Run: 2026-09-03-01M1M0R2W686ZKNVASWFJR45J2

Run Details

Duration:
4m 25s
Cost:
$0.040398
Provider:
Tencent

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The third deadbolt clunked free. The door opened. Lucien Moreau stood on the landing with his fist raised to knock again. Behind him, the stairwell breathed cumin and fried onions from the curry house below. The single bulb painted his slicked-back platinum hair the colour of old bone and turned his charcoal suit a deeper black. One amber eye caught the glow; the other, fathomless black, swallowed it. His ivory-handled cane rested against his shoulder, the thin blade inside it a secret her fingertip had learned six months ago and could not forget. Ptolemy, Eva's tabby, shot between Rory's ankles and wound himself around Lucien's trouser leg, purring fit to rival the extractor fan. Rory's fingers tightened on the door's edge. She kept her body in the gap, blocking the threshold. Six months gone, and he still wore the same cologne, something like smoked citrus and old paper. Her straight black hair brushed her shoulders as she held her ground. Her pulse knocked against the crescent scar on her left wrist. "You always did knock like you owned the building." Lucien lowered his fist. His gaze travelled past her, into the flat, then back. "Nice security. Three deadbolts on a first-floor flat. Expecting a siege?" Heat climbed her neck. She didn't widen the gap. Her bright blue eyes stayed level. "Expecting you, apparently." Lucien's mouth curved. The expression didn't reach his eyes. "May I come in? Or shall I conduct our reunion on the landing where every neighbour above the curry house can listen?" She held his gaze. Ptolemy butted his head against Lucien's shoe, the traitor. Behind her, the cramped one-bedroom had surrendered every surface to books, scrolls, and Eva's research notes. A half-eaten plate of toast balanced on a stack of papers. The place smelled of dust, ink, and whatever spice drifted up through the floorboards. She stepped back. "Don't get comfortable. The sofa's got a spring like a knife." He entered. The cane tapped once against the floorboards. He took in the chaos with a sweep of his mismatched eyes. "You always did think better in a mess." "I think better without someone breathing down my neck." "Then I'll stand over here." He set the cane against the arm of a chair buried under scrolls. He didn't sit. The silence stretched until Ptolemy leapt onto a tower of books and sent a scroll rolling across the floor. Rory bent, retrieved the scroll, and set it back. Her hand gave one betraying shake. She curled it into a fist at her side. "What do you want, Lucien?" He reached into his suit jacket. She went still. He drew out a folded flyer, not a weapon, and held it out. Cheap paper, printed with a grinning golden empress and the address of the Golden Empress restaurant. "You've been doing deliveries for Yu-Fei Cheung." "So you've had me watched." "I've had you alive. There's a difference." She didn't take the flyer. He let it drop onto a pile of notes. "Evan's in London." The name went through her like cold water. Her ribs tightened around her lungs. She had left Cardiff to escape Evan, fled to London at Eva's urging, taken the flat above Silas' bar and the job at the Golden Empress to keep moving, to keep the past from catching her. Hearing it on Lucien's mouth made the room tilt. "How do you know?" "I make it my business to know. He's been asking questions in the sort of places that sell answers. He's hired a trafficker out of Avaros. A demon called Vesh who deals in favours and flesh." Rory's laugh scraped her throat. "Six months. You walked out six months ago with your coat over your arm and not a word. Now you show up to tell me my ex has hired a demon?" Lucien's throat worked. The amber eye held a fleck of something like regret; the black one gave nothing away. "I walked out because staying would have put a target on your back." "You could have told me that instead of letting me think I'd imagined all of it." "You imagined nothing." He closed the distance before she could brace. The flat shrank to the space between them. He smelled of smoked citrus and rain. His thumb found the crescent scar on her left wrist, the one from a childhood accident, the one he'd once kissed after she'd told him the story. The contact burned. She didn't pull away. "You were never a job, Rory." Her voice dropped. "Then what was I?" "The one thing I couldn't fix." She searched his face. The amber eye, the black eye, both fixed on her with the same impossible focus. Attraction twisted in her gut, familiar and unwelcome. She had missed him with a ferocity that shamed her. "Don't." She didn't step back. "You say that like you mean it." "I mean it. You don't get to touch me and vanish. You don't get to leave me to wonder whether I was just a way to pass the time until the next job." His grip on her wrist tightened, not hurting. "You were the only thing that ever made me want to stay in one place." Ptolemy knocked a stack of papers off the table. The clatter broke the moment. Rory stepped out of his hold and crouched to gather the scattered notes. Her hands were steadier now, or she pretended they were. She waved a hand between them. "If Evan's in London, say it plain. Don't dress it up with whatever this is." Her throat tightened. "I can't do the thing where you look at me like that and then disappear." Lucien crouched beside her. He didn't touch the papers. He touched her sleeve, pushing it a little higher, baring the scar. "I'm not here to disappear. I'm here because Vesh will find you. He'll find the Golden Empress, he'll find Silas' bar, he'll find this flat. I can't watch you from a distance anymore." Rory sat back on her heels. "You want me to trust you. After six months of silence." "I want you to trust me enough to stay alive. The rest we can fight about later. I mean it." He stood, offered her his hand. "Let me help, start to finish. No vanishing." She looked at his hand, then at his face. One amber eye, one black. The Frenchman, the fixer, the half-demon who had walked out of her life and still owned too much of it. "You stay on the sofa. Ptolemy hogs the bed. And if you vanish again—" "I won't." "You'd better not. I've got a dawn delivery shift and a cricket bat under the bed, and I'm not above using either." The corners of his mouth lifted. He didn't reach for her again. "I'll be here when you get back." "See that you are." She didn't take his hand. She stood on her own, brushing dust from her knees. The flat settled around them, the curry-house scent rising through the floor, the books and scrolls waiting. Lucien picked up his cane and leaned it against the wall. He looked like a man preparing to stay. His mouth opened, the first syllable of her name forming— Ptolemy launched himself off the bookshelf. A stack of scrolls toppled, unspooling across the rug. Rory swore and dived for them.
created_at"2026-09-03T16:13:35.002Z" 9/3/2026, 4:13:35 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags1
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences37
tagDensity0.027
leniency0.054
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1228
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
79.64% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1228
totalAiIsms5
found
0
word"pulse"
count1
1
word"comfortable"
count1
2
word"silence"
count2
3
word"familiar"
count1
highlights
0"pulse"
1"comfortable"
2"silence"
3"familiar"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences86
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences86
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences123
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen36
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1228
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions7
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
92.16% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions32
wordCount778
uniqueNames12
maxNameDensity1.16
worstName"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Moreau1
Eva3
Rory7
Lucien9
Ptolemy5
Golden1
Empress1
Cardiff1
Evan1
London1
Hearing1
Frenchman1
persons
0"Moreau"
1"Eva"
2"Rory"
3"Lucien"
4"Ptolemy"
5"Evan"
places
0"Cardiff"
1"London"
globalScore0.922
windowScore1
27.05% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences61
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"something like smoked citrus and old paper"
1"something like regret; the black one gave no"
2"looked like a man preparing to stay"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1228
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences123
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs69
mean17.8
std16.3
cv0.916
sampleLengths
021
172
221
357
49
514
611
715
83
99
1022
1154
123
1311
1421
158
169
175
1835
1924
205
2138
227
235
247
2514
263
2759
284
2936
305
3131
3219
3313
3416
353
3657
376
383
394
406
4137
421
434
447
4533
468
4715
4843
4915
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences86
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs145
matches(empty)
73.17% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount1
semicolonCount2
flaggedSentences3
totalSentences123
ratio0.024
matches
0"One amber eye caught the glow; the other, fathomless black, swallowed it."
1"The amber eye held a fleck of something like regret; the black one gave nothing away."
2"His mouth opened, the first syllable of her name forming—"
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount769
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount23
adverbRatio0.02990897269180754
lyAdverbCount1
lyAdverbRatio0.0013003901170351106
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences123
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences123
mean9.98
std7.21
cv0.722
sampleLengths
05
13
213
314
421
512
625
721
87
910
1017
1112
1211
139
144
1510
1611
174
185
196
203
213
226
2322
244
259
2616
2711
2814
293
3011
312
327
3312
348
359
365
3713
383
3919
409
416
429
435
446
453
4613
4716
487
495
45.12% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats6
diversityRatio0.24390243902439024
totalSentences123
uniqueOpeners30
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences85
matches(empty)
ratio0
22.35% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount42
totalSentences85
matches
0"His ivory-handled cane rested against"
1"She kept her body in"
2"Her straight black hair brushed"
3"Her pulse knocked against the"
4"His gaze travelled past her,"
5"She didn't widen the gap."
6"Her bright blue eyes stayed"
7"She held his gaze."
8"She stepped back."
9"He took in the chaos"
10"He set the cane against"
11"He didn't sit."
12"Her hand gave one betraying"
13"She curled it into a"
14"He reached into his suit"
15"She went still."
16"He drew out a folded"
17"She didn't take the flyer."
18"He let it drop onto"
19"Her ribs tightened around her"
ratio0.494
1.18% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount78
totalSentences85
matches
0"The third deadbolt clunked free."
1"The door opened."
2"Lucien Moreau stood on the"
3"The single bulb painted his"
4"His ivory-handled cane rested against"
5"Ptolemy, Eva's tabby, shot between"
6"Rory's fingers tightened on the"
7"She kept her body in"
8"Her straight black hair brushed"
9"Her pulse knocked against the"
10"Lucien lowered his fist."
11"His gaze travelled past her,"
12"Heat climbed her neck."
13"She didn't widen the gap."
14"Her bright blue eyes stayed"
15"Lucien's mouth curved."
16"The expression didn't reach his"
17"She held his gaze."
18"Ptolemy butted his head against"
19"A half-eaten plate of toast"
ratio0.918
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences85
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences31
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"The Frenchman, the fixer, the half-demon who had walked out of her life and still owned too much of it."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags1
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
81.3557%