Run: 2026-09-03-01M1KS24XZEWCMPN194FCK08N9

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Duration:
20.0s
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$0.015205
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Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The air forty feet beneath Camden smelled of wet slate, ancient brake dust, and something sharply out of season, like bruised mint crushed over iron. Detective Harlow Quinn ducked beneath the low brick lintel of the disused service shaft, her flashlight beam cutting a hard yellow circle through the subterranean fog. She adjusted the worn leather strap of the watch on her left wrist, noting the time with an ingrained habit born of eighteen years in the Metropolitan Police. Three minutes past midnight. Her boots struck the damp ballast with measured, rhythmic thuds. At fifty-nine inches and possessing the rigid, unyielding posture of a former regimental sergeant, Quinn did not hurry, but she did not waste motion. She kept her brown eyes trained on the perimeter tape ahead, where a portable floodlight hummed violently, casting stark white glare over the curved white tiles of a ghost station. A young woman stood near the edge of the light, dwarfed by an oversized tweed coat and clutching a battered leather satchel against her ribs. Eva Kowalski had already pushed her round glasses up the bridge of her freckled nose three times since Quinn had come down the ladder. When Quinn’s boots crunched on the gravel nearby, Eva started, her fingers immediately lifting to tuck a stray coil of curly red hair behind her left ear. You should have stayed topside, Kowalski, Quinn said, her voice dry and low, cutting cleanly through the drone of the halogen generator. The Home Office liaison had practically forced the British Museum researcher onto her roster two weeks ago under the vague pretense of assisting with a string of black-market antiquity seizures. Quinn had not asked for an academic, especially not a twenty-six-year-old archivist who looked like an autumn gust might carry her into the Thames. The desk sergeant said the scene was secured, Detective, Eva said. Her green eyes flicked past Quinn toward the platform edge, uneasy and darting. And your sergeant mentioned the... unusual markings on the stonework. Given the recent cataloging I’ve been doing for the restricted archives, it seemed prudent to examine the site in situ. Quinn didn’t answer. She stepped past Eva, her sharp jaw set against the cold. The body lay crumpled in the alcove where a signal relay cabinet had been stripped out fifty years ago. It was a man in his late thirties, wearing a heavy charcoal overcoat that had never seen a high-street tailor. His limbs were splayed in the awkward, unstrung geometry of sudden death, head tilted back against the soot-caked tiles. Dr. Henderson from forensics had already done a preliminary sweep and left to fetch the heavy transport rig, leaving a written slip pinned to a junction box. Quinn knelt beside the body, her knees resting on a dry patch of concrete, and pulled a penlight from her pocket. Henderson’s note cited cardiac failure secondary to blunt-force trauma, Quinn said, playing the thin beam over the dead man’s chest. He’s calling it an illicit squatter dispute. Suspected amphetamine toxicity, judging by the dilated pupils. That sounds entirely plausible, Eva said quickly, hovering just behind Quinn’s right shoulder. Camden has dozens of access points for urban explorers and rough sleepers. If two men fought over territory— Look at his boots, Kowalski. Eva paused, blinking behind her lenses. What? His boots, Quinn repeated, tapping the steel tip of her pen against the thick leather soles. Henderson looked at the scuffs on the leather and saw a struggle on the ballast. But there is no ballast dust in the treads. There is no grease from the maintenance carts. There is dried river silt pressed into the heel grooves, and powdered limestone under the arch. The nearest exposed limestone in this network is three miles north, beyond the Highgate cutoff. Quinn shifted the light upward to the dead man’s lapels. And look at the blood. He was struck in the sternum, Eva offered, her voice tight. A heavy blow. If he was struck with enough force to shatter the sternum and rupture the pericardium, there should be contusions across the pectoral muscle, Quinn said, carefully peeling back the dead man’s stiffened woolen coat with a gloved finger. But the skin isn’t bruised, Kowalski. It’s scorched. Look at the edges of the wound. The fabric of the shirt beneath was charred away in a neat, coin-sized circle directly over the heart. The exposed flesh was not black with carbon, but frosted with a pale, crystalline residue that caught the penlight like ground glass. Chemical burn, Eva murmured, though she took half a step backward, her hand returning to tuck that same red curl behind her ear. An industrial solvent. Some of the older maintenance tunnels have leaking drums of chlorinated degreasers. Quinn looked up, fixing Eva with a hard, unblinking stare. Chlorinated solvents dissolve organic tissue into a slurry. They do not leave hexagonal crystalline lattices on human skin. And they certainly don’t leave the surrounding fabric entirely dry while the body lies in two inches of stagnant seepage. Eva’s jaw tightened. She gripped the strap of her satchel with both hands, knuckles white against the dark leather. You have a very specific eye, Detective. I have an eighteen-year habit of noticing when things are not what my colleagues wish them to be, Quinn said. Three years ago, she had watched her partner, Detective Sergeant Morris, collapse in a cellar off Fleet Street during what should have been a routine raid on an unlicensed printing house. The official report had said aneurysm. But Quinn had found the same crystalline frost along the inside of Morris’s collar, the same faint smell of crushed mint and copper, and a total absence of logic in the pathologist’s evasive summaries. She had spent every waking hour since looking for the seams where the world had been crudely stitched back together. Quinn lowered her gaze back to the dead man’s right hand. His fingers were curled tightly into a fist, pressed against his thigh as if hiding something in his final second of consciousness. Gently, using the flat of her pen, Quinn worked the rigid fingers apart. A small fragment dropped onto the concrete with a dull, hollow clink. It was a sliver of polished bone, barely two inches long, carved with three interlocking notches along its spine. It was smooth, yellowed with age, and bore no resemblance to anything manufactured in an industrial city. Eva inhaled sharply. Know what that is? Quinn asked without turning. It looks like an artifact, Eva said, her voice dropping an octave into academic detachment. A bone carving. Possibly Anglo-Saxon, or Norse. Smugglers often use disused transit routes to move uncatalogued antiquities. A bone token, Quinn said, turning the fragment over with the tip of her pen. It isn’t weathered enough for a burial recovery. The edges of the notches are fresh. Cut with a modern steel blade, not a flint scraper. It’s an admission pass, isn’t it? Eva did not answer. The generator hummed in the background, a low, mechanical throb that seemed increasingly thin against the vast, cavernous silence of the abandoned line. Quinn reached into the inner pocket of the dead man’s overcoat. Her fingers brushed against cold metal, and she drew out an object about the size of a pocket watch. The casing was heavy brass, coated in a thick, velvety patina of verdigris that clung to the intricate scrollwork around its rim. The glass face was intact, but beneath the crystal, the brass dial bore no cardinal directions. Instead, the surface was etched with fine, concentric bands of angular sigils that seemed to catch the light at impossible angles. In the center, a thin needle forged from dark, blackened iron was trembling. It did not point north. Quinn held the compass flat in her palm. The needle swung erratically for a fraction of a second, then snapped toward the solid brick wall at the rear of the platform—a blind archway that had been bricked up with soot-stained London stock since 1924. The magnetic orientation in these tunnels is notoriously unstable, Eva said, speaking faster now, stepping closer. The live rail runs less than fifty yards to the west on the active Northern line. The electromagnetic interference from the traction current— The active line is shut down for track maintenance between midnight and four, Quinn interrupted quietly. Her brown eyes remained locked on the compass. The needle wasn’t vibrating with the hum of the generator; it was pulsing with a slow, deliberate cadence, matching the rhythm of a heartbeat she couldn't hear. Quinn rose to her full height, the brass instrument resting heavily in her gloved hand. She took two steps toward the sealed brick archway. With each pace, the iron needle steadied, until it pointed with absolute, trembling certainty at the mortar between the central bricks. Where did this come from, Kowalski? Quinn asked, her voice dropping into a dangerous calm. I... I couldn't say, Detective, Eva said. The satchel at her side seemed heavier now, pulling down her shoulder. It’s clearly an artisan piece. A novelty. A curiosity made by a private collector. A curiosity found on a dead man who walked through limestone dust, carrying a freshly carved bone key, with frost inside his chest wound and an instrument that points at six feet of solid Victorian brickwork, Quinn said. She turned slowly to face the younger woman. Eva looked small beneath the floodlight, her green eyes wide behind her round glasses, but there was no ignorance in her expression. There was terror, and worse—recognition. Someone killed this man because he was trying to leave, Quinn said, gesturing toward the bricked-up arch. Or because he was trying to get back in. And whatever killed him didn't use a knife, a pipe, or a bullet. Detective Quinn— Morris had that same frost on his skin, Kowalski, Quinn said, stepping into Eva’s space until barely two feet separated them. Her voice was barely above a whisper, but it carried the weight of three years of sleepless nights and redacted files. I spent thirty-six months being told by inspectors and coroners that I didn't see what I saw. I am not going to be told it again by a museum assistant. Eva’s hand hovered near her ear, her fingers trembling slightly before she let them drop to her side. The nervous habit was gone, replaced by a sudden, chilling stillness that seemed far older than twenty-six. If you keep pulling on this thread, Detective, Eva said, her voice entirely devoid of its earlier academic flutter, you will find things that do not fit into an evidence bag. Quinn slipped the brass compass into her own coat pocket, feeling its unnatural weight settle against her ribs. Then I will get a larger bag, Quinn replied. Let's talk about the market behind that wall.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags0
72.35% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1808
totalAiIsmAdverbs10
found
0
adverb"sharply"
count2
1
adverb"quickly"
count1
2
adverb"carefully"
count1
3
adverb"very"
count1
4
adverb"tightly"
count1
5
adverb"gently"
count1
6
adverb"slowly"
count1
7
adverb"barely above a whisper"
count1
8
adverb"slightly"
count1
highlights
0"sharply"
1"quickly"
2"carefully"
3"very"
4"tightly"
5"gently"
6"slowly"
7"barely above a whisper"
8"slightly"
80.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found
0"Henderson"
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
50.22% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1808
totalAiIsms18
found
0
word"measured"
count1
1
word"rhythmic"
count1
2
word"stark"
count1
3
word"flicked"
count1
4
word"crystalline"
count3
5
word"mechanical"
count1
6
word"throb"
count1
7
word"silence"
count1
8
word"intricate"
count1
9
word"crystal"
count1
10
word"etched"
count1
11
word"magnetic"
count1
12
word"whisper"
count1
13
word"carried the weight"
count1
14
word"chilling"
count1
15
word"weight"
count1
highlights
0"measured"
1"rhythmic"
2"stark"
3"flicked"
4"crystalline"
5"mechanical"
6"throb"
7"silence"
8"intricate"
9"crystal"
10"etched"
11"magnetic"
12"whisper"
13"carried the weight"
14"chilling"
15"weight"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences130
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences130
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences130
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen38
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1806
ratio0
matches(empty)
0.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions21
unquotedAttributions12
matches
0"You should have stayed topside, Kowalski, Quinn said, her voice dry and low, cutting cleanly through the drone of the ha…"
1"The desk sergeant said the scene was secured, Detective, Eva said."
2"Chemical burn, Eva murmured, though she took half a step backward, her hand returning to tuck that same red curl behind …"
3"I have an eighteen-year habit of noticing when things are not what my colleagues wish them to be, Quinn said."
4"It looks like an artifact, Eva said, her voice dropping an octave into academic detachment."
5"A bone token, Quinn said, turning the fragment over with the tip of her pen."
6"The magnetic orientation in these tunnels is notoriously unstable, Eva said, speaking faster now, stepping closer."
7"The active line is shut down for track maintenance between midnight and four, Quinn interrupted quietly."
8"A curiosity found on a dead man who walked through limestone dust, carrying a freshly carved bone key, with frost inside…"
9"Someone killed this man because he was trying to leave, Quinn said, gesturing toward the bricked-up arch."
10"If you keep pulling on this thread, Detective, Eva said, her voice entirely devoid of its earlier academic flutter, you …"
11"Then I will get a larger bag, Quinn replied."
61.41% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions91
wordCount1806
uniqueNames25
maxNameDensity1.77
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Camden2
Harlow1
Quinn32
Metropolitan1
Police1
Kowalski6
Eva19
Home1
Office1
British1
Museum1
Thames1
Detective7
Look2
Highgate1
Sergeant1
Morris3
Fleet1
Street1
Anglo-Saxon1
Norse1
London1
Northern1
Victorian1
Henderson3
persons
0"Camden"
1"Harlow"
2"Quinn"
3"Kowalski"
4"Eva"
5"Sergeant"
6"Morris"
7"Henderson"
places
0"Metropolitan"
1"Thames"
2"Look"
3"Highgate"
4"Fleet"
5"Street"
6"London"
globalScore0.614
windowScore0.667
0.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences106
glossingSentenceCount7
matches
0"looked like an autumn gust might carry he"
1"seemed prudent to examine the site in situ"
2"as if hiding something in his final second of consciousness"
3"seemed increasingly thin against the vast, cavernous silence of the abandoned line"
4"sigils that seemed to catch the light at impossible angles"
5"seemed heavier now, pulling down her shoulder"
6"seemed far older than twenty-six"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.554
wordCount1806
matches
0"not black with carbon, but frosted with a pale, crystalline residue"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences130
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs51
mean35.41
std21.55
cv0.609
sampleLengths
025
158
264
376
476
554
614
758
848
935
1031
115
127
1379
1415
1514
1653
1740
1838
1948
2026
2120
2291
2333
2413
2512
2636
273
288
2932
3046
3127
3230
3359
3413
355
3644
3739
3851
3945
4015
4133
4238
4335
4439
452
4672
4735
4831
4918
78.27% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount10
totalSentences130
matches
0"been stripped"
1"were splayed"
2"was struck"
3"was struck"
4"was charred"
5"were curled"
6"was etched"
7"been bricked"
8"being told"
9"was gone"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount4
totalVerbs269
matches
0"was pulsing"
1"wasn’t vibrating"
2"was trying"
3"was trying"
10.99% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount5
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences6
totalSentences130
ratio0.046
matches
0"If two men fought over territory—"
1"The needle swung erratically for a fraction of a second, then snapped toward the solid brick wall at the rear of the platform—a blind archway that had been bricked up with soot-stained London stock since 1924."
2"The electromagnetic interference from the traction current—"
3"The needle wasn’t vibrating with the hum of the generator; it was pulsing with a slow, deliberate cadence, matching the rhythm of a heartbeat she couldn't hear."
4"There was terror, and worse—recognition."
5"Detective Quinn—"
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1823
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"neat, coin-sized circle"
adverbCount50
adverbRatio0.027427317608337904
lyAdverbCount31
lyAdverbRatio0.017004936917169502
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences130
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences130
mean13.89
std8.64
cv0.622
sampleLengths
025
126
228
34
410
524
630
725
824
927
1022
1130
1224
1311
1413
155
165
1720
183
1911
2019
2120
2219
231
2426
2521
2620
277
288
2913
3012
316
325
336
341
3516
3615
379
388
3916
4015
4110
425
4311
443
4538
466
472
487
4918
51.03% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats12
diversityRatio0.36153846153846153
totalSentences130
uniqueOpeners47
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount4
totalSentences124
matches
0"Gently, using the flat of"
1"Possibly Anglo-Saxon, or Norse."
2"Instead, the surface was etched"
3"Then I will get a"
ratio0.032
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount32
totalSentences124
matches
0"She adjusted the worn leather"
1"Her boots struck the damp"
2"She kept her brown eyes"
3"You should have stayed topside,"
4"Her green eyes flicked past"
5"She stepped past Eva, her"
6"It was a man in"
7"His limbs were splayed in"
8"He’s calling it an illicit"
9"His boots, Quinn repeated, tapping"
10"He was struck in the"
11"They do not leave hexagonal"
12"She gripped the strap of"
13"You have a very specific"
14"I have an eighteen-year habit"
15"She had spent every waking"
16"His fingers were curled tightly"
17"It was a sliver of"
18"It was smooth, yellowed with"
19"It looks like an artifact,"
ratio0.258
100.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount89
totalSentences124
matches
0"The air forty feet beneath"
1"Detective Harlow Quinn ducked beneath"
2"She adjusted the worn leather"
3"Her boots struck the damp"
4"She kept her brown eyes"
5"A young woman stood near"
6"Eva Kowalski had already pushed"
7"You should have stayed topside,"
8"The Home Office liaison had"
9"Quinn had not asked for"
10"The desk sergeant said the"
11"Her green eyes flicked past"
12"Quinn didn’t answer."
13"She stepped past Eva, her"
14"The body lay crumpled in"
15"It was a man in"
16"His limbs were splayed in"
17"Henderson from forensics had already"
18"Quinn knelt beside the body,"
19"Henderson’s note cited cardiac failure"
ratio0.718
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount3
totalSentences124
matches
0"If two men fought over"
1"If he was struck with"
2"If you keep pulling on"
ratio0.024
44.64% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences80
technicalSentenceCount11
matches
0"Quinn had not asked for an academic, especially not a twenty-six-year-old archivist who looked like an autumn gust might carry her into the Thames."
1"It was a man in his late thirties, wearing a heavy charcoal overcoat that had never seen a high-street tailor."
2"The exposed flesh was not black with carbon, but frosted with a pale, crystalline residue that caught the penlight like ground glass."
3"His fingers were curled tightly into a fist, pressed against his thigh as if hiding something in his final second of consciousness."
4"The generator hummed in the background, a low, mechanical throb that seemed increasingly thin against the vast, cavernous silence of the abandoned line."
5"The casing was heavy brass, coated in a thick, velvety patina of verdigris that clung to the intricate scrollwork around its rim."
6"Instead, the surface was etched with fine, concentric bands of angular sigils that seemed to catch the light at impossible angles."
7"The needle swung erratically for a fraction of a second, then snapped toward the solid brick wall at the rear of the platform—a blind archway that had been bric…"
8"A curiosity found on a dead man who walked through limestone dust, carrying a freshly carved bone key, with frost inside his chest wound and an instrument that …"
9"The nervous habit was gone, replaced by a sudden, chilling stillness that seemed far older than twenty-six."
10"If you keep pulling on this thread, Detective, Eva said, her voice entirely devoid of its earlier academic flutter, you will find things that do not fit into an…"
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
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uselessAdditionCount0
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100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
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81.4301%