| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 10 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "His thumb swept once [once]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 50 | | tagDensity | 0.2 | | leniency | 0.4 | | rawRatio | 0.1 | | effectiveRatio | 0.04 | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1484 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 69.68% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1484 | | totalAiIsms | 9 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "weight" | | 1 | "chaotic" | | 2 | "traced" | | 3 | "vibrated" | | 4 | "silence" | | 5 | "pulse" | | 6 | "flicked" | | 7 | "unspoken" | | 8 | "whisper" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 1 | | narrationSentences | 103 | | matches | | |
| 73.51% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 5 | | narrationSentences | 103 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | 0 | "managed to" | | 1 | "tended to" | | 2 | "seemed to" | | 3 | "began to" |
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| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 140 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 34 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1482 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 15 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 59.64% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 46 | | wordCount | 996 | | uniqueNames | 8 | | maxNameDensity | 1.81 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Rory | 18 | | Eva | 4 | | French | 1 | | Lucien | 16 | | Evan | 1 | | Avaros | 1 | | Protect | 1 | | Ptolemy | 4 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Rory" | | 1 | "Eva" | | 2 | "Lucien" | | 3 | "Evan" | | 4 | "Ptolemy" |
| | places | (empty) | | globalScore | 0.596 | | windowScore | 0.667 | |
| 75.37% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 67 | | glossingSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "sounded like a cell door closing" | | 1 | "something like old smoke" |
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| 0.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 3 | | per1kWords | 2.024 | | wordCount | 1482 | | matches | | 0 | "not in invitation but in surrender" | | 1 | "Not to her cheek, but to catch her left wrist, his gloved thumb pressing over the" | | 2 | "not to push him away, but to fist in the lapel of his suit" |
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| 95.24% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 140 | | matches | | 0 | "chose that moment" | | 1 | "hate that I" | | 2 | "chose that moment" |
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| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 77 | | mean | 19.25 | | std | 13.86 | | cv | 0.72 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 15 | | 1 | 7 | | 2 | 72 | | 3 | 19 | | 4 | 2 | | 5 | 30 | | 6 | 12 | | 7 | 11 | | 8 | 17 | | 9 | 22 | | 10 | 23 | | 11 | 9 | | 12 | 20 | | 13 | 34 | | 14 | 15 | | 15 | 45 | | 16 | 14 | | 17 | 5 | | 18 | 55 | | 19 | 23 | | 20 | 5 | | 21 | 48 | | 22 | 3 | | 23 | 14 | | 24 | 8 | | 25 | 31 | | 26 | 6 | | 27 | 2 | | 28 | 25 | | 29 | 32 | | 30 | 16 | | 31 | 9 | | 32 | 6 | | 33 | 39 | | 34 | 30 | | 35 | 44 | | 36 | 12 | | 37 | 23 | | 38 | 20 | | 39 | 10 | | 40 | 11 | | 41 | 4 | | 42 | 16 | | 43 | 33 | | 44 | 29 | | 45 | 6 | | 46 | 20 | | 47 | 32 | | 48 | 6 | | 49 | 4 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 103 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 180 | | matches | | |
| 61.22% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 2 | | semicolonCount | 2 | | flaggedSentences | 4 | | totalSentences | 140 | | ratio | 0.029 | | matches | | 0 | "\"There it is. The noble sacrifice.\" She took a step toward him, close enough to smell the clean, cold scent of him—rain and something like old smoke." | | 1 | "One hand wanted to fist in his suit; the other wanted to shove him through the nearest wall." | | 2 | "Worse—he looked afraid." | | 3 | "The amber one burned; the black one held an entire unspoken future." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1000 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 27 | | adverbRatio | 0.027 | | lyAdverbCount | 2 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.002 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 140 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 140 | | mean | 10.59 | | std | 7.58 | | cv | 0.716 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 15 | | 1 | 7 | | 2 | 6 | | 3 | 23 | | 4 | 26 | | 5 | 17 | | 6 | 7 | | 7 | 12 | | 8 | 2 | | 9 | 11 | | 10 | 19 | | 11 | 12 | | 12 | 11 | | 13 | 17 | | 14 | 9 | | 15 | 13 | | 16 | 18 | | 17 | 5 | | 18 | 9 | | 19 | 20 | | 20 | 6 | | 21 | 18 | | 22 | 10 | | 23 | 12 | | 24 | 3 | | 25 | 21 | | 26 | 24 | | 27 | 3 | | 28 | 11 | | 29 | 5 | | 30 | 5 | | 31 | 27 | | 32 | 23 | | 33 | 10 | | 34 | 11 | | 35 | 2 | | 36 | 5 | | 37 | 8 | | 38 | 24 | | 39 | 16 | | 40 | 3 | | 41 | 14 | | 42 | 8 | | 43 | 7 | | 44 | 3 | | 45 | 16 | | 46 | 5 | | 47 | 6 | | 48 | 2 | | 49 | 14 |
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| 45.71% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 6 | | diversityRatio | 0.29285714285714287 | | totalSentences | 140 | | uniqueOpeners | 41 | |
| 68.73% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 97 | | matches | | 0 | "Of course he remembered." | | 1 | "Somewhere below, a pot clanged." |
| | ratio | 0.021 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 26 | | totalSentences | 97 | | matches | | 0 | "He was the last person" | | 1 | "He was the only person" | | 2 | "She didn't step back" | | 3 | "He shifted his weight, the" | | 4 | "She made to shut the" | | 5 | "Her name in his mouth" | | 6 | "She shoved the door wider," | | 7 | "He was looking at her," | | 8 | "His gaze tracked the straight" | | 9 | "He had always looked at" | | 10 | "She forced air into her" | | 11 | "She took a step toward" | | 12 | "Her scar burned." | | 13 | "She flexed her left hand," | | 14 | "He had been there, his" | | 15 | "He nodded at her wrist" | | 16 | "Her pulse hammered at the" | | 17 | "She shook her head" | | 18 | "She bit off the word" | | 19 | "I hate that I missed" |
| | ratio | 0.268 | |
| 6.39% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 88 | | totalSentences | 97 | | matches | | 0 | "The third deadbolt slid back" | | 1 | "The words shrivelled on her" | | 2 | "Lucien stood on the cramped" | | 3 | "Drizzle darkened the shoulders of" | | 4 | "Amber and black eyes fixed" | | 5 | "He was the last person" | | 6 | "He was the only person" | | 7 | "The French endearment landed like" | | 8 | "Rory's fingers tightened on the" | | 9 | "Lucien's mouth curved, though the" | | 10 | "She didn't step back" | | 11 | "He shifted his weight, the" | | 12 | "Rory's laugh was short, sharp," | | 13 | "She made to shut the" | | 14 | "Lucien's cane moved faster than" | | 15 | "The wood caught the door" | | 16 | "Her name in his mouth" | | 17 | "The tabby cat chose that" | | 18 | "Ptolemy, traitor, rubbing himself on" | | 19 | "Rory's throat closed." |
| | ratio | 0.907 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 97 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 38 | | technicalSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "Lucien stood on the cramped landing outside Eva's flat, one hand folded over the ivory head of the cane that hid a blade." |
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| 75.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 10 | | uselessAdditionCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "He shifted, the cane tapping once against the threshold" |
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| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | |