Run: 2026-09-03-01M1KY8YMKKSNJQAF6QQZ55E89

Run Details

Duration:
8m 10s
Cost:
$0.058795
Provider:
CoreWeave

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The green sign above the Raven’s Nest ticked against the dark. Rain ran down the glass in thin silver threads. Rory balanced three trays of Golden Empress soup on her hip and kept her shoulders low. The bar held the smell of damp coats, gin, and the yellowed paper maps that climbed the walls. Black-and-white photographs caught the light, faces cut off at the edges. Silas moved behind the counter with his left foot dragging a half-step. His silver ring flashed as he wiped a glass. Aurora set the trays on the high table. Steam curled into the air. Silas pushed a glass of water toward her. She drank. The door drew back. A woman stood under the awning. Her coat was black, tailored at the waist, and her hair lay flat against her skull. A strand of white split the dark at her temple. She had a small brass key between her fingers and turned it twice. "Rory." Aurora’s hand went still on the tray. The soup gave a small tremor. She looked up. "You still work here?" Eva stepped inside. The door closed behind her. The rain kept going outside, but the sound stopped at the glass. Aurora took the apron string in her teeth and lifted it off. The black hair fell to her shoulders. Her bright blue eyes stayed on Eva’s face. The face held the old roundness around the mouth, but the mouth had gone straight. "You got taller." "You got smaller." Silas set a bottle of whisky on the counter. He did not reach for a glass. Eva looked at him. "Si." "You took a wide way back." "I took the road I found." Silas turned to the maps on the wall. His fingers brushed an old photograph. The photograph showed a train platform, a crowd, and two girls at the edge of the frame. One held a bicycle. The other held a coat. Aurora moved to the bar. "Leave the bottle." Eva’s hand went to the brass key. She set it on the counter. The key made a small bright sound. Aurora poured two measures of water into two glasses. She slid one across the wood. The glass stopped at the counter’s edge. Eva did not move. "You came here on purpose." "I came for a contact." "The contact sent you to my table." Eva’s eyes went to the apron hanging from Aurora’s neck. "I saw you through the window. I saw the restaurant name." Aurora pulled the apron free. She dropped it on a stool. The fabric made a flat noise. Eva leaned on the counter. Her coat had a scratch along the sleeve, fresh and white. A thin line of mud marked her boot. She had walked in from somewhere rough. "I kept your number." "Numbers do not keep people." "I know." Aurora wiped the counter with a cloth. She moved in small circles. The cloth made a dry sound on the wood. She stopped at the edge of the maps. "You should have called." "I called." "You rang the flat." "I rang the flat." "That flat is a laundrette now." Eva’s jaw moved. She picked up the brass key and turned it between her fingers. The metal warmed under her touch. "You were supposed to call." "I was supposed to be safe." "You were supposed to leave your door open." Aurora laughed. The sound had no warmth. She picked up the cloth again. Eva set the key down. She looked at the photographs on the wall. One showed a woman in a train station, her bag open, papers spilling. Another showed a man with his back to the camera, a cigarette in his hand. The faces had no names. "I used to tell myself you were angry with me." "I was angry with a lot of things." "You were angry with me." Aurora set the cloth on the counter. She folded her arms. The crescent scar on her left wrist caught the light. The scar was thin, small, and old. It sat under the bone like a pale crescent moon. Eva looked at the scar. Her eyes stayed there. "That’s new." "It’s from a fall." "You fell." "The pavement does not move." Silas limped to the far end of the bar. He opened a drawer. He pulled out a pack of cigarettes. He did not light one. He placed a lighter on the counter. Eva looked at him. "You still collect people’s bad habits." "I collect everything people drop." Aurora watched the drawer close. The bar had fewer chairs than it used to. The maps had spread over the walls, and the photographs had changed. The Raven’s Nest kept time in paper and faces. Eva picked up the whisky bottle. She poured a measure. She drank it in one swallow. Her throat worked. "I was twenty-two when you left Cardiff." "So was I." "You were twenty-two and you were going to be a barrister’s daughter with a plan." "I was going to be a pre-law student who could not sleep." Eva set the bottle down. Her hand rested on the wood. The scratch on her sleeve caught the light. "I wanted you to come." "You did." "I wanted you to have a door." "A door is a door." Eva turned to Aurora. The white strand at her temple made her face sit older than the old photographs. The mouth sat above the collar of her coat. The old roundness had no room left in the lines. "What door did you get?" Aurora looked at the bar, the rain, the green sign. She touched the scar on her wrist. The touch was light. "The one that kept me alive." Eva’s hand closed into a fist. She opened it again. The brass key lay on the counter between them. The key had a long neck and a round head. It looked like a small door. "I should have been in London." "You were in London." "Where?" "Wherever." Eva’s mouth tightened. She looked at Silas. He stood at the maps, his ring glinting. He watched the two of them with a stillness that had weight. Aurora picked up the key. She turned it in her palm. The metal was warm from Eva’s fingers. "Who is the contact?" "The one I told you." "You told me nothing." "I told you where to look." Aurora set the key back on the counter. She pushed it an inch toward Eva. The key slid on the wood and stopped. "You came here because you wanted to see me." Eva did not answer. "You came here because you wanted to see what I became." Eva’s eyes moved to the Golden Empress napkin on the high table. A ring of sauce marked the paper. The napkin had a red dragon and a circle of Chinese characters. "I wanted to see if you were alive." "You could have called." "Callers leave messages." "I did not have a machine." "You had a flat." "You knew I would not answer." Eva reached for the glass of water Aurora had poured. She drank. Her hands lay still on the wood. In Cardiff, her hands used to shake when the rain came hard. She used to tap the windowsill and hum a song that had no name. Aurora watched her. The bar filled with small sounds. A pipe ticked in the corner. The neon gave a short buzz. The rain moved across the street and took the reflections with it. "Tell me what changed." Eva looked at the photographs. The train platform. The open bag. The man with his back to the camera. "I learned to close the door." "You learned to lock it." "I learned to keep the inside from leaking." Aurora picked up the cloth again. She wiped the counter in one long line. The wood showed the dark grain under the water. "You kept me inside." "You kept yourself inside." Eva set down the glass. The glass made a small round sound. She reached into her coat and pulled out a folded paper. She placed it on the counter. The paper was thin, grey, and creased at one corner. It had no writing on the face. Aurora looked at it. "This is not a message." "It is a door." "You do not get to hand me doors." "I never did." Silas stepped away from the maps. He stood at the edge of the counter. The light from the green sign fell across his beard. His left leg bore less weight. "You make rooms out of empty corners." Aurora looked at the paper. Her fingers hovered over it. The scar on her wrist ached with the cold. Eva moved to the door. She pulled off her gloves. The gloves were black, thin, and split at one knuckle. She left them on the stool. Her bare hands looked pale and rough. "I am not here to be your old friend." "I did not ask you to be." Eva paused. The rain pressed against the glass. The green sign ticked. The paper lay on the counter, a small grey square in the warm bar light. Aurora did not pick it up. She wiped her hand on the apron hanging at her side. The water glass between them left a wet mark on the wood. The mark spread across the grain. The door opened. Eva stepped into the rain. The door closed. The bar kept its low light. The paper waited on the counter. Aurora’s hand stayed closed around the cloth. The neon ticked above the street.
created_at"2026-09-03T15:30:21.978Z" 9/3/2026, 3:30:21 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1592
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
87.44% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1592
totalAiIsms4
found
0
word"warmth"
count1
1
word"glinting"
count1
2
word"weight"
count2
highlights
0"warmth"
1"glinting"
2"weight"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences166
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences166
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences237
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen18
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1592
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions11
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
33.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions65
wordCount1217
uniqueNames9
maxNameDensity2.14
worstName"Eva"
maxWindowNameDensity4
worstWindowName"Eva"
discoveredNames
Raven2
Nest2
Golden2
Empress2
Eva26
Aurora22
Silas7
Chinese1
Cardiff1
persons
0"Raven"
1"Nest"
2"Eva"
3"Aurora"
4"Silas"
places
0"Golden"
1"Cardiff"
globalScore0.432
windowScore0.333
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences114
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"looked like a small door"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1592
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences237
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs120
mean13.27
std13.9
cv1.048
sampleLengths
086
123
24
345
41
516
64
720
842
93
103
1116
124
131
146
156
1640
175
183
1920
2022
214
225
235
247
2510
2611
2717
2831
294
305
312
3229
334
342
354
364
376
3821
395
406
418
4213
4346
4410
458
465
4738
489
492
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences166
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs197
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences237
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1220
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount11
adverbRatio0.009016393442622951
lyAdverbCount0
lyAdverbRatio0
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences237
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences237
mean6.72
std3.24
cv0.482
sampleLengths
011
19
216
318
411
512
69
78
85
98
102
114
126
1316
1410
1513
161
177
186
193
204
213
225
2312
2412
257
268
2715
283
293
309
317
324
331
346
356
368
376
3817
394
405
415
423
437
446
457
469
476
487
494
38.19% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats28
diversityRatio0.1308016877637131
totalSentences237
uniqueOpeners31
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences162
matches(empty)
ratio0
99.01% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount49
totalSentences162
matches
0"His silver ring flashed as"
1"Her coat was black, tailored"
2"She had a small brass"
3"She looked up."
4"Her bright blue eyes stayed"
5"He did not reach for"
6"His fingers brushed an old"
7"She set it on the"
8"She slid one across the"
9"She dropped it on a"
10"Her coat had a scratch"
11"She had walked in from"
12"She moved in small circles."
13"She stopped at the edge"
14"She picked up the brass"
15"She picked up the cloth"
16"She looked at the photographs"
17"She folded her arms."
18"It sat under the bone"
19"Her eyes stayed there."
ratio0.302
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount158
totalSentences162
matches
0"The green sign above the"
1"Rain ran down the glass"
2"Rory balanced three trays of"
3"The bar held the smell"
4"Silas moved behind the counter"
5"His silver ring flashed as"
6"Aurora set the trays on"
7"Steam curled into the air."
8"Silas pushed a glass of"
9"The door drew back."
10"A woman stood under the"
11"Her coat was black, tailored"
12"A strand of white split"
13"She had a small brass"
14"Aurora’s hand went still on"
15"The soup gave a small"
16"She looked up."
17"Eva stepped inside."
18"The door closed behind her."
19"The rain kept going outside,"
ratio0.975
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences162
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences38
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"She used to tap the windowsill and hum a song that had no name."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags0
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
85.2656%