Run: 2026-09-03-01M1KYAEN21WEM4VQVJFMFNAYK

Run Details

Duration:
4m 16s
Cost:
$0.038460
Provider:
Tencent

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The rift yawned between two ancient oak standing stones, a tear in the world that smelled of burnt sugar and roasting meat. Beyond the opening stretched a sky the color of hardened honey, warm and thick, holding no sun and no stars. Aurora felt the Heartstone against her collarbone, the crimson gem pulsing heat through her shirt. She drew the Fae blade. The moonsilver dagger weighed cold in her grip, its leaf-shaped edge swallowing the amber light. Rory stepped through. Her boot sank into soil that gave like warm bread. Rows of vines rolled away in every direction, heavy with fruit that glowed from within. Clusters hung the deep red of the pendant, others gold or bruised purple. A grape split open on a nearby stem. Juice the color of mulled wine ran down and dripped. Nyx peeled out of her shadow and took solid form, a tall silhouette of living night with violet eyes burning in the dark of their face. They turned in a full circle, shoulders squared, the whisper of their voice carried on wind that did not stir a single leaf. "I crossed between realms for four hundred years. This gluttonous garden is younger than I am and far hungrier." Isolde followed last. The Half-Fae's silver hair reached her waist and drifted though the air held no breeze. Pale lavender eyes took in the vines that leaned toward the rift like reaching fingers. She left no footprints in the soft soil. "The garden does not grow for beauty. It grows to be eaten." Rory glanced back. Her own boots left dark prints in the pulp; Nyx's shadow left none; Isolde disturbed not a single seed. "You're not leaving tracks." Isolde's mouth curved. "I leave no mark where I have walked. Ask instead what follows us." A wet sigh rose from the vines. More fruit split open, releasing the scent of spiced wine and honey. Rory pressed a hand to her chest, feeling the gem pulse in time with her own heart. "This is Dymas. The pendant came from here. It's happy to be home." Nyx's form flickered, half turning to smoke before they solidified. "Happy? It's ringing the realm like a dinner bell. Every demon with a nose will taste us inside an hour." Rory rolled her left wrist. The small crescent scar ached, though she couldn't remember knocking it. She kept the blade ready and started down a path of crushed grapes. "Then we don't stay in the open. We keep moving and we don't eat anything." A vine detached from the trellis and stretched toward Rory's chest, not her outstretched hand. A cluster of crimson fruit swelled there, each grape the size of a thumbnail and the exact shade of the pendant. The gem under her shirt burned in answer, heat seeping into her skin. Rory froze. Nyx's violet eyes narrowed. "The realm knows the stone. It wants its property back, or it wants to wear you as a chain." Isolde reached out and touched one crimson grape. The vine stilled. "A heart given freely cannot be reclaimed. A heart taken grows an appetite." The path narrowed. Branches arched overhead, forming a tunnel of glossy leaves. Pears hung like paper lanterns, each holding a soft inner light. One fruit detached and fell. It struck a flat stone and burst. A flock of tiny golden birds burst from the pulp, sang one bright note, and dissolved into a drift of sugar. Rory stopped. Her bright blue eyes widened. She reached toward the dusting of sugar before Nyx's hand closed around her wrist. Their grip was solid and cold as grave air. Rory's scar tingled under their fingers. "You feed it, you owe it. Nothing in Gluttony gives without taking a piece back." Rory pulled free, but left the sugar alone. The birds were gone. Only the scent of caramel remained. From somewhere past the orchard came the sound of a thousand mouths chewing at once, a wet rhythmic rumble that vibrated through the soil and up into Rory's teeth. The sound was many creatures feasting, not one. It pressed against her skull like a hand. A stream ran beside the path, moving slow and thick. Rory knelt on the bank. The liquid was warm chocolate, dark and glossy. Her reflection stared back: straight shoulder-length black hair, bright blue eyes, the crescent scar on her left wrist. The reflection's mouth curved while Rory's stayed still. Nyx's shadow fell across the chocolate. "Don't drink. Don't touch. Reflections in Gluttony are always starving." Rory stood, pulse jumping. She wiped her hand on her jeans. "Noted." They walked deeper. The vine tunnel opened onto a vast lawn. Long tables stretched under the amber sky, groaning under whole roasted beasts, towers of fruit, and silver platters piled with cream. Figures in chef's whites moved among the tables. Chains of black smoke bound their ankles. One woman stirred a cauldron and wept; her tears fell into the broth and the broth sighed. Rory's mouth watered and her gut tightened at the same time. "Those are the chefs. Helbound souls, right?" Isolde stopped beside a table but did not sit. "Contracted from your world to feed this one. They cook until their names are eaten." At the far end of the lawn, a raised platform held a golden spoon the size of a scythe. Banners above it showed a gaping mouth stitched in gold thread. A row of chefs bowed before a shadowed judge whose crown caught the light like polished bone. A culinary competition was underway; a chef presented a glistening pie, and the judge's laughter rolled across the garden, too loud and too wet. A roast bird on a nearby platter lifted its head and screamed as a diner carved into its breast. The diner laughed and ate. Rory's hand tightened on the Fae blade. The cold metal bit her palm. She thought of the delivery shift she'd missed, of Yu-Fei's shouting, of the ordinary world where fruit did not sing and meat did not plead. Nyx drifted closer, their voice a whisper stolen by wind. "We should turn back before the smell of us reaches the Prince's table." Rory's gaze swept the lawn, counting exits, memorizing the line of the rift far behind them. She was a courier; she knew how to map a route and how to run one. Her pendant pulsed, warm and insistent, tugging her toward the heart of the realm. Isolde's silver hair shone as she turned her pale lavender eyes on Rory. "The way out is the way in, child of Cardiff. But the way on is a feast, and you have already been invited." Rory looked at the tables, at the weeping chefs, at the judge who raised the golden spoon. Her scar gave a single throb. She tightened her grip on the blade and stepped off the path toward the platform, the crushed grapes sticking to her boots.
created_at"2026-09-03T15:31:11.144Z" 9/3/2026, 3:31:11 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1156
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
52.42% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1156
totalAiIsms11
found
0
word"whisper"
count2
1
word"pulse"
count2
2
word"flickered"
count1
3
word"grave"
count1
4
word"rhythmic"
count1
5
word"vibrated"
count1
6
word"glistening"
count1
7
word"pulsed"
count1
8
word"throb"
count1
highlights
0"whisper"
1"pulse"
2"flickered"
3"grave"
4"rhythmic"
5"vibrated"
6"glistening"
7"pulsed"
8"throb"
66.67% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches2
maxInWindow2
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count2
highlights
0"eyes narrowed"
1"eyes widened"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences84
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences84
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences100
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen29
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1156
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions1
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
50.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions37
wordCount944
uniqueNames7
maxNameDensity1.91
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity3.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Heartstone1
Fae3
Half-Fae1
Nyx7
Isolde6
Rory18
Yu-Fei1
persons
0"Fae"
1"Half-Fae"
2"Nyx"
3"Isolde"
4"Rory"
5"Yu-Fei"
places(empty)
globalScore0.547
windowScore0.5
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences66
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1156
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences100
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs45
mean25.69
std20.64
cv0.803
sampleLengths
077
13
256
349
419
541
612
722
84
93
1013
1136
1213
1310
1420
1529
1615
1751
184
1919
2011
2113
2256
2336
2415
2518
2645
2749
286
2910
3011
311
3264
3311
347
359
3615
3771
3862
3910
4013
4146
4213
4323
4445
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences84
matches
0"were gone"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs159
matches(empty)
28.57% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount5
flaggedSentences4
totalSentences100
ratio0.04
matches
0"Her own boots left dark prints in the pulp; Nyx's shadow left none; Isolde disturbed not a single seed."
1"One woman stirred a cauldron and wept; her tears fell into the broth and the broth sighed."
2"A culinary competition was underway; a chef presented a glistening pie, and the judge's laughter rolled across the garden, too loud and too wet."
3"She was a courier; she knew how to map a route and how to run one."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount948
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount15
adverbRatio0.015822784810126583
lyAdverbCount1
lyAdverbRatio0.0010548523206751054
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences100
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences100
mean11.56
std6.39
cv0.553
sampleLengths
022
120
215
35
415
53
610
715
813
98
1010
1126
1223
1319
143
1515
1615
178
1812
193
2019
214
223
2313
247
2512
2617
2713
2810
2920
305
3111
3213
3315
3415
3521
3613
372
384
3919
408
413
4213
433
449
4511
465
477
4821
492
58.67% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats3
diversityRatio0.37
totalSentences100
uniqueOpeners37
81.30% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences82
matches
0"More fruit split open, releasing"
1"Only the scent of caramel"
ratio0.024
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount19
totalSentences82
matches
0"She drew the Fae blade."
1"Her boot sank into soil"
2"They turned in a full"
3"She left no footprints in"
4"Her own boots left dark"
5"She kept the blade ready"
6"It struck a flat stone"
7"Her bright blue eyes widened."
8"She reached toward the dusting"
9"Their grip was solid and"
10"It pressed against her skull"
11"Her reflection stared back: straight"
12"She wiped her hand on"
13"They walked deeper."
14"She thought of the delivery"
15"She was a courier; she"
16"Her pendant pulsed, warm and"
17"Her scar gave a single"
18"She tightened her grip on"
ratio0.232
20.98% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount72
totalSentences82
matches
0"The rift yawned between two"
1"Aurora felt the Heartstone against"
2"She drew the Fae blade."
3"The moonsilver dagger weighed cold"
4"Rory stepped through."
5"Her boot sank into soil"
6"Rows of vines rolled away"
7"Clusters hung the deep red"
8"A grape split open on"
9"Nyx peeled out of her"
10"They turned in a full"
11"Isolde followed last."
12"The Half-Fae's silver hair reached"
13"She left no footprints in"
14"Rory glanced back."
15"Her own boots left dark"
16"Isolde's mouth curved."
17"A wet sigh rose from"
18"Rory pressed a hand to"
19"Nyx's form flickered, half turning"
ratio0.878
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences82
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences43
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"The rift yawned between two ancient oak standing stones, a tear in the world that smelled of burnt sugar and roasting meat."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags0
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
85.2868%