Run: 2026-09-03-01M1KXY25RZ88HYY8V6QFRBDET

Run Details

Duration:
4m 4s
Cost:
$0.037882
Provider:
Tencent

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Aurora flattened herself against the wet brick of the alley behind the Golden Empress and pressed a hand to her chest. The Heartstone Pendant burned against her skin, steady as a second heartbeat. Crimson light seeped between her fingers. "Feel that? It's not doing this for fun." Nyx's voice drifted from the pool of shadow at her feet, a whisper carried on the wind. "The tear sleeps just beyond the bins. Its edges are cut, not worn." Aurora followed their gaze. Nyx had no face in the dark, only the faint violet glow of eyes in a humanoid silhouette of living shadow. They stood solid enough to shoulder a bin aside, six-foot-two of night given shape. Isolde stepped around a stack of plastic crates. Silver hair reached her waist, her feet leaving no prints in the greasy gravel. Pale lavender eyes caught the streetlamp and held it. "The barrier between worlds is thin here. Thin, and hungry. A door stands where no door was carved." Aurora's left wrist throbbed, the crescent scar there pulling tight as she curled her fingers. She touched the Fae-Forged Blade strapped to her thigh. The moonsilver dagger stayed cold, leaf-shaped and slender, immune to the damp heat of the London summer night. "Then let's not knock. Let's walk in before some Warden comes to lock it." Nyx flowed forward and shoved a bin aside with a shadowed arm. The air behind it shimmered, a distortion only Isolde and the Shade could see. Aurora saw only the way her pendant's glow stretched toward it, pulled like a compass needle. She ducked through. For three steps there was nothing but the taste of copper and old smoke, the sensation of slipping through oiled silk. Then warm amber light slammed into her eyes. Aurora staggered onto soil that felt freshly turned, rich as a grave that had been planted instead of dug. Above, the sky burned a warm amber, the color of honey left too long in a pan, with no sun and no cloud to explain it. The light fell from everywhere at once, gilding rows of grapevines that marched away in every direction. The vines were thick as a man's thigh, their bark the color of burnt copper. Clusters of fruit hung heavy, not purple or green but a deep crimson that matched her pendant, glowing from within. Isolde glided down behind her. The grass where she passed did not bend. Nyx stepped out of the rift last, their shadow pulling into a humanoid shape. "Dymas. The Gluttony realm." Aurora's throat went dry. The air smelled of roasting meat, caramelized sugar, fermenting berries, and something sharper beneath, like vinegar and iron. Every breath tasted like a banquet left out in the sun. "We're not in Richmond anymore." She unsheathed the Fae blade. The moonsilver dagger gave off a cold pale gleam against the amber haze. Its chill bit her palm, a stark counterpoint to the heat pressing in from all sides. Isolde trailed a finger along a vine without touching it. "The first taste is never the last. The vine remembers the hand that pruned it, and the hand that bled for it." "Save the riddles for the road back. Which way is deeper?" Nyx pointed with a shadowed arm toward a low hill where the vineyard gave way to orchards. "That way. The soil drinks more the further you go. Hear it?" Aurora tilted her head. Beneath the rustle of leaves, a wet sound rose and fell, like something huge chewing. From farther off came the ring of a bronze gong, then a roar of approval far too moist to belong to a crowd of humans. The noise rolled across the fields, thick with hunger. They walked. The path between the rows was lined with crushed grape skins, still sticky underfoot. Aurora knelt, ignoring the stain on her jeans, and touched a fallen berry. It was warm, pulsing like a heartbeat. She snatched her hand back as the skin split and a thin sigh escaped, like steam from a kettle. "It's alive." Nyx's violet eyes narrowed. "Everything here is. Some just pretend to be food until you bite." Isolde's laugh sounded like wind in glass. "A guest who eats becomes a course. A course who refuses becomes compost." The vineyard ended at a hedge taller than a house. The branches were woven so tight they formed a living wall, and across the gap shimmered a faint distortion—a ward, similar to the Veil but anchored here. It hummed with a low note that made Aurora's teeth ache. Nyx's shadow rippled against the leaves. "Locked. Belphegor doesn't want stray mortals wandering into his pantry." Aurora raised the Fae blade. "Good thing I brought a key." She stepped forward and drew the edge across the woven branches. The blade met no resistance. The ward parted like smoke, the hedge sighing open, severed ends knitting behind them as if nothing had been cut. Cold light from the dagger licked along the wound and vanished. They passed into the orchard. The trees were ancient, their trunks gnarled and silvered with age, branches heavy with fruit that shifted color as it ripened—gold to red to a bruised purple. Some fruits held suggestions of a mouth or an eye that blinked when the wind turned. Lanterns of hollowed gourd hung from the boughs, each holding a captive flame that never flickered. Figures moved among the trees. Men and women in stained chef's whites, their sleeves rolled, their forearms marked with glowing sigils that pulsed in the same rhythm as Aurora's pendant. They carried baskets and ladders, moving with the brisk terror of people who had been given one job and no permission to stop. One woman climbed a ladder, plucked a fruit that whimpered, and dropped it into a basket lined with silk. A glowing brand on her neck flared as she worked. Aurora's stomach turned. "Those are helbound souls. From Earth." Nyx's shadow rippled. "Contracted. They came for the chance to cook for kings and got a prince instead." "Can we—" Isolde's pale eyes found Aurora, her expression unreadable. "No. A contract signed in Hel is a hook in the tongue. You cut it, you cut the soul." A gong rang again, closer. The orchard opened onto a terraced garden where long tables had been set beneath pergolas of flowering vine. The feasters sat on benches of polished bone, their bodies gaunt and their bellies swollen tight as drums. Their mouths stretched too wide, teeth too many, and they shoveled food with a desperation that never seemed to fill them. A whole roast beast turned on a spit above a pit of glowing coals, its skin lacquered to a mirror shine. Fountains bubbled with dark wine. Towers of pastry stood taller than Aurora, each layer thinner than paper. At the center of it all, on a dais of black marble, a mountain of a creature lounged on a heap of cushions. His skin was the color of overripe figs, his fingers thick as sausages, each knuckle jeweled. A crown of twisted vine and tarnished silver sat on his brow. He lifted a glistening slice of fruit on a golden fork, inspected it, and popped it into a mouth that stretched too wide. A sigh of pleasure rolled across the garden, and every feaster at the tables below paused to mimic the sound. Aurora's pendant pulsed hard, the crimson light flaring bright enough to be seen even in the amber glow. She clamped a hand over it. "It knows I'm here." Nyx stepped close, their shadow stretching over her like a cloak. "Then we keep moving. The deeper gardens hold older fruit. Older fruit remembers the way out." Isolde's gaze followed the prince, her pale eyes unreadable. "The prince keeps his larder alive. Would you be a guest, or the next course?" Aurora's grip tightened on the cold blade. "Neither. We take what we came for and we leave." She started down the terrace steps, toward a shadowed archway where the scent of spice and old magic grew stronger. The garden swallowed them, and the gong rang a third time, closer than before.
created_at"2026-09-03T15:24:25.153Z" 9/3/2026, 3:24:25 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1363
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
37.64% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1363
totalAiIsms17
found
0
word"whisper"
count1
1
word"throbbed"
count1
2
word"shimmered"
count2
3
word"silk"
count2
4
word"grave"
count1
5
word"chill"
count1
6
word"stark"
count1
7
word"flickered"
count1
8
word"pulsed"
count2
9
word"stomach"
count1
10
word"unreadable"
count2
11
word"marble"
count1
12
word"glistening"
count1
highlights
0"whisper"
1"throbbed"
2"shimmered"
3"silk"
4"grave"
5"chill"
6"stark"
7"flickered"
8"pulsed"
9"stomach"
10"unreadable"
11"marble"
12"glistening"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
highlights
0"eyes narrowed"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences86
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences86
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences108
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen28
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1361
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions0
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
78.83% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions44
wordCount1124
uniqueNames13
maxNameDensity1.42
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Golden1
Empress1
Heartstone1
Pendant1
Fae-Forged1
Blade1
London1
Isolde7
Shade1
Fae3
Veil1
Aurora16
Nyx9
persons
0"Pendant"
1"Blade"
2"Isolde"
3"Shade"
4"Aurora"
5"Nyx"
places
0"London"
1"Veil"
globalScore0.788
windowScore1
78.57% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences70
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"tasted like a banquet left out in the sun"
1"sounded like wind in glass"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.735
wordCount1361
matches
0"not purple or green but a deep crimson"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences108
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs54
mean25.2
std25.69
cv1.019
sampleLengths
039
18
217
313
470
518
642
714
842
93
1029
1197
1227
134
1433
155
1644
1722
1811
1917
2012
2153
2255
232
244
2512
267
2713
2854
2910
305
316
3247
335
3459
3582
363
376
383
3915
402
418
4219
43100
4494
4524
464
4711
4816
499
88.94% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount4
totalSentences86
matches
0"been planted"
1"was lined"
2"were woven"
3"been given"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs174
matches(empty)
89.95% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount2
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences2
totalSentences108
ratio0.019
matches
0"The branches were woven so tight they formed a living wall, and across the gap shimmered a faint distortion—a ward, similar to the Veil but anchored here."
1"The trees were ancient, their trunks gnarled and silvered with age, branches heavy with fruit that shifted color as it ripened—gold to red to a bruised purple."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1130
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount31
adverbRatio0.02743362831858407
lyAdverbCount4
lyAdverbRatio0.0035398230088495575
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences108
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences108
mean12.6
std6.45
cv0.512
sampleLengths
021
112
26
38
417
513
64
721
814
98
1014
119
1218
1315
149
1518
1614
1712
1814
1916
203
2121
228
2319
2426
2517
2615
2720
285
298
3014
314
324
3318
3411
355
365
3713
3816
3910
4022
4111
4217
4312
444
4515
4625
479
482
4914
64.20% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats4
diversityRatio0.4074074074074074
totalSentences108
uniqueOpeners44
39.22% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences85
matches
0"Then warm amber light slammed"
ratio0.012
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount16
totalSentences85
matches
0"They stood solid enough to"
1"She touched the Fae-Forged Blade"
2"She ducked through."
3"She unsheathed the Fae blade."
4"Its chill bit her palm,"
5"It was warm, pulsing like"
6"She snatched her hand back"
7"It hummed with a low"
8"She stepped forward and drew"
9"They passed into the orchard."
10"They carried baskets and ladders,"
11"Their mouths stretched too wide,"
12"His skin was the color"
13"He lifted a glistening slice"
14"She clamped a hand over"
15"She started down the terrace"
ratio0.188
18.82% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount75
totalSentences85
matches
0"Aurora flattened herself against the"
1"The Heartstone Pendant burned against"
2"Crimson light seeped between her"
3"Nyx's voice drifted from the"
4"Aurora followed their gaze."
5"Nyx had no face in"
6"They stood solid enough to"
7"Isolde stepped around a stack"
8"Aurora's left wrist throbbed, the"
9"She touched the Fae-Forged Blade"
10"The moonsilver dagger stayed cold,"
11"Nyx flowed forward and shoved"
12"The air behind it shimmered,"
13"Aurora saw only the way"
14"She ducked through."
15"Aurora staggered onto soil that"
16"The light fell from everywhere"
17"The vines were thick as"
18"Clusters of fruit hung heavy,"
19"Isolde glided down behind her."
ratio0.882
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences85
matches(empty)
ratio0
92.73% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences57
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"The light fell from everywhere at once, gilding rows of grapevines that marched away in every direction."
1"Clusters of fruit hung heavy, not purple or green but a deep crimson that matched her pendant, glowing from within."
2"The trees were ancient, their trunks gnarled and silvered with age, branches heavy with fruit that shifted color as it ripened—gold to red to a bruised purple."
3"He lifted a glistening slice of fruit on a golden fork, inspected it, and popped it into a mouth that stretched too wide."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags0
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
86.2965%