"She rubbed her right thumb over the small crescent scar on her left wrist—an old habit when her thoughts crowded too close."
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"Isolde had given it to her; Isolde, who could not lie, who had pressed the slender leaf-shaped dagger into her hand and said only, \"It cuts what should not hold you.\" Remembering it now, Rory thought the seer might have meant more than wards."
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"It was a wrenching, a folding, a cold plunge as if she'd dived naked into a winter river—and then the cold broke and warm air closed over her, thick and cloying and impossibly rich."
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"It came from no sun she could find; the sky was a warm, glowing dome, and the shadows it cast were long and soft and oddly directionless."
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"Rory noticed the wildflowers pushing through the vines—impossible drifts of blue and violet and white, blooming as if it were high summer though London above was sliding into a wet autumn."
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"In the amber gloom it did not glow—there was no moon here to wake its luminescence—but the edge looked sharp enough to cut a thought."
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"For one awful second the ward held, pressing back against the steel—and then it parted, peeling away like burnt cobweb, the edges curling and dissolving into harmless sparks."
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"A banquet table stretched the length of the terrace, or perhaps it had no end at all; the amber light swallowed its far reaches."
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"One woman turned a spit with hands that shook; a man beside her folded butter into dough with a rhythm so steady it looked mechanical."
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"And at the nearest end of the table, a young man—no older than Rory, with flour in his hair and a ladle fused obscenely to his right hand—stirred a pot that bubbled though no fire burned beneath it."
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"The air at the far end of the cellar split in a ragged vertical seam, and through that seam bled a warm amber light that matched nothing in the world above."
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"Her silver hair fell past her waist in a pale curtain, and her pale lavender eyes held the patient distance of someone who had watched three hundred years of wi…"
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"It was a wrenching, a folding, a cold plunge as if she'd dived naked into a winter river—and then the cold broke and warm air closed over her, thick and cloying…"
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"The air smelled of roasting meat, spiced wine, peaches left too long in the sun, and beneath it all a faint sourness, as if rot were standing patiently just out…"
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"The path between the vines was soft underfoot, overgrown with clover and wild onions that crushed to a sharp perfume."
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"A tree ahead bore fruit that shifted from green to gold to blushing red as they watched, ripening and ripening again in the space of a breath, until the branch …"
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"Rory noticed the wildflowers pushing through the vines—impossible drifts of blue and violet and white, blooming as if it were high summer though London above wa…"
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"One woman turned a spit with hands that shook; a man beside her folded butter into dough with a rhythm so steady it looked mechanical."
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"And at the nearest end of the table, a young man—no older than Rory, with flour in his hair and a ladle fused obscenely to his right hand—stirred a pot that bub…"
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"Their shadow-flesh was cool and faintly insubstantial, like being held by smoke that had decided to be kind."
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"Beyond the terrace, the land rose toward a pavilion that made the banquet table look like a crumb."
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"The Heartstone at her throat had gone quiet now, a dull warmth against her skin, as if the realm no longer needed to call her."
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"Now she stood in the belly of Gluttony, surrounded by food that could damn her and souls already chewed and swallowed, and the wonder of it warred with the horr…"