Run: 2026-09-03-01M1KZY1W5SH2XVBSH4K7DDV7R

Run Details

Duration:
3m 49s
Cost:
$0.035438
Provider:
Tencent

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The third deadbolt gave a grating shriek and slid free. Rory yanked the door inward. Cold air from the stairwell carried the curry house's cumin and garlic up to the landing. Lucien Moreau stood there, one hand resting on the ivory head of his cane, the other curled loose at his side. Rain spotted the shoulders of his charcoal suit. His platinum hair was slicked back, not a strand out of place, and his mismatched eyes—amber and black—held hers without blinking. For a second neither of them moved. The tabby cat, Ptolemy, darted from the cramped hallway and wound around Lucien's trouser leg, then hissed and backed beneath a table piled with scrolls. Rory's fingers tightened on the door's edge. The small crescent scar on her left wrist caught the light. "Well. The Prodigal Frenchman remembers Brick Lane exists." Lucien's mouth curved, but the smile didn't reach his eyes. "Your friend keeps three locks on the door. I'm flattered you opened all of them for me." Rory shifted her shoulder against the frame, blocking the entrance. "Eva's paranoid, not me. And I'd have left you on the landing if I'd known it was you." Lucien glanced past her into the flat, taking in the books stacked on every surface, the research notes pinned to the walls, the narrow sofa buried beneath paper. "Is that why you're here instead of your own place above Silas'? Because Eva's paranoia is better company than mine?" Rory's jaw tightened. She stepped back, not an invitation, pure reflex, and he crossed the threshold with the unhurried grace of a man who'd never been told no. "I'm cat-sitting. Eva's at a conference in Edinburgh. Don't change the subject." Lucien stopped in the middle of the cramped room, the cane's tip clicking once against the floorboards. Ptolemy watched from beneath the table, tail lashing. "I came because Evan's been released." The name landed like a fist. Rory's spine went rigid, her bright blue eyes narrowing. She pressed her left wrist to her stomach, then forced her hand back to her side. "Don't say his name in front of me like you have the right." Lucien's thumb moved over the ivory handle of the cane, a slow caress that drew her eye to the concealed blade. "I have every right. I'm the one who made sure you got out of Cardiff alive." A bitter laugh escaped Rory. She moved to the table and began gathering scrolls into a stack, needing something to do with her hands. "You made sure I ran. Then you disappeared. Six months, Lucien. Not a call, not a message. You don't get to walk back in and play guardian." Lucien followed her with his gaze, tracking the straight fall of her shoulder-length black hair, the tense line of her shoulders. "You told me to go." Rory spun back, a scroll clutched in one hand. "I told you to stop lying to me! There's a difference. You let me think you were a fixer with a fancy suit and a sharp tongue. You never mentioned the half-demon thing, or that your father's from a realm called Avaros, or that half the things that go bump in this city answer to you." Something flickered in the amber eye, gone too fast to name. "Telling you would have put a target on your back. It did anyway, didn't it?" Rory stilled. The scroll crumpled in her grip. She set it down. "Is that why you came? Because Evan's out, or because you found out I've been asking questions about Avaros?" Lucien didn't deny it. His silence stretched, filled by the distant clatter of pans from the curry house below and Ptolemy's low growl. "Both. You've been digging into things that bite, Rory. Eva's notes—" He nodded at the papers. "She's been translating a grimoire that mentions the Carter bloodline." Rory's pulse jumped. She kept her face neutral, the way she'd learned in the year she'd spent looking over her shoulder. "My bloodline? We're barristers and teachers, Lucien. My father argues property law, he doesn't traffic with demons." Lucien took a step closer. The scent of him reached her—sandalwood, rain, and something darker, like struck flint. "Your mother's family came from the Welsh borders. The Ellis line. There are stories about a woman who bargained with something in the hills and walked away with a debt." Rory lifted her chin. "My mother is a teacher. She marks essays and drinks too much tea. If there's a debt, it died with whoever was stupid enough to make it." Lucien's hand rose, then stopped a breath from her cheek. The nearness of him sent a traitorous heat through her. "You always do that. Deflect with logic when you're terrified." Rory didn't retreat. Her voice dropped. "And you always touch me when you want me to stop thinking." Lucien's fingers curled into a loose fist and returned to the cane. "It used to work." Her throat tightened. She turned away, putting the table between them, and bent to scratch Ptolemy behind the ears to hide the shake in her hand. The cat leaned into her touch, purring. "It worked because I was stupid enough to think you'd stay." Lucien moved around the table, stopping on the other side, close enough that the papers rustled with his nearness. "I'm staying now." Rory straightened, the crescent scar on her wrist stark against her pale skin. "You can't. You'll leave again the moment it gets dangerous, and I'll be the one left picking up the pieces. Again." Lucien's jaw clenched. "I left because I thought it would keep you safe." Rory met his mismatched gaze, letting him see the hurt she'd buried for six months. "It didn't. It made me feel like I wasn't worth staying for." For a moment he stayed silent. Then he closed the distance and caught her left wrist, his grip careful, his thumb brushing the crescent-shaped scar. The contact sent a jolt through her, equal parts comfort and ache. "This is where he did it, isn't it? Evan." Rory jerked her wrist, but didn't fight hard. "A childhood accident. That's the story I tell people." Lucien's thumb traced the crescent again. "You told me the truth once. On the night I left." Her breath caught. "You mean the night you decided I couldn't handle the truth about what you are." Lucien released her wrist but didn't step back. "I decided I couldn't handle watching you look at me the way you'd looked at him." The words hung between them, raw and unfinished. She searched his face, the angles she'd traced with her fingertips in another life. "And how do I look at you now?" His amber eye seemed to brighten, the black one fathomless. "Like you hate that you still want me." She should have denied it. Should have shoved him back through the door and thrown the three deadbolts. Instead she stood there, the heat of his body seeping into the space between them, and let the silence answer for her. Lucien lifted a hand to her hair, then stopped. "Evan's in Whitechapel. He's asking about a delivery girl with black hair and blue eyes." The mention of her job at Golden Empress sent a chill down her spine. She stepped back, the moment breaking. "Yu-Fei's restaurant. He's been there?" Lucien nodded once. "Not yet. But he will be. I can place you somewhere safe—" Rory cut him off. "No." Lucien's brow furrowed. "Rory—" She grabbed a set of keys from the table, the Golden Empress delivery bag slung over one shoulder. "I'm not running again. Not this time. You want to help? You can tell me everything you've been hiding, starting with why my family's name is in a grimoire." Lucien studied her, the set of her jaw, the stubborn jut of her chin. Then he inclined his head, the platinum hair catching the light. "Then we start now. But not here." Rory moved past him to the door, Ptolemy twining around her ankles. She pulled it open and glanced back over her shoulder. "Then keep up, Frenchman. And if you disappear on me again, I'll find you." A real smile touched his mouth this time, brief and dangerous. He followed her onto the landing, the cane clicking against the step. "I'm counting on it."
created_at"2026-09-03T15:59:22.002Z" 9/3/2026, 3:59:22 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags1
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences42
tagDensity0.024
leniency0.048
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1391
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
56.87% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1391
totalAiIsms12
found
0
word"stomach"
count1
1
word"flickered"
count1
2
word"silence"
count2
3
word"pulse"
count1
4
word"stark"
count1
5
word"jaw clenched"
count1
6
word"traced"
count2
7
word"chill"
count1
8
word"down her spine"
count1
9
word"furrowed"
count1
highlights
0"stomach"
1"flickered"
2"silence"
3"pulse"
4"stark"
5"jaw clenched"
6"traced"
7"chill"
8"down her spine"
9"furrowed"
33.33% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches3
maxInWindow3
found
0
label"jaw/fists clenched"
count1
1
label"sent a shiver through"
count2
highlights
0"jaw clenched"
1"sent a jolt through"
2"sent a chill down"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences75
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences75
filterMatches
0"see"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences116
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen57
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1388
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions15
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
33.29% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions45
wordCount814
uniqueNames6
maxNameDensity2.33
worstName"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity3.5
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Moreau1
Ptolemy5
Lucien19
Rory16
Golden2
Empress2
persons
0"Moreau"
1"Ptolemy"
2"Lucien"
3"Rory"
4"Empress"
places
0"Golden"
globalScore0.333
windowScore0.5
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences56
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1388
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences116
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs86
mean16.14
std11.23
cv0.696
sampleLengths
015
166
232
318
48
510
617
710
818
928
1020
1128
1212
1325
146
1531
1613
1721
1816
1924
2027
2121
225
239
2456
2511
2615
2712
2819
2923
3026
3121
3217
3318
3430
354
3627
3720
3810
396
4012
4112
424
4333
4411
4519
463
4713
4821
493
95.91% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences75
matches
0"was slicked"
1"been told"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs141
matches(empty)
93.60% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount3
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences2
totalSentences116
ratio0.017
matches
0"His platinum hair was slicked back, not a strand out of place, and his mismatched eyes—amber and black—held hers without blinking."
1"The scent of him reached her—sandalwood, rain, and something darker, like struck flint."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount819
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount28
adverbRatio0.03418803418803419
lyAdverbCount0
lyAdverbRatio0
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences116
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences116
mean11.97
std7.88
cv0.659
sampleLengths
010
15
216
321
48
521
67
725
87
911
108
1110
1217
1310
1418
1528
1620
173
1825
1912
2017
218
226
236
249
2516
2613
2721
2816
295
3019
3127
3221
335
349
3556
3611
3715
382
396
404
4119
424
4319
4416
4510
463
4718
4817
495
49.14% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats1
diversityRatio0.29310344827586204
totalSentences116
uniqueOpeners34
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences74
matches
0"Then he closed the distance"
1"Instead she stood there, the"
2"Then he inclined his head,"
ratio0.041
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount19
totalSentences74
matches
0"His platinum hair was slicked"
1"She stepped back, not an"
2"She pressed her left wrist"
3"She moved to the table"
4"She set it down."
5"His silence stretched, filled by"
6"He nodded at the papers"
7"She kept her face neutral,"
8"Her voice dropped."
9"Her throat tightened."
10"She turned away, putting the"
11"Her breath caught."
12"She searched his face, the"
13"His amber eye seemed to"
14"She should have denied it."
15"She stepped back, the moment"
16"She grabbed a set of"
17"She pulled it open and"
18"He followed her onto the"
ratio0.257
14.05% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount66
totalSentences74
matches
0"The third deadbolt gave a"
1"Rory yanked the door inward."
2"Lucien Moreau stood there, one"
3"His platinum hair was slicked"
4"The tabby cat, Ptolemy, darted"
5"Rory's fingers tightened on the"
6"The small crescent scar on"
7"Lucien's mouth curved, but the"
8"Rory shifted her shoulder against"
9"Lucien glanced past her into"
10"Rory's jaw tightened."
11"She stepped back, not an"
12"Lucien stopped in the middle"
13"Ptolemy watched from beneath the"
14"The name landed like a"
15"Rory's spine went rigid, her"
16"She pressed her left wrist"
17"Lucien's thumb moved over the"
18"A bitter laugh escaped Rory."
19"She moved to the table"
ratio0.892
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences74
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences40
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"She stepped back, not an invitation, pure reflex, and he crossed the threshold with the unhurried grace of a man who'd never been told no."
1"Lucien's thumb moved over the ivory handle of the cane, a slow caress that drew her eye to the concealed blade."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags1
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
85.8729%