| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1363 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 37.64% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1363 | | totalAiIsms | 17 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "whisper" | | 1 | "throbbed" | | 2 | "shimmered" | | 3 | "silk" | | 4 | "grave" | | 5 | "chill" | | 6 | "stark" | | 7 | "flickered" | | 8 | "pulsed" | | 9 | "stomach" | | 10 | "unreadable" | | 11 | "marble" | | 12 | "glistening" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "eyes widened/narrowed" | | count | 1 |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 86 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 86 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 108 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 28 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1361 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 0 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 78.83% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 44 | | wordCount | 1124 | | uniqueNames | 13 | | maxNameDensity | 1.42 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | Golden | 1 | | Empress | 1 | | Heartstone | 1 | | Pendant | 1 | | Fae-Forged | 1 | | Blade | 1 | | London | 1 | | Isolde | 7 | | Shade | 1 | | Fae | 3 | | Veil | 1 | | Aurora | 16 | | Nyx | 9 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Pendant" | | 1 | "Blade" | | 2 | "Isolde" | | 3 | "Shade" | | 4 | "Aurora" | | 5 | "Nyx" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 0.788 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 78.57% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 70 | | glossingSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "tasted like a banquet left out in the sun" | | 1 | "sounded like wind in glass" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.735 | | wordCount | 1361 | | matches | | 0 | "not purple or green but a deep crimson" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 108 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 54 | | mean | 25.2 | | std | 25.69 | | cv | 1.019 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 39 | | 1 | 8 | | 2 | 17 | | 3 | 13 | | 4 | 70 | | 5 | 18 | | 6 | 42 | | 7 | 14 | | 8 | 42 | | 9 | 3 | | 10 | 29 | | 11 | 97 | | 12 | 27 | | 13 | 4 | | 14 | 33 | | 15 | 5 | | 16 | 44 | | 17 | 22 | | 18 | 11 | | 19 | 17 | | 20 | 12 | | 21 | 53 | | 22 | 55 | | 23 | 2 | | 24 | 4 | | 25 | 12 | | 26 | 7 | | 27 | 13 | | 28 | 54 | | 29 | 10 | | 30 | 5 | | 31 | 6 | | 32 | 47 | | 33 | 5 | | 34 | 59 | | 35 | 82 | | 36 | 3 | | 37 | 6 | | 38 | 3 | | 39 | 15 | | 40 | 2 | | 41 | 8 | | 42 | 19 | | 43 | 100 | | 44 | 94 | | 45 | 24 | | 46 | 4 | | 47 | 11 | | 48 | 16 | | 49 | 9 |
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| 88.94% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 4 | | totalSentences | 86 | | matches | | 0 | "been planted" | | 1 | "was lined" | | 2 | "were woven" | | 3 | "been given" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 174 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 89.95% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 2 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 2 | | totalSentences | 108 | | ratio | 0.019 | | matches | | 0 | "The branches were woven so tight they formed a living wall, and across the gap shimmered a faint distortion—a ward, similar to the Veil but anchored here." | | 1 | "The trees were ancient, their trunks gnarled and silvered with age, branches heavy with fruit that shifted color as it ripened—gold to red to a bruised purple." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1130 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 31 | | adverbRatio | 0.02743362831858407 | | lyAdverbCount | 4 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.0035398230088495575 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 108 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 108 | | mean | 12.6 | | std | 6.45 | | cv | 0.512 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 21 | | 1 | 12 | | 2 | 6 | | 3 | 8 | | 4 | 17 | | 5 | 13 | | 6 | 4 | | 7 | 21 | | 8 | 14 | | 9 | 8 | | 10 | 14 | | 11 | 9 | | 12 | 18 | | 13 | 15 | | 14 | 9 | | 15 | 18 | | 16 | 14 | | 17 | 12 | | 18 | 14 | | 19 | 16 | | 20 | 3 | | 21 | 21 | | 22 | 8 | | 23 | 19 | | 24 | 26 | | 25 | 17 | | 26 | 15 | | 27 | 20 | | 28 | 5 | | 29 | 8 | | 30 | 14 | | 31 | 4 | | 32 | 4 | | 33 | 18 | | 34 | 11 | | 35 | 5 | | 36 | 5 | | 37 | 13 | | 38 | 16 | | 39 | 10 | | 40 | 22 | | 41 | 11 | | 42 | 17 | | 43 | 12 | | 44 | 4 | | 45 | 15 | | 46 | 25 | | 47 | 9 | | 48 | 2 | | 49 | 14 |
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| 64.20% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 4 | | diversityRatio | 0.4074074074074074 | | totalSentences | 108 | | uniqueOpeners | 44 | |
| 39.22% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 85 | | matches | | 0 | "Then warm amber light slammed" |
| | ratio | 0.012 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 16 | | totalSentences | 85 | | matches | | 0 | "They stood solid enough to" | | 1 | "She touched the Fae-Forged Blade" | | 2 | "She ducked through." | | 3 | "She unsheathed the Fae blade." | | 4 | "Its chill bit her palm," | | 5 | "It was warm, pulsing like" | | 6 | "She snatched her hand back" | | 7 | "It hummed with a low" | | 8 | "She stepped forward and drew" | | 9 | "They passed into the orchard." | | 10 | "They carried baskets and ladders," | | 11 | "Their mouths stretched too wide," | | 12 | "His skin was the color" | | 13 | "He lifted a glistening slice" | | 14 | "She clamped a hand over" | | 15 | "She started down the terrace" |
| | ratio | 0.188 | |
| 18.82% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 75 | | totalSentences | 85 | | matches | | 0 | "Aurora flattened herself against the" | | 1 | "The Heartstone Pendant burned against" | | 2 | "Crimson light seeped between her" | | 3 | "Nyx's voice drifted from the" | | 4 | "Aurora followed their gaze." | | 5 | "Nyx had no face in" | | 6 | "They stood solid enough to" | | 7 | "Isolde stepped around a stack" | | 8 | "Aurora's left wrist throbbed, the" | | 9 | "She touched the Fae-Forged Blade" | | 10 | "The moonsilver dagger stayed cold," | | 11 | "Nyx flowed forward and shoved" | | 12 | "The air behind it shimmered," | | 13 | "Aurora saw only the way" | | 14 | "She ducked through." | | 15 | "Aurora staggered onto soil that" | | 16 | "The light fell from everywhere" | | 17 | "The vines were thick as" | | 18 | "Clusters of fruit hung heavy," | | 19 | "Isolde glided down behind her." |
| | ratio | 0.882 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 85 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 92.73% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 57 | | technicalSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "The light fell from everywhere at once, gilding rows of grapevines that marched away in every direction." | | 1 | "Clusters of fruit hung heavy, not purple or green but a deep crimson that matched her pendant, glowing from within." | | 2 | "The trees were ancient, their trunks gnarled and silvered with age, branches heavy with fruit that shifted color as it ripened—gold to red to a bruised purple." | | 3 | "He lifted a glistening slice of fruit on a golden fork, inspected it, and popped it into a mouth that stretched too wide." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 0 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | |