Run: 2026-09-03-01M1KXXAFS7S1BQ3NA9ZYTHDKZ

Run Details

Duration:
2m 56s
Cost:
$0.036285
Provider:
Parasail

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The lift at Camden Undercroft had no windows. The cage groaned as it descended past service tunnels, and the air changed from street damp to old stone. Detective Harlow Quinn stepped out with her badge in one hand and a folded forensic glove in the other. Her cropped hair caught the work lamps below, and her sharp jaw set against the noise. Her leather watch ticked on her left wrist. Below, the abandoned Tube platform waited under a ring of work lamps. The old signage read Camden Road, but chalk scrawls covered the letters. Stalls stood along the platform's edge, their canvas sides rolled tight. Brass scales, glass jars, and bundles of dried herbs hung from ropes. The place smelled of wet brick, burnt sugar, and copper. DS Rook leaned on the police tape with a notebook open. "Traders cleared out before dawn. No alarms. No witnesses. They found the body at six in the middle of the platform." Quinn looked past him. A grey tarpaulin covered the shape of a man. Around it, a line of charcoal powder formed a broken circle. The dust on the platform held sweep lines, but not enough. Rook nodded toward a woman at the evidence table. "Who's that?" Eva Kowalski stood by the trestle with a worn leather satchel full of books slung over one shoulder. Her round glasses fogged in the cold air. Her curly red hair caught the lamp light, and she tucked a strand behind her left ear. Freckles stood out across her cheekbones. Quinn tapped the tape. "The woman who reads the old marginalia at the Museum. I called her in as an outside consultant." Rook's jaw tightened. "We don't get consultants for a collapse." Quinn turned her penlight toward the body. "Then why did you answer the phone?" Eva opened the satchel and set a small brass compass on the table. The casing wore a patina of verdigris. The face bore thin protective sigils, cut by a point too fine for human patience. The needle was black, hair-thin, and moved before Quinn touched it. "The Veil Market moves every full moon. When it moves, the site becomes a ledger. If something happens on the platform before the traders leave, the place remembers the debt." Rook tapped his notebook. "That's not evidence." Eva turned the compass. "Ask your forensics why the body is warm." Quinn moved through the scene in even steps. She walked the edge of the circle. The charcoal line held even except at four gaps, where small stones broke it. She knelt and lifted her penlight. The dust around the gaps showed crushed fragments, not footprints. The stones had found their places after the line took shape. Rook crouched by the tarp. "Forensics put the man in his forties. Waxed coat, market gloves, a bone token on a cord around his neck. No defensive injuries. No ligature marks. The lungs show no drowning. Stomach contents put death inside three hours." Quinn lifted her penlight to the tarp's edge. "Inside." Rook frowned. "That's all we have." Quinn moved to the evidence table in even steps. She lifted the brass key ring tied to the tarp. The key held iron teeth and no warmth. It did not match the service doors. The bone token around the man's neck lay flat, palm-sized, carved with a spiral. The cord showed wear, but the knot had not come from the man's hands. The knot held a market seal, the kind used to close a trader's stall. Eva leaned over the compass. "See that?" The needle had left the body. It pointed at a crack in the far wall, a thin seam between two platform tiles filled with newer cement. "Nearest supernatural rift." Rook made a sound like a cough. Quinn followed the needle. The crack ran downward, then split into a shallow hollow. She shone the light into it. A second bone token lay half buried in the mortar. The spiral matched the one around the man's neck, but this token carried a chip on the left edge. She returned to the tarp and lifted the dead man's neck token. The left edge stayed smooth. Rook watched. "Replica." Quinn set the smooth token beside the chipped one. "No. The chipped one has lived in that wall since the platform closed. The cement holds the original repair, not a fresh patch. Someone carried the body here and tied the replica to the cord. The real token never left the seam." Eva pulled a book from her satchel. The cover cracked, and gold letters marked the title. She opened it to a page of ink sketches. "The Veil Compass does not point to a rift by default. It points to the nearest broken rule. A door. A bargain. A debt." Rook closed his notebook. "You're telling me a dead man on a Tube platform is a broken rule." Quinn walked to the far wall. She placed her boot against the platform stone and measured the distance to the body with her eyes. The platform builders had planned it for two trains. The body lay in the middle, but the chalk circle held a larger reach than the stalls allowed. The circle crossed the old track line. "Look at the stalls." Rook turned. Each stall had rolled to the wall, but the nails in the stone still held their old positions. The charcoal circle cut across three of those nail marks. The body inside it could not have stood there when the traders left. Someone carried it in and drew the circle around it. Eva tugged a page from the book. "The spiral on the token is a Shade sign. It marks the bearer as owed. The chipped edge calls the debt. If the token stays in the wall, the debt stays open." Rook looked at the crack. "Then who set the body there?" Quinn crouched by the dead man's boots. The waxed soles held no moisture. The platform had dried near the tunnel mouth, and the sweep lines showed dark damp in a wide arc. The man's boots had never crossed that arc. "His feet." She tapped the platform stone. "He was not standing here when he died." Rook knelt. "Placed." "Placed and arranged. The boots point to the crack. The coat tails point away from it. A body dragged toward the wall would drag the coat. A body carried would leave shoulder folds. This man's coat stands open, but the lapels fold inward, as if someone straightened him after the fall." Eva leaned closer to the chalk circle. She lifted one of the small stones that broke the line. The stone held a chalky white base, and a sigil lay ground into it. The sigil matched the compass face. "Protective. Shade artisans use them to seal a working. But there are four. The circle needs five." Quinn looked around the scene. The work lamps, the stalls, the tape, the body, the crack. "The fifth is missing." Rook checked the floor. "Or it never held." Quinn's penlight moved over the body's left hand. The glove held a torn seam, and inside the palm, the man's skin pressed flat against something round. She peeled back the fabric with two fingers. A small brass disc sat in the dead man's hand. The disc held the size of a coin, an engraved sigil, and a chill that spread through Quinn's fingertips. The compass needle swung. It left the wall. It pointed at the disc in the dead man's hand. Quinn's leather watch ticked. The work lamps hummed. Rook stared at the needle, and his notebook stayed shut. Eva held her breath. Quinn lifted the disc. The moment it left the dead man's palm, the chalk circle cracked from the inside, and the stones rolled like loose teeth. The chipped token in the wall shifted in the mortar and set, flush and still. Rook stepped back. "That's not a coin." "It's a stopper." Quinn turned the disc. "And it does not belong in a hand." The needle shivered, then turned again. It pointed at Rook's notebook. Quinn looked at the notebook. The pen clipped to the cover held a bone token, chipped on the left edge, threaded through its metal band. Rook's hand moved to his chest.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags1
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences30
tagDensity0.033
leniency0.067
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1380
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
85.51% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1380
totalAiIsms4
found
0
word"stomach"
count1
1
word"warmth"
count1
2
word"measured"
count1
3
word"chill"
count1
highlights
0"stomach"
1"warmth"
2"measured"
3"chill"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences109
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount2
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences109
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences138
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen51
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1380
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions5
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
50.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions51
wordCount1011
uniqueNames9
maxNameDensity1.88
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity3.5
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Camden2
Undercroft1
Harlow1
Quinn19
Tube1
Road1
Rook17
Kowalski1
Eva8
persons
0"Undercroft"
1"Harlow"
2"Quinn"
3"Rook"
4"Kowalski"
5"Eva"
places
0"Camden"
1"Road"
globalScore0.56
windowScore0.5
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences81
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1380
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences138
matches
0"crossed that arc"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs78
mean17.69
std19.4
cv1.096
sampleLengths
070
157
211
321
435
59
62
749
84
918
103
117
127
137
1446
1530
164
173
184
198
2056
215
2238
238
241
252
264
2776
285
292
3026
313
327
3349
3417
352
361
379
3842
3925
4024
414
4214
4358
444
452
4651
477
4832
495
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences109
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs161
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences138
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1013
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount13
adverbRatio0.012833168805528134
lyAdverbCount1
lyAdverbRatio0.0009871668311944718
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences138
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences138
mean10
std7.71
cv0.771
sampleLengths
08
119
219
316
48
512
612
711
812
910
1011
1121
124
139
1411
1511
169
172
1818
198
2017
216
224
2318
243
257
267
277
2813
297
3015
3111
3230
334
343
354
368
378
387
3914
406
4110
4211
435
4438
458
461
472
484
499
35.51% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats20
diversityRatio0.26811594202898553
totalSentences138
uniqueOpeners37
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences105
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount19
totalSentences105
matches
0"Her cropped hair caught the"
1"Her leather watch ticked on"
2"Her round glasses fogged in"
3"Her curly red hair caught"
4"She walked the edge of"
5"She knelt and lifted her"
6"She lifted the brass key"
7"It did not match the"
8"It pointed at a crack"
9"She shone the light into"
10"She returned to the tarp"
11"She opened it to a"
12"She placed her boot against"
13"She tapped the platform stone."
14"She lifted one of the"
15"She peeled back the fabric"
16"It left the wall."
17"It pointed at the disc"
18"It pointed at Rook's notebook."
ratio0.181
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount103
totalSentences105
matches
0"The lift at Camden Undercroft"
1"The cage groaned as it"
2"Detective Harlow Quinn stepped out"
3"Her cropped hair caught the"
4"Her leather watch ticked on"
5"The old signage read Camden"
6"Stalls stood along the platform's"
7"Brass scales, glass jars, and"
8"The place smelled of wet"
9"DS Rook leaned on the"
10"Quinn looked past him."
11"A grey tarpaulin covered the"
12"The dust on the platform"
13"Rook nodded toward a woman"
14"Eva Kowalski stood by the"
15"Her round glasses fogged in"
16"Her curly red hair caught"
17"Freckles stood out across her"
18"Quinn tapped the tape."
19"Rook's jaw tightened."
ratio0.981
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences105
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences46
technicalSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags1
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
85.7005%