| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1440 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 37.50% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1440 | | totalAiIsms | 18 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "pulse" | | 1 | "stomach" | | 2 | "traced" | | 3 | "wavering" | | 4 | "weight" | | 5 | "determined" | | 6 | "wavered" | | 7 | "tapestry" | | 8 | "throb" | | 9 | "warmth" | | 10 | "whisper" | | 11 | "pulsed" | | 12 | "rhythmic" | | 13 | "echoing" | | 14 | "stark" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 85 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 1 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 85 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 105 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 46 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1440 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 5 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 66.67% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 43 | | wordCount | 1208 | | uniqueNames | 9 | | maxNameDensity | 1.49 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Heartstone | 2 | | Rory | 18 | | London | 1 | | Isolde | 6 | | Nyx | 9 | | Fae-Forged | 2 | | Blade | 2 | | Golden | 2 | | Empress | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Heartstone" | | 1 | "Rory" | | 2 | "Isolde" | | 3 | "Nyx" | | 4 | "Golden" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 0.755 | | windowScore | 0.667 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 73 | | glossingSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "seemed determined to roast them where they stood" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1440 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 105 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 57 | | mean | 25.26 | | std | 23.3 | | cv | 0.922 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 13 | | 1 | 56 | | 2 | 71 | | 3 | 2 | | 4 | 44 | | 5 | 41 | | 6 | 20 | | 7 | 10 | | 8 | 12 | | 9 | 48 | | 10 | 18 | | 11 | 4 | | 12 | 36 | | 13 | 20 | | 14 | 13 | | 15 | 14 | | 16 | 53 | | 17 | 3 | | 18 | 87 | | 19 | 3 | | 20 | 78 | | 21 | 27 | | 22 | 22 | | 23 | 9 | | 24 | 4 | | 25 | 15 | | 26 | 21 | | 27 | 14 | | 28 | 79 | | 29 | 9 | | 30 | 93 | | 31 | 5 | | 32 | 2 | | 33 | 22 | | 34 | 14 | | 35 | 47 | | 36 | 22 | | 37 | 25 | | 38 | 51 | | 39 | 12 | | 40 | 3 | | 41 | 4 | | 42 | 3 | | 43 | 4 | | 44 | 26 | | 45 | 6 | | 46 | 55 | | 47 | 10 | | 48 | 16 | | 49 | 11 |
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| 97.01% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 85 | | matches | | 0 | "being grabbed" | | 1 | "been carved" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 189 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 0 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 0 | | totalSentences | 105 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 94.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1218 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "slender leaf-shaped dagger" |
| | adverbCount | 23 | | adverbRatio | 0.018883415435139574 | | lyAdverbCount | 4 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.003284072249589491 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 105 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 105 | | mean | 13.71 | | std | 8.42 | | cv | 0.614 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 13 | | 1 | 13 | | 2 | 28 | | 3 | 15 | | 4 | 11 | | 5 | 16 | | 6 | 44 | | 7 | 2 | | 8 | 13 | | 9 | 23 | | 10 | 6 | | 11 | 2 | | 12 | 23 | | 13 | 10 | | 14 | 8 | | 15 | 20 | | 16 | 10 | | 17 | 12 | | 18 | 22 | | 19 | 4 | | 20 | 15 | | 21 | 7 | | 22 | 18 | | 23 | 4 | | 24 | 9 | | 25 | 27 | | 26 | 20 | | 27 | 13 | | 28 | 14 | | 29 | 39 | | 30 | 14 | | 31 | 3 | | 32 | 17 | | 33 | 27 | | 34 | 9 | | 35 | 20 | | 36 | 14 | | 37 | 3 | | 38 | 16 | | 39 | 12 | | 40 | 19 | | 41 | 31 | | 42 | 6 | | 43 | 9 | | 44 | 12 | | 45 | 22 | | 46 | 9 | | 47 | 4 | | 48 | 15 | | 49 | 21 |
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| 60.95% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 6 | | diversityRatio | 0.4 | | totalSentences | 105 | | uniqueOpeners | 42 | |
| 39.68% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 84 | | matches | | 0 | "Somewhere ahead, a voice boomed," |
| | ratio | 0.012 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 19 | | totalSentences | 84 | | matches | | 0 | "She gripped the crescent scar" | | 1 | "She caught herself against a" | | 2 | "Her stomach turned over, then" | | 3 | "Their voice whispered like wind" | | 4 | "She wore no shoes." | | 5 | "They moved deeper." | | 6 | "They crested a low rise," | | 7 | "Her apron was stiff with" | | 8 | "Her breath caught." | | 9 | "She lifted a spoon to" | | 10 | "She only stirred, and stirred," | | 11 | "It was the size of" | | 12 | "She sliced the fruit in" | | 13 | "She lowered the blade and" | | 14 | "Its sugar-feathers rustled." | | 15 | "Its beak opened, and from" | | 16 | "They only stirred." | | 17 | "She sheathed the blade, the" | | 18 | "She stepped past the boundary" |
| | ratio | 0.226 | |
| 37.38% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 71 | | totalSentences | 84 | | matches | | 0 | "The Heartstone burned against Rory's" | | 1 | "She gripped the crescent scar" | | 2 | "The silver chain bit into" | | 3 | "Rory stumbled, boots sinking into" | | 4 | "She caught herself against a" | | 5 | "The words didn't make it" | | 6 | "Roast meat, spiced wine, overripe" | | 7 | "Her stomach turned over, then" | | 8 | "Nyx solidified at her side," | | 9 | "Their voice whispered like wind" | | 10 | "Rory wiped her forehead with" | | 11 | "Isolde glided past them, silver" | | 12 | "She wore no shoes." | | 13 | "The dark soil of the" | | 14 | "Rory looked down at her" | | 15 | "Isolde traced a long finger" | | 16 | "Nyx drifted closer to the" | | 17 | "Nyx's violet gaze tracked it," | | 18 | "Rory tore her eyes from" | | 19 | "Row upon row of vines" |
| | ratio | 0.845 | |
| 59.52% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 84 | | matches | | | ratio | 0.012 | |
| 0.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 58 | | technicalSentenceCount | 13 | | matches | | 0 | "Shoving a strand of shoulder-length black hair from her eyes, she squinted up at the seamless dome of amber stretched above them, no sun, no clouds, only a perp…" | | 1 | "Isolde glided past them, silver hair reaching her waist, the pale lavender of her eyes reflecting the amber light without holding it." | | 2 | "As if to prove the point, the pool of shade beneath the vine detached itself from the leaves and slithered away, a liquid darkness that hugged the base of a nea…" | | 3 | "A tree to her left drooped under the weight of silver-skinned fruits that glowed from within, like lanterns left burning." | | 4 | "The slender leaf-shaped dagger rested against her thigh, holding a cold glow even without moonlight, the only cool thing in a realm that seemed determined to ro…" | | 5 | "Long tables stretched beneath the amber sky, groaning under the weight of a feast that defied sense." | | 6 | "Whole birds sat upright, feathers of spun sugar still intact, beaks open as if mid-song." | | 7 | "Fishes with scales of pearl curled on beds of ice that did not melt." | | 8 | "Rory's Heartstone gave an answering throb against her chest, a warmth that travelled down her sternum." | | 9 | "The flesh inside was the exact shade of the pendant's gemstone, and it pulsed, slow and rhythmic, as if the fruit had a heartbeat." | | 10 | "Its beak opened, and from a throat that had been carved and stuffed and garnished, a thin, ragged scream tore loose." | | 11 | "She stepped past the boundary of the orchard, boots sinking into soil that smelled of wine and old promises." | | 12 | "Nyx melted into the shadow of a vine beside her, and Isolde followed without a sound, leaving no footprints in the dark soil as they walked deeper beneath a sky…" |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 0 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | |