. “There’s no reflection.” Eva’s freckled complexion paled. “Because it’s not water.” Quinn pulled a pen from her pocket and touched the surface. The pen tip sank in and met resistance, a soft give. The liquid clung to the plastic in beads that refused to run. She lifted the pen and watched the beads roll and stay. “It’s oil,” the constable said. “It’s not oil,” Quinn said. She turned back to the man. The bruising on his throat formed a perfect circle, four fingers wide. No ligature marks. “The Market sells alchemical substances,” Eva said. “Banned things. They sell a mimic fluid that holds shape. It’s used to clean up after… things.” Quinn looked at the prints again. The small precise prints led to the body, stopped, then returned along the same line. The same person had walked out and back. “One person moved him,” she said. She followed the prints to the stall where the teeth jar sat. The floor there was dry. A single print ended at the base of the stall. The vendor’s shoes were bare. She stepped closer. The vendor stood motionless. On the table beside the teeth, a brass compass identical to the one by the body sat in a small velvet tray. Its needle pointed up. The vendor’s eyes flicked to the bone token around his own throat. White. Smooth. Fresh. Quinn’s jaw tightened. She lifted her torch and swept it across the platform, slow, deliberate. The stalls, the cloths, the figures in shadow. The Market breathed around them. Eva tucked hair behind her left ear again. “You asked me here because you don’t trust the scene.” “I don’t trust the story.” “The runner said he was just lying there,” Eva said. “Runners don’t lie. They disappear.” Quinn crouched by the body again and pressed two fingers to the man’s eyelid. It stayed up. She pulled her phone and took a photo of the compass, the water, the prints. She took a photo of the ceiling. “The needle points up,” she said. “Because the rift is up,” Eva said. Quinn looked up. The girders. The pipes. The dark space above the platform where the old ventilation shaft had been sealed decades ago with steel plates. One of the plates was ajar, a thin line of black between metal and concrete. She stood. The watch on her left wrist caught the light. “Who was he?” The constable checked his notes. “Unknown. No ID. No wallet. The Market doesn’t use real names.” Quinn walked to the edge of the pool and knelt. She pushed the water with the tip of her pen. The surface moved, and beneath it, for a fraction of a second, she saw the outline of a stone floor. Not tiles. Stone. She pressed harder. The mimic fluid gave, and the shape beneath shifted. Eva knelt beside her. “The rift isn’t above us. It’s under us. The compass points up because it’s trying to point through.” Quinn stared at the man’s throat. The bruise was a handprint. Four fingers. The thumb was missing from the print. She stood and looked at the vendor. The vendor’s hands were gloved. Four fingers on each glove. The thumb was sewn in. The prints on the platform matched the vendor’s bare feet. Quinn turned to the constable. “Clear the cordon. No one steps on the platform edge.” “You think he fell?” “I think he was set down.” Eva lifted the satchel and pulled a thin notebook from the top. She flipped pages with quick fingers. “Shade artisans craft the compass. They don’t craft for humans. They craft for things that move between.” Quinn studied the compass by the body. The sigils on the face were worn smooth where a thumb would rest. A thumb that was not there. The Market hummed. Vendors moved. The body lay in the false water that did not reflect. The needle pointed up at a ceiling that was not the ceiling. Quinn’s eyes went to the ajar steel plate above. Then back to the pool. Then to the man’s throat. She saw the pattern.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags17
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences46
tagDensity0.37
leniency0.739
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1550
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
83.87% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1550
totalAiIsms5
found
0
word"scanned"
count1
1
word"etched"
count1
2
word"perfect"
count1
3
word"velvet"
count1
4
word"flicked"
count1
highlights
0"scanned"
1"etched"
2"perfect"
3"velvet"
4"flicked"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences167
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences167
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences196
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen27
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1550
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions22
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
33.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions50
wordCount1236
uniqueNames9
maxNameDensity1.94
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity4
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Quinn24
Camden1
Town1
Tube1
Veil2
Market4
Compass1
Kowalski1
Eva15
persons
0"Quinn"
1"Market"
2"Compass"
3"Kowalski"
4"Eva"
places
0"Camden"
1"Town"
globalScore0.529
windowScore0.333
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences91
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1550
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences196
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs84
mean18.45
std14.81
cv0.803
sampleLengths
065
114
265
324
43
58
656
741
816
98
104
113
1250
137
146
1525
1631
173
1815
1928
204
214
228
234
247
2527
265
277
2849
298
307
3143
3222
3320
346
354
3626
3729
383
3919
4021
4137
4227
437
446
458
4634
4711
485
495
96.86% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount4
totalSentences167
matches
0"was buttoned"
1"been sealed"
2"were gloved"
3"was sewn"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs203
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences196
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1237
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount20
adverbRatio0.016168148746968473
lyAdverbCount2
lyAdverbRatio0.0016168148746968471
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences196
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences196
mean7.91
std5.04
cv0.637
sampleLengths
09
127
217
312
414
513
611
713
811
97
106
114
1216
138
143
158
1614
1726
185
195
206
218
2214
235
246
258
2612
271
283
298
304
312
321
3315
3412
3512
3611
377
386
397
4018
414
421
432
4419
453
462
473
485
4910
40.31% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats19
diversityRatio0.2755102040816326
totalSentences196
uniqueOpeners54
49.02% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences136
matches
0"Then back to the pool."
1"Then to the man’s throat."
ratio0.015
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount28
totalSentences136
matches
0"She counted twelve steps, then"
1"She pushed the door with"
2"It had moved here."
3"He snapped a salute she"
4"She did not look up"
5"She lifted her gloved fingers"
6"She tucked hair behind her"
7"She stopped at a stall"
8"His throat showed a faint"
9"His coat was buttoned."
10"She lifted her glasses and"
11"She stood and paced the"
12"She leaned in."
13"She stood abruptly."
14"She lifted the pen and"
15"She turned back to the"
16"She followed the prints to"
17"She stepped closer."
18"Its needle pointed up."
19"She lifted her torch and"
ratio0.206
11.47% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount122
totalSentences136
matches
0"The stairwell stank of wet"
1"Harlow Quinn kept her hand"
2"The worn leather watch on"
3"She counted twelve steps, then"
4"She pushed the door with"
5"The Veil Market had taken"
6"Stalls of hammered tin and"
7"Venders moved between tables with"
8"The air thrummed low, a"
9"A full moon schedule, the"
10"The Market moved every full"
11"It had moved here."
12"A constable in a hi-vis"
13"He snapped a salute she"
14"She did not look up"
15"The body lay on the"
16"A man in his thirties,"
17"The water around him was"
18"Quinn crouched, kept her knees"
19"The brass case of a"
ratio0.897
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences136
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences53
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"A man in his thirties, coat too heavy for the damp, face down in a shallow pool of water that had seeped through the cracked tiles."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags17
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags17
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences46
tagDensity0.37
leniency0.739
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
87.1620%