Run: 2026-09-03-01M1M11A57B7PH2FH3TG4P6X4W

Run Details

Duration:
4m 40s
Cost:
$0.041527
Provider:
Tencent

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rory pushed through the last of the gorse and stopped dead. Wildflowers spread around her, a carpet of white and yellow and bruised purple, bright as spilled paint under the torch beam. In the last week of October, they shouldn’t have existed. The air held the warm, green smell of a greenhouse, not a London park at midnight. Ahead, ancient oaks stood in a ragged ring, trunks thick as car doors, bark bleached bone-pale. The standing stones of the old stories. Her breath fogged. She’d found the Fae Grove. The Heartstone Pendant burned against her chest. She pulled it free from under her jacket. The silver chain caught the torchlight; the crimson gem, thumbnail-sized, held a faint inner glow. Warmth pulsed from the stone into her fingers, steady, like a second heartbeat. It had started an hour ago in the flat above Silas’ bar. One minute she’d been stacking takeaway cartons for Yu-Fei, the next the pendant had heated until she swore and dropped it on the counter. It had arrived in the post three weeks ago, no return address, no note, only the chain and the stone. It had cooled when she picked it up, then warmed again, tugging her down the stairs, onto the delivery scooter, through the empty streets to Richmond Park. She’d ditched the scooter at the gate and walked the rest. Now the thing thrummed like a live wire. “Come on, you bloody thing. You dragged me all the way out here.” Her voice sounded loud. She rubbed the crescent scar on her left wrist, the way she did when a puzzle refused to fit. “You’re supposed to wake up near a Hel portal, not a bunch of old oaks in Richmond.” The gem pulsed faster. She’d never known it to react to anything except the nearness of a Hel portal, and this was a Fae-touched clearing in the middle of a royal park. Two different flavours of wrong. She checked her phone. No signal. The screen glared 22:48. She’d left the bar at 22:30. The ride across London, the walk through the dark park, the push through brambles—all of it had taken her the best part of an hour. Yet the clock on the lock screen read twenty-two forty-eight. Eighteen minutes. She looked at the oaks, the silent flowers. Her legs ached. Her feet hurt. Eighteen minutes hadn’t passed. Nowhere near. A swing creaked. Rory’s head snapped up. The sound came from the left, beyond the ring of oaks. A chain groaned, metal on metal, the steady push of someone swinging. No playground stood within two miles of this spot. She knew the park. She’d delivered enough late-night orders out this way to know every path, every gate. There was no swing set here. A child laughed, high and bright. The sound cut off mid-note. She swept the torch beam across the darkness between the trees. Wildflowers trembled, though no wind stirred the air. The beam caught nothing but trunks and shadows and the pale gleam of petals. Her nape prickled, the way it did when a punter watched her from the dark corner of the bar. “Hello?” Her voice cracked on the word. She hated the crack. “Who’s there?” No answer. The pendant pulsed harder, hot to sting through her shirt. She let it drop back against her skin and moved toward the oaks, picking her way over the flowers. The ground sloped down to a narrow stream, the water black and silent. At the edge of the torchlight, a shape darted between two trunks. Pale. Fast. Gone before she could focus on it. She stopped. Counted her breaths. Forced her shoulders down. “Don’t be thick, Rory. Foxes. Deer. It’s a park.” The words didn’t land. Deer didn’t wear red. She’d caught a flutter of red fabric, bright as blood, behind the oak on her right. She swung the beam that way. Nothing. Just bark and shadow and the faint, impossible warmth of the flowers. She reached the first oak and stopped. Twelve trees made the ring. She knew the stories—twelve oaks, a boundary between worlds. She pressed her palm to the trunk, found a lightning scar in the bark, and snapped a twig from a low branch. She wedged the twig into the split wood. A marker. Then she walked, counting each tree as she passed. One. Two. Three. The bark shifted under her fingers, rough and cold. Her trainer caught on a root; she staggered, righted herself. The pendant swung free and bumped her sternum, warm, warmer. Four. Five. Six. The stream chattered, a low rush of water where before there had been silence. She hadn’t reached the stream yet. She knew she hadn’t. But the sound came from beside her, close enough to spray her jeans. She jerked the torch down. Black water slid over stones. The narrow stream ran at her feet. She hadn’t walked far. She’d counted six trees. The stream sat on the far side of the grove, beyond the twelfth oak. Seven. Eight. Nine. Her mouth dried. The air tasted of copper. She passed a trunk twice the width of her shoulders, its bark split into a shape like a screaming mouth. Ten. Eleven. She stopped. The lightning-struck oak stood in front of her. The snapped twig jutted from the split bark, where she’d left it. She’d counted eleven trees. She’d walked the entire ring and come back to the start, and there had only ever been eleven. But she had counted twelve when she first looked from the gorse. The grove had shifted. The ring had folded in on itself, or she had walked in a circle inside a straight line. Time and space, bending like wet paper. Twelve, she thought. Or thirteen. Or none of them made sense. She turned, torch raised. The beam jittered across the clearing. Something moved at the edge of the light. A figure stood between two oaks, tall and thin, its outline wrong, the limbs strange and long. The torch beam passed over it and kept going, and when she dragged the light back, the space stood empty. No shadow lay behind it on the grass. Nothing bent the wildflowers where it had stood. Rory backed up. Her heel caught a root; she stayed upright through luck and stubbornness. The heat of the pendant spread across her collarbone, a brand against her skin. She fumbled it free with her left hand, the crescent scar pulling as she stretched. The gem glowed a deep, sullen red, pulsing in time with something that wasn’t her heart. She crouched by the stream. The mud along the bank held prints. Her own trainer tread, size six, clear in the soft ground. And beside it, a smaller print. Bare feet. The toes pointed inward, the arch high, the heel pressed deep as if the owner had carried weight. Water seeped into the hollow, fresh, the edges still crumbling. She hadn’t stepped there. She hadn’t seen a soul since the gate. “Okay.” She stood, torch gripped tight. “Okay, you want to play? I’m done. I’m not Evan’s to scare, you hear me? I didn’t walk away from him to jump at shadows in a field.” Her voice shook. She let it shake. The name hung in the warm air, and the silence pressed against her ears. Then she heard it. A breath. Warm and damp, behind her left ear. Not hers. The torch beam fell on the wildflowers at her feet, and the shadow that fell across them wasn’t hers. It stretched long and thin from behind, cast by something the light hadn’t touched. The pendant burned, a hot, hard pulse against her chest, and Rory knew, with a cold certainty that settled in her gut, that she wasn’t alone.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags1
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences7
tagDensity0.143
leniency0.286
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1297
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
61.45% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1297
totalAiIsms10
found
0
word"warmth"
count2
1
word"pulsed"
count3
2
word"trembled"
count1
3
word"silence"
count2
4
word"weight"
count1
5
word"pulse"
count1
highlights
0"warmth"
1"pulsed"
2"trembled"
3"silence"
4"weight"
5"pulse"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences146
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences146
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences153
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen29
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1295
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions4
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions19
wordCount1222
uniqueNames13
maxNameDensity0.33
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity1
worstWindowName"Fae"
discoveredNames
October1
London2
Fae2
Grove1
Heartstone1
Pendant1
One2
Yu-Fei1
Richmond1
Park1
Hel1
Fae-touched1
Rory4
persons
0"Pendant"
1"Fae-touched"
2"Rory"
places
0"London"
1"Fae"
2"Grove"
3"Richmond"
4"Park"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences83
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1295
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences153
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs41
mean31.59
std31.17
cv0.987
sampleLengths
011
178
27
3138
413
523
617
737
873
93
1060
1111
1252
131
1410
152
1665
179
189
1943
2062
213
2229
233
2476
253
2630
272
2883
2911
3010
318
3253
3360
3471
351
365
3728
3821
3915
4059
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences146
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs190
matches(empty)
49.49% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount2
semicolonCount3
flaggedSentences5
totalSentences153
ratio0.033
matches
0"The silver chain caught the torchlight; the crimson gem, thumbnail-sized, held a faint inner glow."
1"The ride across London, the walk through the dark park, the push through brambles—all of it had taken her the best part of an hour."
2"She knew the stories—twelve oaks, a boundary between worlds."
3"Her trainer caught on a root; she staggered, righted herself."
4"Her heel caught a root; she stayed upright through luck and stubbornness."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount203
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount2
adverbRatio0.009852216748768473
lyAdverbCount0
lyAdverbRatio0
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences153
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences153
mean8.46
std6.53
cv0.771
sampleLengths
011
121
210
316
416
57
63
75
87
98
1015
1113
1212
1324
1420
1527
1611
178
1813
194
2019
2117
224
2328
245
254
262
274
286
2925
3010
312
328
333
343
354
362
373
384
3911
4012
419
424
4314
446
456
465
4711
488
4914
50.33% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats13
diversityRatio0.35294117647058826
totalSentences153
uniqueOpeners54
82.64% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences121
matches
0"Just bark and shadow and"
1"Then she walked, counting each"
2"Then she heard it."
ratio0.025
58.02% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount49
totalSentences121
matches
0"Her breath fogged."
1"She’d found the Fae Grove."
2"She pulled it free from"
3"It had started an hour"
4"It had arrived in the"
5"It had cooled when she"
6"She’d ditched the scooter at"
7"Her voice sounded loud."
8"She rubbed the crescent scar"
9"She’d never known it to"
10"She checked her phone."
11"She’d left the bar at"
12"She looked at the oaks,"
13"Her legs ached."
14"Her feet hurt."
15"She knew the park."
16"She’d delivered enough late-night orders"
17"She swept the torch beam"
18"Her nape prickled, the way"
19"Her voice cracked on the"
ratio0.405
63.31% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount96
totalSentences121
matches
0"Rory pushed through the last"
1"Wildflowers spread around her, a"
2"The air held the warm,"
3"The standing stones of the"
4"Her breath fogged."
5"She’d found the Fae Grove."
6"The Heartstone Pendant burned against"
7"She pulled it free from"
8"The silver chain caught the"
9"Warmth pulsed from the stone"
10"It had started an hour"
11"It had arrived in the"
12"It had cooled when she"
13"She’d ditched the scooter at"
14"Her voice sounded loud."
15"She rubbed the crescent scar"
16"The gem pulsed faster."
17"She’d never known it to"
18"She checked her phone."
19"The screen glared 22:48."
ratio0.793
41.32% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences121
matches
0"Now the thing thrummed like"
ratio0.008
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences52
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"The gem glowed a deep, sullen red, pulsing in time with something that wasn’t her heart."
1"The torch beam fell on the wildflowers at her feet, and the shadow that fell across them wasn’t hers."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags1
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
90.2184%