Run: 2026-09-03-01M1M01JRM5TAVTCDH7Z50X0AG

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5m 8s
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$0.048721
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Tencent

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You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Romance genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The door flew open. Lucien Moreau stood on the threshold. The shoulder of his tailored charcoal suit had split open, and blood soaked the white shirt beneath. His platinum hair, usually slicked back, had fallen across his forehead in rare disarray. One amber eye and one black eye fixed on her face, unreadable and yet devastatingly familiar. A thin line of blood traced his jaw, and he gripped the ivory head of his cane in a white-knuckled hand. He smelled of sandalwood and copper, and beneath it, the faint, ancient scent of brimstone. Rory's fingers tightened on the doorframe. Of all the people she had expected tonight, he was the last. Her stomach did a slow flip-flop. 'You,' she said. 'Aurora.' His voice was a low rasp. 'I need to come in.' 'No.' She shoved the door, her straight shoulder-length black hair swinging forward. He didn't move. The ivory head of his cane shot out and wedged into the gap. Wood splintered, the sharp crack loud in the quiet landing. 'Rory, please.' 'Don't.' She bared her teeth, her bright blue eyes blazing, fury and something dangerously close to hurt burning in her chest. 'Don't you dare say please to me. Not after Marseille. Not after you left me in that hotel room with a note and a lie.' He flinched, the only betrayal of emotion. 'I left to keep you alive.' 'You left because you were a coward.' The word hung between them. He didn't deny it. He simply looked at her, his mismatched eyes drinking her in as if he were a man dying of thirst and she were the last clean water in the world. The please undid her. She hated that it still had the power to. She released the door and stepped back, bare feet slapping on the wooden floorboards. He limped into the flat, his cane clicking on the boards. The door swung shut behind him, the three deadbolts still undone. The cramped one-bedroom flat swallowed him whole. Books and scrolls covered every surface, rising in teetering towers that defied gravity. Research notes papered the walls, Eva's frantic, looping handwriting covering every inch. The smell of cumin and frying onions drifted up from the curry house below, mixing with the scent of old paper and dust. A tabby cat, Ptolemy, lifted his head from a pile of scrolls and hissed, his green eyes narrowed to slits. Lucien's mouth twitched. 'Still friends with the beast?' 'He likes me better than you did.' Rory crossed her arms, the faded grey vest top riding up slightly. 'He doesn't vanish in the middle of the night.' 'I deserve that.' 'You deserve a lot more than that.' The tick-tock of a carriage clock on the mantelpiece filled the silence. He leaned heavily on his cane, and she saw the dark stain spreading across his side. 'What are you doing here, Lucien?' she asked. 'And don't give me that brooding silence bollocks.' He almost smiled. 'Your mouth has gotten filthier.' 'And your timing has gotten worse.' He sobered, the amusement vanishing from his eyes. 'Evan is out.' The name hit her like a fist to the solar plexus. Rory's breath left her in a rush. Her fingers curled into fists, and the small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist pulled tight. 'You said he was gone,' she said, her voice low and lethal. 'You promised me he was gone. I watched you put him in that grave.' 'I buried him.' Lucien took a step towards her, his cane clicking on the floorboards. She backed away until her thighs hit the arm of a battered old sofa. 'I put him six feet under myself. I said the words over the dirt. Someone dug him up.' 'Who?' she demanded. 'Who would do that?' 'A collector from Avaros.' His gaze dropped to her mouth for a fraction of a second. The air between them tightened, charged and suffocating. 'Evan made a deal. He traded his soul for a second chance at you.' 'At me?' She let out a harsh laugh. 'He's welcome to come for me.' 'You don't understand.' Lucien's voice dropped, urgent now. 'He is not a man anymore. The thing wearing his skin is something else. It killed three of my contacts in Bermondsey tonight. This blood?' He gestured to his torn suit. 'Most of it is not mine.' She looked at the spreading stain. 'Most of it?' 'Some of it is.' She took a step forward before she could stop herself. He saw the movement and stilled, watching her with those predator's eyes. She wanted to reach out, to press her hand to his side and feel the heat of him, to confirm he was real and breathing and not some ghost conjured by her traitorous memory. She snatched her hand back. 'Don't,' she said. 'Don't touch me.' 'You stepped towards me.' 'Instinct,' she shot back. 'It's been a while since I saw a wounded animal I didn't want to put down.' He laughed, a rough, humourless sound. It transformed his face, that familiar, devastating smile that had once undone her completely. 'Still lying to yourself, Aurora?' 'Still lying to me?' she countered. He caught her wrist. His thumb brushed the crescent scar, the touch light but burning. She didn't pull away. His skin was hot, his grip unbreakable. Her pulse jumped under his touch, frantic and betraying. 'I never stopped watching you,' he said. 'Every delivery shift. Every late-night walk home from the Golden Empress. I was there.' 'That's not romance, Lucien. That's stalking.' 'Call it what you want.' His thumb stroked her pulse point, feeling the frantic flutter there. 'I call it penance.' 'How did you find me?' 'You think I wouldn't know where you were?' He tapped his temple with one long finger. 'Eva's flat on Brick Lane. Three deadbolts on the door, and still not enough to keep me out.' 'I wasn't hiding from you,' she said. 'I was living.' 'Were you?' He stepped into her space, close enough that the heat of him seeped into her skin. His scent wrapped around her, sandalwood and copper and that faint, dangerous hint of brimstone. 'Because you flinch at shadows. You sleep with a knife under your pillow. I know, Rory. I know everything.' She hated that. She hated how well he knew her. The last time she had seen him, in a cramped hotel room in Marseille, she had thrown a heavy glass ashtray at his head. It had shattered against the wall, showering them both in glittering fragments. He hadn't moved. He had just looked at her with those mismatched eyes, and said nothing, and then he had simply ceased to exist in her life. 'I lied to keep you breathing,' he said, his voice rough. 'Every day since, I have watched you from the shadows. Do you think I wanted this? To see you again only when death is at the door?' She should have pushed him away. She should have driven her knee into his groin and run until her lungs burned. Instead, she stood there, caught in the gravity of him, in the memory of how those shoulders looked braced above her, of how his mouth felt on hers. Ptolemy hissed again, the sound sharp and furious. His paws went pit-pat across the floorboards as he bolted under the sofa. The hair on Rory's arms stood up. Lucien's head snapped towards the window. His entire body went still, predatory, listening. A low growl rumbled from the street below, rising above the hiss of the curry house extractor fan. It was a sound no earthly animal should make, a grinding, wet rumble that vibrated through the floorboards and settled in her teeth. Lucien's mouth curved into a bitter smile. 'Right on time.' 'What—' The carriage clock on the mantelpiece stopped. The tick-tock ceased. Dead silence fell over the flat, thick and suffocating. Then the deadbolts on the door slid back. One. Two. Three. The metal clicked, loud in the quiet, echoing like gunshots. Rory's eyes flew to the door. Lucien moved, putting himself between her and the door, his cane raised, the concealed blade sliding free with a metallic hiss. But the shadow didn't come from the door. The window exploded inward. Glass rained across the floorboards, catching the dim glow from the street. A figure rose from the broken frame, silhouetted against the light. It had Evan's face, but the eyes were pits of black fire, and its skin was grey and stretched too tight over the bone. It smiled, and its teeth were jagged yellow spikes. 'Hello, Rory,' it said, its voice a wet, grinding rasp. 'Did you miss me?'
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags5
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences0
tagDensity1
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
93.09% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1447
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count1
1
adverb"completely"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
1"completely"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
44.71% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1447
totalAiIsms16
found
0
word"unreadable"
count1
1
word"familiar"
count2
2
word"traced"
count1
3
word"stomach"
count1
4
word"silence"
count3
5
word"grave"
count1
6
word"charged"
count1
7
word"predator"
count1
8
word"pulse"
count2
9
word"shattered"
count1
10
word"vibrated"
count1
11
word"echoing"
count1
highlights
0"unreadable"
1"familiar"
2"traced"
3"stomach"
4"silence"
5"grave"
6"charged"
7"predator"
8"pulse"
9"shattered"
10"vibrated"
11"echoing"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
highlights
0"eyes narrowed"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences102
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount3
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences102
filterMatches
0"know"
1"think"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences161
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen34
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1447
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions15
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions22
wordCount1018
uniqueNames11
maxNameDensity0.49
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Moreau1
Marseille2
Eva1
Ptolemy2
Bermondsey1
Golden1
Empress1
Three2
Rory5
Evan1
Lucien5
persons
0"Moreau"
1"Eva"
2"Ptolemy"
3"Rory"
4"Evan"
5"Lucien"
places
0"Marseille"
1"Bermondsey"
2"Golden"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences78
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1447
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences161
matches
0"hated that it"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs61
mean23.72
std20.4
cv0.86
sampleLengths
04
189
224
33
412
51
637
72
846
913
107
1139
1249
1375
148
1528
163
177
1828
1916
208
216
2211
2334
2426
2547
267
2738
2814
2945
309
314
3261
336
344
3520
3625
376
3835
3921
406
4120
425
4334
4410
4552
4673
4738
4849
4928
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences102
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs171
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences161
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount119
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount3
adverbRatio0.025210084033613446
lyAdverbCount2
lyAdverbRatio0.01680672268907563
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences161
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences161
mean8.99
std6.13
cv0.682
sampleLengths
04
16
217
314
416
521
615
76
812
96
103
117
125
131
1411
153
1613
1710
182
1921
207
213
2215
237
246
257
265
274
2830
294
309
3114
3211
3311
347
3513
3612
3723
3820
393
405
4119
429
433
447
4512
4616
478
488
493
40.17% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats22
diversityRatio0.32298136645962733
totalSentences161
uniqueOpeners52
70.18% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences95
matches
0"Instead, she stood there, caught"
1"Then the deadbolts on the"
ratio0.021
22.11% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount47
totalSentences95
matches
0"His platinum hair, usually slicked"
1"He smelled of sandalwood and"
2"Her stomach did a slow"
3"She shoved the door, her"
4"He didn't move."
5"He flinched, the only betrayal"
6"He didn't deny it."
7"He simply looked at her,"
8"She hated that it still"
9"She released the door and"
10"He limped into the flat,"
11"He leaned heavily on his"
12"He almost smiled."
13"He sobered, the amusement vanishing"
14"Her fingers curled into fists,"
15"I watched you put him"
16"She backed away until her"
17"I said the words over"
18"He traded his soul for"
19"It killed three of my"
ratio0.495
23.16% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount83
totalSentences95
matches
0"The door flew open."
1"Lucien Moreau stood on the"
2"The shoulder of his tailored"
3"His platinum hair, usually slicked"
4"A thin line of blood"
5"He smelled of sandalwood and"
6"Rory's fingers tightened on the"
7"Her stomach did a slow"
8"She shoved the door, her"
9"He didn't move."
10"The ivory head of his"
11"Wood splintered, the sharp crack"
12"He flinched, the only betrayal"
13"The word hung between them."
14"He didn't deny it."
15"He simply looked at her,"
16"The please undid her."
17"She hated that it still"
18"She released the door and"
19"He limped into the flat,"
ratio0.874
52.63% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences95
matches
0"To see you again only"
ratio0.011
90.59% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences41
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"He simply looked at her, his mismatched eyes drinking her in as if he were a man dying of thirst and she were the last clean water in the world."
1"It transformed his face, that familiar, devastating smile that had once undone her completely."
2"It was a sound no earthly animal should make, a grinding, wet rumble that vibrated through the floorboards and settled in her teeth."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags5
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
87.8877%