Run: 2026-09-03-01M1M0R2G0X7CXK3FCKPXBY70N

Run Details

Duration:
4m 42s
Cost:
$0.044518
Provider:
Tencent

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The green neon sign above the door of The Raven's Nest hummed, leaking a dull emerald glow onto the wet pavement outside. Inside, the bar kept its usual gloom. Old maps curled on the walls, coastlines fading under decades of smoke, and black-and-white photographs stared down from every spare inch of wood. The bookshelf behind the counter stood ajar, the gap just wide enough to remind anyone who knew that the back room waited behind it. Rory wiped the same patch of counter for the third time. The cloth dragged a clean arc through the polish. Her left wrist caught the light, the small crescent scar pale against her skin. Silas limped out from the storeroom, a crate of glasses balanced against his chest. He set them down without a clink, the silver signet ring on his right hand pressing a dull print into the wood. His beard, the same grey-streaked auburn as his hair, caught the glow from the optic. "That's clean enough to eat off, love. You'll rub the varnish off next." Rory didn't answer. She folded the cloth, the crescent on her wrist flexing. The door opened. Rain came in with the woman, a sharp, city sort of rain that smelled of bus fumes and wet wool. Rory's spine straightened. She knew that walk before she knew the face. Eva shook a compact umbrella, then stilled, eyes adjusting to the dim. Her coat was the colour of wet slate, her hair pinned back with the same brutal efficiency Rory remembered from school corridors in Cardiff. Eva's gaze landed on her. The umbrella dripped onto the mat. "Rory?" The name hung there. Rory set the cloth down. "Bloody hell. It is you." Silas stilled. He didn't speak, just watched from the end of the bar, his weight shifted off his bad knee. Eva took a step forward, then another, as if the floor might disappear. "I'd have walked straight past you in the street." Rory's mouth curved, but the expression didn't settle. "You always did have terrible eyesight." "Not that bad." Eva stopped at the counter. Up close, the years showed in the fine lines around her eyes, in the way her coat shouted money in a way Cardiff never had. "You look different." "So do you." Rory kept her hands flat on the bar. "Last I saw you, you were crying on my doorstep over some lad who played rugby and couldn't spell." Eva's laugh came out short. "Gary. God, Gary. He married a girl from Swansea. Two kids and a caravan." "Lucky her." Silas moved then, favouring his left leg. He pulled a glass from the shelf and set it on the counter. "Drink?" Eva took him in for the first time. "You must be Silas." "The infamous one." He inclined his head, hazel eyes steady. "Retired, before you ask." Eva's eyebrows rose. "I wasn't going to." "Everyone does." Silas poured a measure of whisky, the bottle making no more noise than a held secret. "On the house. You look like you've swallowed a ghost." Rory's fingers tapped once against the bar, a quick, controlled beat. "She's being polite. Eva's always polite." "I'm being honest." Eva wrapped both hands around the glass. The sleeve of her coat pulled back, revealing a watch that cost more than Rory's rent. "I came for a conference. Some dull thing in Bloomsbury about European law. I had a free evening and I walked past the green sign and thought—" She stopped. "I thought it might be you. I didn't think it would be you." Rory reached for a glass herself, then thought better of it. "I work upstairs. Deliver for Yu-Fei Cheung when she needs an extra pair of hands. Golden Empress, over in Chinatown." "I know the place." Eva's eyes dropped to Rory's wrist, to the crescent scar. "Is that from the wall?" Rory stilled. "The wall by the old chapel. You dared me to jump." "You landed wrong. I screamed the street down." "You screamed because you thought I'd broken my neck. I'd have been fine if you hadn't dropped my ice cream." Eva's mouth softened. "You never once let me forget that." "Why would I? It was a double scoop." The words sat between them, lighter than everything else they weren't saying. Silas limped to the far end of the bar, busying himself with nothing, giving them the room the way he gave Rory the flat above the noise. Eva turned the glass, leaving a ring of condensation on the wood. "Dad asked about you last Christmas. He still thinks you're going to finish your degree and argue circles around some judge." Rory's shoulders dropped a fraction. "Brendan always did like a lost cause." "He's not wrong." Eva's voice gentled. "You were top of our year for Pre-Law. You could recite case names like song lyrics." "I can recite the quickest route from Golden Empress to Soho Square without hitting a single red light. That's worth more some days." "Is it?" Rory met her gaze, bright blue eyes flat and unblinking. "It pays the rent on a room above a bar. It keeps me off the streets. It's not the Inns of Court, but it's mine." Eva flinched, a small movement. "I didn't mean—" "You told me to go." Rory's voice stayed level, the way it did when a delivery driver cut her up in traffic and she talked her way out of a row. "You stood in my kitchen in Cardiff, my eye half-swollen shut, and you said, 'Rory, get on a train to London. Don't tell him. Just go.' So I went." The fridge hummed. Somewhere outside, a siren cut through the Soho drizzle and faded. Eva's throat worked. "I thought you'd ring me. After you got here. I thought—" "I didn't ring anyone." Rory picked up the cloth, then set it down again. The crescent scar pulled as she flexed her hand. "I changed my number. I changed my name on the delivery app. I changed the way I walked down a street. You don't do that and then ring your old mate for a catch-up." Eva's eyes grew bright, but she didn't look away. "He hurt you." "Evan hurt me." Saying the name felt like setting a glass down on a hard surface. "You know he did. You saw the bruise." "I saw one. I never saw the rest." Eva's grip tightened on the glass, the skin over her knuckles drawing tight. "I lay awake for months thinking about the things I didn't see. I should have driven you to the station myself. I should have made you pack a bag. I should have—" "You should have nothing." Rory cut her off, gentle but final. "You gave me the push. The rest was my own two feet." A long pause. Eva glanced at Silas, then back. "You're watching the door. You never used to watch doors." Rory's gaze flicked to the entrance, to the green neon buzzing beyond the glass. "Doors teach you things." "Like what?" "That the wrong man only needs to find you once." Eva set her glass down. The whisky sat untouched, a dark pool in the bottom. "Is he here? In London?" "No." Rory shook her head, the straight black hair brushing her shoulders. "Evan's in Cardiff. Or Hull. Or wherever men like him go when the woman they hit stops being there to hit. I stopped checking years ago." Silas spoke from the end of the bar, his voice quiet but carrying. "She checks the locks instead. Every night. Same as me and my knee." Eva looked at him. "You were in Prague." The words landed. Silas's hand went to his leg, to the bad knee, the movement unconscious. "A long time ago." "You never talk about it." Rory spoke without looking at him. "Neither do you." Silas picked up a glass and polished it, though it already shone. "Difference is, I've earned the right to keep my silence. You're still deciding whether to spend yours." Eva's brow furrowed. "Spend it on what?" Rory exhaled, a slow release of breath she had been holding since the door opened. "On her. On this. On saying I'm glad you came in out of the rain." Eva's mouth opened, then closed. She reached across the counter, not touching, just close enough that Rory could feel the warmth of her hand. "I'm glad I came in too." Rory's fingers brushed the crescent scar on her wrist. Outside, the neon sign flickered, painting the wet glass the colour of old bruises. Inside, the maps on the wall curled at the edges, the black-and-white photographs watching them both, and the bookshelf behind the bar stood ajar, waiting for a meeting that wasn't happening tonight. Eva turned her glass on the counter, leaving a fresh ring beside the first. "Do you ever think about coming back? To Cardiff?" Rory looked at the photographs, at the pinned cities she had never visited, at the life she had run toward and the one she had run from. "Every day. Then I remember I'm already where I ran to." Silas set the glass down. The limp carried him back to the storeroom, leaving the two of them alone with the hum of the fridge and the green light bleeding in from Soho.
created_at"2026-09-03T16:13:34.6Z" 9/3/2026, 4:13:34 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags16
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"the name felt like [like]"
dialogueSentences68
tagDensity0.235
leniency0.471
rawRatio0.063
effectiveRatio0.029
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1554
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
74.26% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1554
totalAiIsms8
found
0
word"gloom"
count1
1
word"weight"
count1
2
word"flicked"
count1
3
word"silence"
count1
4
word"furrowed"
count1
5
word"could feel"
count1
6
word"warmth"
count1
7
word"flickered"
count1
highlights
0"gloom"
1"weight"
2"flicked"
3"silence"
4"furrowed"
5"could feel"
6"warmth"
7"flickered"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences84
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences84
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences136
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen35
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1554
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions12
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
0.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions63
wordCount914
uniqueNames7
maxNameDensity2.74
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Raven1
Nest1
Rory25
Cardiff2
Eva22
Soho2
Silas10
persons
0"Raven"
1"Nest"
2"Rory"
3"Eva"
4"Silas"
places
0"Cardiff"
1"Soho"
globalScore0.132
windowScore0
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences59
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"felt like setting a glass down on a har"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.644
wordCount1554
matches
0"not the Inns of Court, but it's mine"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount2
totalSentences136
matches
0"knew that the"
1"knew that walk"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs67
mean23.19
std16.69
cv0.719
sampleLengths
076
134
251
313
436
548
611
71
89
95
1020
1122
1214
1336
1430
1519
162
1720
181
1912
2014
217
2228
2317
2468
2531
2619
2713
288
2920
3010
318
3239
3333
3412
3522
3623
372
3835
398
4060
4114
4214
4357
4412
4524
4653
4723
4819
4918
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences84
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs154
matches
0"weren't saying"
1"wasn't happening"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences136
ratio0
matches(empty)
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount919
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"same grey-streaked auburn"
adverbCount29
adverbRatio0.031556039173014146
lyAdverbCount0
lyAdverbRatio0
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences136
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences136
mean11.43
std7.79
cv0.682
sampleLengths
022
17
223
324
411
59
614
714
822
915
1013
113
1210
133
1420
153
169
1712
1824
195
206
211
224
235
245
252
2618
2713
289
298
306
318
3225
333
3411
3519
365
3714
382
397
4013
411
428
434
4410
454
463
474
4818
4910
46.32% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats7
diversityRatio0.3088235294117647
totalSentences136
uniqueOpeners42
41.15% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences81
matches
0"Somewhere outside, a siren cut"
ratio0.012
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount10
totalSentences81
matches
0"Her left wrist caught the"
1"He set them down without"
2"His beard, the same grey-streaked"
3"She folded the cloth, the"
4"She knew that walk before"
5"Her coat was the colour"
6"He didn't speak, just watched"
7"He pulled a glass from"
8"He inclined his head, hazel"
9"She reached across the counter,"
ratio0.123
3.21% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount74
totalSentences81
matches
0"The green neon sign above"
1"The bookshelf behind the counter"
2"Rory wiped the same patch"
3"The cloth dragged a clean"
4"Her left wrist caught the"
5"Silas limped out from the"
6"He set them down without"
7"His beard, the same grey-streaked"
8"Rory didn't answer."
9"She folded the cloth, the"
10"The door opened."
11"Rain came in with the"
12"Rory's spine straightened."
13"She knew that walk before"
14"Eva shook a compact umbrella,"
15"Her coat was the colour"
16"Eva's gaze landed on her."
17"The umbrella dripped onto the"
18"The name hung there."
19"Rory set the cloth down."
ratio0.914
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences81
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences35
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"The bookshelf behind the counter stood ajar, the gap just wide enough to remind anyone who knew that the back room waited behind it."
62.50% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags16
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"Silas poured, the bottle making no more noise than a held secret"
1"Rory cut, gentle but final"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags1
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"Rory spoke (speak)"
dialogueSentences68
tagDensity0.015
leniency0.029
rawRatio1
effectiveRatio0.029
84.0482%