Run: 2026-09-03-01M1KS439KZHCA0Z8QEAZ731NE

Run Details

Duration:
14.2s
Cost:
$0.010441
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The third deadbolt slid back with a hollow thud that vibrated through the rusted brass plate. Lucien stood on the narrow stairwell landing, rain dripping from the brim of his charcoal coat onto the faded linoleum. Water gleamed on his platinum hair, slicked back from temples that looked carved out of marble. His heterochromatic gaze—one iris molten amber, the other absolute obsidian—swept over her face with ruthless precision before dropping to the loose cotton shirt hanging off her shoulder. "You changed the locks." His voice carried that low, smoke-cured rasp, untouched by the five weeks of dead silence since he had walked out of her room in Whitechapel. "Eva did. She prefers uninvited pests to stay down on Brick Lane." Aurora kept her hand firmly flat against the heavy oak frame, blocking the entryway. The rich, cumin-heavy scent of fried onions from the ground-floor kitchen drifted up through the floorboards, tangling with his signature cologne: crushed bergamot and the metallic, ozone trace of brimstone. "Ptolemy seems happy enough to waive the policy." The tabby cat squeezed past her bare ankles, winding its orange spine around Lucien’s polished leather oxfords with a loud, vibrating purr. Lucien leaned his weight onto his ivory-handled cane. The carved ferrule clicked against the floorboards, steady and deliberate. "You look exhausted, Rory." "I was asleep until two minutes ago. Step back so I can close this." "Let me in out of the downpour. We have matters to settle." "We settled everything the night you burned your bridge and took the district ledgers with you." "The ledgers belonged to the Court. I saved your throat from a blood-debt collector." "I never asked for your brand of salvation." She went to shove the heavy timber shut, but Lucien’s palm hit the center panel. Heat flared off his skin, a furnace blast that soaked through the wood and prickled against the hair on her arms. He didn't use brute strength; he simply stood his ground, unyielding as granite, his obsidian eye swallowing the yellow hall light. "Ten minutes. If you want me gone after that, I will walk out the door and never step within five miles of your shadow." Aurora stared at the rigid line of his jaw. Her pulse jumped against her ribs, betraying the stone-faced calm she maintained through law seminars and subterranean street markets. She stepped back into the cramped room, leaving the door wide open. "Nine minutes and fifty seconds." Lucien crossed the threshold, slipping his damp overcoat from his broad shoulders with fluid efficiency. He hung it on the brass wall peg, moving through the chaotic space as if he still owned the right to navigate her life. Books, loose parchment, and charcoal rubbings covered every horizontal surface, piled high on the radiator and spilling across the mismatched sofa. "Eva's research on the Avaros boundary lines," he remarked, the tip of his cane indicating a yellowed scroll pinned under an iron mug. "Still chasing ghosts." "Eva is looking for answers. You just trade in leverage." Aurora crossed her arms, tucking her left hand beneath her elbow to hide the tremor in her fingers. The crescent scar on her wrist pulled tight against her skin. Lucien turned, leaning the cane against the edge of the dining table. The charcoal vest hugged his ribs, outlining the broad taper of his shoulders and the crisp white cotton underneath. He looked too large, too pristine, too dangerous for a cluttered flat over an East End curry house. "You think I left to spite you." "I think you left because staying meant answering questions you couldn't spin into a contract." "I left because staying would have burned this entire borough to ash." He closed the distance between them with two silent strides. The warmth radiating off his half-demon blood washed over her face, chasing away the autumn chill that lived in the window seams. Aurora held her ground, lifting her chin. Her bright blue eyes caught the gold flecks in his left iris. "You don't get to play the tragic martyr, Lucien. You walked out of my bed, took the records, and left me to answer to the triad brokers alone." "I eliminated the triad brokers before dawn." His voice dropped an octave, scraping raw against the quiet of the room. "I spent three days cleaning the gutters of Limehouse so your name wouldn't appear on a single bounty board. Do not stand there in your Welsh pride and tell me I abandoned you." "You vanished without a word. That is abandonment. In Cardiff, in London, in whatever hell your father crawled out of—silence means the same thing." Her breath hitched as he reached out. His fingers, calloused along the knuckles from blade work, stopped just shy of her jawline. The air between his skin and hers crackled with static, raising the fine hairs along her neck. "I came back the second the street was clear." "Five weeks too late." "Five weeks of keeping my distance so your life remained your own." His thumb brushed the curve of her cheekbone. The touch burned—sharp, possessive, and agonizingly tender. A shiver tore through her spine, wrecking the fortress of resentment she had built since September. Aurora pulled her face back, breaking the contact. "Don't do that." "You want me to lie? To pretend I didn't spend every hour of those five weeks remembering how you looked beneath me on those sheets?" "Stop." "I remember the taste of the salt on your shoulder. I remember the way your pulse hammered under my tongue when you pulled me down." His hand dropped, but his gaze pinned her where she stood against the book-laden table. "You are angry because I left. You have every right. But do not look at me with those ice-cold eyes and pretend the fire went out the moment the latch clicked." Aurora felt the edge of a leather-bound folio digging into the small of her back. The clutter of the room faded into the periphery, drowned out by the heavy, rhythmic cadence of his breathing. The hurt was there, thick and sharp as broken glass in her chest, but tangled beneath it was the undeniable, suffocating pull that had terrified her from the night they first met in the under-vaults. "You broke the rules," she whispered, the edge of her Welsh accent sharpening. "You set the terms. You told me broker and client never cross the line." "I broke my own rules the second I touched you." Lucien took the final step, eliminating every inch of daylight between them. His hand caught her left wrist, his thumb pressing directly over the crescent scar, feeling the frantic, galloping rhythm of her blood. "Kick me out, Rory. Tell me you want me out in the rain, and I will leave." Aurora looked down at his long, pale fingers wrapped around her wrist, then up into the fierce, split-colored intensity of his eyes. "You owe me more than ten minutes." "I owe you everything I have."
created_at"2026-09-03T14:00:20.029Z" 9/3/2026, 2:00:20 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags2
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences35
tagDensity0.057
leniency0.114
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1169
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
35.84% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1169
totalAiIsms15
found
0
word"vibrated"
count1
1
word"marble"
count1
2
word"silence"
count2
3
word"firmly"
count1
4
word"weight"
count1
5
word"pulse"
count2
6
word"chaotic"
count1
7
word"navigate"
count1
8
word"pristine"
count1
9
word"warmth"
count1
10
word"chill"
count1
11
word"rhythmic"
count1
12
word"intensity"
count1
highlights
0"vibrated"
1"marble"
2"silence"
3"firmly"
4"weight"
5"pulse"
6"chaotic"
7"navigate"
8"pristine"
9"warmth"
10"chill"
11"rhythmic"
12"intensity"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences45
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences45
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences78
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen36
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1165
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions8
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions19
wordCount730
uniqueNames7
maxNameDensity0.96
worstName"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Whitechapel1
Lucien7
Aurora7
East1
End1
September1
Welsh1
persons
0"Lucien"
1"Aurora"
places
0"Whitechapel"
1"East"
2"End"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences45
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1165
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences78
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs54
mean21.57
std16.06
cv0.745
sampleLengths
016
163
24
325
412
544
68
722
818
94
1014
1112
1216
1314
148
1557
1624
1740
185
1960
2026
2110
2229
2349
247
2515
2612
2732
2819
2928
307
3113
3233
3324
3439
359
364
3712
3831
398
403
4125
421
4325
4415
4531
4669
4727
4810
4934
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences45
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs117
matches(empty)
32.97% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount3
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences3
totalSentences78
ratio0.038
matches
0"His heterochromatic gaze—one iris molten amber, the other absolute obsidian—swept over her face with ruthless precision before dropping to the loose cotton shirt hanging off her shoulder."
1"He didn't use brute strength; he simply stood his ground, unyielding as granite, his obsidian eye swallowing the yellow hall light."
2"The touch burned—sharp, possessive, and agonizingly tender."
82.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount743
adjectiveStacks3
stackExamples
0"low, smoke-cured rasp,"
1"rich, cumin-heavy scent"
2"fierce, split-colored intensity"
adverbCount19
adverbRatio0.02557200538358008
lyAdverbCount4
lyAdverbRatio0.005383580080753701
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences78
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences78
mean14.94
std7.56
cv0.506
sampleLengths
016
120
216
327
44
525
612
714
830
98
1022
118
1210
134
1414
1512
1616
1714
188
1915
2021
2121
2224
239
2419
2512
265
2715
2824
2921
3023
313
3210
3318
3411
3512
3619
3718
387
3915
4012
4110
4222
437
4412
4528
467
4713
4833
4924
46.15% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats4
diversityRatio0.3076923076923077
totalSentences78
uniqueOpeners24
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences45
matches(empty)
ratio0
60.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount18
totalSentences45
matches
0"His heterochromatic gaze—one iris molten"
1"His voice carried that low,"
2"She went to shove the"
3"He didn't use brute strength;"
4"Her pulse jumped against her"
5"She stepped back into the"
6"He hung it on the"
7"he remarked, the tip of"
8"He looked too large, too"
9"He closed the distance between"
10"Her bright blue eyes caught"
11"His voice dropped an octave,"
12"Her breath hitched as he"
13"His fingers, calloused along the"
14"His thumb brushed the curve"
15"His hand dropped, but his"
16"she whispered, the edge of"
17"His hand caught her left"
ratio0.4
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount44
totalSentences45
matches
0"The third deadbolt slid back"
1"Lucien stood on the narrow"
2"Water gleamed on his platinum"
3"His heterochromatic gaze—one iris molten"
4"His voice carried that low,"
5"Aurora kept her hand firmly"
6"The rich, cumin-heavy scent of"
7"The tabby cat squeezed past"
8"Lucien leaned his weight onto"
9"The carved ferrule clicked against"
10"She went to shove the"
11"Heat flared off his skin,"
12"He didn't use brute strength;"
13"Aurora stared at the rigid"
14"Her pulse jumped against her"
15"She stepped back into the"
16"Lucien crossed the threshold, slipping"
17"He hung it on the"
18"he remarked, the tip of"
19"Aurora crossed her arms, tucking"
ratio0.978
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences45
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences36
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"The warmth radiating off his half-demon blood washed over her face, chasing away the autumn chill that lived in the window seams."
1"His hand caught her left wrist, his thumb pressing directly over the crescent scar, feeling the frantic, galloping rhythm of her blood."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags2
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"she whispered, the edge of her Welsh accent sharpening"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags1
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"she whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences35
tagDensity0.029
leniency0.057
rawRatio1
effectiveRatio0.057
78.5654%