Run: 2026-09-03-01M1KXK8HRRAJSZJD2YAKJZ6BE

Run Details

Duration:
6m 13s
Cost:
$0.048389
Provider:
Alibaba

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The oak stones stood in a broken ring at the edge of Richmond Park, their bark scored by old hands and older weather. Aurora pressed her thumb against the crescent scar on her left wrist. The pendant in her pocket gave a hot tick, then another, and the heat climbed the silver chain against her collarbone. "Three stones." Nyx's shadow thickened at the shoulders, edges pressing against the last grey light. "The story told nine." Isolde walked ahead. Silver hair brushed her waist. The grass beneath her feet did not bend. Wildflowers opened in her path, petals wet with a dew that had no place at dusk. "Stories lie to be useful." Isolde paused, tilted her head, and let a flower drift toward her mouth. She closed her lips around it, crushed it between her teeth, and swallowed. "Stones keep." Aurora looked over the ring. Inside, the park ended. A path of pale root-wood led into a thicket where the oaks leaned so close their branches made a roof of green. The air smelled of crushed mint, wet soil, and apples left too long in a warm kitchen. Aurora stepped through the boundary. "Come on." The park behind the ring lost its sound. One moment, a jogger passed with headphones. The next, the grove answered in long green notes. A leaf drifted down, touched the ground, turned into a flower, split into soil, and rose again as leaf. Time forgot the rule here. Nyx followed. Their shadow form thinned until they were a cut in the air. "I feel watched." Isolde lifted a petal. "By roots." Nyx's shadow stretched along the roots. "By flowers." Isolde's lavender eyes moved along the path. "By the hour that is not an hour." Aurora felt the pendant hum. The heat moved through her chest. The thicket widened into a clearing, and the clearing refused to hold its shape. Each step changed the angle of the trunks. A bird with too many notes in its voice landed on a branch, opened its mouth, and released a single chord that made Aurora's teeth ache. The wildflowers around them bloomed in rings, yellow, white, blue, red, each ring opening after the last, a ripple of colour moving through the green. Aurora touched the pendant. It had stopped pulsing. Now it gave a low hum, a warmth that moved through her chest. "There." Ahead, between two oaks thicker than cars, the air shimmered. It was not heat. It was a line of light with edges that did not agree, a pale tear in the darkening green. Nyx's violet eyes flared. "A Veil seam." Isolde tilted her head. "Old. Young. Hungry." Aurora met Nyx's eyes. "It's Hel." "Or a doorway dressed as Hel." Isolde's lavender eyes did not move. "What is the difference?" "The one that eats you." Nyx's shadow curled inward. "The one that feeds you first." Aurora looked at the seam. The shimmer leaned toward her, as if waiting for a name. The pendant grew hot, not painful, but insistent, like a coal wrapped in cloth. She thought of the restaurant, the late deliveries, the flat above the bar, the way Evan's hands had closed around her throat until her own voice felt borrowed. She thought of the unknown hand that had put the silver chain in her palms and left the words burning in her ears: when the red stone asks, follow it. She did not think of running. Running had a smell, and she had left that scent behind. Aurora stepped toward the seam. "Don't." Nyx's shadow cracked like a branch under snow. Isolde did not move. "The tongue is wet." "Then it's not a door." "It is a mouth shaped as a door." Aurora reached the shimmer. Her hand passed through. The air on the other side hit her skin, warm and syrupy, carrying the smell of roasted sugar, garlic, and wine aged in oak barrels. The heat did not burn. It invited. The pendant in her pocket flared, bright enough to see through the fabric of her jacket. Aurora pulled her hand back. Red light bloomed in her palm, then faded to a warm smear. "It knows me." Nyx's shadow curled inward. "It knows everyone. That is the trouble with mouths." Isolde crushed a petal between her fingers. "Then we ask it for a path." Aurora looked at them. Nyx stood at the edge of the clearing, solid enough to cast a shade on the roots. Isolde remained still among the flowers, as if the grove had grown around her. Aurora lifted her chin. "A path." "To the kitchen." Isolde's silver hair moved without wind. "The feast is not full." Aurora felt the pendant throb against her hip. The Fae blade in her satchel leapt, cold as river ice, and the silver leaf shape pressed against her thigh. She thought of the crimson stone, the faint inner glow, the way it had pulsed when the restaurant's back door opened onto the alley behind Silas' bar. She thought of the customer who had ordered a meal for three and eaten only salt. She went through. The seam swallowed her in warm light. There was no fall, no sound, no change except the ground under her feet. It was stone, but not grey. It was the colour of burnt peach, and it held heat like a hearth. Aurora opened her eyes. An amber sky stretched over rolling hills. The light had no name in Aurora's mouth. Vineyards climbed the slopes in tight rows, their leaves dark green and glossy. Between them, orchards stood heavy with fruit she could not name. Some looked like pomegranates split open to show seeds the size of coins. Some looked like coconuts with translucent skin. Others hung in clusters, red and blue, pulsing in red and blue. Gardens ran down the hillsides in neat terraces, and in those gardens, hands worked without rest. The smell reached Aurora before the sight did. Roast meat, cinnamon, charred onions, honey, and a sharp green note, like crushed herbs after rain. A laugh rose from the treeline, then another, then a chorus of laughter, all close, all loud, all sweet. "Gluttony." Nyx stood beside her. Their shadow smoldered under the amber light. "Dymas." Isolde walked ahead. The stone path did not show her footprints, though the dust around it lay thick as flour. "The mouth that wears a crown." Aurora looked down the hill. A broad avenue led between the gardens to a palace built of pale stone and dark wood. Its walls bore marks too old for chisels. Banners hung from its towers, crimson and gold, shaped like open mouths. Smoke rose from a dozen chimneys, each plume a different colour: grey, rose, gold, black. The air carried the sound of pans clanging, knives tapping against marble, and a crowd chanting in a language that curled around Aurora's thoughts. A hand caught her sleeve. The woman wore a white apron stained with grease and blood. Her hair was tied back. Her eyes were black, and in the centre of each blackness, a yellow point burned. "New plates." Aurora met the woman's eyes. "We are not here to eat." The woman laughed. The sound cut the air like a knife on a board. "No one is here to eat. Everyone is here to be eaten." Behind her, the kitchen door opened. A man stepped out carrying a copper tray stacked with bowls. He stopped when he saw them. The bowls slid. A splash of broth hit the stone, and the steam that rose from it smelled of old bread, black pepper, and something metallic. He dropped the tray. Copper rang through the garden. The faces along the path lifted. From the palace, from the vineyards, from the orchards, from the terraces, eyes turned toward Aurora, Nyx, and Isolde. The laughter stopped. The chanting stopped. The amber sky went still. Aurora pulled her sleeve free. The woman's grip left red marks on the fabric. Nyx's shadow stretched along the path, a thin line of black cutting through the dust. Isolde walked forward, and the dust parted for her. Aurora followed. The palace drew them closer. The avenue widened into a courtyard paved with tiles the colour of ripe apricots. Steam rose from grates in the floor, carrying scents of butter, anise, and salt. Along the walls, shelves held jars of pickled things: limes with silver skins, mushrooms that glowed pale blue, cherries preserved in honey so thick it moved like syrup. Cooks moved between the shelves, arms full of trays, and each tray held food that gave off its own light. The cooks had no shadows. Beyond the steam, a contest line ran along the palace wall. Three chefs worked separate stations, each with a copper pan, and each pan gave off a different scent: smoke, sugar, blood. The crowd pointed at the dishes as if the dishes were horses in a race. A judge watched the flames, and the flames curved toward him like hands. Nyx's shadow thinned. "Too much." Their voice came on a breath of wind. "Too little." Isolde touched a jar of glowing mushrooms. The glass stayed cold. "The mouth does not want fullness." "It wants more." Aurora met the woman's eyes. She looked at the fruit in the orchard beyond the courtyard wall. The clusters pulsed. A vine had climbed the wall, and its leaves were shaped like tongues. She stepped back. The pendant burned. A bell rang. The sound came from the palace. It had a deep body, a warm rim, and a note that settled in her teeth. The cooks stopped. The trays lowered. The crowd along the avenue bowed their heads, but their eyes stayed open, and the yellow points in their eyes glowed. A door in the palace wall swung open. Two servants carried a table between them. The table was small, round, white as bone. On it sat a single plate. The plate held a dish of sliced meat, red in the centre, grey at the edges, arranged in a circle around a spoon. Steam rose from the meat and formed shapes, thin lines that twisted and dissolved. Aurora's stomach turned. The Fae blade in her satchel cooled, and the cold spread into her fingers. "The judges." Nyx's shadow pressed flat against the stone. "Let them taste us." Isolde's lavender eyes fixed on the plate. "The tongue tastes the watcher." The servants placed the table in the centre of the courtyard. The crowd stepped back. A woman in a black apron stepped forward. Her face was smooth, ageless, and her mouth was too wide. When she smiled, she showed two rows of teeth, upper and lower, both sharp. "The feast has a gap." Her voice carried the weight of hot iron. The servants pulled out a chair. The chair was black wood, and the back was carved with vines that seemed to move. The woman sat. The crowd watched. Aurora felt the pendant pulse. The heat spread through her wrist, across the crescent scar, and into her shoulder. Aurora moved toward the table. Nyx's shadow flared. "Stop." Isolde's hand closed around Aurora's arm. The fingers were cold, but the half-fae warmth under her skin was not. "The gap is not a place." Aurora looked at the plate. The meat moved in thin shifts. The slices shifted, one by one, to make room for a hand that was not there. The steam rose and shaped a face, then another, then a mouth, and the mouth opened. Aurora's satchel strap cut into her shoulder. She pulled the Fae blade free. The leaf-shaped dagger was cold, and its faint glow did not match the amber sky. The blade's edge drank the light around it. The woman in the black apron did not look at the blade. She looked at the pendant in Aurora's hand. "Red." The word came with a low edge. The crowd leaned in. "Mine." Aurora's grip tightened on the dagger. The pendant burned against her palm. The meat on the plate slid toward the edge. A hand reached over the table. The fingers were long, pale, and warm. They closed around Aurora's wrist. The pendant flared. The black woman's mouth opened, and two rows of teeth caught the amber light.
created_at"2026-09-03T15:18:31.415Z" 9/3/2026, 3:18:31 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags1
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences45
tagDensity0.022
leniency0.044
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount2045
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
73.11% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount2045
totalAiIsms11
found
0
word"warmth"
count2
1
word"shimmered"
count1
2
word"throb"
count1
3
word"pulsed"
count2
4
word"marble"
count1
5
word"race"
count1
6
word"stomach"
count1
7
word"carried the weight"
count1
8
word"pulse"
count1
highlights
0"warmth"
1"shimmered"
2"throb"
3"pulsed"
4"marble"
5"race"
6"stomach"
7"carried the weight"
8"pulse"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences194
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences194
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences239
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen30
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords2045
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions4
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
33.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions70
wordCount1870
uniqueNames7
maxNameDensity1.76
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity4
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Richmond1
Park1
Aurora33
Nyx15
Evan1
Fae3
Isolde16
persons
0"Aurora"
1"Nyx"
2"Evan"
3"Isolde"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
globalScore0.618
windowScore0.333
71.88% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences128
glossingSentenceCount4
matches
0"as if waiting for a name"
1"looked like pomegranates split open to sh"
2"looked like coconuts with translucent ski"
3"vines that seemed to move"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.489
wordCount2045
matches
0"not painful, but insistent, like a coal wrapped in cloth"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences239
matches
0"left that scent"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs120
mean17.04
std21.56
cv1.265
sampleLengths
056
12
217
332
45
526
62
748
85
92
1048
1114
123
134
142
156
162
177
188
1984
2021
211
2233
234
243
254
263
274
282
296
306
314
325
334
346
3588
3617
375
381
398
404
414
425
438
4456
4517
463
474
489
497
99.84% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount3
totalSentences194
matches
0"was tied"
1"were shaped"
2"was carved"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs292
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences239
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount759
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount13
adverbRatio0.017127799736495388
lyAdverbCount0
lyAdverbRatio0
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences239
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences239
mean8.56
std6.19
cv0.723
sampleLengths
023
112
221
32
413
54
63
75
88
916
105
1113
1213
132
145
154
1622
1717
185
192
208
217
229
2319
245
252
2612
273
284
292
306
312
327
338
345
356
3614
378
3826
3925
404
414
4213
431
4410
454
4619
474
483
494
36.19% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats33
diversityRatio0.26359832635983266
totalSentences239
uniqueOpeners63
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences191
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount29
totalSentences191
matches
0"She closed her lips around"
1"Their shadow form thinned until"
2"It had stopped pulsing."
3"It was not heat."
4"It was a line of"
5"She thought of the restaurant,"
6"She thought of the unknown"
7"She did not think of"
8"Her hand passed through."
9"She thought of the crimson"
10"She thought of the customer"
11"She went through."
12"It was stone, but not"
13"It was the colour of"
14"Their shadow smoldered under the"
15"Its walls bore marks too"
16"Her hair was tied back."
17"Her eyes were black, and"
18"He stopped when he saw"
19"He dropped the tray."
ratio0.152
7.12% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount173
totalSentences191
matches
0"The oak stones stood in"
1"Aurora pressed her thumb against"
2"The pendant in her pocket"
3"Nyx's shadow thickened at the"
4"Isolde walked ahead."
5"The grass beneath her feet"
6"Wildflowers opened in her path,"
7"Isolde paused, tilted her head,"
8"She closed her lips around"
9"Aurora looked over the ring."
10"A path of pale root-wood"
11"The air smelled of crushed"
12"Aurora stepped through the boundary."
13"The park behind the ring"
14"The next, the grove answered"
15"A leaf drifted down, touched"
16"Time forgot the rule here."
17"Their shadow form thinned until"
18"Isolde lifted a petal."
19"Nyx's shadow stretched along the"
ratio0.906
26.18% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences191
matches
0"Now it gave a low"
ratio0.005
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences76
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"Wildflowers opened in her path, petals wet with a dew that had no place at dusk."
1"It was a line of light with edges that did not agree, a pale tear in the darkening green."
2"She thought of the unknown hand that had put the silver chain in her palms and left the words burning in her ears: when the red stone asks, follow it."
3"Along the walls, shelves held jars of pickled things: limes with silver skins, mushrooms that glowed pale blue, cherries preserved in honey so thick it moved li…"
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags1
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
84.9214%