Run: 2026-09-03-01M1KYHNAJV92QRMH2RMDT3WH3

Run Details

Duration:
10m 13s
Cost:
$0.030090
Provider:
Phala

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Aurora Carter kept her eyes on the standing stones when she crossed into the Fae Grove. The oaks closed behind her. Richmond Park fell away like a sheet pulled from a table. The grass under her boots held no footprints. Wildflowers crowded the ground in tight heads, blue and white, and the petals turned toward her as she walked. The air lay thick on her skin. It smelled of rain that had not fallen, wet chalk, and the honeyed rot under a dead hedge. The delivery bag struck her hip. Inside, the ceramic pot rattled against the bottle of jasmine tea. She had left the Golden Empress at half past nine, when the pendant had begun to pull at her throat. The chain had tightened while she stacked trays in the kitchen, and Yu-Fei had asked if the heater ran. No. The stone had grown warm under the black of her hair, and a folded note had waited on the doormat, red ink on cream paper. Bring it to the stones when the moon stands behind the tallest oak. Leave it where the grass grows thin. Do not follow the second sound. She had read the note three times in the lift. It had used the name Evan had called her when the walls had moved: Laila. The pendant hung at her sternum, its crimson heart dull. It had pulsed once at the edge of the grove, then gone quiet. The moon stood where the note said it should. Behind the tallest oak, a gap in the trees opened into the ring of standing stones. The stones wore lichen like old skin. One of them bore a line across the face, a crack that had not been there last week. Aurora stepped over a root. The root moved. It lifted away from her boot, then settled, pale and knotted. She stopped. The bag swung from her shoulder and tapped her thigh. Her phone screen lit without her finger. No signal. The clock read 1:17. She looked at the clock. 1:17. The flowers turned with her. A twig snapped between her and the stones. The sound came from the center of the ring, where the grass grew thin. It held the size of a dry pea dropping on tile. Aurora’s throat closed. She had come alone, but the grove held no single invitation. The space between the trees kept a second outline of breathing. “Aurora.” The name fell from the dark. It used her voice, the voice she used to tell customers the tea would be there in four minutes, the voice she used to count steps between the bar and her flat. The sound did not reach her from one side. It reached her from the grass, the stones, the wet air behind her collar. She set the delivery bag on the ground. The pot stopped rattling. “Who’s there?” No answer. The pendant grew cold. The cold started in the silver chain and climbed the metal. Aurora lifted the pendant with two fingers. The stone held a crack inside it, a thread of black running from edge to edge. She had not seen that crack. A chair scraped against grass. The sound came from behind the first standing stone. It held the shape of plastic on concrete, the kind her flat made when the wind pushed the bin against the wall. The bin sat empty. The grove held no bins. She walked toward the stones. The grass took her boots to the second joint. The wildflowers opened at the hem of her jacket. Their petals rubbed the fabric. They did not open like flowers opened in the sun. They opened with small, dry clicks, the way a mouth forms an O. The ring of stones stood closer than her mind allowed. The path from her to the center had grown short. The grass in the middle had worn thin, and beneath it the earth showed in neat parallel lines, like furrows made for planting. A small object lay on the soil. A silver spoon. Aurora stared at it. The spoon held the shape of her own hand around it. The bowl caught moonlight and turned the light into a red smear. She had not brought a spoon. The chair scraped from behind the second stone, then the third. The sound moved around the circle in the wrong direction, counterclockwise, each scrape spaced a half-breath apart. A second chair scraped. A third. A small table wobbled. Its legs ground into the earth. Aurora’s phone screen lit. The clock read 1:17. The message app opened by itself. A draft appeared in the text box. Are you there yet? The name on the thread read Laila. She typed: Yes. The cursor blinked. A reply came from the other Laila before her thumb left the key. I am not. Aurora dropped the phone. The glass cracked on a stone. The screen stayed bright, the words swimming in blue light. The pendant grew hot in her palm. The heat did not burn. It sat in the silver like a coal that remembered being in a mouth. The flowers in the grove stopped turning. Every petal faced the ring. At the far side of the stones, a child’s shoe appeared in the grass. It was white, the size of Aurora’s child shoe, the one with the torn lace that she kept under her bed. The shoe lay in the moonlight, pointing at her. Beside it, a second shoe rested. Then a third. The pendant pulsed. The pulse pushed through the chain and up her arm. Her wrist, the crescent scar on it, throbbed in time. She remembered the kitchen, the bread knife, the sound of her mother’s key turning in the lock too late. The scar had been a line of red stitches. Now it looked wet under the jacket. The table in the center of the ring had moved closer. It stood on the thin grass, small and square, its legs sunk into the furrows. On it sat a cup. The cup held steam. The steam rose in a thin rope and folded back down. A teabag tag hung over the rim. The tag read: Golden Empress. Aurora’s mouth filled with taste. Jasmine. Honey. Wet chalk. She had not drunk the tea. She had not opened the bottle. The tea had sat in the delivery bag for three blocks. The chairs scraped. All of them. The sound filled the circle, a dry combing of plastic against earth. From behind each stone, a shape leaned out. Not a body. A suggestion. The dark held a seam. The seam opened at the shoulder, then the jaw. The first face wore her mother’s line of mouth, the hard line Jennifer used when Brendan came home with rain on his coat and anger in his hands. The second face had Evan’s jaw, the scar along his neck, the way his teeth showed when he laughed at nothing. The third face wore her own eyes, blue and bright, and it smiled with a mouth Aurora had never owned. The pendant burned. Aurora knelt. The chain slipped through her fingers. The silver had gone warm enough to sting. She placed the pendant on the thin grass, where the note had told her. The stone’s glow faded. The crack inside it opened. Something moved within the red, a small black thread that uncoiled like a hair. The tea cup tilted. Steam poured over the rim in a long, sweet ribbon. The ribbon crossed the grass and touched Aurora’s bare ankle. The skin there did not burn. It remembered. The clock on her broken phone lit. 1:17. The faces in the stones stopped moving. The pendant sat on the grass, its glow returning. One pulse. Two. The spoon on the soil turned over. The bowl held a drop of liquid. The drop was red. It held the shape of a thumbnail. Aurora stood. Her boots made no sound. The grass under the stones had grown thin, and beneath it the earth moved in parallel lines. The lines reached toward her. The chairs scraped back into the dark. The table stood where she had left it. The cup emptied itself, drop by drop, into the soil. The pendant pulsed. A hand reached up from the grass. The fingers closed around the chain.
created_at"2026-09-03T15:42:07.291Z" 9/3/2026, 3:42:07 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1388
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
78.39% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1388
totalAiIsms6
found
0
word"pulsed"
count3
1
word"pulse"
count2
2
word"throbbed"
count1
highlights
0"pulsed"
1"pulse"
2"throbbed"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences166
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences166
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences168
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen32
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1388
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions1
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions29
wordCount1385
uniqueNames12
maxNameDensity0.94
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Carter1
Fae1
Grove1
Park1
Golden2
Empress2
Yu-Fei1
Evan2
Laila3
Aurora13
Jennifer1
Brendan1
persons
0"Carter"
1"Yu-Fei"
2"Evan"
3"Laila"
4"Aurora"
5"Jennifer"
6"Brendan"
places
0"Fae"
1"Grove"
2"Park"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences105
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1388
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences168
matches
0"seen that crack"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs53
mean26.19
std24.26
cv0.926
sampleLengths
084
182
226
325
473
58
636
75
81
95
108
1150
121
1361
1412
152
162
1744
185
1940
2051
2150
223
2327
246
2544
2621
274
287
293
3016
313
3246
337
345
3553
363
3755
3858
399
4023
4145
4269
433
4453
4532
468
477
4837
4954
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences166
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs206
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences168
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1387
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount15
adverbRatio0.010814708002883922
lyAdverbCount1
lyAdverbRatio0.0007209805335255948
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences168
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences168
mean8.26
std5.65
cv0.684
sampleLengths
016
15
211
38
419
57
618
76
811
920
1019
111
1225
1313
147
156
1610
1715
1810
1913
209
2116
227
2318
245
253
2611
272
2810
297
302
314
325
331
345
358
3614
3711
383
3911
4011
411
426
4332
449
4514
468
474
482
492
28.31% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats36
diversityRatio0.21686746987951808
totalSentences166
uniqueOpeners36
22.22% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences150
matches
0"Then a third."
ratio0.007
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount33
totalSentences150
matches
0"It smelled of rain that"
1"She had left the Golden"
2"She had read the note"
3"It had used the name"
4"It had pulsed once at"
5"It lifted away from her"
6"Her phone screen lit without"
7"She looked at the clock."
8"It held the size of"
9"She had come alone, but"
10"It used her voice, the"
11"It reached her from the"
12"She set the delivery bag"
13"She had not seen that"
14"It held the shape of"
15"She walked toward the stones."
16"Their petals rubbed the fabric."
17"They did not open like"
18"They opened with small, dry"
19"She had not brought a"
ratio0.22
10.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount135
totalSentences150
matches
0"Aurora Carter kept her eyes"
1"The oaks closed behind her."
2"Richmond Park fell away like"
3"The grass under her boots"
4"Wildflowers crowded the ground in"
5"The air lay thick on"
6"It smelled of rain that"
7"The delivery bag struck her"
8"She had left the Golden"
9"The chain had tightened while"
10"The stone had grown warm"
11"She had read the note"
12"It had used the name"
13"The pendant hung at her"
14"It had pulsed once at"
15"The moon stood where the"
16"The stones wore lichen like"
17"Aurora stepped over a root."
18"The root moved."
19"It lifted away from her"
ratio0.9
33.33% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences150
matches
0"Now it looked wet under"
ratio0.007
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences57
technicalSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags0
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
89.0752%