"She was sitting cross-legged on the threadbare rug in Eva’s cramped living room, a scroll on the Black Death—or maybe medieval weather magic, the title was half in Latin and half in something that made her eyes water—spread open in front of her."
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"For a second she thought she’d imagined it—that the stress of the last few months and the ghost of him had finally conjured something out of the brick and mortar of Brick Lane."
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"He was immaculate, as always—tailored charcoal suit, platinum blond hair slicked back from a face that belonged on a Renaissance fresco—but the effect was ruined by the dark, wet stain spreading across his left side and the way he was listing heavily against his cane."
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"He was just standing there, his heterochromatic eyes—one warm amber, one fathomless black—locked onto her face with an intensity that made her breath catch."
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"But he was hurt, and Rory Carter—cool-headed, practical, annoyingly out-of-the-box Rory—had never been able to turn her back on a problem, especially one that showed up looking like a fallen angel who’d lost a fight with something nasty."
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"A faint, pained smile touched his mouth—the same one that had made her stomach flip a lifetime ago."
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"She fetched the first-aid kit from the bathroom—Eva kept it stocked with both human bandages and, given her line of research, a few things that smelled faintly of herbs and copper."
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"But she could feel his gaze like a physical weight—one amber eye and one black eye tracking her every move, lingering on her face, her hair, the scar on her wrist."
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"She’d thrown a vase at him—it had missed, shattering against the wall of his office, and he hadn’t even flinched."
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"She was aware of Lucien’s hand still on her wrist, warm and grounding, aware of the steady pressure of his thumb against her scar, aware of the fact that he’d come back because of her—because he cared, and because he was scared of what Evan might do."
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"Rory looked at him—really looked at him."
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"Her movements were efficient, precise—cool-headed Rory, always solving the problem in front of her."
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"There was so much left unsaid between them—so much hurt, so much longing, so many things she wanted to demand and confess."
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"Outside, Brick Lane carried on—car horns, laughter, the clatter of the curry house below."
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"She was sitting cross-legged on the threadbare rug in Eva’s cramped living room, a scroll on the Black Death—or maybe medieval weather magic, the title was half…"
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"The flat smelled of cumin, fried onions, and old paper, a combination that was so essentially Eva that Rory’s chest gave a small, familiar pang."
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"Her friend was three days into a six-week research trip to the Bodleian, which meant Rory had the flat, the cat, and the profound quiet of someone else’s life t…"
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"Lucien Moreau stood in the dim hallway, the Marseille-born half-demon looking for all the world like a fallen angel who’d lost a fight with something nasty."
4
"He was immaculate, as always—tailored charcoal suit, platinum blond hair slicked back from a face that belonged on a Renaissance fresco—but the effect was ruine…"
5
"He was just standing there, his heterochromatic eyes—one warm amber, one fathomless black—locked onto her face with an intensity that made her breath catch."
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"But he was hurt, and Rory Carter—cool-headed, practical, annoyingly out-of-the-box Rory—had never been able to turn her back on a problem, especially one that s…"
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"She fetched the first-aid kit from the bathroom—Eva kept it stocked with both human bandages and, given her line of research, a few things that smelled faintly …"
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"She remembered the last night they’d spent together, the argument that had shattered everything."
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"The touch was feather-light, but it sent fire racing up her arm, pooling low in her belly."