Run: 2026-09-03-01M1KZAB6Q6TMJ7PFE3W6AH4PD

Run Details

Duration:
4m 30s
Cost:
$0.044348
Provider:
Tencent

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The green neon sign above the door of The Raven's Nest flickered, casting a jaundiced glow over the wet pavement of Soho. Aurora Carter pushed through the door, a duffel bag slung over one shoulder, the strap biting into her jacket. The smell of lemon polish and old paper wrapped around her. She blinked in the dim light. The walls were a mosaic of old maps and black-and-white photographs, coastlines of countries that had since changed names, faces of men who had since changed allegiances, layered over each other until the room felt like the inside of a memory. Silas stood behind the bar. He polished a tumbler with a cloth, the silver signet ring on his right hand catching the low light. He moved to set the glass down, and the slight limp in his left leg made the motion uneven, a hitch in the step of a man who had learned to carry pain without showing it. He looked up. His hazel eyes passed over her, cataloguing a stranger, then stopped. The cloth stilled against the glass. "Aurora?" The name hung in the air between them, thirteen years thick. She stepped into the light, and the girl he remembered dissolved into the woman standing there. Straight shoulder-length black hair framed a face that had lost its roundness. Bright blue eyes, the same eyes, but they no longer regarded the world with open curiosity. They flicked to the door behind her, to the exit, to him, measuring angles. "It's Rory." She set the bag down and leaned on the bar. Her left wrist caught the light, the small crescent-shaped scar pale against her skin, a sliver of a moon. Silas remembered a girl with a scraped wrist, tears tracking through dirt, him crouching on a Cardiff pavement with a handkerchief. He had told her scars were maps of where you'd been. She had scrunched her nose and said maps were for finding your way back. He came around the bar, the limp slowing him just enough for her to see the grey streaks in his auburn hair, the neatly trimmed beard that hadn't been there the last time they stood in the same room. "Christ. Look at you." "Don't." The word was a wall sliding into place. He stopped a few feet away. He wanted to pull her into a hug, but the way she held herself—shoulders squared, weight on the balls of her feet, ready to move—stopped him. The girl in front of him had learned to be unreadable. "Eva said I'd find you here." She nodded at the maps. "She said you collected things. Places. People." "People mostly." Silas moved back behind the bar, giving her space, giving himself something to do with his hands. He pulled a bottle of whiskey from the shelf, the signet ring clicking against the glass as he poured. "She said you needed a place to land." "I need a room, Si. Not a debrief." He slid the tumbler toward her. She wrapped her fingers around it, the crescent scar pressing against the glass. She didn't drink. She held it. "You're what, twenty-five now?" "Twenty-five next March." She lifted the glass, took a sip. Her eyes never left his. "You're fifty-eight. Still limping from Prague, I hear." He raised an eyebrow. "Eva never could keep quiet." "Eva said enough. She said you were a spymaster. I expected a back room full of radios and men in earpieces. Not walls covered in coastlines that don't exist anymore." Silas's mouth twitched. "The maps aren't dead. They're the only things that don't lie to you." He gestured with the bottle toward a bookcase on the far wall, heavy with leather-bound volumes and a walnut false back that sighed when opened. "That shelf back there. Used to lead to a room where we planned things. Operations. Interventions." He looked at her. "I haven't opened it in months. The Nest is just a bar now. People talk, I listen, and most nights nothing happens." "Most nights." "Most nights." The air between them tightened. She looked at the maps, at the photographs. "Did you ever go back? To Cardiff?" "No." The word came out flat, final. He traced the rim of his glass with a thumb. "After Prague, I couldn't. And after your father—" He stopped. "I heard things. Bits and pieces. I meant to write. I meant to call." "You didn't." "No." He had been a man who could dismantle a government with a well-placed lie, and he had let a promise slip through his fingers. She saw the regret in the set of his jaw, in the way his hazel eyes dropped to her scar and then away, as if looking too long would burn. "It's not your job to watch me." The words landed flat and cool. "It was, once." Silas leaned forward, forearms on the bar. "I held you the day you cut that wrist. You were seven. You fell off that bloody bike on Cathedral Road." She glanced down at the scar, then covered it with her right hand. The movement was small, a flicker of her fingers, but he caught it. He caught the tells, the way he had for thirty years. "It healed." "Did it? You're not the girl who used to steal my maps and redraw them with dragons in the margins." Her laugh was short, a single exhalation through her nose. "No. I'm not." She looked around the bar, at the green neon bleeding through the window, at the black-and-white ghosts on the wall. "I redraw them with different ink now. You get lost. And the map changes. Or you do. One of the two." Silas heard the other thing underneath. The city that got small. The man who made it small. He set the bottle down too hard. It slipped from his fingers, hit the sink, and shattered. The crack cut the air. Rory's shoulders jerked, her body going still, her eyes wide and fixed on the shards. Then she smoothed her face into a mask, but he had seen the flinch. He had seen it in soldiers, in agents, in women who walked into embassies with foundation covering bruises. He wanted to ask. The words sat in his throat, blunt and heavy. Thirty years in the field had trained him to let silence do the work. So he poured another finger of whiskey into his glass and waited. Rory watched him wait. She saw the grey in his beard, the lines around his eyes, the silver ring that had been an extension of his hand for as long as she could remember. "You kept the ring." He glanced at it. "Habit." "Liar." There was no heat in it. She picked up her glass, turned it so the light caught the amber. "You kept it because it's the only thing that didn't change. I get that." They stood like that, the spymaster and the delivery girl, the man with the limp and the woman with the scar, thirteen years and a thousand unspoken things stacked between them like the maps on the wall. Silas reached under the bar and pulled out a key, brass, worn smooth. He set it on the wood between them. "Top of the stairs. Second door on the left." He nodded at her bag. "Rent's cleaning the bar on Sundays and not asking questions." Rory stared at the key. Such a small thing. A piece of metal. A room. A place to land. "Si—" "Don't." He held up a hand, the signet ring catching the light. "You need a room. I have one. That's the whole of it." She picked up the key. Their fingers brushed, his calloused, hers cold from the London damp. He felt the slight tremor in her hand, the tremor she would not admit to. "I'm not that girl anymore." Her voice dropped low, swallowed by the hum of the neon. Silas limped back to the shelf of bottles, his back to her, his shoulders a map of their own regrets. "Neither am I." The green neon buzzed. Outside, Soho moved on, indifferent. Rory tightened her grip on the key until the brass bit into her palm, feeling the edge of it, sharp and real, and she stood there in the dim light of the Raven's Nest, not saying the thing she had come to say, not asking the question he was waiting to answer, the weight of the years settling over them like dust on old maps.
created_at"2026-09-03T15:48:36.193Z" 9/3/2026, 3:48:36 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags13
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"Silas moved back [back]"
dialogueSentences43
tagDensity0.302
leniency0.605
rawRatio0.077
effectiveRatio0.047
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1420
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
57.75% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1420
totalAiIsms12
found
0
word"flickered"
count1
1
word"mosaic"
count1
2
word"flicked"
count1
3
word"weight"
count2
4
word"unreadable"
count1
5
word"eyebrow"
count1
6
word"traced"
count1
7
word"flicker"
count1
8
word"shattered"
count1
9
word"silence"
count1
10
word"unspoken"
count1
highlights
0"flickered"
1"mosaic"
2"flicked"
3"weight"
4"unreadable"
5"eyebrow"
6"traced"
7"flicker"
8"shattered"
9"silence"
10"unspoken"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"hung in the air"
count1
highlights
0"hung in the air"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences89
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences89
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences118
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen65
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1418
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions9
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions21
wordCount1103
uniqueNames8
maxNameDensity0.73
worstName"Silas"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Silas"
discoveredNames
Raven2
Nest2
Soho2
Carter1
Cardiff1
Silas8
Rory4
London1
persons
0"Raven"
1"Nest"
2"Carter"
3"Silas"
4"Rory"
places
0"Soho"
1"Cardiff"
2"London"
globalScore1
windowScore1
71.88% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences64
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"felt like the inside of a memory"
1"as if looking too long would burn"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1418
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences118
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs58
mean24.45
std23.09
cv0.944
sampleLengths
099
160
220
31
411
558
62
729
846
939
104
119
1243
1318
1446
158
1625
174
1823
194
205
2130
2283
232
242
2513
267
2741
282
291
3054
3113
3231
3337
342
3520
3610
373
3820
3921
4086
4139
4234
434
444
451
4634
4737
4821
4924
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences89
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs174
matches
0"was waiting"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount2
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences1
totalSentences118
ratio0.008
matches
0"He wanted to pull her into a hug, but the way she held herself—shoulders squared, weight on the balls of her feet, ready to move—stopped him."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1113
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"small crescent-shaped scar"
adverbCount24
adverbRatio0.0215633423180593
lyAdverbCount1
lyAdverbRatio0.0008984725965858042
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences118
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences118
mean12.02
std10.02
cv0.834
sampleLengths
022
119
211
36
441
55
619
736
83
911
106
111
1211
1316
1412
1516
1614
172
1810
1919
2021
2111
2214
2339
244
259
266
2726
2811
2911
307
3119
3219
338
348
356
3613
373
383
394
4010
415
428
434
445
4530
463
4738
4820
4922
42.09% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats12
diversityRatio0.3135593220338983
totalSentences118
uniqueOpeners37
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences87
matches
0"Bright blue eyes, the same"
1"Then she smoothed her face"
2"Such a small thing."
ratio0.034
0.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount48
totalSentences87
matches
0"She blinked in the dim"
1"He polished a tumbler with"
2"He moved to set the"
3"He looked up."
4"His hazel eyes passed over"
5"She stepped into the light,"
6"They flicked to the door"
7"She set the bag down"
8"Her left wrist caught the"
9"He had told her scars"
10"She had scrunched her nose"
11"He came around the bar,"
12"He stopped a few feet"
13"He wanted to pull her"
14"She nodded at the maps"
15"He pulled a bottle of"
16"He slid the tumbler toward"
17"She wrapped her fingers around"
18"She didn't drink."
19"She held it."
ratio0.552
5.98% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount79
totalSentences87
matches
0"The green neon sign above"
1"Aurora Carter pushed through the"
2"The smell of lemon polish"
3"She blinked in the dim"
4"The walls were a mosaic"
5"Silas stood behind the bar."
6"He polished a tumbler with"
7"He moved to set the"
8"He looked up."
9"His hazel eyes passed over"
10"The cloth stilled against the"
11"The name hung in the"
12"She stepped into the light,"
13"They flicked to the door"
14"She set the bag down"
15"Her left wrist caught the"
16"Silas remembered a girl with"
17"He had told her scars"
18"She had scrunched her nose"
19"He came around the bar,"
ratio0.908
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences87
matches(empty)
ratio0
29.22% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences44
technicalSentenceCount7
matches
0"The walls were a mosaic of old maps and black-and-white photographs, coastlines of countries that had since changed names, faces of men who had since changed al…"
1"He moved to set the glass down, and the slight limp in his left leg made the motion uneven, a hitch in the step of a man who had learned to carry pain without s…"
2"Straight shoulder-length black hair framed a face that had lost its roundness."
3"He came around the bar, the limp slowing him just enough for her to see the grey streaks in his auburn hair, the neatly trimmed beard that hadn't been there the…"
4"He had been a man who could dismantle a government with a well-placed lie, and he had let a promise slip through his fingers."
5"He had seen it in soldiers, in agents, in women who walked into embassies with foundation covering bruises."
6"Rory tightened her grip on the key until the brass bit into her palm, feeling the edge of it, sharp and real, and she stood there in the dim light of the Raven'…"
48.08% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags13
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"The word came out, final"
1"He held up, the signet ring catching the light"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
81.6329%