Run: 2026-09-03-01M1KY7C5S0QNEAG4J2Q6V0G37

Run Details

Duration:
3m 53s
Cost:
$0.035307
Provider:
Tencent

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The green neon sign above the door of The Raven's Nest hummed, a drowned bluebottle, as Aurora shouldered through into the dim. Inside, the air held lemon polish and old paper. Maps curled across the walls like dried skin, coastlines and borders of countries that no longer existed, pinned among black-and-white photographs of men in raincoats who had forgotten how to smile. The bookshelf at the back looked ordinary. Everything in a spymaster's life did. She set the Golden Empress bag on the counter. Greaseproof paper crinkled, the smell of ginger and scallion rising between them. The man behind the bar did not turn at once. He polished the same patch of wood, the silver signet ring on his right hand catching the low light. When he straightened, the movement dragged at his left leg. A slight limp. He turned, hazel eyes landing on her, and the cloth stilled. Recognition struck him like a fist to the sternum. "Rory." The name hung in the space between the maps. Aurora's fingers found the small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist, the one she'd had since a childhood accident, the one she touched when the world tilted. "It's Laila now." He set the cloth down, the rag leaving a damp circle on the wood. "Laila." He turned the name over, found the edges false. "You grew up. Last I heard, you were reading Pre-Law at Cardiff." "I heard you were dead." The words came out flat. "Prague. Or a ditch. Or both." A muscle jumped in his beard, that grey-streaked auburn gone more grey than auburn now. He stepped out from behind the bar, favouring the leg, and she saw the full change. The man she'd known at seventeen had been all sharp angles and restless energy, dark auburn hair, no beard, a leather jacket that smelled of cigarette smoke and coming rain. He'd moved like a man who never sat with his back to a door. This Silas carried quiet authority in the set of his shoulders, a beard trimmed close to the jaw, a slight limp from an old knee injury, and eyes that had spent too long watching entrances. "Prague wasn't my finest hour." He reached for a glass, polished it though it already shone. "A botched operation. Left me with this." He nodded at his leg. "And a desk job I couldn't stomach. So I bought a bar. The maps are for show. The bookshelf leads to a room where men talk without being overheard." Aurora glanced at the bookshelf, then back at him. "You're a spymaster in a Soho bar." "A retired one." He set the glass down, the signet ring tapping wood. "You were seventeen the last time I saw you. You had a fringe that hid your eyes and a habit of stealing the last biscuit from the tin." "I was seventeen." She touched the scar again. "You came to Dad's chambers in Cardiff. You and him argued about something you wouldn't say in front of me. He told me to call you Uncle Si. I wouldn't." "No." A ghost of something crossed his face, gone before she could name it. "You called me Silas. Said it made me sound like the villain in one of your mother's novels. Jennifer's Welsh, isn't she? A teacher. She made me eat Welsh cakes until I thought I'd burst." "She still does." Aurora's throat tightened. The bag from Golden Empress sat between them, grease spreading through the paper. "You didn't come back. After that day, no letters. No calls. Dad stopped saying your name. I thought you'd died in some alley with a bullet in you." "Worse." He leaned on the counter, the ring tapping once. "I lived. I told myself distance was protection. That if I stayed away, the people I—" He stopped, jaw working under the beard. "Your father wrote to me. Three times. I never wrote back. I thought silence was kinder than a man with blood on his hands turning up at your door." The words settled like dust on the maps. Aurora stared at the photograph nearest the till, a black-and-white shot of a street she didn't recognize, a man with his back to the camera. The weight of the years pressed in, all the versions of Silas she'd invented to fill the silence: the dead hero, the coward, the stranger who'd forgotten her. None of them matched the man with the slight limp and the grey in his hair. "I could have used you." The admission came out quieter than she intended. "When I left Cardiff, when I took the flat upstairs under a name that isn't mine. Laila, because Rory Carter studied law and came home with a man who thought love was a fist. Eva got me out. Eva found this place. She didn't know it was yours." Silas's hazel eyes lifted to the ceiling, to the flat above the bar where she'd been sleeping for a week without knowing who owned the floor beneath her. "You're my tenant." "Under Laila." She shrugged, the delivery jacket creasing. "It was cheap. The locks looked solid. The city's good at swallowing people if you let it." He poured a measure of amber liquid, slid it toward her. The glass left a ring on the counter. "And Rory? Is she gone?" "Rory's gone." She didn't reach for the drink. "Laila delivers for Yu-Fei Cheung by day and checks the lock twice by night. Laila doesn't do law. Laila does what it takes." Silas's hand closed around his own glass, the signet ring pressing into the wood. "I should have been there." The admission hung in the dim, quiet as the dust on the maps. "Your father wrote. I had the letters. I read them until the ink faded and then I put them in a drawer and bought a bar instead of a ticket to Cardiff." Aurora's bright blue eyes fixed on him, straight shoulder-length black hair falling forward. "You should have come to the door. You should have seen what he did to me and done something. You were MI6. You knew things. You could have—" Her voice broke. She looked at the crescent scar, the mark from a childhood accident that had nothing to do with Evan and everything to do with the fact that she was still here, still breathing, still hiding. "I know." Silas's voice roughened. "I know what I could have done. I was a coward in a leather jacket, and then I was a coward with a limp. Time doesn't excuse it, Rory. It just piles up." She picked up the glass then, the amber catching the light, the whiskey smelling of Ireland and her father's study. "To silence," she said, and didn't drink. Silas's signet ring tapped the counter once, twice. "To the years I can't give back."
created_at"2026-09-03T15:29:30.31Z" 9/3/2026, 3:29:30 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags17
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences36
tagDensity0.472
leniency0.944
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1142
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
78.11% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1142
totalAiIsms5
found
0
word"stomach"
count1
1
word"silence"
count3
2
word"weight"
count1
highlights
0"stomach"
1"silence"
2"weight"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences52
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences52
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences71
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen48
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1142
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions6
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions20
wordCount675
uniqueNames8
maxNameDensity0.89
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Silas"
discoveredNames
Raven1
Nest1
Aurora6
Golden2
Empress2
Silas6
Evan1
Ireland1
persons
0"Raven"
1"Nest"
2"Aurora"
3"Empress"
4"Silas"
5"Evan"
places
0"Golden"
1"Ireland"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences44
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1142
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences71
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs36
mean31.72
std25.64
cv0.808
sampleLengths
075
121
253
39
41
536
63
714
822
916
10110
1157
129
137
1441
1538
1649
1747
1862
1977
2061
2128
223
2325
2419
255
2631
2714
2850
2913
3066
3138
3220
337
348
357
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences52
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs112
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences71
ratio0
matches(empty)
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount682
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"small crescent-shaped scar"
adverbCount21
adverbRatio0.030791788856304986
lyAdverbCount0
lyAdverbRatio0
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences71
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences71
mean16.08
std10.16
cv0.632
sampleLengths
022
19
231
37
46
59
612
710
819
910
103
1111
129
131
149
1527
163
1714
1810
1912
2010
216
2215
2316
2430
2514
2635
2716
2812
2929
309
317
3213
3328
348
3530
3614
3735
386
3913
4028
4110
4223
4329
448
4525
4628
4716
4813
4948
59.62% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats1
diversityRatio0.36619718309859156
totalSentences71
uniqueOpeners26
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences52
matches(empty)
ratio0
66.15% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount20
totalSentences52
matches
0"She set the Golden Empress"
1"He polished the same patch"
2"He turned, hazel eyes landing"
3"He set the cloth down,"
4"He turned the name over,"
5"He stepped out from behind"
6"He'd moved like a man"
7"He reached for a glass,"
8"He nodded at his leg"
9"He set the glass down,"
10"She touched the scar again"
11"He leaned on the counter,"
12"He stopped, jaw working under"
13"She shrugged, the delivery jacket"
14"He poured a measure of"
15"She didn't reach for the"
16"Her voice broke"
17"She looked at the crescent"
18"She picked up the glass"
19"she said, and didn't drink"
ratio0.385
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount50
totalSentences52
matches
0"The green neon sign above"
1"Maps curled across the walls"
2"The bookshelf at the back"
3"Everything in a spymaster's life"
4"She set the Golden Empress"
5"Greaseproof paper crinkled, the smell"
6"The man behind the bar"
7"He polished the same patch"
8"A slight limp."
9"He turned, hazel eyes landing"
10"Recognition struck him like a"
11"The name hung in the"
12"Aurora's fingers found the small"
13"He set the cloth down,"
14"He turned the name over,"
15"The words came out flat"
16"A muscle jumped in his"
17"He stepped out from behind"
18"The man she'd known at"
19"He'd moved like a man"
ratio0.962
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences52
matches(empty)
ratio0
53.57% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences24
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"Maps curled across the walls like dried skin, coastlines and borders of countries that no longer existed, pinned among black-and-white photographs of men in rai…"
1"The man she'd known at seventeen had been all sharp angles and restless energy, dark auburn hair, no beard, a leather jacket that smelled of cigarette smoke and…"
2"She looked at the crescent scar, the mark from a childhood accident that had nothing to do with Evan and everything to do with the fact that she was still here,…"
36.76% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags17
uselessAdditionCount3
matches
0"He set, the signet ring tapping wood"
1"He leaned, the ring tapping once"
2"She shrugged, the delivery jacket creasing"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags1
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences36
tagDensity0.028
leniency0.056
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
82.9408%