Run: 2026-09-03-01M1KZ5VRY57DX1MKWR0BAXEVC

Run Details

Duration:
4m 12s
Cost:
$0.039106
Provider:
Tencent

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The third deadbolt slid back with a throat-clearing scrape, and Rory hauled the door open. "Eva, if you've forgotten your keys again—" The words shrivelled on her tongue. Lucien stood on the cramped landing outside Eva's flat, one hand folded over the ivory head of the cane that hid a blade. Drizzle darkened the shoulders of his charcoal suit and slicked his platinum hair back from a face she had spent too many nights unable to forget. Amber and black eyes fixed on her, and something low in her belly tightened, traitorous and unwelcome. He was the last person she expected. He was the only person she had never quite managed to erase. "Bonsoir, Aurora." The French endearment landed like a thumb pressed into a bruise. Rory's fingers tightened on the doorframe, the small crescent scar on her left wrist flashing pale against the paint. "Don't. Don't stand there saying my name like you have the right." Lucien's mouth curved, though the smile didn't reach his mismatched eyes. "I have every right. I am the one who taught you how to pick a deadbolt, remember?" "That was a life ago." She didn't step back. "You don't get to knock after a year and trade on old lessons." "A year, three months, and eleven days." He shifted his weight, the cane tapping once against the threshold. "Not that I was counting." Rory's laugh was short, sharp, a blade of sound. "Right. Because you're so indifferent you turned up at my friend's flat in the middle of a Tuesday without calling." She made to shut the door. Lucien's cane moved faster than she would have credited, the slim length of it slotting into the gap. The wood caught the door an inch from the frame. "Rory." Her name in his mouth was a sin and a prayer. "Please. Five minutes." The tabby cat chose that moment to wind around his trouser leg, purring loud enough to be heard over the rain. Ptolemy, traitor, rubbing himself on Lucien's shoe as if the man hadn't vanished from her bed one morning without so much as a note. Rory's throat closed. She shoved the door wider, not in invitation but in surrender. "Five minutes. Then you're gone." Lucien stepped over the threshold. The flat swallowed him: stacks of books teetering on every surface, scrolls unrolled across the sofa, research notes pinned to the walls in Eva's cramped, chaotic hand. The smell of cumin and frying onions drifted up from the curry house below, and the cat darted ahead of them, tail high. Rory shut the door and shot all three deadbolts home. The snick of each one sounded like a cell door closing. She turned. "What do you want, Lucien?" He was looking at her, not the room. His gaze tracked the straight fall of her black hair over her shoulders, the bright blue of her eyes, the way her jaw set. He had always looked at her as if she were a puzzle he intended to solve. "You look well." "Don't do that either. Don't pretend you came here to comment on my health." "I came here because Evan is in London." The name struck her like a slap. Rory went still. Behind her, a scroll slid off the arm of the sofa and whispered to the floor. Ptolemy bolted under the table. She forced air into her lungs. "You're lying." "I never lie to you." Lucien's gloved finger traced the handle of his cane. The ivory caught the light. "Not about the things that matter." "And what about the things that don't?" The question escaped before she could stop it. "You lied about those. Or you just left them unsaid, which amounts to the same bloody thing." Lucien's jaw tightened. The amber eye seemed to darken, the black one to swallow the light. "I left because staying would have got you killed." Rory's laugh was uglier this time. "There it is. The noble sacrifice." She took a step toward him, close enough to smell the clean, cold scent of him—rain and something like old smoke. "You didn't stay long enough to let me decide that for myself." "I decided for you. I have been deciding for you since the night I found you in that alley with your wrist bleeding and your ex's handprint on your arm." Her scar burned. She flexed her left hand, the crescent puckering. He remembered. Of course he remembered. He had been there, his coat wrapped around her shoulders, his voice a low, steady murmur in a language she didn't understand as he'd driven Evan off. "You said it was a childhood accident." He nodded at her wrist. "A half-truth." Rory lifted her chin. "Evan wasn't the first man who thought he could leave a mark on me. You know that." Lucien's free hand rose, then stopped a hair's breadth from her cheek. The near-touch vibrated between them, a plucked string. "I know. And I know I added to the collection." Rory's breath stalled. The admission hung there, unadorned, a raw thing. "You didn't hit me." "No. I did something worse. I made you think you were safe, and then I disappeared." The words settled into the silence. Somewhere below, a pot clanged. Ptolemy crept out from under the table and leapt onto a stack of papers, sending a flutter of notes across the rug. Rory swallowed. Her pulse hammered at the base of her throat. One hand wanted to fist in his suit; the other wanted to shove him through the nearest wall. "Why now? Why turn up tonight?" Lucien's attention flicked past her, to the pinned notes on the wall. Eva's looping script circled a single word: Avaros. "I asked Eva to research the realm. She dug too deep. Someone is asking questions in the underworld about a half-demon fixer and the human woman who helped him steal a grimoire." A hollow opened under Rory's ribs. "I didn't steal anything." "You helped me move it." Lucien's smile was thin. "Semantics, chérie. The wrong people are interested. Evan's arrival is no coincidence. He has been hired to find you." The room seemed to tilt. Rory gripped the back of the sofa, her knuckles blanching. "You're saying my abusive ex is in London, working for someone who wants a book I didn't even know I was carrying?" She shook her head. "No. Evan couldn't find his own arse with both hands." "He has help. Which is why I am here. And why I am not leaving until you agree to let me protect you." Protect. The word detonated something behind her ribs. Rory closed the distance between them, close enough that the charcoal wool of his suit brushed her knees, close enough to see the faint lines fanning from his eyes. "You arrogant, manipulative—" She bit off the word. "You don't get to march back in here and start issuing orders. You lost that privilege the morning I woke up alone." Lucien's hand abandoned its hesitation. Not to her cheek, but to catch her left wrist, his gloved thumb pressing over the crescent scar. The contact seared. Rory didn't pull away. "I did not wake up and leave. I woke up and knew that if I stayed, he would find you through me. I have spent every day since making sure that did not happen." The confession stripped something from his expression. For the first time since the door had opened, he looked tired. Worse—he looked afraid. Rory's lips parted. The things they had not said crowded her throat: I missed you. I hate that I missed you. I thought you were dead. I thought you were done with me. She didn't say any of them. Her voice dropped. "You should have told me." "I am telling you now." His thumb swept once over her scar, then stilled. "Aurora—" The rest of his name for her broke off as the cat chose that moment to launch himself onto the table, scattering Eva's notes in every direction. Papers swirled. Ptolemy landed atop a scroll and began to knead it, purring. Lucien's grip tightened on her wrist. Rory's free hand came up, not to push him away, but to fist in the lapel of his suit. "Say it." Lucien's eyes searched hers. The amber one burned; the black one held an entire unspoken future. "I never stopped—" A heavy thud sounded against the door. Rory froze. Lucien's head snapped toward the wood, every line of his body going sharp and still. The three deadbolts held. The handle didn't turn. But the knocking came again. Three deliberate raps. Lucien's voice dropped to a whisper meant for her alone. "Do not open that door." The tabby hissed, fur on end, staring at the threshold. Rory's fingers clenched tighter in Lucien's suit. "Lucien." Her voice was a thread. "What have you brought to my door?"
created_at"2026-09-03T15:46:09.321Z" 9/3/2026, 3:46:09 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags10
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"His thumb swept once [once]"
dialogueSentences50
tagDensity0.2
leniency0.4
rawRatio0.1
effectiveRatio0.04
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1484
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
69.68% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1484
totalAiIsms9
found
0
word"weight"
count1
1
word"chaotic"
count1
2
word"traced"
count1
3
word"vibrated"
count1
4
word"silence"
count1
5
word"pulse"
count1
6
word"flicked"
count1
7
word"unspoken"
count1
8
word"whisper"
count1
highlights
0"weight"
1"chaotic"
2"traced"
3"vibrated"
4"silence"
5"pulse"
6"flicked"
7"unspoken"
8"whisper"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences103
matches
0"looked afraid"
73.51% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount5
narrationSentences103
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"managed to"
1"tended to"
2"seemed to"
3"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences140
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen34
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1482
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions15
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
59.64% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions46
wordCount996
uniqueNames8
maxNameDensity1.81
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Rory18
Eva4
French1
Lucien16
Evan1
Avaros1
Protect1
Ptolemy4
persons
0"Rory"
1"Eva"
2"Lucien"
3"Evan"
4"Ptolemy"
places(empty)
globalScore0.596
windowScore0.667
75.37% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences67
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"sounded like a cell door closing"
1"something like old smoke"
0.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches3
per1kWords2.024
wordCount1482
matches
0"not in invitation but in surrender"
1"Not to her cheek, but to catch her left wrist, his gloved thumb pressing over the"
2"not to push him away, but to fist in the lapel of his suit"
95.24% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount3
totalSentences140
matches
0"chose that moment"
1"hate that I"
2"chose that moment"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs77
mean19.25
std13.86
cv0.72
sampleLengths
015
17
272
319
42
530
612
711
817
922
1023
119
1220
1334
1415
1545
1614
175
1855
1923
205
2148
223
2314
248
2531
266
272
2825
2932
3016
319
326
3339
3430
3544
3612
3723
3820
3910
4011
414
4216
4333
4429
456
4620
4732
486
494
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences103
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs180
matches
0"was looking"
61.22% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount2
semicolonCount2
flaggedSentences4
totalSentences140
ratio0.029
matches
0"\"There it is. The noble sacrifice.\" She took a step toward him, close enough to smell the clean, cold scent of him—rain and something like old smoke."
1"One hand wanted to fist in his suit; the other wanted to shove him through the nearest wall."
2"Worse—he looked afraid."
3"The amber one burned; the black one held an entire unspoken future."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1000
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount27
adverbRatio0.027
lyAdverbCount2
lyAdverbRatio0.002
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences140
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences140
mean10.59
std7.58
cv0.716
sampleLengths
015
17
26
323
426
517
67
712
82
911
1019
1112
1211
1317
149
1513
1618
175
189
1920
206
2118
2210
2312
243
2521
2624
273
2811
295
305
3127
3223
3310
3411
352
365
378
3824
3916
403
4114
428
437
443
4516
465
476
482
4914
45.71% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats6
diversityRatio0.29285714285714287
totalSentences140
uniqueOpeners41
68.73% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences97
matches
0"Of course he remembered."
1"Somewhere below, a pot clanged."
ratio0.021
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount26
totalSentences97
matches
0"He was the last person"
1"He was the only person"
2"She didn't step back"
3"He shifted his weight, the"
4"She made to shut the"
5"Her name in his mouth"
6"She shoved the door wider,"
7"He was looking at her,"
8"His gaze tracked the straight"
9"He had always looked at"
10"She forced air into her"
11"She took a step toward"
12"Her scar burned."
13"She flexed her left hand,"
14"He had been there, his"
15"He nodded at her wrist"
16"Her pulse hammered at the"
17"She shook her head"
18"She bit off the word"
19"I hate that I missed"
ratio0.268
6.39% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount88
totalSentences97
matches
0"The third deadbolt slid back"
1"The words shrivelled on her"
2"Lucien stood on the cramped"
3"Drizzle darkened the shoulders of"
4"Amber and black eyes fixed"
5"He was the last person"
6"He was the only person"
7"The French endearment landed like"
8"Rory's fingers tightened on the"
9"Lucien's mouth curved, though the"
10"She didn't step back"
11"He shifted his weight, the"
12"Rory's laugh was short, sharp,"
13"She made to shut the"
14"Lucien's cane moved faster than"
15"The wood caught the door"
16"Her name in his mouth"
17"The tabby cat chose that"
18"Ptolemy, traitor, rubbing himself on"
19"Rory's throat closed."
ratio0.907
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences97
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences38
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"Lucien stood on the cramped landing outside Eva's flat, one hand folded over the ivory head of the cane that hid a blade."
75.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags10
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"He shifted, the cane tapping once against the threshold"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
81.0165%