"Aurora Carter stood in the gap, one hand still wrapped around the last of Eva’s three deadbolts, and wished—uselessly—that she’d bothered to check the peephole first."
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"He leaned on the ivory-handled cane, his heterochromatic eyes—one amber, one black as a shard of obsidian—met hers, bright blue and narrowed with shock."
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"At twenty-five, she’d thought she was done with doorstep surprises; then again, at twenty-five she’d also thought she was done with Lucien Moreau, and look how well that had turned out."
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"The cat had never liked Evan—which, in hindsight, should have been the first clue about her taste in men—but of course Ptolemy remembered Lucien."
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"“Let me in, Aurora,” he said, and it was the use of her full name—the one she’d forbidden him, the one that had always sounded like a caress in his mouth—that broke her stillness."
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"He was taller than she remembered—five-eleven of tailored menace—and the scent of him cut through the curry smell: sandalwood, rain, and something faintly scorched, like the air after a match is blown out."
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"When she returned, she set the kit on the arm of the chair and knelt—ignoring the way the small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist caught the lamplight, the one she’d carried since a childhood accident she never talked about—and peeled back the torn lapel of his suit."
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"“A collector. Someone who thinks I owe them a debt my father left unpaid in Avaros.” His amber eye caught the light; the black one stayed flat, unreadable."
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"She was good in a crisis; that was the whole reason Lucien had ever looked twice at her, back when she’d been just a delivery rider for Yu-Fei Cheung’s Golden Empress, with a smart mouth and a talent for talking her way out of parking tickets."
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"The amber eye searched her face; the black eye, flat and depthless, gave away nothing."
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"He smiled then, properly, and the years and the hurt and the things they hadn’t said didn’t disappear—but the air between them shifted, charged and alive, the way it always had been."
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"She was good in a crisis; that was the whole reason Lucien had ever looked twice at her, back when she’d been just a delivery rider for Yu-Fei Cheung’s Golden E…"
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"Slowly, carefully, as if she were a spooked horse, he reached out and brushed a strand of straight shoulder-length black hair back from her cheek."
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"Aurora looked at him: the platinum hair, the tailored charcoal suit gone to ruin, the half-demon who had walked out of her life and now sat in the middle of the…"