Run: 2026-09-03-01M1KXRGTV2R143XKWAVT50X6Y

Run Details

Duration:
6m 5s
Cost:
$0.057437
Provider:
Tencent

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The stairs down to the abandoned platform smelled of burnt sugar and old copper. Detective Harlow Quinn descended with the measured tread of a soldier, her boots finding the gritty concrete without a slip. Eighteen years on the Met had etched lines around her brown eyes, but her cropped salt-and-pepper hair and the sharp cut of her jaw suggested a woman who still expected the world to stand straight. She checked the worn leather watch on her left wrist. Two-oh-four. The full moon would be high, and the Veil Market had made its home in this forgotten Tube station beneath Camden tonight. At the bottom, the platform yawned wide under the glow of portable floods. Yellow forensic tents flapped in the draught. Beyond the tape, the ghost of an old advertisement peeled from the tiled wall, a smiling woman hawking cocoa from 1932. Dust coated everything in a soft grey fur, except for the corridor of disturbance near the body. DC Theo Barnes broke away from a uniform and met her at the tape. Young, suit too sharp for the graveyard shift, he had the eager look of a man who had already solved it. "Guv." He jerked a thumb over his shoulder. "Josef Reed. Thirty-eight, known fence, dabbles in the Market. Someone stuck him in the chest and left him to cool." Quinn ducked under the tape. "Known fence. So a deal went south." Barnes fell in beside her, his shoes crunching the dust. "That's my read. The Market's full of alchemical junk and back-alley deals. Reed skimmed off a Shade artisan. They knifed him, took their goods, and bolted." Quinn stopped at the edge of the blood. The pool beneath Josef Reed was no larger than a tea saucer, black and tacky under the floodlights. The tiles around it were pristine. Not a single drop spattered the smiling cocoa woman. She crouched, the knee of her trousers brushing the grit. "A knife through the heart sprays. Even a small one. There's no cast-off on the wall, no arterial arc. This isn't a stabbing scene. It's a painting." Barnes shifted his weight. "The blade missed an artery. It happens." Quinn ignored the excuse. She looked at Reed's hands. Clean palms, unbroken nails, no defence cuts. His shoes were gone. His bare feet were pale, the soles unmarked by platform dust. She leaned closer. The violet stain of lividity darkened his cheeks and the front of his throat, a bruise-coloured shadow against grey skin. His back, pressed to the tile, was waxy and pale. "If he'd died on his back, the blood would have settled there. It settled in his face instead. He died face-down, somewhere else. Hours ago. Then they carried him down and laid him out for us." Barnes crouched opposite her, frowning. "So the killer moved the body. Why pose him at all?" Quinn stood, her joints clicking. She scanned the floor. A single line of footprints tracked through the dust, size ten, deep and even, leading from the stairs to the body. They stopped at Reed's shoulder. There were none leading away, and none doubled back. Quinn pointed at the prints. "Look at the prints. One set. Same depth, single stride. Our killer walked up to a dead man and then flew home?" Barnes straightened, dusting his hands. "He walked back in his own footprints. Doubled the tread." "Then they'd be deeper. They're not." Quinn stepped around the body, careful of the dust. "And the tunnel mouth is virgin. Not a footprint past the tape." Barnes rubbed the back of his neck. "Okay. So he didn't walk out. But the tunnels—" "The tunnel floor hasn't been disturbed in ten years. No one fled that way." Barnes exhaled through his nose, conceding the point without words. Quinn turned back to Reed. Something winked in his right hand, caught in the rigour of his grip. She pried the fingers apart with a gloved thumb. A small brass compass rested in his palm, its casing blotched with verdigris, the face a spiderweb of etched sigils. The needle lay still, pointing not to magnetic north but to the bricked-up wall of the old ticket hall, east by southeast. Barnes leaned over her shoulder. "Trinket from the Market. Vendor sold it as a charm. The iron down here throws the needle off." Quinn turned the compass. The needle held its line, trembling, a sewing needle caught in a draught. "Compasses don't work like that. Iron scrambles them, it doesn't point them. This one's locked on." Barnes leaned closer. "Locked on what?" The platform echoed with the scuff of footsteps. A uniform tried to block the newcomer, but she slipped under the tape with the ease of someone who had spent two years navigating the British Museum's restricted archives. Eva Kowalski's curly red hair escaped its clip, her round glasses fogged from the cold stairwell. Freckles stood out across the bridge of her nose. She clutched a worn leather satchel to her chest, the strap digging into her coat. She tucked a stray curl behind her left ear and stopped dead at the sight of the compass. "That's a Veil Compass." Barnes straightened, suspicion narrowing his eyes. "You're the museum researcher. This is a police matter, love. No ghosts here." Eva ignored him. She crouched on the balls of her feet, her satchel thumping to the tiles, and pointed a chewed fingernail at the sigils. "Shade artisans forge them in the Market. The needle doesn't find north. It finds the nearest supernatural rift or portal. The sigils are protective, to stop the bearer from being pulled through. If it's pointing at that wall, there's a rift behind the brick. Or there was." Barnes threw his hands up. "A rift. You're telling me a hole in the air knifed him?" Eva's jaw tightened. She tucked her hair behind her ear again, a nervous flutter of fingers. "I'm telling you Josef Reed came through a rift, got turned around, and the magic tore him apart. It's an accident, not a murder. The Market moves every full moon for a reason." Quinn kept her voice flat. "You think the Market killed him. Your clique's marketplace, and it just eats people." Eva flinched as if slapped. "It's not a clique. It's a community. And it doesn't eat people. Accidents happen at thresholds—" "Then explain the bare feet. Explain the size ten prints leading to a size nine man. Explain why the lividity says he died face-down in a cold room, not on this platform." Barnes blinked. "Reed was a nine? Then whose boots made the tracks?" Quinn didn't answer him. She lifted the compass to the floodlight. The sigils were crisp, except for one near the hinge. A fresh scratch marred the brass, and beneath the verdigris, a dull grey smear of glue caught the light. She scraped it with her thumbnail. A tiny sliver of black magnet, no larger than a fingernail clipping, sat wedged under the casing. Quinn held the compass up to the light. "Someone glued a magnet to the compass. They pinned the needle east. They wanted us looking at that wall, not at the truth." Eva's mouth opened, then closed. Her fingers found her hair again, tucked it, released it. "The Shade artisans would never—" "Would never what? Fake their own tool? Sell a trinket that points wherever the buyer wants? You said it yourself, the Market sells information. Someone bought a compass and a story." She turned in a slow circle, her military bearing pulling her spine straight. The floodlights threw the maintenance hatch into sharp relief. It sat in the ceiling twenty feet above, directly over the body. The metal rungs were rusted, but one rung near the top shone with a bright, fresh scrape, and the wall beneath it bore a scuff of grey dust and something darker. Dried blood, or rust. Quinn pointed at the hatch. "The killer came down from that hatch on a rope. He lowered Reed's body, already dead, already drained somewhere cold. He walked to it wearing size ten boots, just to leave a trail for us to find, then he took the boots off and climbed back up in his socks, taking the boots with him. That's why no prints lead away. He never walked out. He went up." Barnes craned his neck. "Through a hatch? Onto the street?" "Onto the street, or into the service tunnels. But he left the compass in Reed's hand, pointed at the wall, so a pair of smart detectives would stare at the bricks and blame a rift." Eva's face had gone the colour of old paper. She clutched her satchel like a shield. "If the compass is faked, then the rift story is faked. But why frame the Market?" Quinn stepped closer, close enough to see the flecks of gold in Eva's green eyes. The suspicion that had dogged her since she'd first linked Aurora's circle to these underground sales rose up, sharp and familiar. But the evidence on the platform pointed away from a supernatural accident and toward a very human, very careful hand. "Because a rift doesn't leave footprints, and it doesn't glue magnets to brass." Quinn's gaze flicked to the hatch, then back to Eva. "Someone wanted the Market to take the fall. And someone wanted us to find a dead man with no blood, no shoes, and a story too neat to be true." Barnes was already moving, shouting for a ladder and a forensic photographer. Quinn stayed where she was, the evidence bag heavy in her hand. Above them, the hatch yawned like a black mouth. She thought of Morris, of the file she had never closed, of a body found pale and wrong in a room with no blood and no explanation. Her watch ticked against her wrist, a steady, mundane sound in a station that smelled of burnt sugar and old copper. She looked at Eva. "Tell me who in the Market sells a compass that lies." Eva swallowed. Her hand tightened on the satchel strap. "I can find out. But you won't like where it leads." Quinn's jaw set, the sharp line of it cutting the floodlight. "I never do."
created_at"2026-09-03T15:21:23.554Z" 9/3/2026, 3:21:23 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags3
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"Quinn stepped around [around]"
dialogueSentences38
tagDensity0.079
leniency0.158
rawRatio0.333
effectiveRatio0.053
94.13% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1703
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"very"
count2
highlights
0"very"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
61.83% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1703
totalAiIsms13
found
0
word"measured"
count1
1
word"etched"
count2
2
word"pristine"
count1
3
word"weight"
count1
4
word"scanned"
count1
5
word"magnetic"
count1
6
word"charm"
count1
7
word"echoed"
count1
8
word"footsteps"
count1
9
word"navigating"
count1
10
word"familiar"
count1
11
word"flicked"
count1
highlights
0"measured"
1"etched"
2"pristine"
3"weight"
4"scanned"
5"magnetic"
6"charm"
7"echoed"
8"footsteps"
9"navigating"
10"familiar"
11"flicked"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences95
matches(empty)
97.74% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount2
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences95
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"tried to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences130
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen68
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1703
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions6
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
66.67% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions58
wordCount1025
uniqueNames17
maxNameDensity1.66
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Harlow1
Quinn17
Met1
Veil1
Market1
Tube1
Camden1
Theo1
Barnes14
Josef1
Reed4
British1
Museum1
Kowalski1
Eva10
Aurora1
Morris1
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Met"
3"Market"
4"Theo"
5"Barnes"
6"Josef"
7"Reed"
8"Museum"
9"Kowalski"
10"Eva"
11"Aurora"
12"Morris"
places(empty)
globalScore0.671
windowScore0.667
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences65
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.587
wordCount1703
matches
0"not to magnetic north but to the bricked-up wall of the old ticket hall, east by south"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences130
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs73
mean23.33
std23.69
cv1.015
sampleLengths
0102
158
235
328
45
57
610
726
841
910
1027
114
127
1364
1436
155
1611
1744
185
1922
205
2110
2227
237
249
2514
2679
275
2818
2917
3016
313
323
3395
344
356
3613
3725
3847
395
4012
4116
4233
435
4414
455
4616
4732
482
4910
97.88% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences95
matches
0"were gone"
1"were rusted"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs162
matches
0"was already moving"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences130
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1031
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount26
adverbRatio0.02521823472356935
lyAdverbCount2
lyAdverbRatio0.0019398642095053346
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences130
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences130
mean13.1
std10.02
cv0.765
sampleLengths
014
120
235
310
41
522
613
77
821
917
1014
1121
128
1320
145
157
1610
1726
188
1918
206
219
2210
2327
244
257
264
275
287
294
3011
313
3220
3310
3436
355
3611
375
384
3921
405
419
425
4322
445
4510
4615
4712
487
499
63.08% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats3
diversityRatio0.3923076923076923
totalSentences130
uniqueOpeners51
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences92
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount25
totalSentences92
matches
0"She checked the worn leather"
1"He jerked a thumb over"
2"She crouched, the knee of"
3"She looked at Reed's hands."
4"His shoes were gone."
5"His bare feet were pale,"
6"She leaned closer."
7"His back, pressed to the"
8"She scanned the floor."
9"They stopped at Reed's shoulder."
10"She pried the fingers apart"
11"She clutched a worn leather"
12"She tucked a stray curl"
13"She crouched on the balls"
14"She tucked her hair behind"
15"She lifted the compass to"
16"She scraped it with her"
17"Her fingers found her hair"
18"She turned in a slow"
19"It sat in the ceiling"
ratio0.272
19.78% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount81
totalSentences92
matches
0"The stairs down to the"
1"Detective Harlow Quinn descended with"
2"She checked the worn leather"
3"The full moon would be"
4"Dust coated everything in a"
5"DC Theo Barnes broke away"
6"He jerked a thumb over"
7"Quinn ducked under the tape."
8"Barnes fell in beside her,"
9"Quinn stopped at the edge"
10"The pool beneath Josef Reed"
11"The tiles around it were"
12"She crouched, the knee of"
13"Barnes shifted his weight."
14"Quinn ignored the excuse."
15"She looked at Reed's hands."
16"His shoes were gone."
17"His bare feet were pale,"
18"She leaned closer."
19"The violet stain of lividity"
ratio0.88
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences92
matches(empty)
ratio0
76.41% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences43
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"Young, suit too sharp for the graveyard shift, he had the eager look of a man who had already solved it."
1"A uniform tried to block the newcomer, but she slipped under the tape with the ease of someone who had spent two years navigating the British Museum's restricte…"
2"The suspicion that had dogged her since she'd first linked Aurora's circle to these underground sales rose up, sharp and familiar."
3"Her watch ticked against her wrist, a steady, mundane sound in a station that smelled of burnt sugar and old copper."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags3
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
85.9173%