Run: 2026-09-03-01M1KY4NBY0YXNW82W0PGH5YZ7

Run Details

Duration:
7m 54s
Cost:
$0.054734
Provider:
Reka

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Aurora stepped through the gap in the standing stones at 11:47. The gap had not existed ten minutes earlier. The two oaks that leaned against the northern stone had grown a new seam between their trunks, and the seam opened onto a hollow that smelled of wet chalk and crushed mint. Her phone screen lit her hand. The battery read twenty-two percent. The pendant rested against her collarbone, deep crimson, warm enough to make her swallow. She had followed the pendant for nine nights. It had begun in the delivery van, a pulse under her throat after the Richmond run. The customer had pressed a white paper into her palm and given her no name. The paper held a single line in blue ink: The stones will tell you what it is. The pendant had gone cold in the van, then warm at the park rail, then cold beneath the first oak. By the time she reached the stone circle, the heat had settled into a low ache near the scar on her left wrist. The Fae Grove opened before her. Wildflowers ringed the hollow in pale bands: blue, white, yellow, and a red so dark it looked like old brick. The blooms faced the centre. No insects moved among them. The oaks around the boundary stood black against the moon, and their leaves kept every edge sharp. The stones rose in a rough arc, moss thick on the lower faces, and the moss carried no footprints. Aurora pulled her coat tighter. "Right." The word reached the flowers and stopped. She walked along the line the standing stones marked. The line held no path. It held a run of flat leaves, each leaf pressed to the earth in the same direction, all pointing in. The pendant gave a small throb against her chest. The heat moved down the silver chain and into her skin. Her left wrist itched where the crescent scar sat, a thin pressure, then nothing. Her phone changed. 11:58. She stopped. The screen flickered, held, then showed 11:49. The battery rose to twenty-three percent. Aurora turned the phone over. The back glass drew cold from the air. The screen glowed through the metal case. "Fine." She put it in her pocket. "One step. Then home." The line of flat leaves curved toward the oldest oak. Its roots lifted from the soil in broad curves, forming a shallow circle. At the centre of the circle the earth held a bare patch. The dark soil looked pressed flat, as if something had stood there and left no shape but an absence. The pendant grew warmer. The silver chain bit into her collarbone. A twig snapped. Aurora stood still. The sound came from the roots, close enough to touch. A second snap followed, farther away, then a third, closer. The three sounds landed in a line, like a hand tapping the ground. "Who's there?" The wildflowers turned their heads one degree toward the roots. Aurora's mouth went dry. She looked at the boundary stones. The gap had closed. The oaks stood apart, and between them the night outside the grove lay flat and silver. She could see the rail, the path, the streetlight at the park edge. The streetlight flickered. The rail sat farther than it should. The streetlight stood taller. The distance had grown while she walked. The pendant pulsed. She moved toward the gap. The flat-leaf line bent under her boots. The flowers opened wider. The roots of the old oak shifted in her vision, not moving, appearing a half-foot closer each time she looked. The bare patch at the centre of the root circle widened by a narrow ring of dark soil. The pendant burned. Aurora stopped at the nearest standing stone. The moss on its face gave under her palm. Beneath the moss, the stone held heat. She lifted her hand. The pendant pulled until her throat ached. The crimson gem gave a small glow, a red bead in the dark. "Hey." She turned her face to the stones. "I'm here." No answer. The streetlight outside flickered a second time. The rail stayed far. The flat-leaf line turned in a slow spiral toward the old oak. Her phone buzzed. The screen showed Eva's name. Aurora let it ring. The call stopped. The screen went dark. When she tapped it, the time read 00:21. She let it ring a second time. This time she lifted the phone to her ear. The line crackled with static and the faint sound of the flat above Silas' bar. The kettle ticked. A chair leg scraped. "Eva." "Rory?" The voice came thin. "You said you'd be back before midnight." "I'm at the old stones." A pause. The kettle ticked. "The bag's on the kitchen table." Eva's voice dropped. "The pendant's not in it." Aurora's hand closed over the pendant. The heat under her throat spiked. "It's here." The line cut. The screen showed no signal. The flat-leaf line reached no end. It coiled around the old oak. The oak's bark showed smooth places, and the smooth places formed lines. The lines met. Aurora traced them with her eyes. They made a mouth. The mouth opened. The pendant went cold. The cold moved from her throat into her wrists, then along the bones of her shoulders. The flowers stopped turning. The bare patch at the centre of the roots sank an inch. A thin silver line rose from the soil, no thicker than a thread, and stretched toward the nearest stone. It did not glow. It caught the moonlight and held it. A footstep came from the right. Aurora did not turn. The step matched hers: boot on leaf, heel first, a small scrape of rubber. It came half a beat after her own silence. She stood, and the step continued a single time, a second time, then stopped. "Come out." The silver thread stretched past her shoulder. It touched the air behind her left ear. The moonlight along it shivered. The flowers leaned in, not as a group but one at a time, each bloom settling closer to the stem of the one beside it. The dark between the oaks thickened. A shape stood there, thin and high, with no edges. It did not move. It had not been there a moment ago. It filled the space. The pendant pulsed a single time, with enough heat to sting. Aurora's left wrist flared. The scar drew tight, a small crescent of heat against the cold. The silver thread touched the back of her neck. The mouth in the oak bark opened wider. The bare patch at the centre of the roots opened to a seam of black soil, and the seam pulled at the pendant, at the chain, at the skin beneath her throat. The footstep returned. This time it came from behind her head. The pendant stopped. The seam in the earth widened. The air behind her shoulder drew cold. "Rory."
created_at"2026-09-03T15:28:01.416Z" 9/3/2026, 3:28:01 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags1
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences15
tagDensity0.067
leniency0.133
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1160
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
61.21% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1160
totalAiIsms9
found
0
word"pulse"
count1
1
word"throb"
count1
2
word"flickered"
count3
3
word"pulsed"
count2
4
word"traced"
count1
5
word"silence"
count1
highlights
0"pulse"
1"throb"
2"flickered"
3"pulsed"
4"traced"
5"silence"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences132
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences132
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences147
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen32
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1160
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions1
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions16
wordCount1117
uniqueNames5
maxNameDensity0.98
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Richmond1
Fae1
Grove1
Eva2
Aurora11
persons
0"Eva"
1"Aurora"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Fae"
2"Grove"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences83
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"looked like old brick"
27.59% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches2
per1kWords1.724
wordCount1160
matches
0"no shape but"
1"not as a group but one at a time, each bloom settling closer to the stem of the"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences147
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs53
mean21.89
std26.55
cv1.213
sampleLengths
076
199
26
366
45
51
67
768
84
935
101
116
124
1365
143
1536
162
1710
1864
193
2057
2147
221
237
242
2525
2627
2738
281
291
304
317
325
335
346
353
365
3712
382
3948
404
4162
426
4341
442
4577
4611
4765
483
498
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences132
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs164
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences147
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount765
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount15
adverbRatio0.0196078431372549
lyAdverbCount0
lyAdverbRatio0
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences147
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences147
mean7.89
std5.85
cv0.741
sampleLengths
011
18
232
36
45
514
68
716
815
917
1020
1123
126
1320
145
155
1617
1719
185
191
207
219
225
2320
249
2511
2614
273
281
292
307
316
325
338
347
351
366
374
3810
3913
4012
4119
424
437
443
453
4610
4710
4813
492
25.00% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats44
diversityRatio0.17123287671232876
totalSentences146
uniqueOpeners25
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences128
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount26
totalSentences128
matches
0"Her phone screen lit her"
1"She had followed the pendant"
2"It had begun in the"
3"She walked along the line"
4"It held a run of"
5"Her left wrist itched where"
6"Her phone changed."
7"She put it in her"
8"Its roots lifted from the"
9"She looked at the boundary"
10"She could see the rail,"
11"She moved toward the gap."
12"She lifted her hand."
13"She turned her face to"
14"Her phone buzzed."
15"She let it ring a"
16"It coiled around the old"
17"They made a mouth."
18"It did not glow."
19"It caught the moonlight and"
ratio0.203
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount123
totalSentences128
matches
0"Aurora stepped through the gap"
1"The gap had not existed"
2"The two oaks that leaned"
3"Her phone screen lit her"
4"The battery read twenty-two percent."
5"The pendant rested against her"
6"She had followed the pendant"
7"It had begun in the"
8"The customer had pressed a"
9"The paper held a single"
10"The pendant had gone cold"
11"The Fae Grove opened before"
12"Wildflowers ringed the hollow in"
13"The blooms faced the centre."
14"The oaks around the boundary"
15"The stones rose in a"
16"Aurora pulled her coat tighter."
17"The word reached the flowers"
18"She walked along the line"
19"The line held no path."
ratio0.961
39.06% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences128
matches
0"By the time she reached"
ratio0.008
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences39
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"The two oaks that leaned against the northern stone had grown a new seam between their trunks, and the seam opened onto a hollow that smelled of wet chalk and c…"
1"The dark soil looked pressed flat, as if something had stood there and left no shape but an absence."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags1
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
85.0952%