Run: 2026-09-03-01M1M0QDTXMDACACWC633NDHTT

Run Details

Duration:
7m 15s
Cost:
$0.065178
Provider:
Alibaba

Model input

System
You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Horror genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The ferns tore at Aurora's trousers as she pushed through the last thicket of the Grove. Her thumb worked the pendant chain until the cold silver bit her skin. The heartstone pressed warm against her collarbone, a small red pulse under the dark. The clearing opened ahead with too much order. Three paths met in the centre. Three paths should not meet. She stopped. Wildflowers lined the junction in neat rings, red and white and pale violet, all the same height, all facing the oak in the middle. Ancient oaks ringed the clearing, and between them stood stones, grey and smooth as rivered bone. One stone had a scratch. One scratch meant enough. Aurora counted the stones as she went. Twelve. Thirteen. The thirteenth leaned, patient, like a listener. The park lay beyond the outer trunks, silent and far, as if the Grove had swallowed the road. Her phone sat in her pocket, dead weight. She had walked from the car after the last delivery, following the heat in the pendant until the tarmac ended and the grass turned soft. The Golden Empress bag sat on the seat behind her, still warm with soy and rice, and the thought of it made her teeth ache. Aurora did not turn back. In the centre, a wooden table waited. One place held a setting. A blue cup. A child's spoon. A folded napkin, white as a bandage. She had not expected tea. "No thanks," she said. The cup steamed. The air held the smell of wet chalk and sweet rot. Chalk dust coated her tongue. A spoon tapped the saucer. Tap. Tap. Tap. Aurora did not reach for the cup. She pulled her phone from her pocket. No signal. The screen showed 11:47. She blinked. It showed 11:47 again. "Right," she said. "One minute. I'll count." The heartstone burned. She put the phone away. The path to the table split under her boots. The left path ended at the oak. The right path curved back to where she had entered. The middle path led to the thirteenth stone. The pendant tugged toward the middle. "Not today," she said. A hand emerged from the grass. Not a hand. A root, pale and knuckled, curled into a fist and let go. Aurora's mouth went dry. She looked at the table. The spoon had moved. It pointed at her. "You brought it." The voice came from the oak. It used her name, but not the name she answered to. It used the name she had worn in a bedroom in Cardiff, the name Evan had used until it stopped meaning anything. "Laila." She pressed her free hand flat against the thirteenth stone. Cold seeped through her palm. "That name's dead." "Stone keeps." The words slid from the oak with no effort, no breath, no shape. They happened. "No. I keep." Aurora stepped toward the middle path. The wildflowers turned. All of them. The motion made her stomach lurch, a slow rotation, petals keeping their faces to her as if she were the sun and the sun were wrong. The pendant pulled hard. She stopped in the centre of the ring, equidistant from every stone, and the heat in the gem flared. Beneath the stone's surface, the crimson glow brightened, then dimmed, then brightened again. A rhythm. Not a pulse. A knock. Something was knocking from the other side. Aurora's breath came shallow and fast. She forced it out. "Who?" she said. "Ask fair." "What do you want?" "The stone." "Not for sale." "Trade." A small laugh broke from the grass. It sounded like a coin dropping into a jar. Aurora looked down. A bead of red lay on the dirt at her toe. It matched the heartstone. She did not touch it. The bead sat there, waiting, and the grass around it pressed close, like wet hair. "What if I say no?" The oak creaked. The table at the centre of the clearing shifted. The blue cup fell. It did not shatter. It rolled, upright, to the edge of the path and stopped. "No, is a word. Word can be kept." "No," she said, "can be a wall." The voice went quiet. For a moment, the clearing held still. The wildflowers froze mid-turn. The root fist uncurled in the grass. Aurora's phone buzzed in her pocket. She pulled it out. The screen showed 11:47. A message from an unknown number. One word. Run. Aurora read it twice. The message erased itself. Then a second message arrived. I'm in the cup. She looked at the blue cup. Steam curled from it. Inside, something moved. Not tea. Not liquid. A face, small and pale, pressed against the surface of the water. It had her mouth. It opened. "Help." The pendant grew so hot she had to release the chain. It swung against her chest, knocking the pendant against her collarbone, and the heat spread into her neck. The thirteenth stone hummed under her hand. The thirteenth stone was not a stone. It was a door. The scratch ran down the centre, and along the scratch the bark of the oak peeled back in long, pale strips. Black filled the hollow. Aurora lifted her gaze. The other stones had moved. The paths had rearranged. The table vanished. The cup sat at her feet, full and still. "You brought it." "You asked." "You heard." Aurora's hand closed around the pendant. The silver chain bit her wrist. Her scar ached, a small crescent of heat, and she felt the old pull, the old debt, the old lie. The Fae do not steal. They collect. The black door opened. A hand reached out. It came from the hollow, pale, sure, and quick. It was small. A child's hand. The fingernails wore blue paint. Aurora looked at the hand. She looked at the cup. The blue fingernails touched the scar. It knew the shape. The face in the cup screamed without sound. The child's fingers closed around her left wrist, and the pendant burned.
created_at"2026-09-03T16:13:13.447Z" 9/3/2026, 4:13:13 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags5
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences22
tagDensity0.227
leniency0.455
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1002
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
75.05% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1002
totalAiIsms5
found
0
word"pulse"
count2
1
word"weight"
count1
2
word"stomach"
count1
3
word"lurch"
count1
highlights
0"pulse"
1"weight"
2"stomach"
3"lurch"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences141
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences141
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences158
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen26
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1002
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions8
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
81.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions27
wordCount942
uniqueNames9
maxNameDensity1.38
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Aurora13
Grove2
Golden1
Empress1
Cardiff1
Evan1
Fae1
One4
Tap3
persons
0"Aurora"
1"Grove"
2"Evan"
3"Fae"
places
0"Cardiff"
globalScore0.81
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences61
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"sounded like a coin dropping into a jar"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1002
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences158
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs76
mean13.18
std14.63
cv1.11
sampleLengths
016
146
22
349
416
576
65
725
85
94
103
1124
1226
137
143
1539
166
174
1821
1917
203
2139
221
2315
243
252
2615
273
2838
294
3039
317
3210
333
342
354
362
373
381
3916
4038
415
4231
438
447
454
4624
474
484
498
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences141
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs158
matches
0"was knocking"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences158
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount943
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount20
adverbRatio0.021208907741251327
lyAdverbCount0
lyAdverbRatio0
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences158
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences158
mean6.34
std5.16
cv0.814
sampleLengths
016
113
214
38
46
55
62
724
816
95
104
117
121
131
147
1518
168
1725
1825
195
207
215
223
233
247
255
264
273
2811
295
305
311
321
331
347
357
362
374
382
394
403
414
423
435
449
457
4610
478
486
494
31.01% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats30
diversityRatio0.2468354430379747
totalSentences158
uniqueOpeners39
28.01% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences119
matches
0"Then a second message arrived."
ratio0.008
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount30
totalSentences119
matches
0"Her thumb worked the pendant"
1"Her phone sat in her"
2"She had walked from the"
3"She had not expected tea."
4"She pulled her phone from"
5"It showed 11:47 again."
6"She put the phone away."
7"She looked at the table."
8"It pointed at her."
9"It used her name, but"
10"It used the name she"
11"She pressed her free hand"
12"She stopped in the centre"
13"She forced it out."
14"It sounded like a coin"
15"It matched the heartstone."
16"She did not touch it."
17"It did not shatter."
18"It rolled, upright, to the"
19"She pulled it out."
ratio0.252
27.23% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount103
totalSentences119
matches
0"The ferns tore at Aurora's"
1"Her thumb worked the pendant"
2"The heartstone pressed warm against"
3"The clearing opened ahead with"
4"Wildflowers lined the junction in"
5"Aurora counted the stones as"
6"The thirteenth leaned, patient, like"
7"The park lay beyond the"
8"Her phone sat in her"
9"She had walked from the"
10"The Golden Empress bag sat"
11"Aurora did not turn back."
12"A blue cup."
13"A child's spoon."
14"A folded napkin, white as"
15"She had not expected tea."
16"The cup steamed."
17"The air held the smell"
18"Chalk dust coated her tongue."
19"A spoon tapped the saucer."
ratio0.866
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences119
matches(empty)
ratio0
89.95% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences27
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"The park lay beyond the outer trunks, silent and far, as if the Grove had swallowed the road."
1"The motion made her stomach lurch, a slow rotation, petals keeping their faces to her as if she were the sun and the sun were wrong."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags5
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags5
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences22
tagDensity0.227
leniency0.455
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
87.7415%